Posted February 21, 201411 yr The stars blink their heavenly eyes at us below. The trees create silent chimes of beauty. Is it wrong to say that I'm in love? I'm in love with the natural beauty of things. I'm in love with the serenity and peace. I love the way it used to be. I'm sending my love to you through a note. It may seem old-fashioned, but I believe words written mean more that words typed. Can you really blame me when I say my slaving over paper that I've crumpled thousands of times to try and make something perfect? I know that as hard as I can try nothing will be perfect. The only thing that is perfect is the smiling face of nature. With it's blinking stars and silent chimes. Just know that whoever you are and wherever you are, Some one cares deeply for you. From paper I type this to screen so that everyone can remember to count their lucky stars.
February 21, 201411 yr Author Still its one of those things that suck in my head and it had to come out. it isn't even a good poem lol
February 21, 201411 yr Still its one of those things that suck in my head and it had to come out. it isn't even a good poem lol It's a lot better than the train wrecks I've come up with.
February 21, 201411 yr Author I call it deep... I like it. aww thanks It's a lot better than the train wrecks I've come up with. thanks and im sure yours are not that bad
February 21, 201411 yr aww thanks thanks and im sure yours are not that bad You don't want to see mine Anyways, keep up the good work. I'll look forward to reading more.
February 21, 201411 yr The stars blink their heavenly eyes at us below.The trees create silent chimes of beauty.Is it wrong to say that I'm in love? I'm in love with the natural beauty of things. I'm in love with the serenity and peace.I love the way it used to be. I'm sending my love to you through a note.It may seem old-fashioned, but I believe words written mean more that words typed. Can you really blame me when I say my slaving over paper that I've crumpled thousands of times to try and make something perfect? I know that as hard as I can try nothing will be perfect.The only thing that is perfect is the smiling face of nature.With it's blinking stars and silent chimes. Just know that whoever you are and wherever you are,Some one cares deeply for you.From paper I type this to screen so that everyone can remember to count their lucky stars.You think that's bad, you should read my poetry
February 21, 201411 yr aww thanks thanks and im sure yours are not that bad No prob, I thought of "Let It Go" when I read this poem for some reason.
February 21, 201411 yr I thought it was a well written deep poem, I'm actually dazzled by it keep it up! Edited February 21, 201411 yr by Kodakliv
February 22, 201411 yr It's really good i swear especially since my level of poetry skills is like -5
The stars blink their heavenly eyes at us below.
The trees create silent chimes of beauty.
Is it wrong to say that I'm in love?
I'm in love with the natural beauty of things.
I'm in love with the serenity and peace.
I love the way it used to be.
I'm sending my love to you through a note.
It may seem old-fashioned, but I believe words written mean more that words typed.
Can you really blame me when I say my slaving over paper that I've crumpled thousands of times to try and make something perfect?
I know that as hard as I can try nothing will be perfect.
The only thing that is perfect is the smiling face of nature.
With it's blinking stars and silent chimes.
Just know that whoever you are and wherever you are,
Some one cares deeply for you.
From paper I type this to screen so that everyone can remember to count their lucky stars.