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Dead- Name: Zexel Carline Appearance: 5 feet 7 inches; brown hair in an A line haircut; bright emerald green eyes Personality: outgoing to a poin then is emotionally deprived Living- Name:Betaleena Carline Age:21 Appearance: exactly like Zexel Personality: Before Zexel died, they were out going and spirited, full of life and adventure. Now, ever since her twins death she blames herself for what happened to him even though it wasn't her fault. Bio: Betaleena and Zexel are identical fraternal twins, she knows exactly what happened to Zexel and now is tormented to see that he's "alive", ever since Zexel had died;Betaleena had been depressed and trying to make the best with what he had left her with. Before Zexel came "back" to her, she felt like she was destined to go to hell; becuase it seemed like she couldn't do anything right. Now, however, things have changed and is trying to do her best to keep telling herself that Zexel is actually dead and won't be coming back to life even if he is right in front of her. Yes, I purposely did this to my characters so we can see a real conflict going on.

Name: Carleena Free Age:21 Bio (Not Required.): Born on Yuko, but was kicked out and brought to Haiwa becuase she hated fighting and had no desire to do so...or wanted to live anywhere else. She had known that this country was all about peace and when her parents found this out they brought her here when she was six, she lives with people she doesn't know; but they treated her like she was their own child. She remembers nothing about her past or what powers her biological parents have. In fact she doesn't know her parents at all anymore. She hates arguing just as much as fighting and will do anything to get out of a sticky situation. Power (Nothing too extravagant, these powers are almost like mutations and shouldn't be that strong.): to be discovered (really, I couldn't think of anything so its undecided right now) Appearance:an uneven 'a'line haircut with purple and blue hair; her right eye is red and her left eye is pure black(she was born with the hair and eyes color, the doctors on Yuko have no idea why her hair or eyes are like that; but all I know is that it is part of her power that she has...her eyes hold the power that she has.) She is 5 feet 5 inches tall. She likes wearing anything that will bring out her hair or eyes color. She mainly wears a mid-evil maiden dress that trails after her as she walks around.

....okay....now i'm confused...i thought that this would be what happened before bbs...now i'm starting to think that it's actually a dream that Sora or someone has to figure out what went wrong. becuase if this is before bbs, then Roxas, Sora, and Xion wouldn't be here yet. in BBS Sora was five or this story should at least take place when he was either born or before his time....i hope the next chapter will clear things up for me...otherwise i'll just be lost.

yes, i'm sorry. i should've pmed you about it.

I agree....if it was published i would be reading it hundred times over, without the interruptions of these replies.

yes, i do know....that's your response after each post i put up...and i thank you. ...=O!!...wow. the rating went off the chart...boy, oh boy, that's.....wow...thank you. .................................................................................................................................................................... Chapter 13: Lost The splash of Myde hitting the water alerted the others of what happened. They then saw a heart go flying away. Axel seemed to be down a little bit, as he and Vexen left the scene. Axel noticed the third person didn

Verry interesting....that totally caught me off gaurd. Verry nice intro to the story.

lol...thanks. i still have 15 more chapters to put up and then it'll be 'the Demyx continuum' and my continuation of 'Zexion's Confessions'. i know i had stopped posting that, but to tell you the truth i've started writting 'Zexion's Confessions' after i had written 'the Demyx continuum' they actually go hand in hand with each other; becuase Zexion and Demyx go in and out of each others stories. i've broken the 'Continuum' into five small books...each having anywhere from 14-16 chapters... except the fifth one which only has two chapters and work in progress. So i've decided that when i get to that point i'll tell you guys more. i love getting feedback from my readers, becuase then i know that i'm doing an excellent job with entertaining you. if you have any questions regarding my fanfics, please don't be afraid to pm or im me and ask away. i'll be able to answer your questions to the best of my knowledge. thank you for taking your time to read this fantastic story about how Demyx gotten into the organization. hope to hear from you all in my other fanfics that i'll be posting once this is done. =D

i'm glad that you love it.<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3 Alright, those of you who are fans of other organization members; you'll love the rest of the story. becuase i finally got to that point in Myde's life where the organization comes in. ............................................................................................................... Chapter 11: Decided to Act Alone Myde made it back to Trianna, but there was something wrong. Trianna wasn

oh my gosh...really?that's totally sucks. i wouldn't be able to stand it, being able to see him every day in the class. *sighs* i guess that's life. Anyways, on the up side it's only that class...right?

