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oh hush u never know

Sorry that it's taken so long (It'll be done by tomarrow or tonight)

 

and I_am_Axel is right, Dont quite assume MUHAHAHAHHA!!!

 

BTW Im still making it fit the story

at least ur still posting it

 

OMG YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yeah and besides everyone has their own opinions

 

yayz ^^ cant wait

i cant wait too

Okay Chapter 3 is right here (cuz i had no more room)

 

BTW i hope you dont hate it........Its 7 pages long! I WORKED SO DAMN HARD!!! I REALLY hope u dont hate it..............

 

 

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i like it

i got lost at the beging of the story but i chougt on later

still good

is there going to be anyother "meetings" with other O13 members? or was axel going to be the only one that returns

Well, they are matter of nothing and Axel just pulled him into a void of....nothingness...

 

anywhoz umm on the fact of their meetings...Axel is the only one that you see his more human appearance...the others they see as just nobodies

 

Sora, Riku, Kairi, and Thorn can see them for...well reasons that is; Sora, Kairi and Thorn were all born with that specail ability...while Riku is just possessed by a heartless so yah

how will Thron be inportent later in the series

mmmmmmm not really. She's not a keyblader. She IS a fighter though *and she wasnt always in Destiny Islands*

 

ummm oh yeah and Sora is "awakened" so he's faster and stronger than usual and well.......when Momoshiro comes up it you'll see...........

omg axel!!!!! *huggles* ah that was so good!!!!!!! MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!

Of course! Axel's job isnt over yet he is kinda like a pet. Sora visits him a few times....but what will become of the Flurry of Dancing Flames? READ ON TO FIND OUT!!! >.

awsome tahnks for answering my Question

KEEP WRITING

oh shiznitz......umm....

the next chapter makes me wonder; what the F*** was going through my head when i thought of this stuff? the next chapter has...a never before seen dark tone....its downright sad....but explains alot hehehe.....but still sad......i think its cuz ive been feeling hollow for a while now.....

 

*looks at what i have written so far*........=[ aw man....*sniffles*

oh dont worry i will be reading on ^^

 

still i cant wait to read the rest ^^

same here

il read anything

*sniffles* you people will feel so bad for Sora and Riku......

 

BTW the later chapters might take quite a while...u see i have Pre AP classes where i get AT LEAST 2 HOURS OF HOMEWORK a day.......sooo yeah.......and also Dance will probably make me hurt but i'll drag myself to my laptop if i can..........

 

during holidays, summers, and weekends, i'll work my ass off k!

yay!!! darn that stinkin school...XDD

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its soooo sAD [CRYS]

o welll

I LIKE STORY

KEEP WIRTING

 

 

[on a side note i feel sad for riku and sora]

oh....my.....gosh.....the thing with riku and sora sounds so familiar....and i have no idea why O.o

 

aaanyways that really good!

i dont know why but ever time i her this song i think about this chapter

 

mabey because both the song and the story is sad

heres the song

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k1SARTHd9yw

any body els think the same

mmm it came to me through a series of songs whilst i was pondering what i would use as a background in

Those Nights by Skillet

Never too Late by 3 Days Grace

and Hero by superchick

and my mind composed a few things that made it all fit quite well!

Kairi and Thorn dont have anything sad in their past other than death of loved ones (Kairi's parents and Thorn's *Censored for spoiler reasons*)

and umm BTW

The abuse that Riku endured ended when he was about 6 (why it stopped will be explained later)

But umm Sora's abuse kinda wasnt much until he came back and now his mother(COMPLETELY INSANE!!!) & father(JACKASS!!) beat and......well they dont torture him yet.....

kekekekeke and well ____ finally ____ Sora and _____ him_____ ISNT THAT SOOO SWEET!?!

 

 

BTW DID YOU PEOPLE GET THE PART ABOUT THE RAIN?!?!??! (theres several meanings i put into it)

 

PREVIEW: the hint on chapter 5 is slightly mentioned in Chapter 1

and umm NO SADNESS FOR NOW!!!

AND 2% MORE ROXAS!!!

(thats all i shall say)

oh and it's name is "Fireworks at Dawn"

(YES i know its a song but still.....it goes with the symbolesis of the story)

 

oh and dont worry about later chapters! *waves hand around* Riku is happier(for now) and Kairi wont get herself kidnapped.....well.......in a serious way (they joke around alot)

ummmm and Sora......well........you're gonna cry for him like you have never cried for anyone before.......and Axel doesnt appear alot until.....DUN DUN DUUUUN (i shall leave you at that)

axel comes back!? *dies of fangirlism*

 

yay no sadness ^^

mmmm Axel appears as that Dusk-thing earlier (from Chapter 3)

but ummm theres no saddness for one or two chapters (it depends on legnth and a tone where i can cut it off)

YAY FOR NO SADNES

CRY ONE A YEAR IS ANUF FOR MEEEEEEE