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My Kingdom Hearts Story: Two Universes Collide

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Chapter 42: The Final Battle: Part 3

      After the darkness cleared, Shane and Jack looked around. They found themselves in space! It was different though. The worlds in the Kingdom Hearts Universe were present in the solar system our planet is in. Basically, they are in our universe and therefore are combining two of them. Looking at planet earth, Jack and Shane are shocked as it's covered in black! That blackness is moving from one world to the next starting as spots, then growing bigger and soon covering a world. It was clear as crystal: the Keyblade War is spreading consuming one world at a time. Jack and Shane are stunned and speechless as they see the darkness spread and it destroying Earth. Nick was standing a ways across from them and he too was watching, but was silent with no expression on his face.

      "Do you see it?" he asks grabbing Shane's and Jack's attention. "See the two universes colliding? Ours and the Kingdom Hearts universe? See how the darkness covers and spreads throughout the worlds including Earth? This is merely the beginning. I made a goal for myself and Ronnie that we both agreed on. If one of us does not see it through, the other does. Everything you hold dear will be mine. I will no longer be second place, I will no longer be an after thought, I will be first among everyone and everything! I will destroy everything you hold and BURN IT TO ITS CORE!" A black aura now covered him and he summoned his keyblade. Jack and Shane stood firm and kept silent as they watched Nick. All they did was summon their keyblades. Then Jack spoke out.

      "This is no longer about vengeance on me," Jack said "this is about power now and the vengeance is only a small piece of it. Mom knew that darkness was the wrong path and she knew this could be what happens should you accept it. Now, you have completely fallen far and are beyond salvation. It makes me sad, but you have lost any sentimentality I could give after the numerous times you have tried to kill Ben and Shane. I will protect everything I hold dear and I will put my life down to make sure the people who I love are safe. I won't give up! I will beat you! MY FRIENDS ARE MY POWEEEEEEEERRRRR!!!" Jack then erupts in light in an explosion.

      "I have seen what you have done," Shane said. "Without blinking an eye, you put a blade through his body. Killing him like he were an animal that gets hunted down. He was nothing wasn't he? Just something that can be just thrown away and tossed aside with no value. He was a carrier of our ancestors' will. He did everything he could to be the best, then he dies brutally. His efforts were NOT in vain! He was fantastic! He was a true master! You put an end to what we first began, we put an end to what you began! I've had just enoooUUUGGHH OF YOOOOOOOUUUUU!!!!!!" He too explodes in light and now both of them are covered in an aura of light that glowed around them and their keyblades.

      Both sides charged toward each other and clashed in a larger explosion than last time. Every time keyblades clashed, it was large sparks and flashes. It was intense as either side looked as though they could either get the advantage and overcome the other side. Shane used KH3D Ghost Drive, but with more combos and more powerful in delivery. Also, he has two copies of himself attacking and warping at random times. It was effective and Nick was getting driven back even though he was using Dark Bladecharge. In fact, Nick suffered damage here and there as the battle kept going. Though not every time he and Shane clashed, it happened a number of times; that had him driven back. Jack on the other hand took Fever Pitch to a whole new level. His speed was much faster than Ventus. In fact, he made Ventus's version of Fever Pitch look like child's play. His speed was much faster than Ventus's and the techniques and attacks were more powerful and were unknown in style. It was something that came purely from Jack and his ancestor only. The attacks were also executed in different style. Ventus would rush forward and start his barrage attacks. Jack just threw his keyblade and it went forward and back with ridiculous speed, then he started his barrage attacks. Nick was now really starting to take damage from the attacks.

      Nick had a brief moment and used a shockwave and pushed both elites back. They landed on their feet and slid back on them. Nick panted a little and had a nasty look in his eyes as he stared down the elites.

      "Fine, it looks like I have to do this the hard way," he said and darkness surrounded him. It manifested into armor once it cleared. It looked like Ventus's armor, but with some scary looking features. It was mostly black and had purple and navy blue mixed in as well. Shane and Jack were actually in a bit of a panic because they had no clue how to face this. Suddenly, two white dragons came down and wrapped themselves around the elites. Then, bright light glowed and once it dissipated, they were wearing armor. Jack was wearing armor like Ventus and Terra combined, but it had some ancient elements and designs to it. It was yellow and white with light colored features on it. Shane's armor was a combo of Master Eraqus and Ventus. It had some darker shades of white and yellow and it had blue and red mixed in. Both of them were surprised to see themselves covered with armor and how they became covered.

