Hunter Hawk

Recantly I'm totally obsessed with CSI ( Crime Scene Investigation ) New York. Even thought it contains a lot of certain scenes I like it and I'm watchin it almost every day. So I decided to write my own episode ( how original :unsure: ). This is a PG14 for a reason. It may contains strong language, hard violence, sexual themes, drugs and other things that we usually meet in a CSI crime show. It can also be hardly readble, cuz I know a lot of things connected to science and biotechnnology. That means you can find exspressions used in a world of science. Characters of the CSI team belong to CSI team. Others are made up. Hope you'll enjoy. PS: This is a first story where I am not using chapters. It was a begging of the day when Mr. Robert Moore was going in his office. He was lawyer in New York City which wasn’t exactly easy. But he also liked to help people. Right now he was waiting for traffic lights to turn green for walkers. His mind was full about a meeting with an important customer, so he didn’t noticed a noise in a smaller street. He only had a few streets to reach his warm office. But an unexpected thing prevented him from continuing his usual way. Mr. Moore clearly heard hard coughing that was coming from the smaller street near the place where he was standing. He carefully went closer. For every step he made, he could hear coughing louder. Then he finally saw what was causing it. There was a boy, partly leaning against the wall. His hands were weirdly set behind his back. He didn’t look well duo to the coughing he was causing and injuries all over his body. “Hey kid! Are you alright?” Mr. Moore carefully asked. Boy didn’t respond. He only took a look at him. For a moment he just stared and then quickly ran to the man. “Please… I… need… help! Please sir! Help!” boy yelled while coughing. “Hey take it easy. I’m not gonna hurt you.” man said and placed his hand on boy’s shoulder. The moment that hand touched boy’s shoulder, boy moved away very quickly. Like the hand was covered in fire. Man gave him a weird look as the boy moved away even further. “What’s wrong? Are you afraid of me?” man asked when he found out why are boy’s hands set behind his back. Boy’s hands were clapped in handcuffs very tightly. “Is police after you? Did you do something?” man asked again what made boy upset. “No I… I didn’t… I need help sir…” boy kept yelling. “Why?” man asked. “Please… you gotta…” boy tried to say when he suddenly collapsed. Man first made sure if boy is still alive and called the police along with ambulance. Mac Taylor was the second on the scene along with some of his workmates. Stella Bonasera went making photos when Don Flack was talking with Mr. Moore. Boy was now lying on a hospital trolley, while Sheldon Hawkes peer - reviewed him. “So what can you say about the boy, Hawkes?” Mac asked. “No ID, from 12 to 16 years old, maybe a bit too much slim body, short blond hair, blue eyes…” Hawkes started. “What about his condition?” Mac continued. “A lot smaller injuries, from bruisers to cuts. Bigger bruiser around his neck… possible that someone wanted to choke him. Dislocated hands are consequence of the handcuffs. They were so tight that bone simply left its usual place.” “Witness said he was coughing. Do you know the reason?” “It could be from the bruiser around his neck. Perhaps someone was squishing his neck, but not long enough to kill him. Boy needed to clear throat for breathing. ” “It could be from a brutal fight. But where did the criminal had got the handcuffs?” “Beats me. I’ll take his clothes now. Should ambulance bring him into hospital or headquarters?” Hawkes asked. “Better in the headquarters… I have a feeling someone wants to finish what he had started.” Just before ambulance men came to pick the boy, Stella came to make some more pictures of the boy. “Any signs of battle?” Mac asked her. “No, just a usual trashy New York’s street. But I did find this.” she said while showing on a piece of paper. Mac carefully spread it to see an interesting thing on it. Piece of paper was actually a handmade map of the bigger part of New York. It was very detailed and had a big cross right on the… police station. “What do you think it means?” Stella asked. “Don’t know, but something’s is telling me that the boy wasn’t playing treasure hunt.” he answered. “What’s up? Find anything?” Flack broke in on. “Not sure. You?” “The witness’s name is Robert Moore. He’s a lawyer in a building over there. He found this boy this morning on his way to work. Boy was just standing there and when he got closer, boy begged him for help. After that he collapsed.” Flack read his notes. “Anything unusual?” Mac asked. “Boy was afraid of his touch.” Flack answered. “Then violence could be possible. Victims of brutal violence usually can’t stand a touch from others, cuz they think, they will be thrashed again.” Stella said. “Let’s get back and see what we can found from his clothes.” Meanwhile Danny Messer was examining the boy at their headquarters. Hawkes already took the clothes and handcuffs off him and started searching for DNA or any possible fingerprints. Danny took some samples from his neck, hands, nails and face. While he was working Lindsay came, holding a folder. “Any luck?” she asked. “We’ll see.” he said while giving her DNA samples. “Do we have anything from clothes?” “Well… Adam analyzed weird spot from the pants. It appeared as the… crystal in liquid.” “You mean LCD? Thing they use for televisions and cameras?” “Yeah and we found traces of gas on his shoes.” “Hmm that kid sure had a wild night. Was there anything else?” “We’re still analyzing his clothes… but the clothes seem second –handed. Pants were so big that he probably needed a strong belt, when a shirt was too small for at least two sizes.” “You think he’s a tramp?” “No, if he was a tramp he’d be dirty. He was still a bit clean when we found him. You can even smell a body lotion on him.” “Then we’ll have a far harder job.” Danny sighted.

