Text Poems (I write them)

[Heartless666 14]

Yea so I'm a poem type of guy. It depends on my mood mostly. So here is a short sample poem I'd like to call Darkness. Sorry if it's a bit saddening

 

 

Trying to hold this pain in

Nothing more than a little whime I seem to be

Forveer falling into the sleep of eternity

The passage of the dark is long

So I seem to walk on

On and on I walk through this blinding darkness

The darkness like a fog around my eyes

Will I find the light I need so much?

Or will I become so out of touch?

My heart devoured and my mind feeling soured

I seem to have lost all my powers

My strength is fading away

And now I just have this feeling of dismay

When oh when can I turn away?

[Misuzu 15]

There was one or two spelling errors, and I didn't quite comprehend this line : 'On and on I walk through this blind.' I don't understand what you mean by walking through a blind?

 

It wasn't too shabby, though.

[DigiMoon93 2]

mm this reminds me of Riku or Koichi

 

anywhoz it sounds like a kind of song i would listen to lol

[Heartless666 14]

Thanks guys and I'll fix that "blind" line. I meant something more but somethimes my fingers miss what my thoughts are

[zexionrox13 3]

I liked that one a lot, mine aren't nearly as good as yours! Here's some of mine any way