Ok, this story is not totally mine, because I already saw one very similar one on the internet.

 

The Little Mermaid is one of my favorite Disney movies, so I decided to write it in my kh version. You’re probably asking yourself why it isn’t Sora - The Little Merman. That’s because, in the movie everybody talk about how beautiful voice Ariel haves. Then I remembered that Roxas is voiced by Jesse McCartney, very cool singer. So, I decided to put him as the Little Merman. Most of the text is used directly from the original movie.

 

Enjoy!

 

Chapter One:

 

The seagulls are peacefully flying above the sea, when ship appears along with some dolphins. On it are sailors, setting the ship and catching fishes while they are singing about the sea. The girl with blond hair is sitting on the fence and drawing in her sketchbook.

 

Princess Namine: Isn’t that great, Red? *looks to her dog*A beautiful ocean, salty air and the wind blowing in your face. A perfect day, don’t you think Axel?

Princess’s personal bodyguard Axel: Yes my sweetie, delightful… *he vomits in the sea*

 

Namine smiles as her red dog barks on the seagulls. All sailors seem happy with the sea.

 

Sailor: King Ansem must be in the friendly type mood.

Namine: King Ansem?

Another Sailor: Ruler of the Merpeople, princess. Thought every good sailor know about him.

Namine: Merpeople must be so nice. Wish I could meet one someday, so I could draw them!

Axel gets better.

Axel: Hmm… Merpeople. Namine, pay no attention to this nautical nonsense.

Sailor: But it ain’t nonsense. It’s the truth! I’m telling you. Down in the depths of the ocean they live!

Namine : So, they are real! Oh, Red I can’t wait to see one.

 

She says as she hugs her red dog. Sailors are taking fishes from the net, when one of the fishes escapes back in the ocean. The fish takes a deep breath and is happy that it escaped from the net. Fish swims deeper in the ocean, seeing all other sea creatures. There are jellyfishes, giant whales

and suddenly… merpeople!

 

The whole families are swimming towards one place, a magnificent palace. There are merpeople taking sits. It looks like concert is about to begin. When all came in the concert hall, a small seahorse comes on the stage. He clears his throat.

 

Seahorse: His Royal Higness, King Ansem the Wise!

 

An older man comes on the carriage, carried by dolphins. He is also carrying a sword shaped like a key. Dolphins are swimming all over the concert hall. While they swim past the chandelier, King’s sword starts glowing. He points it straight at chandelier. Chandelier started glowing in beautiful golden color. Audience starts clapping. They are very impressed by it.

 

Seahorse: And presenting the distinguished court composter, Donald Duck!

 

A squid like duck comes on the in hall as well, carrying a baton. Before he goes on the stage, King talks with him.

 

King Ansem: I’m really looking forward to this performance, Donald.

Donald: Your Majesty! This will be the finest concert I have ever conducted. Your daughters, they will be spectacular!

King Ansem: Yes! And especially my little Roxas.

Donald: Yes, yes. Almost forgot your only son. He haves the most beautiful voice. Hmm? *quietly

continues to himself* If only he’d show up for rehearsals once in the while.

 

Lights turn off. The only light follows Donald on the stage. He raises his baton and orchestra starts playing. Three big seashells appear on the stage. From them, six mermaids come out, singing.

 

#Ah, we’re the daughters of Ansem, great father who loves us and names us as well: Raquata *first sings*Radrina*second sings* Rarista*third sings* Rattina*fourth sings* Radella*fifth sings* Ralana*sixth sings*#

 

While they are singing another closed seashell appears.

 

#And there is a youngest and his musical debut, our only brother we do have. We’re presenting him to you, to sing a song Donald wrote. His voice is like a bell. He’s our brother Rox…#

 

But the seashell is empty. King Ansem angrily raises his key sword.

 

King Ansem: *angrily yells* Roxas!

 

Somewhere in the ocean, a little blond haired merman stares on the ship wrecks.

 

???: Roxas, wait for me.

 

He turns around.

 

Roxas: Goofy, hurry up!

 

A sea turtle comes.

 

Goofy: You know that I can’t swim that fast.

 

But the boy doesn’t mind him. He looks around again.

