Sarrin

i thought it was one of the dark keyblades like the one he got from ansem that turned sora into a heartless

Chapter II: The boy and the Key With the moon hanging high in the sky, as it always did, the Sleeping City was completely lit and full of life. The teeming city seemed so vast from the apartment balcony, where Alan stood. He watched the city and all the people in it. Alan lived alone and thats how he liked it. No parents, no friends, nothing. Thats how it is when the world sees you as nothing more than orphan, but Alan didn't mind. He didn't care about anyone, not even himself. Time passed and the city grew quite, and Alan could feel an unsettling breeze. Countless balls of lights started to rise from the entire city and filled the air. "Look out!" a voice called out to him, but before he could even find where the voice came from, the balcony collapsed beneath him and he had begun to fall. He landed hard on the rooftop of the nearest building, and pain shot through his entire body. Alan gained his ground and turned around to see his collapsing home being covered by a swarm of black creatures. They're yellow eyes fixated on him, and they leaped towards him in a flurry of darkness. A bright flash of light scattered the creatures away from Alan. He felt a tug on the back of his shirt and realized that he was being carried through the air. The man holding him was jumping from rooftop to rooftop following the orbs of light that were all soaring toward the same direction. Alan watched in awe at the mysterious dark creatures following them, while he was wondering what the heck was going on? The man jumped from one of the rooftops down to the enormous freeway, that ran through the city, and started running at an incredible speed. He was joined by a girl who quickly turned to confront the creatures. She fought with a strange looking weapon, and with each swing the dark creatures dispersed into a cloud of black smoke and vanished into nothingness. "Whoa..." Alan spoke in pure awe , "Don't talk you'll bite your tongue." The man warned him but he didn't really seem to concerned. Alan noticed that he also carried a strange looking weapon, "Noticed it huh?" the man asked in a know-it-all manner. He released him and held the weapon for him to see, "It's called a Keyblade. It allows us to fight the Heartless." "Heartless?" Alan asked. "Those creatures you saw back there. Remember? Geez your dense." "...Keyblade?" Alan was having a hard time processing the information. He kept saying the same things in his head, this isn't real right? this is all just a dream right? this kinda stuff cant happen to someone in real life right? Right? An elderly man was walking towards them, and he was joined by the girl Alan had seen earlier. He noticed Alan and asked the man something with his expression and he shrugged in reply. His voice carried an essence of vast wisdom, "The Keyblade is a weapon of light. It was created in order to destroy all those who dare to defile the sanctity of Kingdom Hearts." The man had walked past him and called upon his own Keyblade, and stared at it with a glimpse of sadness in his eyes. A moments reprieve never lasts long and neither did this one. A horde of Heartless had surround them, and waited to make their move, "Isaac! Mina! Lets be quick about this!" the man ordered. They both nodded in reply and charged at the enemy. "My name is Thomas", the man had introduced himself with a bow, "you need to defend yourself, here take this." He handed him a wooden sword and went to face the horde. Alan was stunned. He didn't know what to do. All of a sudden his home was destroyed by strange creatures called Heartless, balls of light were flying through the air, and now some old man wants him to defend himself with a stick?! This is ridiculous, he thought to himself. A few feet away from him a small Heartless sat glaring at him. Alan was confused, he was frustrated, he was mad. He couldn't understand why, but he felt so angry just looking at the Heartless. Like a fire was burning in his heart, wanting nothing more than to make it disappear! He gripped the sword tightly and charged ahead, the Heartless charged as well. Alan raised his sword and brought it down full swing, feeling it hit its mark. Thomas, Mina, and Isaac witnessed a pillar of light erupt from the ground, and expand over the entire horde, blinding everything in sight with its radiance. ill be adding a synopsis to describe character appearances and other things within the next chapter Chapter III: Keyblade The tallest structure in the Sleeping City resembled a mountain made up of skyscrapers. Riverd and the two girls appeared at the highest point of the structure. Elsie starred at the starry sky, captivated by the breathtaking view. Ceseal whistled at the view of the entire city from the rooftops edge, and as for Riverd, he was staring intently at the moon, almost mesmerized by it. He summoned a broad sword like Keyblade covered in wrappings and thrusted it into the roofs surface. "Obelisk! Feast upon the hearts of this lightless city!" Obelisk made a somewhat rumbling sound that made the entire building shiver from the force. A violent violet aura enveloped the Keyblade, and filled the air with an unsettling breeze. Orbs of light rose from the city as it grew quiet. Countless lights. Countless hearts. Riverd, enveloped by the aura, spred his arms wide and basked in the glory of the ritual. "The Heartless are coming..." Ceseal muttered. Elsie looked into the distance and saw the encroaching darkness, "Any Nobodies?" she asked her sister, "Nope. They're to smart to come here." The girls