      "This must have come from one of our friends," Shane suggested.

      "Probably Adrian," Jack replied.

      "No one cares!" Nick interjected. "As long as you two face me, you having armor changes nothing! Your dooms remain the same and will come violently!" Nick charged as did the elites. Every time keyblades clashed, big flashes and sparks erupted. Shane soon took over and it became one on one between him and Nick.

      "I will put an end to your chaos even if I have to die to do so!" he shouted at Nick. Then, he changed his keyblade into a massive cannon just like Ultima Cannon and aimed it at Nick. Nick was horrified at the sight and didn't know how to react. Shane fired the massive cannon multiple times; as many as possible to defeat Nick. Nick seemed to have been surviving even though he is getting blasted constantly. Eventually, a dark aura surrounds him and gets larger.

      "Enough!" he shouts and with the last blast, he knocks it back toward Shane and Jack and it explodes causing the armor to disappear and the cannon to turn back into a keyblade. Now, they have no protection and are completely exposed.

      "It's all over now!" Nick said and he created what looked like ropes made of darkness. This is an attack called Devil's Snare. This attack is named after the plant found in Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone. This attack is almost exactly like what the plant does, but two catches. Once you're ensnared, the grasp will tighten and choke the life out of you whether you struggle or not. Also, in Nick's case, it will suck the life and power out of the victim making the one who executes take in the power and make them stronger. Shane and Jack are in a panic trying to figure out what to do, but then suddenly, letters in blue light appear on their clothes and keyblades. Face paint of the same color also appeared. It's Atlantean! That means the power of the heart of Atlantis has been awakened. The two elites nod at each other and then wait for the attack.

      Nick fires the ropes toward the elites, but the elites fight them all off with power and speed. Then, they point their keyblades at Nick and fire a powerful beam of blue light at him. On contact, a large explosion of blue light erupts making the elites squint their eyes for a second. Once it all clears, a black mass lingers where Nick was standing and floats around. Shane and Jack watch and wait to see for anything that may happen. Nick walks out of the shadow with a black aura surrounding him, eyes now red in color after being yellow, and an infuriated expression.

      "I only have one priority," he said in his and Vanitas's toned mixed voice. "My priority is to force everything under my control. After being marginalized for so long, I have used my rage to fuel my ambitions. However, only one person stands in my way." Jack knew who that person was. Nick then exploded in black energy and darkness covered everything making space and earth invisible. Jack braces himself waiting to see how dark his twin brother's wrath is.

GAHHHHH, MORE, MORE, MOREEEEE, I WANT MORE!!!!!! :D

 

This was such a great chapter!  The stakes are getting incredibly, no, ridiculously high now!  The universes are colliding now, just like the title of your story!  THE KEYBLADE WAR IS AT ITS PEAK!  I hope Jack and Shane will be okay!!!! D:

 

Great work, man! :D

Simply amazing. Seriously. Awesome story, great and original characters, everything!!!

The only thing that bothers me is on the Sephiroth part. I thought he was fighting with Cloud since KH2.

But other than that, this is perfect

My God, what an explosive finale!!!  The Jack vs. Nick and Ben vs. Ronnie battles were insanely amazing, and they were so dramatic and powerful!  And Kingdom Hearts appeared before Ben!?  That was totally unexpected!  It seems that the power of light is strong within Ben and Jack!  They managed to destroy Nick and Ronnie, and now, it seems, both universes have been saved!  

 

What an explosive ending! :D  This was an amazing story, man, I enjoyed every moment of it!  It was well developed, and I loved how you mixed up the original cast of the games as well!  In short, this story was just amazing, and I loved it!  

 

Congratulations on having posted this story, and congrats on the 3000 views! *Applauds.* :D

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Chapter 44: End of the War

       For a couple seconds, I stared at where Ronnie was. My clothes were still white and my keyblade in hand was white and gold in color. Then, I turned around and looked at where the the true Kingdom Hearts was. It was bright and I saw a silhouette of a heart. Clearly, it was not in full glory as I stared at it. Then, it grew brighter and white light consumed everything around me. When it died down, I found myself with Shane, Jack, and Adrian again. We look at each other and we were all overjoyed seeing each other and embrace each other in a group hug. I saw Jack had white light radiate from his body and once we hugged, it died down and disappeared. My keyblade first turned back to normal color after I ended up with my friends. After I unsummoned it and joined the group hug, my clothes turned back to normal color. We hugged each other for what felt like forever because we almost lost one another. Anyone of us were almost killed as we fought and now that all our enemies have been defeated, we can now finally be at peace. I shed a few tears, but kept my face as emotionless as possible. I was so happy to have my brothers alive and I could hold them in my arms. We finally let go of each other.

