Ai Enma

I love all of your drawings Koko! They are so stylish

Its like whoa and then its really intersting! But the fox is to die for though. I love that fox!

I know what you trying to say but your not saying it clearly enough for everybody to understand. I get what your trying to say but sadly not everyone else is. But I kinda like were you going with your theory. Its suspenseful too !!

Hey! Welcome to the forums and hope you have a good time here. By the way my name is Amaya but you can call me Ai, Enma, or Maya!

I love the story Cellar Door. I like the part when the little girl tries to think of good things to think about! Keep writing!

Little pieces of dirt hit her eyes. Unconscious, the girl finally waken up. The pit was deep, dark, and scary to her. The girls hands and feet were tied. Then it hit her. She remembered everything that happened. Tears ran down her face she was being buried. "Please stop! Stop throwing dirt!" she whispered. As she looked up, she saw a familiar face. It was Kiro, her best friend. He was burying her alive as well. "Kiro, why? I thought you would always protect me! In the end you were a liar. You never did.." she whispered but didn't finish the sentence. Kiro was as kept throwing dirt down. "I'm sorry Enma Ai, please forgive me one day" he whispered as well. The light was thinning by the second. They threw one last shovel of dirt on her. Enma Ai's parents looked as she was buried. They left in silence. The air was gone. She laid there alone, and dying of no air. Enma Ai closed her eyes. She saw a figure coming to her. She couldn't move but she felt safe for some reason. The figure became a little old man. The man smiled at her and said,"Hello Enma Ai I have been watching you for a long time. I've seen what the villagers did to you. They've called you a demon. Your friend Kiro abandoned you. You feel lost, confused, and scared. I can help you. I am the one they call Omenshu." Enma Ai looked and listen to what was told. He made her feel better. "I can be alive again but how?" she said. The man walked around her and said,"I will give you life back but you must sign my contract. You will bring the sinners down the gate to Hell. You will be apart of the supernatural but you can still die just like a human. Times have change. In the modern world it is easy to die but you will have companions on your journey, but do you accept?". Enma Ai thought for awhile and said "Yes..I do". The old man smiled and when he took her hand pure darkness came into her. The everywhere was dark and then a light came to her and she fell from the sky and landed in the grass. When she looked she saw three figures but her eyes couldn't see very well. The three figures looked at each other and smiled...

Rite what X Blade said! Happy Birthday Day but I win yet again!! Hahaha!

I love the pic! Aqua is one of my favorite characters in Kingdom Hearts!

I loved chapter 12 Me!! It was really interesting to me! The story is getting better and better. I can't wait till Chapter 13!

It's nice to see a fellow KH member return again! It's also been a long time since I've to you RoxsoxKh... But anyway its good to have you back

The story is going awesome!! Keep it going!

Amaya woke up. "Yeah Nikki?" She said. Amaya got up and walked on the bech with Nikki and talked. "Mmmm...Riku is at the top of the mountain then." she said. Riku told her that he planned something for Nikki. Amaya smiled. "Yeah he is at the top of the mountain."

Amaya walked to her hut and unpacked her things. Afterward, She laid down on her bed and looks up at the straw roof. "I wonder how Nikki and Riku are doing right now." she said to herself. Soon the was setting on the beach. Amaya fell asleep and had a strange dream. Flash Back: Amaya and Nikki running into a portal that Aqua made. Nikki wanted to stay but Amaya pulled her in. Aqua was trying to beat Vantis. In the end she lost. Vantis cut Aqua in the hearts. She fell and said "Don't forget about me Nikki as long as you live. We'll see each other in the afterlife. Until then stay with Amaya no matter what." Then she closed her eyes forever........

Sorry they said I won!! HAHA

I win yet again Roxas!! I would like to thank all of the people who had helped me get this far!! Your support will always count in my win! The academy award goes to Ai Enma! The crowd goes wild.

There's actually a Sora96 and I think he is still here.

Amaya looked at the picture. "Nikki its time to go home now. There's more bad stuff going on with the both of us than a little. It's like this place is cursing us. So we have to go." she said. Amaya helped Nikki into her bed and shut the door. She went back into her room and closed the door. She went into the closet and took everything out. "I don't ever want to remember this place again. I don't want to hurt Nikki anymore. I'm going to burn my memories." she said bluntly.

Yeah..what does Trololo mean anyway??

Best chapter yet again!! Chapter 11 is going to be amazing I know it is

Amaya ran out of the secret place and ran into Nikki's room. "Nikki are you ok?" she said. Nikki nodded and tried to stand up. Riku also helped her up. Amaya gave Nikki a hug. "I told you Riku liked you. I always knew you two liked each other." she said.

I love how the story is going Me!

Roxas and Amaya went separate ways for some odd reason. "See you later Amaya I have to go home. I'll see you tomorrow." Roxas said happy. Amaya smiled and waved good bye to him. She went into Nikki's old house. She looked around, everything was ash or rubble. Amaya shook her head but kept going through Nikki's house. "Why am I here? I promised Nikki I wouldn't come in here." she said. She came out of the house and went up to the mountain."Lets see if I remember this. 12 534 982." she said. Soon a door open. She smiled and went in and shut the door.

"Riku, please tell Nikki how you feel!" she said Riku looked at Roxas and Amaya. "Could you two leave then?" he said. They nodded and left them alone. Riku looked at Nikki and gave her a hug. She smiled a little. Riku took a couple deep breaths and started to talk. "Umm...Nikki I know your kinda of sad right now but I kinda of been trying to tell you this for a while. So here goes. Umm...Nikki I like you." said Riku.

Chapter one was suspenseful! I love it!

Amaya looked at Nikki and smiled but she closed her eyes. Flash Back: Walking around the strange place. "Nikki where are you? Where am I? This is not cool!" she said. Amaya was only 8 and didn't feel safe without her friend. She saw Nikki laying on the ground. Amaya ran fast as her legs could carry her. "Nikki wake up!! Nikki wake up!!" she said. She put a little light on Nikki's heart.