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"Look! I'm a butterfly!" /fail

Sorry for the delay.

10/10 for both, you know they are adorable. ^^

I said I was a complete idiot.

I'm an idiot so my theory is stupid as well. Well, I think that Assana has something to do with Erik (obvious ) and that the Spirit Master has a goal of his own and is planning to use Erik to fullfil his goal. The other assassins were completly forgotten by me when I thought of a theory and don't ask where Alexis, Icean and Brox would come in. Also I think that Narmad is either an apprentice or accomplice of the Spirit Master who probably is a rival os Sanatar. But as you see, my thoughts just aren't logical, what means this won't happen.

9/10 Cute!!!! He looks like Roxas and is cute. 9/10

Well, it's a good beginning, you still have a lot to learn (and so do I) since PS has so many good tools to use, just keep training and trying and you'll be great. Also searching for a few tuturials might help.

That's Break from Pandora Hearts, they must be pretty alike though.

Who's Allen Walker? (most of those were requests from another forum, I don't really know who the characters used in the 1st, 2nd and 5th are o.o')

Now this thread is a discussion about Toboe's sexuality. o.o' He is gay!!!!!!!!!!!! jk Ok, changing the subject, I've made a few new things here. Crit?

The story is going well so far, continue 'cause I'm curious.

No, there is no monkey. ^^ ^purple lover < person who has to get a life v is listening to music?

This is cute An, I sure she'll love it.

Chapter 3 - The Pain of Sorrow -I

"It's all your fault sis!!!" 'cause it has to be someone's. ^^ /fail

Purple and TWEWY lover and an awesome person.

I liked this chapter, really catches my interest, I've read through everything again while I was at the beach and, your way of writing has changed, specially in description, what means, you're making Redemption even better.

8,5/10 The size doesn't fit, though I liked the colors and the stock. 8,5/10 It isn't a bad editing, but the bright circles hide the main focus of it and it is rather simple.

Whenever I hust myself I taste the blood on my fingers o.o' So I guess it's only natural, the only thing that could be asked is, why were you carrying the knife? I hope the wound stops hurting (or has it already stopped?) I know it isn't a good feeling. ^^

Well, I liked the storyline so far (not that I go the whole thing obviously) but I think you should be a bit more descriptive, like describe the man who the one who seems to be the main character is talking to, his age, name, appearence and stuff like that. Also describe places and feelings, that should be enough advice for now, and the good start for an already great story.

Why don't you search at google for it? Idk any programs but if I eventually find one I'll make sure to tell you. Good luck. ^^

I love this, just try to do a bit of description, that I've already talked to you about. ^^

Antrium is being dramatic like my sister but... he has a point. You should discuss the problems with him and get to an agreement, just without shouting or any physical agression, just showing your point of view isn't a crime and they ought to let you do that.

No, has nine (wait where's the other one?! ) ^ Is obssessed with Lightning (obvious) < Is stupid v Is going to answer this

Cool! Another Brazilian here! ^^ Yeah, we're screwed because most of the population takes politics as a joke. -.-'