 

Roxas: *says excited*There it is. *shows on a big ship wreck* Isn’t it fantastic?

Goofy: Yeah, sure. It’s great. Now let’s get outta here. *tries to swim away*

Roxas: *sighs and pulls him back* You’re not getting cold fins now, are you?

Goofy: Who, me? No way. It’s just… It, uh… It looks damp in there. Yeah. And I think I may be coming down with something. Yeah, I got this cough. *starts coughing*

Roxas: *gives him a weird look and looks through the ship’s window* All right. I’m going inside. You can just stay here and watch for sharks. *goes inside the ship*

Goofy: OK. Yeah, you go. I’ll stay and…*realizes one thing* What? Sharks? Roxas! *tries to get through the ship’s window, but he’s too big* Roxas, I can’t… I mean… Roxas, help!

Roxas:*smiles and goes to Goofy* Oh, Goofy.

Goofy: *whispers* Roxas? Do you really think there might be sharks around here?

Roxas: Goofy, don’t be such a guppy. *pulls him out of the window*

Goofy: I’m not a guppy.* follows him inside the ship* This is great. I mean, I really love this… *screams when he sees a human skull* Roxas! *swims quickly in Roxas’s arms*

Roxas: Are you OK?

Goofy: *trembles* Yeah, sure. No Problem. I’m OK.

Roxas: *swims deeper in the ship* Wow, how cool is this! *picks a fork* Isn’t that the coolest thing you ever saw?

Goofy: Yeah! But, what is it?

Roxas: *puts fork in the bag* I don’t know, but I bet Sora will.

 

Something pasts through.

 

Goofy: What was that? Did you hear something?

Roxas: *picks a pipe* I wonder what this one is.

Goofy: *says scared* Roxas?

Roxas: Goofy, will you relax? Nothing is going to happen.

 

In that moment giant shark comes in the ship.

 

Goofy: Shark! *panicking over the ship* Shark! We’re gonna die!

 

Goofy runs in Roxas’s arms, this time completely scared. Shark tries to bite Roxas’s tail, but he dodges in time. They both swim quickly, deeper in the ship. While they’re fleeing away, Roxas loses the bag. He quickly swims back to get it, just before sharks bites it. After that, they both flee to the nearest ship’s window.

 

Goofy: Oh, no!* stucked in the window*

 

Roxas pushes him out and gets out of the ship as well. Shark still chases them, until it gets stuck with an anchor.

 

Goofy: You big bully! *sticks his tongue at shark*

 

Shark tries to bite him. Goofy becomes very scared because of it.

 

Roxas: Goofy, you really are a guppy.*swims on the surface*

Goofy: I’m not.*follows him*

 

Somewhere on surface, there is a seagull with brown, spiky feathers. He’s looking through the spyglass.

 

Roxas: *shouts* Sora!

Sora: *throws his spyglass in the air and turns it wrong* Whoa! * sees Roxas and Goofy through the spyglass pretty far away* Merman off the port bow! *says loudly* How, you doin’ kid? *removes spyglass and sees Roxas and Goofy right in front of him* Whoa, what a swim.

Roxas: Sora, look what we found.*shows on a bag*

Sora: Human stuff, huh? Hey, let me see. * picks a fork* Oh! Oh! Look at this. Wow. This is special. This is very, very unusual.

Roxas: What? What is it?

Sora: It’s a dinglehopper. Human use these little babies… to straighten their hair out.

Roxas: Really?*tries to straight his hair with a fork*

Goofy: What about that one? *shows on pipe*

Sora: Ah! This I haven’t seen in years. This is wonderful! A banded, bulbous snartblatt.

Goofy: *says excited* Wow!

Roxas: *still tries to straight his hair, hair only becomes more ruffled* What are humans doing with it?

Sora: Well, if humans get bored, they use this to make a fine music. Allow me! *blows in pipe, only to makes a noise*

Roxas: *realizes something* Music! The concert! My dad’s gonna kill me! *quickly takes a fork and a pipe and swims in the ocean*

Goofy: The concert was today? *follows him*

Roxas: I’m sorry! I’ve gotta go! Thank you, Sora!

