June 8, 201510 yr I dig it. I know nothing about Bionicle. But you managed to keep my interest through the whole thing. Well done! Edited June 8, 201510 yr by Demyx.
June 8, 201510 yr Decent job, if a little bland. Your voice is fairly monotone most of the time and there's not a lot of jokes, which is kinda lame given that it seems like you're aiming for at least somewhat of a comedic bent. You might want to not stick to too much of a script and improv a little, make it feel more natural and emotive- you can always edit out what isn't funny or interesting, obviously. (Look up Yuriofwind on YouTube, his videos are kind of what I'm talking about- loose script, giving facts with liveliness.) From a technical standpoint, you might want to back up from the mic a little bit or turn down your audio some while editing, because you came off a little loud to me. You oughta work on speaking a bit clearer in general, too- you kinda slur your words from time to time, and it's distracting. There's also lots of hissing and popping when you speak, so you may wanna fiddle around with your audio levels or even invest in a pop filter to avoid that; that kind if thing can make you sound really amateurish even if your delivery is spot on. Again though, decent review- I got all the facts on the game that I coulda wanted and I feel you were fair in your evaluation. (Plus the Bionicle versions of other games bit made me chuckle.) I'm interested enough to check out your future reviews.
June 8, 201510 yr Loved the Matoro sacrifice reference. Pretty decent video, though your voice in the video can use some work. I think I'll sub actually.
June 8, 201510 yr Author Decent job, if a little bland. Your voice is fairly monotone most of the time and there's not a lot of jokes, which is kinda lame given that it seems like you're aiming for at least somewhat of a comedic bent. You might want to not stick to too much of a script and improv a little, make it feel more natural and emotive- you can always edit out what isn't funny or interesting, obviously. (Look up Yuriofwind on YouTube, his videos are kind of what I'm talking about- loose script, giving facts with liveliness.) From a technical standpoint, you might want to back up from the mic a little bit or turn down your audio some while editing, because you came off a little loud to me. You oughta work on speaking a bit clearer in general, too- you kinda slur your words from time to time, and it's distracting. There's also lots of hissing and popping when you speak, so you may wanna fiddle around with your audio levels or even invest in a pop filter to avoid that; that kind if thing can make you sound really amateurish even if your delivery is spot on. Again though, decent review- I got all the facts on the game that I coulda wanted and I feel you were fair in your evaluation. (Plus the Bionicle versions of other games bit made me chuckle.) I'm interested enough to check out your future reviews. Loved the Matoro sacrifice reference. Pretty decent video, though your voice in the video can use some work. I think I'll sub actually. just sayin, you guys probably wouldn't want to hear me the first time I tried making videos click at your own risk I actually enjoyed this subbed! I dig it. I know nothing about Bionicle. But you managed to keep my interest through the whole thing. Well done! thants
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