Posted July 29, 200916 yr *inhale exhale* mah first poem...here goes... roses r red violets r blue... O.O....JUST KIDDING!!!!!!! just had to do that though XDD heres the actual thing What's Written on my Heart The rain is everlasting Storms fill my soul as I thirst for peace There's nothing left to do But stare back as you leave me alone.... Alone and dying You used to be my helper My healing tourniquet Yet you leave me to walk on my own To fend for myself But you will forget me And I will watch as the seasons change Alone and on my own Everything we had before will turn to dust And the only thing I will have left... Is what's written on my heart ....ok so i was quite bored i was thinking of random things and im making u suffer for it ^^ constructive critizism NEEDED
July 30, 200916 yr Its nice really. i like it. It sounds like a chorus of a song ....*POEM RELATING* ....... its Axel to Roxas in a painful way....jes......
July 31, 200916 yr @Blazer - if you're not into poetry then why click on a thread that says POEM?! I think it's beautiful in a melancholy way.
August 2, 200916 yr Author :blush: thanx everyone! and yeah digimoon93 it kinda is.....i was humming a tune in my head and the word popped up and i wrote them down so i wouldnt forget
*inhale exhale* mah first poem...here goes...
roses r red
violets r blue...
O.O....JUST KIDDING!!!!!!! just had to do that though XDD
heres the actual thing
What's Written on my Heart
The rain is everlasting
Storms fill my soul as I thirst for peace
There's nothing left to do
But stare back as you leave me alone....
Alone and dying
You used to be my helper
My healing tourniquet
Yet you leave me to walk on my own
To fend for myself
But you will forget me
And I will watch as the seasons change
Alone and on my own
Everything we had before will turn to dust
And the only thing I will have left...
Is what's written on my heart
....ok so i was quite bored i was thinking of random things and im making u suffer for it ^^
constructive critizism NEEDED