      "I am just so happy that you guys are alive," I said in joy.

      "I am too," Adrian replied. "Hey, I just saw your clothes white just recently, but then they turned back to their normal colors."

      "Oh yeah, when I fought Ronnie, he stabbed me and killed me," I explained "but then I found myself floating in black before it became white. Then, I got up and the true Kingdom Hearts gave me its power." My friends were shocked and speechless at the statement.

      "What? Did it not happen to any of you?" I asked them.

      "N-no," Jack replied. "When I was fighting Nick, I was killed too, but the light from you guys and my family kept me alive My body glowed light, but it never had my clothes change color." I looked at Adrian and Shane for their possible explanations. There reactions were the same.

      "I had none of that," Adrian said. "What happened to me was I was in a dark place and I found what looked like residents of the Realm of Darkness attacking me. They took on forms of creatures like animals and sometimes, they looked like people. I even saw three that looked like you three, but they had the features of Red Eyes. It was very difficult, but it was the light from you guys that enveloped me and I fought with everything."

      "I had to fight anti forms of keyblade warriors," Shane said. "I was in the Valley of Darkness and anti forms of the keyblade wielders started attacking me. It was not nearly close to a walk in the park believe me. I eventually came across anti forms of you three. Thanks to the light from you guys, it enveloped me as well and I destroyed the anti form keyblade wielders. However, I never had Kingdom Hearts appear either." I was stunned and stared into space. Why me? Why was I the only one? I had to put it aside and look around as did my friends. We were in someplace rather unknown. It was mostly light in color. I can't really tell where we are for there are no concrete features. Everything was fluid like and bright and white.

      "You know, speaking of Kingdom Hearts," I said "I think we are in the true Kingdom Hearts." We all looked around and eventually, my eyes came across a place that is white and bright and in it were the seven lights and thirteen darknesses fighting. I gasped and so did the other three of us. Instinctively, we wanted to help and get involved, but we were put at peace by Kingdom Hearts for we knew that this is destiny. It was incomprehensible to watch as the two sides clashed. It was no longer about the Supreme Elite taking the lead. It was now about the seven lights charging forward and fulfilling what destiny had in store all along.

      As we watched, we saw the seven lights defeat the thirteen darknesses. The thirteen appeared to wreath in pain and Master Xehanort lost grip of the X-blade. I couldn't tell what it looked like, but I could tell it was not exactly like what I have seen in BbS. It then shattered apart and the darknesses dissipated and disappeared in dramatic fashion beginning with Vanitas and ending with Master Xehanort. A light flashes around us again and consumes everything. The four of us cover our eyes to brace ourselves for what is coming. When the light passes, we uncover our eyes and once again find ourselves in space with earth and the worlds together. They are all covered in black with slight purple. Suddenly, the dark shell clears and all the worlds become free from the darkness that covered them. I could recognize my planet and all the worlds now. The Keyblade War has finally come to an end. The four of us sighed relief and got misty because now, our families are completely safe and nothing can officially harm them. What's even greater is our entire planet has been saved. It will not become another Keyblade Graveyard. Though it did suffer from the war, it still has people alive and nothing has been obliterated. Our world is safe now.

      Another flash of light erupts and we once again brace ourselves like before. Once we uncover our eyes, we find ourselves in the Mysterious Tower. All is well and it appears that it has not been damaged. Of course it doesn't because he is Yen Sid, one of the most powerful keyblade masters to ever live. We went through the entrance and walked up the stairs. We walk through the door and see him looking out the window. He turned around and sees us and smiles at us as we walked through the door. He then sits at his desk and we line up in front of the desk.

      "I see you all have learned the secret to defy fate," he said. "You all have accomplished what your predecessors before you have longed to do."

      "Sa bo nim, I have seen and spoken to my predecessor when I was falling to fate," I said. "He told me that he lives in me. I guess he was saying that truly his blood runs in me." My friends followed up agreeing with me as they too spoke to their predecessors when falling to their fates. Yen Sid nodded this time instead of stroking his beard in thought.

