Posted December 1, 201311 yr Popular Post When the two of you chose to be together, I was left behind. I'll admit to this point of view. But I was hoping you'd take care of her, Just like I wanted to. I hope my love will carry, From me, and reach through you. Because even if I'm not with you, My love is always true. "Take care of her." And take care of him too... Sappy love triangle poem that's implied to be between Sora, Riku, and Kairi. I'll leave it to you to decide who the speaker is.
December 1, 201311 yr Oh, man. Who could it be? I got it! It was King Mickey! All joking aside, nice poem. Short and sweet, emphasis on the sweet.
December 1, 201311 yr Sounds like there might have been some real life inspiration here. Nicely done.
December 1, 201311 yr I must inform you that you are being very poetic right now.... Very sad and melancholic, yet there's a feeling of happiness somewhere. That even if I can't love you, you have someone else to take care of you. Seeing other people happy, makes me happy. And you're my favorite person.
December 1, 201311 yr Obviously Riku, nice job EDIT: this is actually pretty abstract.. When he says "And I'll take care of him too." I think about Riku fighting off Ansem, or in other words, taking care of business. Edited December 1, 201311 yr by Roxasman1231
December 1, 201311 yr Author I must inform you that you are being very poetic right now.... Very sad and melancholic, yet there's a feeling of happiness somewhere. That even if I can't love you, you have someone else to take care of you. Seeing other people happy, makes me happy. And you're my favorite person. har har har. very funny iAD Yeah that is exactly what it was written for! Thats the message Obviously Riku, nice job :)EDIT: this is actually pretty abstract.. When he says "And I'll take care of him too." I think about Riku fighting off Ansem, or in other words, taking care of business. Thats a neat way to interpret it! I love it when people come up with more ways to view my writing!
December 2, 201311 yr har har har. very funny iAD XDYeah that is exactly what it was written for! Thats the message Thats a neat way to interpret it! I love it when people come up with more ways to view my writing! Message me if you got anymore, It's like a game
December 2, 201311 yr This hit me closer to my heart than I thought possible... Oh man the memories of real life situations where I really did think this to someone special just... Excuse me while I go cry in a corner somewhere...
December 2, 201311 yr Author This hit me closer to my heart than I thought possible... Oh man the memories of real life situations where I really did think this to someone special just... Excuse me while I go cry in a corner somewhere... OMG DONT CRY JAVELIN IM SORRY!
When the two of you chose to be together,
I was left behind.
I'll admit to this point of view.
But I was hoping you'd take care of her,
Just like I wanted to.
I hope my love will carry,
From me, and reach through you.
Because even if I'm not with you,
My love is always true.
"Take care of her."
And take care of him too...
Sappy love triangle poem that's implied to be between Sora, Riku, and Kairi. I'll leave it to you to decide who the speaker is.