Sora: Any time, kiddo!

 

Roxas swims along with goofy towards the home. But they aren’t unaware that they’re watched by to evil looking eels. Someone else is watching them as well, with the help of magic and eels.

 

???: Yes, hurry home, dear Prince. We wouldn’t want to miss old Daddy’s celebration, now, would we? Ha, what celebration. I used to have them to, when I lived in palace.

 

Light shines on the person who is talking. It’s an octopus like creature.

 

???: And now look at me. Wasted away to practically nothing. Banished and exiled and practically starving, while he and his flimsy fish folk celebrate.

 

Goes towards the glowing cauldron, where picture with swimming Roxas and Goofy is.

 

???: Well, I’ll give ‘em something to celebrate soon enough. *looks at picture* Xaldin! Xigbar! *eels hear its voice* I want you to keep an extra close watch on this little boy of his. He may be the key to Ansem’s undoing. *wickedly smiles*

Riku is the evil person!? Ok I should have thought about that but for some reason Riku just doesn't fit for me. I thought Laxerene or someone form organization 13 would fit actually.

Chapter Seven:

 

Goofy and Donald are looking at Namine, who helps Roxas walk.

Goofy: What will we do now?

Donald: We’ll help Roxas of course!

Sora: *flies to them*How we will help him?

Donald:*thinks* We’ll watch him the whole day and if he’ll get in trouble, we’ll help him.

Sora: Well, that sure is a brilliant idea!*flies towards the Roxas*

Donald: Try not to do anything stupid!

Sora: Who, me? Not a chance.

Donald: Ok, we’ll watch from the water.

 

Sora flies and sees how Namine and Roxas enter the palace. He tries to enter, but door closes just before he gets in. Inside it,

Princess leads Roxas to one of her maids.

 

Maid: How can I help you, Princess? And who is that boy?

Namine: I found him on the shore and I really think he’s been through something. Can you fix him up a bit?

Roxas:*fix me up?*

Maid: Oh, well come here then eh… what’s your name?

Namine: He can’t talk and I don’t know his name either.

Maid: Then just come to that room over there. I’ll fix you up in no time!

Roxas:*looks on Namine and follows maid in that room*

 

Meanwhile Donald and Goofy tries to find him.

 

Donald: We won’t see anything from here.*thinks* You stay here, I’ll try to get closer.

Goofy: But Donald, aren’t you gonna be…

Donald: I’ll be fine. You’ll see. *goes closer to the palace and tries to climb to the nearest window* Just a little closer…

???: Look mommy! A squid duck!

???: Nonsense, squid ducks don’t exist.

Donald: *looks and sees a little girl who is watching him* Oh, no. *quickly jumps into the nearest window* Roxas, where the hell are you? *looks around the room who seems like a giant wardrobe*

 

Suddenly a maid comes inside it and screams when she sees Donald.

 

Donald: Sorry ma’am!*jumps out of the window*

Goofy: Did you find him?

Donald: No just a screaming woman. Let’s go! Maybe Sora found something.

 

Meanwhile Namine sits in the Dining Room along with the Axel. She is looking at the sketch with boy’s foggy face.

 

Namine: I can’t understand why… but he…

Axel: What’s the matter?

Namine: That boy who saved me. His voice and his face couldn’t get off of my head. But today I found another boy, who had almost the same face.

Axel: Why don’t you think that’s him?

Namine: He can’t talk.

Axel: Oh, I see…

 

Suddenly a maid comes, pulling someone’s arm.

 

Maid: Don’t be shy. You look great!

 

It appears that arm was Roxas’s. Now he was clean, wearing gray pants and white T – shirt.

 

Roxas:*Yeah, I look horrible. Just look what she did to my hair!*

Namine: *smiles as she looks on Roxas’s straighten hair* Well, come over here! *shows on the seat next to her*

Axel: *whispers*Are you really sure that’s not your knight in shining armor?

Namine: *whispers back* Oh, just shut up.

Roxas: *sits and sees fork** A dinglehopper! Now I can finally fix my hair.**picks fork and starts combing his hair with it, his hair becomes ruffled*

 

Namine sees that change and imagines the boy who saved her. Axel only gives Roxas a weird look.