      "Ah yes," he replied "truly, they live on in you all for I sensed something great, powerful, and ancient within all of you when I first saw you all. I wondered what it was, but then I learned of your predecessors. I realized then that your ancestors did not completely allow fate to overcome them. You see, the tales told in the sanctuary you all found in the Keyblade Graveyard were written by masters after the Keyblade War ended. It is not certain who precisely wrote them, but I assume that the first seven lights that came to be, as you have mentioned within your research Ben, were the ones to do so, though I find nothing to suggest it is so and your writings do not say so either. Nonetheless, whoever they may be, they knew of the first Supreme Elite and the tale of them and they willed to find whatever may be left of them. Alas, they found nothing, but wished to remember them in some way. Thus, they constructed this chapel you all have found and, with the ancient language that was spoken before the war, they wrote down your ancestors' tales. All images of them were by their hands. The keyholes that you all unlocked there that showed you the fate befallen upon your predecessors were created by them as well as that secret you found Adrian. It is unknown how they learned of it, but they did and kept it in a place where not many would look should the chapel be found." This was all so much information. The chapel was not like what we thought it was; it was a memorial. It was a memorial made in remembrance of our ancestors.

      "So then, what about what we found when we went to Shaolin Temple?" Shane asked "We found stones with slots in them and it turned out that they were something rather powerful. We put our keyblades that we had before what we own now in them and before we know it, we become our predecessors." Yen Sid once again nodded in understanding.

      "You are quite aware of how the keyblade came to be on Earth," Yen Sid said. We all nodded. "Keyblade masters came to earth in great numbers. They soon began to live with the people of Earth and intermingled with them. The keyblade's power split into many pieces that it was not strong enough to manifest itself. However, bloodlines soon became established and the power was revived and soon showed itself. Now, you have seen you ancestors pass down power to successors they chose themselves in private separately. Those successors were part of the great migration to Earth. The first Supreme Elite had their bodies destroyed and so their hearts were set free. Now the successors passed down their keyblade, but they too intermingled with others on Earth and the keyblade's power made its journey to you four. When the war was raging and the first Elite fell to fate and the darkness overcame all in the Realm of Light, their hearts traveled far to find their successors. The successors found the hearts of their predecessors coming to them and they heard the Elite from their hearts tell them to seal them away so they can sleep. One day, they will return and when they who take on their appearances awake them, they will enter into them and become a part of their hearts and thereby be of one body, one heart, one spirit with them with their blood mingling with the blood of those that look like them. They live again and they stand before me truly in flesh, heart, and soul." I was just stunned. In fact, stunned is not close to strong enough of a word; I am flabbergasted. I am my person, but now I am now completely reborn. Though the keyblade has always resided within me, it is my ancestor's heart that has become a part of mine now and he lives in me with his blood running in my veins. My friends were also flabbergasted too for they are just like me.

      "I told you Ben," a voice from behind me says. I look and it's my ancestor walking in with my friends' ancestors. I see them and my friends see them all too. "I waited until the time was right to give my final say on fate. Since I realized that the war would have just destroyed me one way or another, I decided to allow fate to destroy my body so my heart could meet with my successor and seal me away."

      "We all allowed fate to overcome us," Adrian's ancestor said. "We might have been able to defeat fate, but really, the fate of all of us during the Keyblade War was to be slain by darkness. Now that darkness either meant by our separate fates for us, or slain during the war and force our keyblades to become like the many that lie in the Keyblade Graveyard today."

      "We chose to accept our own individual fates," Jack's ancestor said. "If we became like the many that perished, destiny would have be rewritten. In fact, Earth would not have survived the second Keyblade War if you did not become us and go farther than us."

      "Therefore, we gave up our bodies to fate and had our hearts on their way to Earth," Shane's ancestor said. "We had our hearts sealed away so one day, we who look like us, yet in different form, would awaken our hearts and then we would enter them and be born again. However, you guys have gone farther then we would ever have gone. For that, we are proud." Then, they went on one knee and put their fists over their hearts and nodded in a keyblade wielders salute. Yen Sid clearly has seen them and heard them.

      "Earth was destined to become another Keyblade Graveyard," Yen Sid said. "Because of them deciding to accept their fate, they remained alive. Because of you finding them and allowing them into your hearts, you saved your world and other worlds as well. Your enemies would not only affect Earth alone if you did not." Our ancestors stood up and then like Roxas returning to Sora, they dissipated in light particles and entered us. We turn around and look back at Yen Sid who smiled and nodded again.

