The idea is to post well~know music or poem lyrics, with slight tweaks, and see if anyone catches them. 

Observe:

 

O, oyesters, come a walk with us, The walrus did beseech: a pleasant walk, a pleasant talk, along the movie theature isle. 

 

Carry on my wayward son, there'll be marshmellows when you are done. 

 

Get the idea? 

Have fun!

( And please use well~known stuff to avoid confusion: no anime or video game stuff, to make it fair.)

I know it's Alice's in Wonderland's The Walrus and The Carpenter, but am I meant to point that out or try to figure out where the "tweaks" are from?.  

I know it's Alice's in Wonderland's The Walrus and The Carpenter, but am I meant to point that out or try to figure out where the "tweaks" are from?.  

Oops... I mean, point out the wrong words, correct them, then post another. 

Sorry for the confusion. 

Oh, oysters, come a walk with us! The walrus did beseech. A pleasant walk, a pleasant talk, along the briny beach 

We cannot do with more than four, to give a hand to each

 

Like this?

 

Then obv I write one but wanna make sure I'm doing the right thing first

 

Oh, oysters, come a walk with us! The walrus did beseech. A pleasant walk, a pleasant talk, along the briny beach 

We cannot do with more than four, to give a hand to each

 

Like this?

 

Then obv I write one but wanna make sure I'm doing the right thing first

 

Yeap. We used to play this in my scout troop, so sorry if it's unknown: scout thing. 

Yeap. We used to play this in my scout troop, so sorry if it's unknown: scout thing. 

 

We didn't have scouts in my country Least not enough where people actually knew we had them

 

"How does the little reptile, Improve his shining tail,

And pour the waters of the Nile on every glimmering scale!

 

How cheerfully he seems to smirk, how neatly he spread his claws,

And welcome little fishes into his gently smiling jaws!"

 

I'm keeping on theme here.  

Fool.

 

 

     We

     Me

 

We didn't have scouts in my country Least not enough where people actually knew we had them

 

"How does the little reptile, Improve his shining tail,

And pour the waters of the Nile on every glimmering scale!

 

How cheerfully he seems to smirk, how neatly he spread his claws,

And welcome little fishes into his gently smiling jaws!"

 

I'm keeping on theme here.  

 

How doth the little crocodile Improve his shining tail, And pour the waters of the Nile On every golden scale! How cheerfully he seems to grin, How neatly spreads his claws, And welcomes little fishes in With gently smiling jaws!   That right?

How doth the little crocodile Improve his shining tail, And pour the waters of the Nile On every golden scale! How cheerfully he seems to grin, How neatly spreads his claws, And welcomes little fishes in With gently smiling jaws!   That right?

I'm very impressed right now.

On that note...

 

Tweedledum and Tweedledee, 

agreed to have a tussle, 

For TweedleDUM,

Said Tweedledee,

Had spoiled his lovely new rattle.

Just then soared down a terrible bird, 

Black as a pitch barrel, 

That frightened both the hero's so, 

They quite ignored their quarrel. 

I'm very impressed right now.

On that note...

 

Tweedledum and Tweedledee, 

agreed to have a tussle, 

For TweedleDUM,

Said Tweedledee,

Had spoiled his lovely new rattle.

Just then soared down a terrible bird, 

Black as a pitch barrel, 

That frightened both the hero's so, 

They quite ignored their quarrel. 

I knew that poem well because I rewrote the poem in a different version.

As for this one, I have no idea lol *sweatdrop* sorry, maybe someone will rescue me from my confusion!...Anybody?

Battle, nice, crow, tar barrel, forgot. 

I'd like to make myself believe

that planet earth turns slowly.

It's hard to say that I'd rather stay awake when I'm asleep,

because everything is always as it seems...

when I fall asleep.