...oh my gosh...how sad. man, that almost brought tears to my eyes. that was a lovely piece of work you got there. i loved every second of it. it kept my attention and my interest. i bet you had gotten a really good grade on it, becuase i give it an 'A+' way to go. i only have one question though...what happened to the boy?

Oh cool.

Your welcome.

such a powerful song. i loved it. had a lot of meaning and heart to it. keep it the great work.

Wow...that was great...very personal though. but it was a great poem all the same.

I would most diffintely would have to say it is a tie between Zexion and Demyx for me. Axel is just hanging in there for my vote...but Zexion and Demyx ftw on this. In my opinion at least.

i would go all out and put my full vote in for Organization 13 nobodies. oh...and ...uh...Organization 13 ftw!

Just don't fall in love with her, because falling in love with a data program isn't gonna turn out to be a good relationship o_O. then i guess i'm in trouble...lol.Anyways, with what's given i'm going to have to say Sora, Terra, and Aqua.

lol...i have that comic...i love Zexion and Demyx comics. the comic is about Demyx proving everyone wrong that they have hearts, by giving Zexion a scare which causes him to have a heartache...thus proving him right when he says 'we do too have hearts'. ................................................................................................. 'Oh we do too have hearts...don't be mad.' -Melodious Nocturne from kh2, Hollow Bastain- 'Roxas, you and i and all the other organization members are what we like to call Nobodies. With a captial 'n' its a name for those who are missing a vital part of who we are: our hearts' -Cloaked Schemer from KH 358/2 days, twilight town day#10- 'my heart wouldn't be in it, you know? haven't got one.'- 'He[Roxas] was the only one that made me feel... like i had a heart...it's kind of funny you make me feel the same.' -Furry of Dadncing Flames from KH2, betwixt and between- Organization 13 has given me something to think about since they first appeared in KH, and i think it just depends on the member. but it is possible they do, but its just not working...and it's possible that they don't but just imitate that they are breathing. true, they do resemble human beings and true they could remember what it's like to have a heart. but to say that they aren't beings is just out of the question. true they aren't suppose to exist...but that would also mean that the heartless isn't suppose to either...you can't have one without the other if their souls are strong. i agree that they don't have hearts...but i believe that true feelings come from the soul and that anyone could feel an emotion without a heart, a heart is an organ that lets the being know it's alive. it is an important to have one to survive, but it probably doesn't have a role in having to feel emotion. So does Organization 13 have hearts? No they don't have a beating heart, but they do have one.

it was really cool. i never thought about doing something like that when i'm bored. i'll have to keep this in mind the next time i get bored.

no, it really is over 9000. no joke. but i would have to disagree with all the banana lovers...i would most difinately would have to go to key lime pie, only becuase i don't like banana's.

Chapter 9: Truth The next morning, Myde got up and had a plan forming in his mind. He opened the book that he found and looked through it. There was nothing in it except the name of the owner which was Ienzo, but it was damaged from being in the water for too long. He got to the last page and found something, it looked like a locket or a charm of some sort. It had the initials

hey i watched this video and it was a great video. keep working on it. i love the movie too. i can't wait to see the end result.

Nice....that was awesome. i have that game...and most of the stuff that was showed didn't appear in my game; but then again i haven't completed all the accomplishments yet. i enjoyed it all the same.

....OK....yeah.... um....i agree with RoxasStalker. What the heck did i just watch? whateveritwassurekilledmycuriousityonit.