These are two poems I wrote being the poetic fanatic I am

 

This one I wrote for a girl I thought I liked only to have her laugh at the poem and make me feel bad but now I'm over it

Stars

Girl do you know

How you make me feel

When you walk right bye me

My heart sinks inside

 

You are like a star to me

I keep reaching for you

But your so far away

Why is it so difficult

 

You are the brightest star to me

That I've ever seen

I want you to know

You are amazing

 

You are like a star to me

I keep reaching for you

But your so far away

Why does it have to be difficult

 

Everyone gazes up at you

Like a sight of beauty

You seem closer

I can almost touch you

 

But I never will

I can't touch this star

 

This one is about a girl I like at the current time and date when I'm kinda confessing how I feel even though I'm to scared to tell her

 

Look through my eyes

 

Look towards the sky

Tell me what you see

Look in the mirror

Tell me who you see

 

Look through my eyes

You see yourself nothings change

Look through my eyes

You see someone beautiful

 

Look at the world

You see pain

Look through my eyes

You see love

 

Look through my eyes

You'll see how I feel

Look through my eyes

You'll see how I've always felt

 

 

Look through my eyes

You'll see people laughter

Look through my eyes

You'll see people enjoying themselves

 

Look through my eyes

You'll see my arms wide open

Look through my eyes

You'll see a shoulder to cry on

 

When you need me

I'm right here

I'll hold you

When your scared

 

So look through my eyes for a change

You'll see what I see

Look through my heart

You'll see how I feel

 

Look through my eyesWell thanks for reading these are my newest and most favorite poems and you don't have to comment or anything just felt like sharring these poems I wrote

Nice man. You gots talent.

Thanks I'm trying to become a song writer so hat compliment makes that dream seem closer thanks for the compliment

Oh, they're sweet! (: I don't know why she laughed at you. I think they're really good.

well if you knew what I looked like you would know I swing for the fences alot but I might have some more and if no one comments back I'll have to edit this post since I can't double post so keep checking in if you want

 

Dreaming

 

Watching people cheer all around me

Hearing the chants from my fans

Singing my heart out

Roaming the halls

Searching for you

Finding where you are

Choosing you over the fame

Telling you how I feel

Telling me you feel the same

Watching you fall in my arms

Holding onto you tightly

Feeling overwhelmed with joy

Blinking out of the dream

Waking up into the nightmare of life

Wishing I was still dreaming

Going to school not happy like I was before

Grining when I see you

Thinking maybe it wasn't all a dream

Learning life isn't a nightmare

Beautiful and very deep CK.You're amazing at this.

Hey long time no see well I have two more poems that I am actualy making into songs for my band "The Longest Road" so here they are:

 

The Long way home

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nice dude

These are amazing.It's just...wow.I don't even have words to express.You're a master at this.

New song I wrote 2nd one in a year I'm on fire *knocks on wood* don't want to ginx it thanks for all the feed back.

 

How it started out

 

F: I remember How it started out

I remember how I felt

I remember you took my breath away

Now you have my heart and its going to stay

 

 

F: It started out when I came to class

You didn't want this chance to pass

But you wussed out and now you're to late

I guess thats fate telling you not wait

 

M: Sadly I've allways been this way

Admiring you from far away

But now I'm hoping that will change

Since my heart isn't going away

 

B: ooo (Whole verse, like the others)

 

 

M: I remember How it started out

I remember how I felt

I remember you took my breath away

Now you have my heart and its going to stay

 

M: Oh girl don't you know

You send my heart through a whirl

Oh girl don't you know

Your beauty is greater than a pearl

 

B: ooo (Whole verse, like the others)

 

B: I remember how it started out

I remember how I felt

I remember you took my breath away

Now you have my heart and its going to stay