What are your opinions on this?....

[EternalReckoning 1,135]

I've been working as a manga artist for 2 years now and am soon going
to publish my first manga chapter, I have been practising a lot and
think my work has come on a lot.

 

last night i drew a picture of sora using the art style from my manga, Below this i will post the image, it is also in the fan art place in drawings. please tell me what you think of it thanks...

 

 

[Sora96 17,256]

Nicely done.

[Black Cat 39]

wow its very epic, why not colour it in?

[catmaster0116 2,676]

Holy cremecakes, This is heaps amazing

 

when can we expect vol 1/chapter 1 of your original manga?

[EternalReckoning 1,135]

Nicely done.

 

 

wow its very epic, why not colour it in?

Thanks for the feed back i will post a coloured version when i make a copy of my drawing just in case i ruin it by accident

 

I will post more pictures and am willing to take requests ^_^

Holy cremecakes, This is heaps amazing

 

when can we expect vol 1/chapter 1 of your original manga?

Maybe 4-5 months, i need to re plan and fix stuff i don't like then find a publisher but i'll post a topic and let you all know when

[EternalReckoning 1,135]

I Will post some pictures of my characters from my manga to the fan art gallery soon, i hope you all enjoy them

[mosokisa 93]

Looks nice and original I think : )

[EternalReckoning 1,135]

Looks nice and original I think : )

Thanks

I finished one of my character sketches its just below here hope you enjoy it! : D

 

[Jiraiya's Disciple 631]

Very NIce keep up the good work

[Demyx. 10,064]

It looks good. The shading is well done and I love the hair. The things that bug me is his hand and the size of the keyblade is a little small. Also, he looks a little fat.

[EternalReckoning 1,135]

As promised some more concept sketches.... ^_^

 

 

 

 

this post will be updated with more sketches as they are ready : )

[SHAZOW 269]

As promised some more concept sketches.... ^_^this post will be updated with more sketches as they are ready : )

**Looks at these drawings....compared it to my own****cries**Great job I only have drawn one thing that could be considered an anime but I drew it years ago. I wish I took a pic of it before it got lost.

[EternalReckoning 1,135]

**Looks at these drawings....compared it to my own****cries**Great job I only have drawn one thing that could be considered an anime but I drew it years ago. I wish I took a pic of it before it got lost.

Thanks so much, its nice to get complements always.

 

If you ever find the picture make sure to upload, i'd love to see it : D

It looks good. The shading is well done and I love the hair. The things that bug me is his hand and the size of the keyblade is a little small. Also, he looks a little fat.

Thanks for being honest! Tbh the fatness and keyblade are annoying me too but all i can do is make sure my next sketches don't maintain the same errors

[SHAZOW 269]

Thanks so much, its nice to get complements always. :)If you ever find the picture make sure to upload, i'd love to see it : D

I might try and re draw it. I havn't drawn anything for over 2 years. Maybe I'll start over and make new drawings :)Keep them pics coming. I think I'll use your pics for inspiration Edited May 31, 2013 by SHAZOW

[Demyx. 10,064]

Thanks so much, its nice to get complements always.

 

If you ever find the picture make sure to upload, i'd love to see it : D

Thanks for being honest! Tbh the fatness and keyblade are annoying me too but all i can do is make sure my next sketches don't maintain the same errors

No problem. Just trying to help. The shading really is amazing though. Same with the others. I can tell with practice you'll have some amazing art.

[Weiss 8,279]

Dude. 

That's amazing

[EternalReckoning 1,135]

Dude. 

That's amazing

thanks very much : D

[Guest]

I've been working as a manga artist for 2 years now and am soon going

to publish my first manga chapter, I have been practising a lot and

think my work has come on a lot.

 

last night i drew a picture of sora using the art style from my manga, Below this i will post the image, it is also in the fan art place in drawings. please tell me what you think of it thanks...

 

 

Its good... BUT, your proportions and angles are all off. The Kingdom Key looks tiny compared to Sora, like a long knife, and the way it's shaped it looks like the top half is closer to you, the bottom obliviously looking farther. Unless this was intentional, that's a big problem. then his hand. it's a little malformed and draws the eye from the rest of the piece, and like Xaon said, he seems to have a little bulge.  Other than that, it's good.

[EternalReckoning 1,135]

Its good... BUT, your proportions and angles are all off. The Kingdom Key looks tiny compared to Sora, like a long knife, and the way it's shaped it looks like the top half is closer to you, the bottom obliviously looking farther. Unless this was intentional, that's a big problem. then his hand. it's a little malformed and draws the eye from the rest of the piece, and like Xaon said, he seems to have a little bulge.  Other than that, it's good.

Thanks ! i appreciate criticism and normally agree yes keyblade size is ridulous i agree, writes on hand, perspective is correct it was my intention : D, yes dat hand.. hands in that position always screw me over but thats what practise is for btw what did you think of my other stuff? ^_^

[Rob 5,571]

Very good. Keep on improving.

[EternalReckoning 1,135]

Very good. Keep on improving.

thanks

[Guest]

Thanks ! i appreciate criticism and normally agree yes keyblade size is ridulous i agree, writes on hand, perspective is correct it was my intention : D, yes dat hand.. hands in that position always screw me over but thats what practise is for btw what did you think of my other stuff? ^_^

I haven't taken a look yet. BUT. As a note to all artist on the forum: I work in the concept artistry profession, and if you think you got some chops and skill, go ahead and send me a few samples. I may hire you for a job, but you have to be REALLY good. And a note to Reckoning: If you take a little time and are interested, send me a few samples, minimum 5, max 15.

[EternalReckoning 1,135]

wow its very epic, why not colour it in?

hi you suggested earlier that i should colour my sora pic in, i coloured it using gimp last night, hope everyone enjoys it~

 

thanks

 

[Xiro 3,468]

Excellent work. Can't wait to read your manga when it's published.

[Black Cat 39]

hi you suggested earlier that i should colour my sora pic in, i coloured it using gimp last night, hope everyone enjoys it~

 

thanks

wow that looks just awesome plus it made me speechless!!