Hey there. Well... here´s the deal. I Did an update to one of my OC´s.... and I wanted to ask for critics and suggestions. Considering this is my first time working with this technique and background (YES... background T_T). Please be honest

 

The original one:

 

The update:

 

 

 

You can checkmore on my gallery topic and ask for request... see you around

His pose is a lot cooler- but with the update power has gone to the trainer's head- he doesn't even let his Pokémon share in the limelight of his photos anymore!

 

Who does all the fighting? His team. I suggest he poses with his team

 

But I digress, you're a very talented artist

His pose is a lot cooler- but with the update power has gone to the trainer's head- he doesn't even let his Pokémon share in the limelight of his photos anymore!Who does all the fighting? His team. I suggest he poses with his teamBut I digress, you're a very talented artist

I wanted... but It took me around XXXXX hours to finish him only... I wanted to use Lucario... maybe later.... I can still put him ...

Thanks 

I wanted... but It took me around XXXXX hours to finish him only... I wanted to use Lucario... maybe later.... I can still put him ... XDThanks

You're welcome

Really good!

They're both really awesome!!

If I had one criticism, it would be that in the second image, his pointing arm seems too small. 

Wow why isn't this guy a official design. That was amazing and really cool like I personally love Pokémon-Themed Trainers and this is the best Lucario-Themed trainer I've ever seen NO LIE

Holy shit Mr. Black. The first one is great and all but you can really see some drastic improvements in the second one. Just... FANTASTIC man. You did an amazing job!

Really good!

Thanks  

 

They're both really awesome!!

If I had one criticism, it would be that in the second image, his pointing arm seems too small. 

So ... you noticed it.... welll I did that "#$%&%&$/"!!& arm for hours!! It´s the best I can do for now.... (For now) In overall i think is fine... just i need to put lucario on it... and it´s done. Anyway thanks

 

Wow why isn't this guy a official design. That was amazing and really cool like I personally love Pokémon-Themed Trainers and this is the best Lucario-Themed trainer I've ever seen NO LIE

If you want I can do one for you, I just need the OC descryption and with which pokemon... Thanks by the way

 

Holy shit Mr. Black. The first one is great and all but you can really see some drastic improvements in the second one. Just... FANTASTIC man. You did an amazing job!

Too much tutorials for read and discovering how to use SAI tools helps a lot. thanks 

OMG really!!!!! :smile: Could I have a Tyranitar trainer that is African American,that wears a green short sleeve jacket like Green ,but it flows down like Falkner/Minato Namikaze, in Pokémon Origins,some long khaki pants that are green, he's wearing one of those Mega rings, he has blue angel wings on a blue diamond on the back of the jacket, and he wears a Yang necklace that is Silver instead of white(Like the one my GF gave me) also if he could have large feet cause I'm a size 14 in men so sneakers like Roxas's sneakers would be cool, and I have like a nappy afro that's trimmed short and is wavy

Edited January 22, 201411 yr by Kaiser SilverSun

OMG really!!!!! :smile: Could I have a Tyranitar trainer that is African American,that wears a green short sleeve jacket like Green ,but it flows down like Falkner/Minato Namikaze, in Pokémon Origins,some long khaki pants that are green, he's wearing one of those Mega rings, he has blue angel wings on a blue diamond on the back of the jacket, and he wears a Yang necklace that is Silver instead of white(Like the one my GF gave me) also if he could have large feet cause I'm a size 14 in men so sneakers like Roxas's sneakers would be cool, and I have like a nappy afro that's trimmed short and is wavy

Type of hair, eyes color, height and tshirt or shirt color?

Edited January 22, 201411 yr by Daniel Black

Black Hair like a anime deep black, White eyeball with black pupil and silver iris, squinty eyes that get bigger and more western the closer they go to his nose,6 foot, and black t-shirt that has a red symbol just like the one of your Lucario character

OMG really!!!!! :smile: Could I have a Tyranitar trainer that is African American,that wears a green short sleeve jacket like Green ,but it flows down like Falkner/Minato Namikaze, in Pokémon Origins,some long khaki pants that are green, he's wearing one of those Mega rings, he has blue angel wings on a blue diamond on the back of the jacket, and he wears a Yang necklace that is Silver instead of white(Like the one my GF gave me) also if he could have large feet cause I'm a size 14 in men so sneakers like Roxas's sneakers would be cool, and I have like a nappy afro that's trimmed short and is wavy

 

Black Hair like a anime deep black, White eyeball with black pupil and silver iris, squinty eyes that get bigger and more western the closer they go to his nose,6 foot, and black t-shirt that has a red symbol just like the one of your Lucario character

Problems with the color skin.... anyway here is  

OMG I LOVE IT THANK YOU IT'S PERECT