      "Master Yen Sid, I have one more question," I said. "You remember Jack's, Shane's, and my time in Atlantis and how Kingdom Hearts appeared over us when the heart of Atlantis accepted us, which it did for Adrian too. I sensed it gave the four of us its power. When I fought Ronnie, that power awakened and returned my soul back to my body on top of the light of my friends and family saving me. No one else among us did that when they fought. Why was I the only one that did?" This time, he stroke his beard and was in thought.

      "I am afraid that is a mystery," he replied. "I will attempt to solve it, but I'm afraid the answer will have to be found by yourselves. Now you must go back to Earth and Mr. Iger. You must tie up loose ends in Walt Disney World. Also, the Foretellers met with Mr. Iger and they have explained to him something very important." We put our fists to our hearts and nod. Then, we turn around and walk out of his office.

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I wonder what the Foretellers told Iger? This is getting interesting....

Edited by Rocketboy227

Well, color me impressed, this was a great read!  Really great explanation for how the Supreme Team ended up finding the Fantastic Four!  Looks like everything's back to normal and all the worlds are now in one piece!  Wonder what Mr. Iger Tiger has to tell our heroes now!?  I can't wait to see! :D

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Chapter 45: A Time to Heal

      The four of us walked down the stairs in silence. There was nothing we could talk about. The reason is because Yen Sid unleashed a cruise ship load of information on us. Our ancestors were very smart. It reminds me of Master Xehanort's geniusness when he planned so far in advance gathering the thirteen together in KH3D. Our ancestors knew their fate and the fate of many fellow keyblade wielders in the first Keyblade War. Although the writing in the chapel said they were lost to eternity, they clearly did not know and were mistaken that our ancestors found a loophole. Falling to fate, their bodies would be destroyed and so once that happened, their hearts were free and those hearts found their successors. They would remain alive if they were put into slumber and so their successors went up the mountains of China, up Mount Song, and created a sanctuary behind Shaolin Temple. There, they waited until they appeared again as other people, but looking exactly the same and once they were awakened, they would live again. I guess then the monks who already were there found it quite interesting that an unknown stranger has stumbled upon their quarters, but then felt his power. He then must have told them the story of him and many others who are on Earth and of the Realm of Light because there is no way he can just show up and do what he needed to do. They must have complied and so went up higher and created another temple, one hidden from anyone except keyblade bearers. With this new temple under construction, the sanctuaries were then built upon the summit all with amazing views of the valleys below. It all makes sense now why we saw what we saw in Shaolin Temple. My friends did not need to be told because I sensed they too put the pieces together; they aren't stupid people and they are very smart. With that in mind, we walked on exiting the tower.

      Outside the tower, we were rather surprised to see the seven lights standing their along with Lea, Donald, and Goofy. All of them had weapons in hand and looked at us with smiles as we walked out from the doors. It remained silent for a second or two and then they all put their weapon carrying hands to their hearts and went on one knee smiling. Then they got up, unsummoned their keyblades and weapons and the four of us went around and hugged and embraced and talked to everyone. I was talking to Sora and Ventus and Aqua, Adrian talked to Terra, Lea, and Mickey, and Jack and Shane talked to Kairi, Donald, Goofy, and Riku. It was wonderful talking to them all since they made it. Then it became quiet enough for me to speak up to everyone.

      "You know, it's wonderful seeing all of you alive," I said. "The four of us saw you all fight the thirteen darknesses in the true Kingdom Hearts. Instinct wanted us to help, but we knew that it was destiny that was involved and we watched you fight. For Lea, Donald, and Goofy, we saw how brave you all were for fighting in Walt Disney World during the Keyblade War. For that, we the Supreme Elite salute all of you." The four of us summoned our keyblades, put our weapon wielding hands over our hearts, and went on our right knees.

      "Oh, there is no need for that," Aqua said sweetly.

      "Yeah, it really isn't us who you should salute," Riku followed.

      "The reason is because of you guys," Kairi said. "Without you guys, it would have been a bigger challenge."

      "For that, we are glad we have met you guys," Terra said.

      "All of you set an example and we followed it," Mickey said. "Gosh, I don't think we would ever be able to surpass it. What do you think fellas?" Donald and Goofy shook their heads.

      "A-hyuck! Nope, I don't think so! You fellers were pertty strong." Goofy said.

      "I still think you guys need to practice," said Donald critically.

      "Alright wise guy, I will and when we fight, I'll make sure to make a roast duck out of you," I replied jokingly.

      "QWAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!" Donald shouted in his usual angry way and all the rest of us laughed.

      "I gotta tell ya," Lea said "watching you guys makes me think I have some work to do. I would better keep your eyes open if I were you. I may surprise you. Got it memorized?"