 

Roxas:*realizes that and puts fork back on the table*

 

After that Axel and Namine starts talking about the things Roxas didn’t understand. He becomes bored when he sees that Axel is setting a pipe. Sora said that thing makes music if you get bored.

 

Roxas: *Maybe I can make some music to make Namine happier!* *looks at Axel and shows on the pipe*

Axel: Uh, do you want it? *Roxas nods* Well, then you’re the man! *gives pipe to Roxas*

Roxas: *How do you make music with this? Oh, yeah!* *strongly blows in the pipe, directly into Axel*

Namine laughs when she sees Axel completely black from the pipe’s smoke.

Roxas: *Guess, I didn’t use it right…*

Axel cleans his face with a napkin and continues what he wanted to discuss with Namine.

Axel: Well, young man… *looks at him* do you want to see the princess’s palace tomorrow? Today is a way too late for this. So, what do you say?

Roxas: *happily nods*

Namine: *still laughs* I can be you tour guide if you want. *he nods even happier than before* Oh, that’s wonderful. *stands up* I’ll show you to your room then.

 

Suddenly something knocks on the window. It was Sora.

 

Sora: How you doin’ kiddo? Did you kissed her already?

Roxas: *angrily looks at him* *Not now Sora! Just shut up.*

Axel: *doesn’t see Sora* It’s kinda stifling in here. I’ll open the window. *opens and hits Sora with it*

Sora: Hey, watch it! *flies away*

Roxas sights and follows Namine in his room.

Namine: You’re lucky! That’s our best guest room. *opens the door*

Roxas: *Wow, It’s so big!*

Namine: *leads him to the balcony* That’s my favorite part of this room.

 

The balcony had stairs all the way to the sea. Namine goes to the sea, immersing her hands in the water. Roxas does the same and in this moment thinks about his family who must be so worried about him. And about sorcerer who gave him legs in exchange for voice. He was also very worried. What if Namine doesn’t love him? With that thought a teardrop slips down to his cheek.

 

Namine: Is something wrong?

Roxas: *shakes with his head and wipes a teardrop* *I’m ok. I… just don’t know if you love me for real…*

Namine: *hugs him* Don’t worry. We’ll take care of you. *sights* I wish that you could speak…

Roxas: *So do I…*

Namine looks Roxas’s face. Even though he can’t speak, maybe he’s the one… She moves slowly to his lips, prepared to kiss him… when someone opens the door. She quickly goes back in the room.

Maid: Princess, we need you at library. Would you please come?

Namine: Of course, I just wanted to show the room to our new guest. *leaves with maid*

Roxas: *disappointedly* *I was so close!* *realizes one thing* *But she does like me.

 

Suddenly he hears a splashing down the balcony. Donald, Goofy and Sora come to visit him. He sits and listens what do they have to tell, but he doesn’t listen. All his thoughts were about Namine and their almost first kiss.

LOL

I finally made a sketch of Riku!

Chapter Eight:

 

King Ansem walks up and down, worriedly thinking. A seahorse comes.

 

Ansem: Did you find them?

Seahorse: No, your majesty. There’s no sigh of Roxas or Donald.

Ansem: Keep looking then! Search every part of the ocean!

Seahorse: Right away sir! *leaves*

Ansem: *sadly looks outside* Oh, what did I done. Roxas… if you can hear me… where are you?

 

In the same moment Roxas wakes up. He had strange dreams about Namine leaving him. What it that will really happened. He shakes his head to clear his mind when he hears a movement outside. He quickly jumps in the air and roughly lands on the floor.

 

Roxas: *Guess I forgotten, that I can’t float here*

 

Axel comes in his room.

 

Axel: Are you ok? I heard a noise.

Roxas: *shrugs with his shoulders*

Axel: Well, if everything’s ok, then come outside. Namine is waiting for you, to show you a palace.

Roxas: * Yay, can’t wait* *happily dresses and follows Axel outside*

 

Namine still looks at the sketch. When Axel comes with Roxas, she quickly hides it in her little bag. Roxas was very happy to be with Namine again. She looked so beautiful in her white dress along with her blonde hair and blue sparkling eyes.

