So,a little while ago i posted the thumbnails for my KH Redux project,but now I wanted to test it out by actually adding detail,its still in the roughs and I will  go back to it later to fix it up,but I feel like I need to ask this now.

Does this page look good?Does it look good enough to be at the very least be put up on the internet as a web comic thing?DO I SUCK?All feedback would be appreciated,so yeah,heres the first page of my comic.

KH-Redux is own by me,Kingdom Hearts is own by Disney,Square Enix,Tetsuya Nomura and all that copyright stuff.

 

that's a pretty simple page . I'd have to see a more action filled one to determine the quality

I liked the eyes and hair at the first two pictures because they were drawn professionally , but in my opinion, I think that the last picture should've been more specific instead of drawing it as a sketch, especially the falling character and also the place that he/she is falling into. Overall your drawing is awesome and you should continue because improvements occur by learning from mistakes.