So I was going through some of my poems, I though this one wasn't that bad so I figured I'd post it. I wrote it about 3 months ago.....I was angry that day. hahaha

 

An Art

 

 

Feed the anger in my heart
My long and forgotten art
Bring it out
That is what it's about
Feel the rage
Then turn the page

Forget this chapter of life
The bitterness is in strife
Begin anew, firetruck the rest
Bring it to it's final test
No more sadness, not even tears
I don't care about the forgotten years

Anger and hate is all that I need
I found the garden, time to plant the seed

Edited December 5, 201212 yr by Xaon

^Actually is Xaon

This is so sad....

 

 

 

 

 

Why can't I write this good????

wooooooooo anger

You would make a good Dalek.

"Fear leads to anger. Anger leads to hate. Hate leads to suffering." said Jedi Yoda.

 

Btw, pretty deep poem dude. Great job~

I loved it.

Nice job x3

Thanks guys!

I like it because you wrote it.

;~; This is great, Xaon. Good work.

It's a very nice sonnet. (: Did you make up your own style or is that one of the lesser known sonnet styles? Because I think the other ones have an interlocking rhyme scheme, unless I'm forgetting one. xDD