 

Namine: Ready to go?

Roxas: *happily nods*

 

She shows him the whole palace. Roxas was excited by everything he saw. After almost the whole day, she takes him outside.

 

Namine: And this is my favorite place in the whole kingdom. Hope you’ll like it!

 

Her favorite place was a royal garden. Roxas really likes it. So many trees, flowers and an ocean in the view. He starts going around in circles, until he falls in the soft grass.

 

Namine: *smiles and lays right next to him* Guess you like it!

Roxas: *nods with a smile* *Of course I do! This is the best place I ever seen!*

Namine: Wish I could know your name…

 

Suddenly a brown feathered seagull comes saying hi to Roxas again.

 

Sora: How ya doin’t Roxas!

Namine: *hears him* Roxas? Is your name Roxas?

Roxas: *happily nods* *Sora finally did something good…*

 

Together they watch a sunset. And just before a light ball disappears into an ocean Roxas goes close to her. Namine goes to him too. Just a little and it would happen, but it didn’t. Just before they kissed two birds flew between them. Birds flew back to the ocean. They try to do it again, but Axel comes again, calling Namine.

 

Namine: I’ll be going then, see you tomorrow. *leaves with Axel*

Roxas: *angrily* *Why always something happens when she tries to kiss me? Man, I hate this!* *sadly goes to his room*

 

Meanwhile someone angrily yells on two eels.

 

Riku: Fools! I changed you into land creatures for a reason! To make sure Namine doesn’t fall in love with Roxas! *thinks for some time* Looks like I have to take things in my tentacles. I’ll have king’s Ansem son for sure! *starts throwing things in a cauldron, along with a Roxas’s voice* Ansem’s power will finally belong to me! *wickedly laughs while he’s changing into a human*

 

Namine couldn’t sleep. All she could think about now is Roxas. His face so similar to the one she drew, but where is his voice? She sadly gets up and goes to the table where her drawings were. She picks the one with boy’s foggy face. That’s him… suddenly the wind blows the drawing away. Namine quickly runs to the shore where her drawing was blown. Drawing was almost completely destroyed by water. She picks it and looks at it in tears.

 

Namine: *quietly* Now I’m never going to find him…

 

In the same moment she hears singing. A boy’s singing! There is boy coming towards her. And he’s singing with that voice. She looks at him in detail, but something is terribly wrong. His face is total different from the one that she drew. When she tries to say something, the boy’s necklace starts glowing.

 

She feels tired as her eyes turns gold from boy’s glowing necklace.

OMIGOSH, DOES RIKU TURN INTO VANITAS?!

OMIGOSH, DOES RIKU TURN INTO VANITAS?!

 

How the hell, did you know that???????? http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/ohmy.png

 

How the hell, did you know that???????? http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/ohmy.png

 

Because some people ship Naminé and Sora together and I thought, it wouldn't be Sora 'cause he's Scuttle in this story so I thought the only way you could make an evil Sora was to make Riku turn into Vanitas, who, as we all know, looks like Sora. My other guess was Ventus but that seemed less probable.

Chapter Eight (Final):

 

Roxas screams as he awakens from his terrible dream. It was about Namine leaving him with another evil looking boy. For some time he just sits on the bed, thinking about his last day to make Namine fall in love with him. Suddenly he hears knocking on the window. It was Sora again. He opens the window and lets Sora in.

 

Sora: *fully excited and happy* I just heard the news! Congratulations! *hugs him* Kiddo, we did it!

Roxas: *confused* *What does he talking about?*

Sora: *gives him a weird look* You don’t know? Man, the whole kingdom is talking about it!

Roxas: *I still don’t know what you are babbling about.*

Sora: *loudly* The Princess will marry this afternoon! I just wanted to wish you a good luck. *goes to the window* I’ll catch ya later. I wouldn’t miss it! *flies towards the sea*

Roxas: *stares for some time and then realizes* *Yes, she does love me! Those dreams weren’t true!* *quickly dresses up and ruffles his hair with a fork* *She may realized that I’m the boy who save her! Man, today will be the best day of my entire life!* *runs towards the palace’s entrance where princess usually was*

 

There she is, talking with Axel and… another boy? He looks closely. The boy had black spiky hair and muscular body. He also had those scary golden eyes. Roxas thinks, he saw him once, but not sure where. Then he hears their conversation.

