Blazer

Torris looked around.Torris jumped and turned around.A dark figure was going to tackle Torris,but Torris quickly hit the man with his keyblade.The man then jumped back,and grabbed his hip in pain.The man slowly got up,and watched as Torris tried hitting him,even though the man kept dissapearing and re-appearing."FIGHT LIKE A MAN,ADEM!",Torris shouted.

After the Collosi were dead,Nick put his trident away,and opened the gates.He walked inside,and there was a giant tunnel.There was fire coming out of the sides.This was a trap the gods set up so mortals could not free Kronos.Nick put his trident away,stepped back 15 feet,and dived down into the tunnel.Nick spun in the air,to dodge the bursts of fire,and saw no other challenges.After 15 minutes of falling,he finally saw the room before him,Nick quickly took out his trident and slammed it into the tunnelside.It then dragged him down into the chamber.There was another gate,this time it had a Cyclops,who had chainmail armor and giant,wooden club.Nick charged into the Cyclops,then slid under him,and sweeped his trident into its back,in which afterwards the Cyclops bled to death.Nick then walked up to the door and opened it.

Nick's eyes blinked widely for a minute,and he looked at Sophia."Why?So we can be hated more?Sorry,kiddo,I have to do this.",Nick said.He then jumped off the bridge,and was falling.He quickly took out his trident,and lunged it into the cliffside.It started to slowly bring him down.He finally reached the bottom,about a mile up was the bridge.Nick saw a gate,which was guarded by 2 giant Collosi.Nick took his trident and started attacking the Collosi.

Nick stormed into the underworld,and barged Tony back."If I have to stay here with you,then I'd rather.."Suddenly,a voice interrupted Nick in his thoughts."Nick........",a voice rang out.Nick looked around,and realized who was talking to him.It was either Hades or Kronos,the lord of the titans."Nobody here likes you,Nick..but i see potential...join me,and together we can rule the cosmos....",the voice rang out."What must I do..?",Nick asked.

Nick looked at Tony with a death glare."What do I know?That my being here is pointless,and that i support the war - that's what I know,you little stuck-up nerd! - and if this is the appreciation I get for coming along,then you can all go die!And I hope you drown by seaweed,you little brat!",Nick spat out.

Nick had a death glare at Tony and Sophia."I'm sorry..I didnt know i was DEAD WEIGHT...But if that's the case,the to heck with this - let the gods fight - let's see who remains dominant,shall we!",Nick spat out at them and looked at tony."And Sophie's right for once - for a son of Athena,your not very smart.",Nick then rolled his eyes and got on his pegasus.

Name:Terrus (Friends call him Terry ) Age:17 Gender:Male Appeaence:Short brown hair,waved back and spikey.He also has a brown,light beard,as well as blue eyes,a black T-shirt with sleeves on it,and has a "T" on it.He wears black gloves that have no sleeves for his fingers,brown jeans,a silver watch,a smooth, silver ring,and black,leather sandals. Personality:A selfless,courageous young man who fights for his friends and family. Bio:Terrus lived in Twilight town,along with his parents,who were keyblade masters.His father and mother gave him a special keyblade,that is a combination of both strength and speed,called Hidden Secret,a keyblade with both a thin body,a well as key teeth(like ventus's keyblade,except it has a handle and key of Kingdom Key).After performing quick and strong attacks,he can perform a special attack called "Speeding Blow",in which he dashes in several different directions,each hitting the target.Terrus,like his parents did,serves the light,and fights for his dead parents,swearing to not let them down. Ultima Weapon FTW ^_^

Nick quickly jumped off his pegasus,and landed on a branch,then did a backflip unto the ground.He drew his spear and looked behind him,then did another backflip.A giant minotaur,carrying a giant battle axe,charged in at Nick.Nick looked into the sky."Hey,dad,you got any special weapons for me?!?!?!",Nick shouted.All of a sudden,the minotaur ran 5 feet back.Nick's kraken spear spun in the air,then stopped.When it stopped,it was not a kraken spear,it was a huge,silver trident.Nick's eyes widened open with a smile."Thanks,dad!",Nick charged in,and did a spin,and whirled the pole of the trident into the chest of the minotaur,then whirled the trident head into the face of the minotaur,who roared out in anger and fell to its knees,then bled to death.Nick then tugged the trident out of the Minotaur,and turned around to the other beasts.