Welcome back!!! And guess what... I updated Power of Nature.

Awsome!!! This story rocks!!! Can't wait to see Vani tricked by Venny and Roxy.

Awsome chapter my friend!!! Can't wait to see what happends to Zack PS: Try to work on your grammar a bit. You made some mistakes, but there's not a lot of them.

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Chapter Nine: Surviving After Roxy left, Alex leaned the phone closer to his ear. “Alright, you on the other side of the phone line, what do I need to do?” Alex said. “Hey, the name’s Os! I’m warning you, mess with me and you’ll end up in a trap.” Voice from the phone said. “Oh, sorry about that… so where is that ventilation system?” “You see that board above your head? Use the up stick to remove it.” “A what stick?” “The blue stick that you have in the belt bag. Pull the string and stick will become long.” From the bag, he had wrapped around his belt before, Alex took a blue stick. It was light as the feather. On end of it was a string which he pulled. Stick truly extended and reached the board. “What now?” Alex asked. “Use it to climb up, and then wait for further instructions.” Meanwhile, golden wolf kept running through the white corridors with incredible speed. She didn’t have any problems with security, cuz she already shout down almost the whole corridor of the abby. But she did run into a guard, who was now lying unconscious in a broom room. “Where should we go?” Spark asked. Spirit Mates were able to communicate with their owners even if they’re joined with them. “To the nearest control room. I’m sure I’ll be able to break into abby’s computer. Let’s just hope we’re not too late.” Alex managed to climb in a tiny ventilation system. Os said that he needs to go in the left direction until he sees bars. Those bars were now in front of him. “Now where was that knife Roxy had…” he mumbled while poking around the belt bag. He soon used it to cut the bars off. Knife cut them like butter. “Alex! Stop!” voice from the phone shouted. “What is it?” “There’s very dangerous trap. To avoid it, you mustn’t step on the center floor. Just try to stick right or the left side.” “Right, I’ll try.” Walking on the straight left or right side was easier said than done. Alex felt tired before he even reached half of the way. “Come on you can’t give up now.” Os cheered for him. “How the hell do you know where am I?” Alex asked confusedly. “You still have a Searcher that scans the area and shows where you are.” “Searcher?” “The necklace that Roxy gave you just before you left your home.” Alex could clearly remember that moment. Just before they left, Roxy took a necklace around her neck and put it around his. It was a simple star made from wood. He pressed it closer to his heart. The moment star felt his heartbeat, it started making music. Music was calm, with flute and strings, slowly increasing with rhythm. “So, you discovered Roxy’s song…” Os signed. “Her song?” “Yeah silly, that’s her favorite song since she was little. It really cheered her up is she was crying or gave her an idea for a story or drawing…” “You two sure are close…” “Hey! You rather concentrate on your goal! After this one you’ll have a much more difficult trap to pass.” “Can you at least tell why that song is her favorite? It doesn’t look so special to me.” “She keeps saying that she can’t decide if it’s sad or nice. That’s why is so special to her.” “Do you have a favorite song?” “Look, we’ll talk about things like that after you get safe from the abby.” “Aye aye sir.” Alex joked. Roxy managed to trick two men into leaving the first control room she found. Both men thought that some kind machine is going to explode. “I just love breaking into computers.” Roxy smiled “No doubt.” Spark said while separating with her. “Take the form of the snake and guard the door. In case if someone comes.” Moment she touched the monitor, all data appeared there. From all reports, to secret codes and never before seen information, about spirit mates and their owners. She was shocked when she saw some of her friends being tortured by Sat or Lam. There was a photo of the black haired girl along with her white spirit mate. On the other was a black boy, being connected by sharp instrument. Roxy knew those two pretty well. They were two of her friends, who managed to break free by themselves about four years ago. Since then she haven’t seen them cuz they moved to another part of the Realm of Spirits. She really thought that was a right thing to. After all, those two had been a couple before they even died. Full head of memories almost kicked her out of the computer. She cleared it and began searching for any information about Dimi. Photos and reports appeared almost immediately. Data was telling that Dimi was held here only for about two weeks. “Too bad Leo wasn’t here when that happened.” she thought. Then she went checking the reports. Most of them were about experiments done on him. All of them were terrifyingly painful. From scanning and testing his limits to the ones she felt sick. “Don’t worry Dimi… I’m gonna found you and end your suffer.” she said to a picture of the boy on the monitor. After checking almost all of reports, she found the last one. It was actually a video report by Sat. “Condition on the case B1 is getting worse. The connection between him and his spirit mate is very weak, so we can’t risk the chance of losing his strength. Today we’re going to transport him into an abby D14B66 where his spirit mate is being held. “ Roxy listened opened mouthed. They’re going to transport him today! She quickly went searching for the time where that report was made. An hour ago! Maybe they haven’t left yet. With those thoughts she ran towards the door, but bumped into a men dressed in a lab coat. “Whoa, what’s the rush Jill?” man asked. Girl now remembered that Jill Highs is a woman who was disabled by her along with another man. Roxy took her clothes along with a business card. Man really thought she was Jill. “Oh, it’s nothing. It’s just… do you know if Dimi… I mean B1 case is still here?” she said with deeper voice. “What’s with your voice?” another man asked while coming in a control room. “I cough a cold. Nothing serious.” she answered while coughing. “I see. Oh, about B1 case, I think they’re going to leave in ten minutes.” first man answered. “Well thanks, Sat said he needs me.” she said while leaving. “Okay, we need to prepare Rookie for another experiment.” Did he have just said Rookie and experiment in one sentence? That’s not good. They’ll only found an empty room! She needs to do something. “Excuse me, but can you two help me with one thing?” she asked nicely. “Well of course, what do you need?” man asked. “It’s something about A2 case. I can’t find the right information on the computer.” Man went typing the words on the computer when the other man watched her. “Perhaps it will be faster if you type too.” she said even nicer to the other man. “Oh… of course.” man blushed. While both men went typing on the computer, girl silently got behind their back. Suddenly she touched their backs, casting paralyzing electricity on them. Both men fell on ground, trembling in pain while passing out. “That was pretty shocky move.” Spark smiled. “No kidding. We only have five minutes to save Dimi!” Spark and Roxy quickly joined in a hawk form and flew towards the storage. There was an exit to a surface, along with their transport machines. She kept flying until she reached it. Two trucks were ready to leave, along with three more cars. “I sense Dimi in the right one. I’ll try to open it, you keep them busy.” In a moment they got separated. Spark was making noise while Roxy sneaked to the right truck. From the outside, it looked like a normal transport truck. With unilingual cargo, of course. Girl used her Arrowblade for ascending the truck’s door. But when she did, she surprisingly drew her breath. Dimi wasn’t there, just a bunch of lab instruments.

