Sora shadow

ok i be waiting the next chapter

i think is a great song

it getting interesting im wodering what direction the story will take

maybe it can bea posibility but if he be able to used he will used when you and riku battle him

im wating more of this story its great

it great you like the suspense and it make more interesting the story keep going i will be waiting the next chapter

its great the story keep going

thanks im working on the next chapter Chapter 3 jungle Zeza was now on the jungle and in here it will confront more than just that creature. In his way he get hungry so he decide to stop a moment for eat something. But at that moment an animal appears it was a furious bear. Zeza slowly take out his sword and when the bear go over him he kill the bear. Then he decides to eat the bear than his lunch. Zeza don

thanks im workingon the next chapter Chapter 2 the beginning of the journey A soldier found Zeza and makes him to wake up. Zeza ask: where are we? The soldier says in a secret passage. When he was better the soldier give to Zeza a map and a sword and orders him to find what causing that those creatures appear. He mark in the map a region that in there can found a clue of what make that creature appear and then the soldier go. Zeza go on his journey. For reach to the mark he need to travel a long distances. In the way appears some creature. With the sword in his normal form he doesn

Introduction This story takes place in medieval times. There are 4 kingdoms one of earth, the second wind, the third water/ice, and the four fire. Those kingdoms it was in war and in that war died a warrior of the fire kingdom let his wife alone with a baby of 4 month called Zeza. The story will began 15 years later when the world it would be in danger and the only ones can save the world s his son and 3 friends hi make in his journey. Chapter 1 disaster Zeza its 15 years old, it

great you have great ideas

well first sorry for the earthquake and second i know i have to be patience that make it better

when you going to put your other chapter i waiting for it

i like it you have so much creativity than i have

first sorry for your grandmother and second i think eternity could by great if your not alone

its getting interesting i keep waiting the next chapter

well i have the ideas but i dont can put it on paper

well ithink like 16 or 17 old

it sound like sora voice but he was asleep at the moment so i thimk is roxas

man you are great i cant wait to the other chapter

well i think it cool be like 5 to 6 minutes

its great i want to have the ability that you, sorage55 and giselita have.

i like that poem

is an interesting story i want to keep reading more about this story

wow! i read all 11 chapters and i need to say you are a great writer it is a great story and i think like the others that you need to published this story is you published im gonna be one how buy the book