      "Don't worry, we have it memorized," Adrian replied.

      "I guess we have to go then," Shane mentioned.

      "Yeah, we have some loose ends to tie up and Mr. Iger wants to see us," Jack followed.

      You have to go already?" Ventus asked "Well, it was great coming around you guys." The four of us said goodbye to everyone and a light corridor was opened by Adrian. My friends waved to everyone a final time and then went through before me. I look back and wave and everyone waved all except Sora. He looked down at the ground with a sad face. It struck me because I am surprised he is acting this way.

      "Sora?" I ask. He eventually looks up at me. With a sad and worried face.

      "Will I ever see you guys again?" he asked. I smiled calmly and walked towards him.

      "Of course you will," I replied consolingly. "You know where to find us. Besides, instead of you finding us, we may need to be finding you so keep your eyes open." Sora's face calmed and he smiled and nodded. Then, we grab each other's gloved hands as if to shake hands and held them for a second. Then, we hug each other in a tight embrace.

      "Promise you'll come back," Sora said as we hugged.

      "I will. We are friends now you know. Friends keep promises," I replied. Sora knew who I was repeating and hugged slightly tighter. Then we let go and give each other one last look smiling. I wave to everyone and they wave too. I finally enter through the corridor and head on my way to Walt Disney World.

      When I come out of the corridor, my friends are looking around the environment in silence. When I notice, I am shocked and goosebumps run up and down me. We are standing in the middle of the Magic Kingdom on Main Street and are looking at buildings destroyed with portions still standing and smoke rising from some charred structures, keyblades sticking out of the pavement, and bodies and blood all over the street. Even though the sun was out toward setting and there were a few clouds in the sky, it was an eerie feeling and a horror filled one. There were people both keyblade wielders and people of earth looking around the ruins and bodies stepping over a body and puddles of blood. The Cinderella Castle and the statues are fine thank goodness. I realize what is going on as I looked around. Keyblade bearers are looking around determining who is their own and not from Earth. When they find the bodies, with magic, they have the bodies dissipate into light particles that disappear and take their keyblades back to their worlds. There are people that I recognize from my world looking among the bodies for their loved ones. That's right, this war consisted of people from my world who have found they possess the keyblade and fought here too. The families have come for their loved ones' bodies so they can bury them and keep the keyblade as a memoir of them.

      Jack tapped us all and pointed to one family looking around the bodies with an immense amount of sorrow. I knew it was Mike's family and so did Jack. He walked toward them without saying a word; the rest of us followed a bit behind in silence too. The Mike's father noticed Jack come toward them and the whole family turned to look at Jack. Jack approached them and all of them were quiet. I knew what their eyes were saying to Jack. Their eyes were looking at Jack as if to say "do you know where our son is?". Jack looked at them and them he had to look down and started weeping. He then looked back up at them, raised his left hand slowly, and summoned Mike's keyblade Void Gear. Mike's mother grabbed it and a whole new wave of sorrow came over her face. Jack then waved his hand over the keyblade and it glowed white and floated in air and led us all to where Mike was. Then, as we came around the loop of the square near the Exposition Hall on the street, the keyblade went into the ground right above Mike's head. We were right next to where Shane and I fought Jackzilla and saw some marks from that battle from where Mike was lying. The whole family rushed to his body and embraced it and wept heavily. The four of us started shedding tears too because of how sad it is. Mike was a great person. He was easy to talk to and he helped Jack and Ventus when they needed it. Then, Nick and Ronnie killed him in a heart beat. The four of us pulled ourselves together and silently left the family to grieve.

      We go through a light corridor again and this time, we come out in front of Walt Disney Company headquarters and standing in front of the entrance is Mr. Iger.

      "Ah, gentlemen, you made it," he said. "I am glad you are all alive and are here." He motions us to enter and we go to the hidden room that we went to last time with all of the artifacts. We then sit around the table.

      "So, tell me how it all went," he said and the four of us each gave our long accounts of what happened to each of us in the Magic Kingdom, in the Keyblade Graveyard, and when each of us split as well as mine and Jack's deaths and defeating our enemies. We even told him what Yen Sid told us just before. Mr. Iger listened with an attentive ear and was fascinated by all of it.

      "Wow..." was all he said. he could not believe what he heard and the magnitude of it all. "It is amazing how little we know about you guys and your abilities handed to you by your predecessors. Speaking of them, I have something to show you all." He went to where the computer was and brought over a tablet. It had four pictures on it and the writing I recognized for it was in the chapel too. Mr. Iger then pulled up an image of the keyblade Master Xehanort wielded on the computer screen.

