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Poems (I write them)

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Yea so I'm a poem type of guy. It depends on my mood mostly. So here is a short sample poem I'd like to call Darkness. Sorry if it's a bit saddening



Trying to hold this pain in

Nothing more than a little whime I seem to be

Forveer falling into the sleep of eternity

The passage of the dark is long

So I seem to walk on

On and on I walk through this blinding darkness

The darkness like a fog around my eyes

Will I find the light I need so much?

Or will I become so out of touch?

My heart devoured and my mind feeling soured

I seem to have lost all my powers

My strength is fading away

And now I just have this feeling of dismay

When oh when can I turn away?

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There was one or two spelling errors, and I didn't quite comprehend this line : 'On and on I walk through this blind.' I don't understand what you mean by walking through a blind?


It wasn't too shabby, though.

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