Posted May 3, 201015 yr Ok, I have several light poems in my achieve I wanna share, for you feel the lightness of the world. The first one (Today Sorage just explained me about rhymes so here it is I present you, master!) Shed of human tear Since when it's become this near? Across the lamp of green Come this being of sheen What have I done 'till I got you? These things come out of the blue I see, it's the place of light From what I get from my fight The second one (from here and there before the direction of the guru) Far from Cry Bound to heel Constantly hard to feel Harmed to the soar On the dark I see lightness of feel It's such a warm feeling Coal to the mind, hard to find Far from cry Hearts of the warmth Those it came from The third one (hope your screen hasn't break) *It's about someone among a group of gov people in the middle/financing war I Wish I Can Laugh Ah, this stupidity of a fellow leader I wish I can laugh, if it's not concerning lives of people What should I do? Trapped amongst bonds we cannot pay Just waiting for the judgement day This is why what we do its forbidden Because no exit when we lose No profit when we win Not for rational sense after all we cost So are we the living amongst the dead? No, my dear friends, we do too, die
May 3, 201015 yr ... I'm speechless, these are spectacular... so much meaning and emotion behind them... I mean, its... its perfect.
May 4, 201015 yr Author @RoxSoxKH Geez, thank you! @Sorage55 So please share me your knowledge and let me be your apprentice!
May 4, 201015 yr @RoxSoxKH Geez, thank you! @Sorage55 So please share me your knowledge and let me be your apprentice! So you shall be my apprentice.
May 5, 201015 yr Author @RoxSoxKH Geez, thank you! @Sorage55 So please share me your knowledge and let me be your apprentice! So you shall be my apprentice. Yay!
Ok, I have several light poems in my achieve I wanna share, for you feel the lightness of the world.
The first one (Today Sorage just explained me about rhymes so here it is I present you, master!)
Shed of human tear
Since when it's become this near?
Across the lamp of green
Come this being of sheen
What have I done 'till I got you?
These things come out of the blue
I see, it's the place of light
From what I get from my fight
The second one (from here and there before the direction of the guru)
Far from Cry
Bound to heel
Constantly hard to feel
Harmed to the soar
On the dark I see lightness of feel
It's such a warm feeling
Coal to the mind, hard to find
Far from cry
Hearts of the warmth
Those it came from
The third one (hope your screen hasn't break)
*It's about someone among a group of gov people in the middle/financing war
I Wish I Can Laugh
Ah, this stupidity of a fellow leader
I wish I can laugh, if it's not concerning lives of people
What should I do?
Trapped amongst bonds we cannot pay
Just waiting for the judgement day
This is why what we do its forbidden
Because no exit when we lose
No profit when we win
Not for rational sense after all we cost
So are we the living amongst the dead?
No, my dear friends, we do too, die