Chapter I: Meeting In an abandoned building, within the Sleeping City, two girls waited. The younger girl paced in a circle, while the older one sat upon a stack of crates swinging her feet back and forth. "Ugh! Whats taking him so long?!" the younger girl griped, "He should have been here ages ago!" The older girl hopped off the stack of crates, landing beside her younger companion, "Calm down Ceseal", she spoke soothingly, "I'm sure Riverd will be here soon. We'll just have to be patient." A dark corridor opened on the far side of the room. The man that emerged from darkness appeared as emotionless as a statue. Ceseal ran to him and wrapped her arms around his arm,"Riverd where were you?" she asked gingerly, as if all of her earlier aggravation was wiped away by his very presence. "I told you I'd be here soon", the man replied, "besides you had Elsie with you." He had remained completely emotionless. "Ya but my sister is so-", she was interrupted by him walking away from her embrace, "I'll be starting soon." he had walked past Elsie asking with his expression if she had done as instructed, "The city is clear." she replied on que. Another dark corridor opened a few paces from the group and Riverd had proceeded towards it, with Ceseal quickly behind him, "Riverd, why do they call this place the sleeping city?" He smiled at her question, "Because the sun never rises here." And with that the trio disappeared through the dark corridor and disappeared.

Thanks i was worried it wouldnt sound well ill be posting the first two chapters soon

the introduction has now been posted

Introduction: The world of Nabalia is boundless and full of secrets. Kingdom Hearts is a realm of unimaginable power. The Keyblade is a weapon created to protect this terrible power. The Heartless seek hearts to gain power, and the Nobodies seek to regain the hearts they've lost. An orphan boy holds the key that will determine the salvation or destruction of the world. Everything starts here... The Keyblades are making their move, and Kingdom Hearts has slept long enough

well i decided to start making a KH story ...but due to lack of confidence i may just focus more on writting for now instead of worrying about how much it may suck @.@ ill post a story introduction if anyone requests it

i agree sora was being used from the beggining

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i luv it this story is perfect cant wait for the next chapter

o.o whoa i think you just blew my mind

why does he look just like sora i cant figure that out i was so shocked when i saw it

well i had a random thought and wat if they become whole as one person or since roxas gained his own heart wat if they're both saved

i thought it was some time between June 1st and June 5th

it may even have the power to re-create the X-blade

but can you even read or understand what they say

well its probably there because we never get FM's

wow i was suprised at all the responces you guys are quick to the punch Zexion123 Wrote: Nice thought! they should put it in future KH games! i was just thinking it would be an epic twist to the story cuz all that power has to go somwhere mod edit: please do not double post.

ya the fact that they look identical kinda gave it away lol but it also makes you think which one will sora save if he does Roxas? or Ven?

ok this was just one of my many random thoughts but what if everytime kingdom hearts was stopped all of its power would create a heart and a person to contain that heart? all the power of countless hearts all rolled into one

i would be Vanitas just cuz it would be epic

besides the names we all already know what do you think the original names of the organization members are?

id pick twilight town and the world that never was because those were the key parts to the story also cuz fighting the members of organization XIII is so much fun

thanks for that is was racking my brain

well i guess the mixture of final fantasy and disney makes it awsome