Posted May 21, 201312 yr Popular Post The details are a little off on their weapons, but I'm still proud of it. Any suggestions to improve are greatly appreciated.
May 21, 201312 yr It's amazing! The clothes are wonderful in how realistic they are, the legs and shoes are...going to give me an orgasm, and I absolutely love how you drew Sora's hair. The weapons are great, (Xigbar's is perfect), and I love how you drew his profile. The shading is really, really, reaaaaally good and I now want to learn how to shade like this. Excellent work buddy, keep it up. d=(´▽｀)=b **Edit** Oh right, I forgot to give constructive criticism. I'm not a fan of how Sora's mouth looks here, and maybe a little more emotion in his eyes (Xigbar's is good though). But other than that minor detail this is overall a really amazing picture and I see nothing more you need to improve on. Edited May 21, 201312 yr by Ducky
May 21, 201312 yr The only criticism I would give is that Sora's left hand looks strange, both in it's gesture and in proportion to the keyblade. I think the handle is foreshortened too much, and that hand posture doesn't look like he's holding it. I would almost like to see how this would look if the blacks of the shadows were as dark as the outline. It seems kind of odd to me. It's freaking incredible otherwise. I commend you on drawing the chain. Drawing a bunch of chain links is a pain
May 21, 201312 yr Author The only criticism I would give is that Sora's left hand looks strange, both in it's gesture and in proportion to the keyblade. I think the handle is foreshortened too much, and that hand posture doesn't look like he's holding it. I would almost like to see how this would look if the blacks of the shadows were as dark as the outline. It seems kind of odd to me. It's freaking incredible otherwise. I commend you on drawing the chain. Drawing a bunch of chain links is a pain Thanks for the advice! I'm still struggling with hands, so I'll get more reference pictures next time. Also, I'm afraid my pen died so I couldn't ink it as much as I could've. Again, thank you for taking the time to critique. Also, for Ducky, yeah, now that I look at it more, Sora's eyes are little dim. The mouth is a bad habit of mine to put Chesire cat grins on everyone, so I'll watch out for that too. Edited May 21, 201312 yr by EminaiSai
May 21, 201312 yr sora's boots are so fabulous lol only problem with it is that the handguard on the keyblade is a little small, otherwise its amazing
May 21, 201312 yr Author sora's boots are so fabulous lol only problem with it is that the handguard on the keyblade is a little small, otherwise its amazing Thanks! I attempted foreshadowing on the hand guard, so it looks wonky. ^^ Gotta keep trying though.
May 21, 201312 yr I don't care what ya'll say those are some Chun Li legs rig there. Some sexy attractive Chun Li legs. Mmmh
May 21, 201312 yr The details are a little off on their weapons, but I'm still proud of it. Any suggestions to improve are greatly appreciated. OMFG!!! It´s awesome!! I like the shape and traces. The only detail I see it´s in Sora´s face. Out of it, hell yeah!!
May 21, 201312 yr Thanks! I attempted foreshadowing on the hand guard, so it looks wonky. ^^ Gotta keep trying though. ya i could see that but like if the kingdom key was real then the hand guard would be enormous i made a 4 foot large oathkeeper that was proportional in size to an image in the game that was just enlarged. so the handguard was huge even with foreshadowing the kingdom key is gonna have a huge handguard
May 21, 201312 yr Author ya i could see that but like if the kingdom key was real then the hand guard would be enormous i made a 4 foot large oathkeeper that was proportional in size to an image in the game that was just enlarged. so the handguard was huge even with foreshadowing the kingdom key is gonna have a huge handguard Ooooh, okay. Time to practice then!
May 21, 201312 yr Sora looks evil! I loved those boots! Gotta give some ideas for Nomura, his outfits can't be as awesome as yours!
May 21, 201312 yr ;o this is a masterpiecee! well done dude! I LOVE IT just Sora's shoes... when did he change to boots?;p Edited May 21, 201312 yr by SoraKH
May 25, 201312 yr This is incredible! The only thing I would maybe, possibly suggest is darkening the edge between Sora and Xigbar. Not quite as much as the outside outline, but just enough so that Sora's hair doesn't get lost in Xigbar's coat. Whether you do this or not, I still love it. Lots.
The details are a little off on their weapons, but I'm still proud of it.
Any suggestions to improve are greatly appreciated.