Nick rolled her eyes at her comment."Well,we'll have the favor of Zeus,so we should be fine.I mean after all,Poseidon and Zeus are brothers - brothers stick together - brothers fight side by side,just like when they fought Kronos.",Nick said.He was thinking on how he was changing.He never mentioned the old battles,nor did he care for history.Nick shook his head,and rode his pegasus,watching the ground as they flew off.

Nick rolled his eyes and got on Bruce.Nick clicked his throat 2 times,signalling Bruce.Bruce neighed out loud and wanted to fly away,but Nick held him back with the reins.Nick rolled his eyes again at Sophia."We're the children of Poseidon - we fight,serve,and die in honor.Something you Apollos have no sense of.",Nick spat out.His eyes widened open and he looked down."I'm sorry..I didn't mean that...",Nick said.

Nick finally got there in time,and looked around,ignorantly bliss."Alright...what I miss?",Nick asked.He looked around, and saw that he was only with Sophie and Arya."Where's the other dude?",Nick asked.He slowly took out his spear,ready to block an attack."Something is hear....I advise we move...now...Poseidon knows what's going to attack us,and I hope it isn't a Gorgon.I hate gorgons.",Nick said.He quickly heard something nearby,and looked around to see where the sound was."Get ready.",Nick said.He quickly turned to his Bruce,his pegasus,and ordered it to get out of the area.The pegasus neighed,and fled off.

Like i said at the beginning:Opinions and ctiticism is wanted.And i can understand what your saying - and i agree - i should of made it more proper.

5 Races currently rule the worlds in different parts of it. Demons - roam the volcanos and deep caverns of the world Humans - rule the western and mid-western parts of the world Werewolves - live among the humans,but only take actions in the nights Blood angels - rule the snowy peaks and vast deserts. Vampires - live in the dark northern parts of the worlds All races are at war.You can either support the war,or try to make peace with the races. Post your intros now. Anduis slowly walked around Bleeding,the capitol of the Blood Angel empire.Anduis slowly walked into the palace,while the doors slowly opened to let Anduis in.Anduis looked around,and slowly walked straight down the hall,into the grand hall,where his father,King Bloodblane, was sitting,reading battle reports.Most of the king's attention were on the demon reports,as he had a hate for the demons.He looked up,and saw his adopted son,Anduis.The king put on a fake smile."Anduis,I need your service to the Blood empire",the king said."I am always ready,father.",Anduis said as he bowed.

Torris summoned his keyblade,and the man turned around,and started to walked back into the city.Torris quickly ran up to the man,and slashed his keyblade into him.The man quickly dummoned his keyblade,spun around and blocked the keyblade.He then kicked Torris back,who did a backflip and landed safely.Torris than charged in,but by the time he landed,the man was guard."What is he trying to do...?",Torris murmured to himself.

Chapter 4 is up -Chapter 4:The broken deal- The mercenary slowly entered the cave,and looked around.All of a sudden,there was a flash of a melody,and the employer appeared in front of the mercenary."Boo.",the employer said.The mercenary jumped back,with a girly,loud scream. Employer:I thought you would be tougher. Mercenary:I thought you wouldnt be so sneeky. Employer:Is the deed done? Mercenary:No - there was no Eris Khrelson there. Employer:Hmm..he's usually sneaky.. Mercenary:Also.. Employer:Hmm? Mercenary:Icehill village was destroyed by snow orcs. Employer:Is that so..? Mercenary:Yes.I am sorry to say that happened ~The Employer has a hollow laugh throughout the cave~ Mercenary:What is it? Employer:I sent the orcs,you idiot! Mercenary:What?!?! Employer:I sent the orcs to destroy the village - anyways,about your next deed.. Mercenary:No way! Employer:What?!?!? Mercenary:I'm not helping you destroy the world! Employer:It's not what you think. Mercenary:The deal's off!You'll be lucky if i dont report you to the officers! Employer:That's if theres any guards to tell to.. Mercenary:Good day,sir! The mercenary ran out of the cave,and got on the horse.He knocked the messanger down,and quickly rode to the nearest city:Normakin.Normakin was the only human city in the north,and was where all the northern attentions to brought to.Arius Kordin,the leader of the northern city,took all attentions seriously,even the small ones. The mercenary quickly approahced the iron chain gate,which was held by its giant stone walls.Two guards let the mercenary in,as he rode slowly into the city's main hall.