      "I came across it during the war," he said. "I even know what it says."

      "How did you figure out what it says? I mean, we do and it is talking about names that we don't recognize," Jack asked.

      "The Foretellers came here to this room and they explained what it said," Mr. Iger said. "They told me that they could read it and it those names you mentioned that are on it are the names of those four people in those pictures." He then looked at us as he said each name starting with me, then Shane, Jack, and finally Adrian in that order.

      "Polemistis... Kidemonas... Aiton... Kyrios..." he said. "These are the names of your ancestors and the four people on the tablet are them. The names can be translated to Greek and are Greek for the ancient language from then has influenced many languages of Earth. The names mean in the respective order 'warrior', 'guardian', 'seeker', and 'master'. Polemistis: the warrior who fought darkness until the very end no matter what it cost him. His keyblade Ultimate Apocalypse was judgment upon those who dared destroy light. Kidemonas: the guardian of light who protected light being overrun by darkness. His keyblade Light's Redemption was the saving light of keyblade wielders who were falling to darkness by dark keyblade wielders. Aiton: the seeker who sought out to unleash his full potential to protect everyone he loved from evil. His keyblade Unbound Power was his weapon to unleash all the power he had against the darkness that attacked him and his friends and to defend Tachytito, Dynami, and Mageia, Ventus's, Terra's, and Aqua's predecessors respectively. Kyrios: the master who mastered all styles of fighting and all the elements in order to be able to fight some of the most powerful dark masters that lived. His keyblade Elemental Master was used to master the elements and the fighting skills of speed, strength, and magic. These are your ancestors; this is who they are." So after much mystery, I finally learn what my ancestors name is and who he truly is.

      "Yes, this is who we are," he said. He and his friends stood right next to all of us and our attention was grabbed. "I am happy you have finally learned my name so now I fully have been reborn and all my power and yours have become one."

      "By learning all our names," Kyrios said "the four of your are permanently tied together. Nothing can split you apart."

      "Even when you are alone, you are never alone," Aiton said "for you are each others power."

      "This is an unbreakable connection," Kidemonas said. "Nothing will ever break it. As long as one of you stands, you are all forever near each other. A bond that we have yearned to truly form. Now, we have and we all have become truly one with you all heart, body, and soul." Then, they disappear entering us again. I guess he has become another conscience of mine besides my own as well as my friends'. No matter, it's good that he is satisfied because I am.

      "That's what I wanted to tell you," Mr. Iger said. "Now, we have to rebuild this world. Luckily, keyblade wielders from the Realm of Light have already started rebuilding for us since they already understand that this world is so precious and has a strong heart."

      "Thank you Mr. Iger," I said. He nods and so we all get up, shake his hand and leave. When we are outside, we stand for a second thinking about the future.

      "Now what?" Shane asked.

      "Now, we wait until danger arises again," Adrian said. "When that happens, we spring into action like we have done."

      "So that means we do what we have done again if necessary visiting worlds and such, right?" Jack asked.

      "Yeah. Besides, we promised to come back and return to our friends," I replied. "We'll see them again and who knows? We might be calling for their help." My friends nod in agreement.

      "I guess it's time to finally go home," Adrian stated.

      "Let's keep close," I say to my friends and they agree. We hug each other and say our goodbyes. Then, we all open our own light corridor and enter through it. I come out in front of my house. I sigh as I look at it and become all misty. It was so good to be home and the weather being sunny makes it better. I run up to the front door and enter into the house.

      "Hello? Mom? Dad?" I call into the house. My family is in the living room and they were all dressed in different clothing. Clearly, this war went throughout the night and into the early morning so they must have went to bed and tried to sleep. When they heard my voice, they all jump up and run to me and embrace me tightly and my parents give me kisses constantly while my sister is squeeze hugging me tightly. I hug and kiss them all back.

      "I'm so happy you're home! Thank you Lord!" mom says with voice cracking in tears of joy.

      "I am glad to be home too," I replied. We all just hug now and I shed tears of joy. I am so happy to be home in my family's arms. Then, we all sit in the living room and my family asks me questions on my clothing and my adventure. I tell them everything with a joyful heart. I have never been so happy to be back home.

