This one i call Falls into the shadows
With her, I'm in heaven
My heart is alive and thuds against my chest
My feet soars on the air
My skin feels hot in her radiance
My eyes are alive and open because they don't want to miss a second of her
Though, when she left
My body fell down, down toward Earth and then down more. Down into darkness
My heart stopped
My skin felt frostbitten in the darkness
My eyes are closed to escape the darkness
I waited for her to return, to save me
Days passed and I stayed, slowly falling into darkness
I started to lose hope
Hope
The last thing I had in the darkness, slowly died
Hope was the last thing I had, died in the darkness

Hope u like them, i have a lot more where this came from

Epic man, keep writing!

Breath taking man. I really liked. Sincere and heart felt. Amazing man! I wish I could write poetry. Hope the girl likes it to.

I dedicate these poems to my one love, PersianRose13!

This one i call Falls into the shadows

With her, I'm in heaven

My heart is alive and thuds against my chest

My feet soars on the air

My skin feels hot in her radiance

My eyes are alive and open because they don't want to miss a second of her

Though, when she left

My body fell down, down toward Earth and then down more. Down into darkness

My heart stopped

My skin felt frostbitten in the darkness

My eyes are closed to escape the darkness

I waited for her to return, to save me

Days passed and I stayed, slowly falling into darkness

I started to lose hope

Hope

The last thing I had in the darkness, slowly died

Hope was the last thing I had, died in the darkness

Hope u like them, i have a lot more where this came from

 

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totally epic man...............did she see it yet? she gonna be SO happy!!!!

that is so beautiful!!!!!! got any more?!

that is so beautiful!!!!!! got any more?!

 

ya i got like 16 left and i will post them all if people like it!

Thanks for the comments I wanted to put a new one on so here it is

This one is called No More Hope

Days without her has brought sorrow in my heart

Friends say have hope, but for how long

How much longer must I have hope

In my heart, there is no hope

Just sorrow

Sorrow struck my heart

The blood from my heart is my love, being drained away

Instead of death its sorrow that has came in

In death, you feel nothing

Sorrow is worst, it gives you pain

Pain that destroyed my hope

Now there is no hope

No hope

No hope left in my heart

Hope you like this one, I'll post more if you like this one!

Dude, you are seriously talented, please write more!

OMG thoes were great!!!!

Keep it UP!

AWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thats AWSOME MAN!!!! shes gonna love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks for the comment guys, I really appreciate them!

This one i call Death by love

My life had meaning when i met her

She gave me life for a moment

That moment

She was mine

But,

She had to leave

Leave me in the darkness

Days has gone by and I wait for her

Day and night she doesn't come

Slowly, death came to me

I tried and tried to stay alive

But death was always found a way to trick me

The the day came where death came back

I didn't hesitate when he tried

Then I died, died by my love for her

My death was

Death by love

I hope u like it! Comment if u do like it!

very cool

Awesomeness, Kingdom! Keep it up!

Thanks for the comment guys! Really i appreciate the comments!

I call this one Rose in the wind

The girl I met gave me life

She looked like a vision of beauty

A rose

Her skin was smooth and her eyes were shining

When the wind blew in her face

Her hair would flow like an angel

She reminded me of a goddesses in Greek mythology

I wanted her to be mine

And for a minute, she was

Then she disappeared in the wind

Only to remind me is memories of my rose

The wind took it away

But she will be my rose in the wind

Hope u like it! Comment on it! I want to know how the poem is!

Truly touching man, i congratulate you! You are frikcin talented!

Keep it up, man! Your poems all seem pretty deep. Great job!

man ks you hit my heart and i am not going to say i am pr13 but those are lovly as can be.