Posted September 16, 201312 yr Alright: You're gonna sit there. shut the crud up, and freaking listen to me, 'cause I don't repeat myself. Look, it's like this: my STUPID little brother, Shugo, signed us up for this online RPG called KHWorld, just to be annoying. Yeah, since no one bothered to tell us the KHWorld is.... Well, I'm getting ahead of myself. Names Ellen, by the way; Ellen Rosewood. Bear with me: from here on it gets weird.
September 16, 201312 yr Author What are you talking about? o.O Buzzkill. It's just the opening: it's KH related. It's an Ooc OS. Don't like it? DON'T READ IT! That simple, man. KHWorld is a Spanish Kingdom Hearts Forum... Same goes to you: quit being a buzzkill.
September 16, 201312 yr Buzzkill. It's just the opening: it's KH related. It's an Ooc OS. Don't like it? DON'T READ IT! That simple, man. Same goes to you: quit being a buzzkill. Ooooooh. It's in writing. I thought you were just spouting off random incoherent stuff...My mistake... Carry on.
September 16, 201312 yr Buzzkill. It's just the opening: it's KH related. It's an Ooc OS. Don't like it? DON'T READ IT! That simple, man. Same goes to you: quit being a buzzkill. Sorry, I didn't understand what you were trying to say.
September 16, 201312 yr Author Alright: You're gonna sit there. shut the crud up, and freaking listen to me, 'cause I don't repeat myself. Look, it's like this: my STUPID little brother, Shugo, signed us up for this online RPG called KHWorld, just to be annoying. Yeah, since no one bothered to tell us the KHWorld is.... Well, I'm getting ahead of myself. Names Ellen, by the way; Ellen Rosewood. Bear with me: from here on it gets weird. LOG IN 1: Traverse Town Coded. AREA: 1st District. CHARACTER: Andy, Rose The town was pretty well detailed, I thought, glancing at the night-shrowded court around us, other players and AI NPC's alike roaming around. " So... we fight these Heartless things?" I said, glancing back at Shugo, who's character was a 14 -year-old named Andy. " Yeah... but you can use magic. Guy said you're character's a mage. All you've got is Blizzard right now. " Yea: drop me in a massive RPG, give me NO instructions, THEN tell me I can use magic. Sheesh. " I can't even tell we're not really here; this virtual-reality crud's pretty cool, little bro." Sorry, I didn't understand what you were trying to say. You're forgiven: it makes more sense later. I'll admit: it's a .HACK-inspired piece. Ooooooh. It's in writing. I thought you were just spouting off random incoherent stuff...My mistake... Carry on. B-but... spouting random incoherent stuff is so FUN! Edited September 18, 201312 yr by TheTimidLight
September 16, 201312 yr Popular Post Buzzkill. It's just the opening: it's KH related. It's an Ooc OS. Don't like it? DON'T READ IT! That simple, man. Same goes to you: quit being a buzzkill. You don't have to be rude y'know, they're not the only people to have been confused
September 16, 201312 yr Author You don't have to be rude y'know, they're not the only people to have been confused * didn't sleep well, is vaugely cranky: please ignore this *
September 16, 201312 yr Author " Ehh... seen better." Shugo shrugged, gazing up at the perfectly glowing stars above. I rolled my eyes, as we headed deeper into the town. LOG IN 2: Dark Bastion AREA: Throne Area CHARACTER: Data-Maleficent-Virus She may have just been strings of data, but Maleficent was positive her plans would WORK this time: with that Keyblade weilder convinced she was gone for good, she was free to roam this new world as she pleased. How wonderful of KHWorld's designers to create digital versions of her old comrades for her.. She smiled: it was a terrorfying sight, had anyone been there to see it. Edited September 18, 201312 yr by TheTimidLight
September 16, 201312 yr Author I don't understand any of this.. Ok. Can you please repeat everything? No. Why am I getting so much hating?
September 17, 201312 yr Author " Ehh... seen better." Shugo shrugged, gazing up at the perfectly glowing stars above. I rolled my eyes, as we headed deeper into the town. LOG IN 2: Dark Bastion AREA: Throne Area CHARACTER: Data-Maleficent-Virus She may have just been strings of data, but Maleficent was positive her plans would WORK this time: with that Keyblade weilder convinced she was gone for good, she was free to roam this new world as she pleased. How wonderful of KHWorld's designers to create digital versions of her old comrades for her.. She smiled: it was a terrorfying sight, had anyone been there to see it. Standing, she slowly, precisely, walked down the chilly corriders of the Dark Bastion, KHWorld's version of both the Hollow Bastion castle and Enchanted Dominion, minus the happy ending for that ghastly princess, Aurora: Dark Hollow was a Dante inspired nightmare, often used as the KHWorld's final boss battle arena. Maleficent, Data-Maleficent, who ever or WHAT ever she was, smiled coldly at the happy lights of Wonderland off in the distance: time for Stage 1 to begin. Edited September 18, 201312 yr by TheTimidLight
September 17, 201312 yr Ah it's starting to make sense and get interesting now. Just some advice: if you're showing the character narrating something try putting it in Italic, it usually helps differentiate between what you're describing and what the character is describing
September 17, 201312 yr Author Ah it's starting to make sense and get interesting now. Just some advice: if you're showing the character narrating something try putting it in Italic, it usually helps differentiate between what you're describing and what the character is describing All scenes with Maleficent are omni-present 3rd person, unless you meant something else.
September 17, 201312 yr All scenes with Maleficent are omni-present 3rd person, unless you meant something else. Oh I was talking about the first post where Shugo appears to be narrating it
September 17, 201312 yr Author Oh I was talking about the first post where Shugo appears to be narrating it It was supposed to be first-person narration from the sister: sorry if that wasn't clear enough.
September 18, 201312 yr Author LOG IN 3: Wonderland Coded AREA: Lotus Forest CHARACTER: Rose, Shugo The forest was pretty easy to get lost in, I realized, as Shugo insisted on runnig ahead throught the waving grass to see around the next corner. We'd leveled up a few times from surprise Heartless attacks, and Shugo's cry of either terror or glee led me to believe we would do so again. Running around the oak tree dead center of the forest, I found out I was wrong. Edited September 18, 201312 yr by TheTimidLight
September 18, 201312 yr Author Somehow,i can't understand every single chapters though... LOG IN = Chapter It's set up as a computers log in data base. I can add numbers if it gets too confusing for everyone. ( So much criticism on this one.... is that GOOD... or BAD...? )
September 18, 201312 yr LOG IN = Chapter It's set up as a computers log in data base. I can add numbers if it gets too confusing for everyone. ( So much criticism on this one.... is that GOOD... or BAD...? ) I didn't say i didn't like the story,i'm try to understanding it...
September 18, 201312 yr Author I didn't say i didn't like the story,i'm try to understanding it... Ok. =) Like I said: I can add numbers to the chapters, if needed.
September 18, 201312 yr Ok. =) Like I said: I can add numbers to the chapters, if needed. I think you should though,since many viewers will confuse of what pieces of that stories from...
Alright: You're gonna sit there. shut the crud up, and freaking listen to me, 'cause I don't repeat myself.
Look, it's like this: my STUPID little brother, Shugo, signed us up for this online RPG called KHWorld, just to be annoying.
Yeah, since no one bothered to tell us the KHWorld is....
Well, I'm getting ahead of myself.
Names Ellen, by the way; Ellen Rosewood.
Bear with me: from here on it gets weird.