xeeon stops eeting is creem

 

akz roksus 2 get moar is creem

 

he dus

 

xeeon taeks deep bref

 

*HUUUUUUH*

 

nd saiz

 

roksus, i am try 2 kill u! will u stey mai is creem buddy?

 

and he sez

 

"NO"

 

he hitz her wif hiz keibled

 

and she hez low blud sugur

 

and she FOILS

 

roksas looks

 

SHE...

 

DED!

 

he crai

 

" i sed i no b ur is creem budy...

 

cuz i wantd b ur FREND"

 

HE SCREEMS!

 

nd thrws is creem @ klok twer

 

a bootiful wyfinder wuz insyd

 

**LIK DIS IF U CRY EVERTIM**

Edited September 20, 201213 yr by Jim

 

...But it wasn't broken.

 

The spelling and grammar is in a way.

Edited September 18, 201213 yr by fonoly

The spelling and grammar is

 

Says the person who didn't put a period at the end of their sentence. Your sentence also doesn't have a predicate.

Edited September 18, 201213 yr by Ertyx

 

 

Says the person who didn't put a period at the end of their sentence. Your sentence also doesn't have a predicate.

 

Are happy now?

Because I'm not

(I'm not going to change post 22 because that is supposed to be mostly in his words).

Are happy now?

Because I'm not

(I'm not going to change post 22 because that is supposed to be mostly in his words).

 

I'm just saying. lol If you're going to correct someone's grammar then you should use proper grammar, as well.

I wuvs tis storae. Et is sew amezink I mit cri.

Are happy now?

 

You're missing a subject in that one, dear.

This is hilariously ironic, the way the conversation's going.

This is hilariously ironic, the way the conversation's going.

 

I think I spent 3/4ths of my likes in this thread today.

bles dis tred

bles dis tred

 

tank u foar ur blesing

iz veri kind ov u

Why do a lot of people not use proper grammar and spelling?

Why do a lot of people not use proper grammar and spelling?

 

To annoy the people who can't tell when something's supposed to be a joke literary masterpiece.

Why do a lot of people not use proper grammar and spelling?

 

*facepalm* I make an effort to use proper grammar and spelling with most of the stuff I write. I don't know how you haven't figured it out by now, but this story was clearly supposed to have poor grammar and spelling. Ever heard of "The Poptart Tragedy"? Or, possibly, Dolan Duck? Or, how about this one: "this-is-the-random-section-so-don't-take-it-seriously"? I don't understand why you feel the need to continuously point out the obvious fact that this story doesn't have good grammar. If you want quality stories with proper grammar, go to the writing section or look for some other quality fanfictions all over the web. Thank you, and have a nice day.

Finished correcting this mess.

 

Are happy now?

Because I'm not

(I'm not going to change post 22 because that is supposed to be mostly in his words).

 

You misspelled "ting" while you are trying to correct it.

hai gaiz, iz jim

 

u gaiz ben vry soportiv of mee an mai storis. becuz uv dat, i deesidud 2 maek dis thred so dat me kan writ mani traajhic stori n we kan all crai togethur 5ever. frum nao on, mai many storiz wil stei in dis tupic, so dat i not maek many toopics and ahnoy d3chiuuuuch. i wil poest neu storiz en communts wen i rite dem, k?

 

furst storiz kan b fuond abov

 

no neu storeez yet, bt ei wil maek neu stori suun.

 

if u dont liek mai speling n gramur, no h9 pls

 

tank u al 4 ur suport n i hoep wii enjoi mani sadd stori togethur, i liek to haer poztiv komment, so leev construcktiv kritisizm pls

Edited September 20, 201213 yr by Jim

Wow. So... this is acutally continuing?

Wow. So... this is acutally continuing?

 

If people want it to, it can. If I feel like you guys still want quality stories, I'll keep trying to come up with more.

Just rereading them made me cry all over again!

OMG the broken grammar X'D

OMG the broken grammar X'D

 

SIL. COME ON. DON'T BE ONE OF THEM.

SIL. COME ON. DON'T BE ONE OF THEM.

 

duut eye m lyc dem :<

SIL. COME ON. DON'T BE ONE OF THEM.

 

Looks like we're the only ones to support this.

Looks like we're the only ones to support this.

 

I'll be here until then end! The greatest tragjeedy writer of our time.