 

Axel: It appears that I was mistaken. This boy does exist, but are you sure that’s your true love?

Namine: *with weird voice* Yes, I’m entirely sure. I wish to be married with him as soon as possible.

Axel: *confused* Yes, yes! But what about Roxas?

Namine: What Roxas?

 

In that moment Roxas feels like his heart is about to break. How could she fall in love with a guy who looks like a freak and totally forgets about him? He then realizes where he saw him. In his dream, where Namine leaves him with another guy. He can’t take it anymore, so he runs back to his room, down the stairs of the balcony, all the way to the sea.

 

Roxas: *How did that happened? I thought she really loves me.* *hides his head behind his arms*

Donald:*appears* Roxas… I don’t know what to say…

Goofy: *appears alongside Donald* Yeah, I really thought she loved you, not him.

Roxas: *So did I, but what now? This day will be over soon and I’ll spend the rest of my life in Riku’s possession…*

Donald: Look! The marriage ship is sailing!

 

Roxas stands up and looks at the ship, who’s leaving him behind. He can’t stop the tears that escaped his eyes. Somewhere above the ocean, Sora flies towards the marriage ship to see Roxas.

 

Sora: *hears a familiar voice* Oh, that’s must be Roxas! He must be singing how happy he is. *flies towards the ship’s window*

 

But it’s not Roxas in there. He usually sings how beautiful world is, not about taking the oceans. Sora looks through the window and almost stops flying when he sees the boy with black hair. Seagull is about to leave when he sees boy’s reflection. It wasn’t his, but from the sea sorcerer! He quickly flies back to palace finding Roxas on the dock along with Donald and Goofy.

 

Sora: *yells* Roxas… I was flying. Of course I was flying, I’m a bird! Then I wanted to see you, but you wasn’t here, so I look and see the black haired guy who was watching himself in the mirror and…

Donald: Just what are you babbling about?

Sora: *angrily* The princess is marrying the sea sorcerer in disguise!

Roxas: *even more angrily* *So, it was him! Man, I’ll kill him!* *jumps into the sea and almost drowns*

Goofy: *saves Roxas from drowning* Whoa, take it easy! Don’t worry I’ll take you to the ship.

Donald: Then I’ll call Ansem to help.

Goofy: Do you really think…

Donald: I know it’s crazy! But we’ll need his help.

Sora: What can I do?

Donald: Stall the wedding! *jumps in the sea*

Sora: Yes I’m a wedding crasher! *flies all over the shore, calling all kinds of sea creatures* Follow me and set a hell on this ship!

 

Meanwhile Namine and Riku are just about to be wedded when a horde of birds fly towards them. They all attack Riku.

 

Riku: Get off of me! *fishes come spitting, water directly on his face* Yuck! *that’s not all, birds bring crabs who jump directly on his head, pinching his nose* Get off of me this instant! *even Namine’s dog joins, biting Riku’s ass* *screams from the pain*

Sora: *pulling Riku’s necklace* You ugly creep! Give my friend’s voice back! *finally takes the necklace and destroys it in the same moment that Roxas comes on the ship*

 

For Namine was just like to awake from the long dream. She looks around, almost screams when she sees Riku and is excited when she sees Roxas. He feels a change in his throat.

 

Roxas: Namine!

Namine: Roxas? You can… talk? That voice, it’s really you! *hugs him*

Roxas: I wanted to tell you, but… *suddenly screams from the pain*

Namine: What’s wrong?

 

The sun already disappeared into the sea. Roxas got his tail back! Namine, shocked from what did she just see, moves a bit away.

 

Riku: *laughs* You’re too late! *changes back into an octopus like creature*

Roxas: *tries to run away, but unable because of his tail* No…

Riku: Oh yes! *catching him in his tentacles* You won’t get away, pretty boy. *prepares to jump into the sea*

Namine: *shouts* Let him go, you monster!