Both accepted. Since this is probably the most we can get,i'll just post my character now Name:Anduis Bloodblane Side:Blood Angels Age:17 Weapon:2 steel katanas,with golden royal handles.He wields them backwords,interestingly. Appearence:Blood colored Doctor's coat,baggy black chainmail pants,black leather sandals,and a golden ring with a ruby in it.He also wears a silver watch.He has short black hair,a black light beard,and red eyes. Personality:Calm,responsible,and selfless.He's always had a bond with blood angels,as well as humans.He absolutely hates demons. Bio:When he was 6 months old,he lived with his family happily.But however,a demon attacked his home village,and he was adopted by the Blood Angel King.When he was 16,he was told the truth - that his real mom and dad were killed by demons.Ever since he found out about the demons killing his parents,he swore that he would end the demon's genocidal onslaught of the Blood Angels,and that he would protect his people with all he is capable of.

5 hours later.. Torris woke up,and found himself in his bed.He quickly sat up,and summoned his keyblade,looking around.He realized he was in his room,but wondered how he got there.He looked out the window,and realized it was nighttime.Torris saw a meteor shower,which seemed to be heading in the direction of the Old Mansion."What the...?",Torris murmured to himself.He then got dressed,ate a bagel,and then ran out to the road.After 5 minutes of chasing the meteor,he got to the Old Mansion gates.He looked up in disapointment,knowing he couldnt open the gate and go out father.He looked behind him,and saw a black cloaked figure."Adem...",Torris murumured.

Nickolas quickly took his spear and barged out of the cabin.He looked around,and put the spear away.Johnathon walked up to Nickolas and puched him."Dude,what the heck?".Johnathon puched Nickolas again,then drew his spear and started trying to stab Nickolas.Nickolas grabbed the fist,and Johnathon got on his knees.Nickolas kicked Johnathon in the face,and Johnathon ran way.Nickolas spat at Johnathon,and stormed off.

Nickolas was currently fighting another classmate with his spear.They were in Fighting class,and Nickolas was fighting the 2nd best student,Johnathon - 2nd to him,of course.Nickolas quickly blocked with his metal armored arm,and used his spear to trip Johnathon,then slammed the bottom of the spear into the stomach of Johnathon.Nickolas then took his spear,and pointed it at the neck of Johnathon.The class clapped,and Nickolas put his spear back."Class dismissed.",the fighter tutor said.Nickolas went back into his Cabin,and his bunkmates clapped in impression.Nickolas bowed,and put his spear in the closet.

7 IM NOT A WOMAN,DANGIT,I'M A MALE!

WHY,SIR - Why did you post this in public!Now my murder and conspiracy will be known!You have ruined my plans!I shall get vengeance,HellFire - vengeance shall be mine!

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Name:Nickolas Craine Age:17 Gender:Male Parent:Poseidon Weapon:Big,metal spear thats tipped with a giant Kraken Tooth.Knife belt with 15 customized knives. Personality:Relaxed,daring,adventurous.He tends to be very mellow,unless he's in dire situation,in which he"bursts into flames",but not literally. Appearence:He tends to wear black metal soldier boots,as well as black metal gloves.On his left shoulder,he has a sleeve of silver-black plate metal armor.He also wears a black leather belt,made out of bear fur,as well as a simple silver ring on his left middle finger,as well as black leather sandals that he made himself. Bio:He was currently fishing at sea,at the age of 7,with his father and older brother,until a storm hit,and took Nickolas away.He lost nearly all of his memories- the only thing he remembered was his age and name.After he washed up on shore, he was found in a small greek town.After 9 years,at the age of 16,he was discovered to be a Half-blood,and the son of Poseidon.His foster parents gave him all of his belongings,and walked as he set off to Camp-Blood.He was the best there was in the Poseidon cabin,as well as the best runner and horse rider at the camp. HERSHEYS

@ Heartless101 Accepted. If I don't get any more submissions,then i'll just make it a 1x1 then.