 

 

Epilogue (Secret Episode)

      A boy in a black coat, hood up with face completely covered stands on the Cinderella Castle stage looking out over Main Street USA in the Magic Kingdom. It is now dusk and he sees keyblade wielders done repairing the infrastructure here and guests coming walking around the park. He grins as he observes everything around him in the park. It has been about six months since the end of the Keyblade War and everything around the world is almost completely rebuilt. Walt Disney World and the rest of the Disney Parks around the world have been completely rebuilt by now.

      "So, this is where he and the rest of the Supreme Elite fought," he said. "I look forward to seeing them again sometime soon." He then goes and begins to take off his hood.

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      Yen Sid was sitting in his office and was meditating. He felt something was off. How could it be? The worlds have been saved and so the light has won the war. Why does he sense something bad?

      "I sense a darkness rising up," he said to himself. Then he looked up and opened his eyes. "However, why do I sense it has a rather familiar essence? It feels like it has the essence of the Supreme Elite." He was thinking for a few minutes in silence, but as he was about to meditate again, the door to his office opened and four teenage boys entered through. They were all different heights and had different colors of hair. The shortest had blond hair, the second shortest had red hair, the second tallest had brown hair, and the tallest had black hair. The blond wore yellow clothing slightly darker than Sora's Master Form clothes, the red wore red clothes with flashes of orange here and there, the brown head wore blue and green clothing, and the black haired wore black with purple clothing. The brown haired boy was the first to enter and walked immediately up to the desk. Yen Sid watched them with awareness because he has never seen them before.

      "Master Yen Sid?" the brown head asked. Yen Sid nodded only.

      "Yes hi, we have been looking for you for a while," the brown head said. "We are the Supreme Elite."

 

The stronger one's light, the stronger one's darkness...

 

As one rises, he does not go without rivalry...

 

 

The journey will continue with My Kingdom Hearts Story: Rising Darkness.

Edited by KingdomHearts3

WHOA, WHOA, WHOA AND WHOA!!!  *Puts on the brakes and crashes into a building and then gets out of the car.* 

 

WHAT A TWIST ENDING!  WHO ARE THESE FOUR FANTASTICOS!?  AREN'T BEN AND THE OTHERS THE ONLY FOUR FANTASTICOS!?  WHAT IS THIS!?  OOH, YOU HAVE ME INTRIGUED!!!

 

Well, what can I tell ya!?  This was a great story!  You've really come into your own as a writer!  Gotta give you props for that, and a taco! *Gives you a taco.*  Congrats on finishing the story, I bet you feel all tuckered out, huh!?  But yeah, everything ended pretty nicely!  BUT WOW, THAT TWIST ENDING THOUGH! DID NOT SEE THAT COMING!

 

The final verdict?

 

5/10: Not enough Deadpool!

 

...

 

Okay, okay, I kid, I kid!  Here's my real verdict! :3

 

10/10: CHIMICHANGALICIOUS!!!!! :D

Amazing story, heres my veredict:

 

 

 

 

7.8/10 not enough Mario.

 

 

 

...

 

 

 

Jk 10/10. Amazing as it is.

 

And thanks to Trascendent Key for fanboying coz i wanted to do that. :biggrin:

 

WHOA, WHOA, WHOA AND WHOA!!!  *Puts on the brakes and crashes into a building and then gets out of the car.* 

 

WHAT A TWIST ENDING!  WHO ARE THESE FOUR FANTASTICOS!?  AREN'T BEN AND THE OTHERS THE ONLY FOUR FANTASTICOS!?  WHAT IS THIS!?  OOH, YOU HAVE ME INTRIGUED!!!

 

Well, what can I tell ya!?  This was a great story!  You've really come into your own as a writer!  Gotta give you props for that, and a taco! *Gives you a taco.*  Congrats on finishing the story, I bet you feel all tuckered out, huh!?  But yeah, everything ended pretty nicely!  BUT WOW, THAT TWIST ENDING THOUGH! DID NOT SEE THAT COMING!

 

The final verdict?

 

5/10: Not enough Deadpool!

 

...

 

Okay, okay, I kid, I kid!  Here's my real verdict! :3

 

10/10: CHIMICHANGALICIOUS!!!!! :D

Edited by Joseph1307

Amazing story, heres my veredict:

 

 

 

 

7.8/10 not enough Mario.

 

 

 

...

 

 

 

Jk 10/10. Amazing as it is.

 

And thanks to Trascendent Key for fanboying coz i wanted to do that. :biggrin:

 

Ahem, I think you mean Deadpool, Mario!  But yeah, I'm good at fanboying! ;)

  • 2 months later...

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