Riku: *laughably shakes with his head* We had a deal. Didn’t we? *looks on wrapped Roxas and then on Namine* So, long sweetie! *jumps in the sea, along with Roxas in his tentacles*

Namine: *angrily* Ok, that’s it. *takes her wedding dress off, leaving only a small piece of it on (kh2 outfit) * Come on Red! *dog happily joins her* He saved me once… and I’ll save him now. *runs to the lifeboats*

Axel: *confusedly* Princess, what the hell are you doing?

Namine: *picks two harpoons, throwing them in the boat* Axel, he needs me. *jumping in the boat, along with a dog*

Axel: But, he’s a mer…

Namine: *angrily* I don’t care who he is! I lost him once, but I won’t gonna lose him again! *descences the lifeboat in the water*

 

Meanwhile Roxas tries to get off the tentacles.

 

Riku: Too, bad you’re not my real target…

 

Suddenly a blast comes of the nowhere, directly into Riku. That causes him to release Roxas.

 

Roxas: Dad!

Ansem: *pointing his keyblade at Riku*

Riku: *wickedly smiles* Oh, King Ansem, how you been? *catching Roxas again*

Ansem: Let him go! *prepares keyblade*

Riku: Oh, I don’t think that will work. You see… we made a deal, what is completely legal. *shows a contract * But if someone, even more powerful will make an exchange, things may turn differently… so what is your choice?

Roxas: No, dad! Don’t do this!

 

But it’s already too late. Ansem changes Roxas’s name on the contract with his and changes into a little yellow fish, leaving his keyblade behind. Sea sorcerer takes it and wickedly laughs.

 

Riku: It’s finally mine! After all those years. *changes it into Soul Eater

Roxas: *angrily* You freak! *attacks him*

Riku: *easily outmatches him* Don’t play with me, you little brat! *suddenly something hits his arm* Who dares to… *sees Namine, holding the second harpoon* So princess decided to come on the ball, how touching. Xigbar, Xaldin! *two eels appear* What don’t you dance with her?

Roxas: Namine! Get out of here! *tentacle shuts his mouth*

 

Namine heard Roxas’s warning. Now she is about to climb back into her boat, when suddenly something pulls her back into a sea. She struggles, but eels wrapped her tight.

 

Donald: *appears*Charge! Let’s go get them Goofy!

Goofy: *appears alongside Donald* Aye aye, sir!

 

They both successfully free Namine from eels. Riku points the Soul Eater directly on Namine.

 

Riku: Say goodbye to your sweetheart! *prepares to blast her*

Roxas: No! *pulls Riku’s hair, which causes him to point his keyblade into different direction*

 

Blast from the soul eater hits Xaldin and Xigbar, cause them to disappear.

 

Riku: *angrily* You’ll pay for this!

Roxas: What? You’re to who sent a blast! *swims towards the surface*

 

After that Riku starts growing until he reaches the size of the house. Meanwhile Roxas finds Namine on the boat.

 

Roxas: *shouts* Namine! You need to get out of here!

Namine: I’m not leaving you and as if I gonna miss the action!

Roxas: But you’ll… *something throws him in the air before he can even finish*

Namine: *screams as she sees a giant Riku throwing Roxas in the air* Roxas!

Riku: *looking at Roxas in his tentacles* I told you to not play with me, pretty boy.

 

When Riku is about to throw him one more time, Namine throws the other harpoon directly in that tentacle. Riku screams from the

pain, releasing Roxas. The merman jumps back in the sea and swims behind a reef.

 

Riku: *shouts* You fools! I rule the seas now! *creates a giant whirlpool*

 

The whirlpool causes Namine to fall in the sea. Luckily her dog helps her swim.

 

Namine: What should we do Red? *thinks as she sees shipwrecks who are coming on the surface* Hey, I gotta an idea!

 

In the same moment Riku finds Roxas. The whirlpool pulled him directly on the bottom of the sea. Sea sorcerer is about to blast him with his keyblade, when something stabs him into his back. He turns around and sees Namine riding an old shipwreck along with her dog. The ship’s prow pierced him! Sorcerer stupidly looks in the sky and slowly sinks into the ocean. Namine tiredly collapses on her dog’s back. Dog takes her on the shore and Roxas quietly follows.

 

Meanwhile Soul Eater changes back into a Kingdom Key, turning Ansem back into a merman.

 

Donald: *happily* Your majesty! You’re alright

Ansem: Where’s is Roxas?

Donald: I think you should follow me…

 

Sea king follows Donald on the surface, finding his son on a reef near the shore. Roxas is sadly looking on the Namine, who is slowly waking up.

 

Ansem: *sights* He really loves her, doesn’t he?

Donald: Yeah, he does.

Goofy: *appears* I think you know what to do, your majesty.

Ansem: Then only problem I’ll had is how much am I going to miss him… *raises the keyblade and castes a magic spell on Roxas*

 

Namine slowly gets up and sadly looks on the sea.

 

Namine: He was really a merman… and now… he’s gone… just like that. *goes towards the palace, when her dog starts barking very loud* What’s the matter? *looks on the sea*

 

A blond haired boy was coming from the sea. She looks closely. Boy runs closer to her and she realizes: it’s Roxas in his human form, wearing only shining shorts. They fall into each other’s arms.

 

Namine: You came back!

Roxas: Why wouldn’t I? I love you.

Namine: And so do I! *kisses him on his lips*

 

Some time passes.

 

Roxas: Oh yeah. I really wanted to sing one song for you, but I couldn’t.

Namine: Then sing it now.

Roxas: *smiles* I will! *clears his throat*

 

#Now I can walk, now I can run, now I can stay all day on a su – uu – un. Just you and me… and I can be – ee – ee! Part of your woo – oo – orld!#

 

Namine happily hugs him. Even the dog joins.

 

Roxas: *dog licks his face again* Yuck! *dog sadly looks* Oh, come on here. *dog happily jumps into his arms*

Namine: Guess I picked the right boy.

Roxas: And I think that I picked the right girl.

 

They kiss again, but this time Ansem creates a rainbow, which proves the one true love. It doesn’t depends on the what you are, but who you are.

 

Hope you enjoyed!

 

PS: If you hadn't guessed, Namine's dog is Red XIII (Nanaki) from Final Fantasy VII.

AW! That was an awesome ending. The only objections I have is that you should have put more description in certain sentences. Instead of saying, 'Red helps Naminé swim,' you should say, 'Red jumps into the water. He helps a struggling Naminé swim.' You should also put more dialogue in the scene Naminé and Roxas affirm their love for each other. Like stating reasons as to why they love each other.

 

That's all!

 

I can't wait until you write the next one!

AW! That was an awesome ending. The only objections I have is that you should have put more description in certain sentences. Instead of saying, 'Red helps Naminé swim,' you should say, 'Red jumps into the water. He helps a struggling Naminé swim.' You should also put more dialogue in the scene Naminé and Roxas affirm their love for each other. Like stating reasons as to why they love each other.

 

That's all!

 

I can't wait until you write the next one!

 

Thank you for telling me that, it made me so happy! Sorry about bad descriptions, but I did my best. After all, english is not my native language and I had some troubles with writing.

 

For the next story, I'm not entirely sure when I gonna write it. But I guess the next story will be Namine - The Jungle Girl. I already made I cast and I promise I'll do better descriptions. ( maybe I messed up, by chosing the wrong time )

 

Anyway thanks for your comment!

Nice and are you going to do pairings soon please?

Nice and are you going to do pairings soon please?

 

Well, as I already said, the next story will be Namine the Jungle Girl. I'm planning to make some of your pairings, but they won't be in the main cast. But don't worry! After this one I'll write one story, with those pairings in the main cast.

PLAGIARISM! loljk

Good story.

PLAGIARISM! loljk

Good story.

 

Thanks

lol, goofy the seaturtle.

Ok, for the ones who read that story I'm asking you, what do you think about it?

 

Does it look like too much like actual Little Mermaid? Does my grammar suck? Is there enough action?

 

If you have something to say, don't be afraid of telling it. Every comment can make story better.

 

And what do you think about Namine- Jungle Girl and Ven - Sleeping Beauty? And I still don't know if I should write a sequel for a Little Merman ( Ven will have a role of Melody ).

 

Please share your thoughts with me.