Sad chapter... but I love your artworks!!! Man, I'm gonna kill that freaking mother for hurting Kuma and Umbra!!!!

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa awsome story!!!! It's even better than I thought it will be, great job!!!! And I must say, your grammar is making a great progress!!!

Why 3 days???

Awsome ending bro!!! Such a long and epic story... phew you did work on it a lot didn't you? Cuz it's so nice with so much imaginery, action and kh fanfic!!! Can't wait for your story about... you know what!

http://light-13-hawkie.deviantart.com/gallery/32795262#/d4aofns Ok, here's my picture. I kinda wanted to draw Roxas in a different style. I drew it a few months ago, using only a pencil. I think I used about 1 hour and a half for drawing it. Hope you like it.

I kinda want to enter drawing contest... is it still time or I'm too late? I found one old, but kinda cool kingdom hearts drawing...

A-W-S-O-M-E JOB!!! I really liked that chapter! I was so epic, reading a flashback and some of Roxy's and Venny past. Keep updating your awsome work, cuz I and my bro will always be there to read it!

Chapter Two: Creatures of Darkness In the moment when creatures started scratching and hitting the white thing, Aqua finally remembered the name of them. Heartless… creatures who are born from persons, that had lost their hearts to the darkness. After becoming one, they start looking for other hearts to become stronger. Even light could stratify their hunger. “Terra, those are the heartless! If we don’t do something, they’ll eat the light!” “Yeah, I know that, but what?” “I’ll make a way through them. You try to get that light as quick as you can.” “ Alright then…” Girl started using her unique style of fighting. With power of spells and teleporting, she quickly made a way for her friend. While he was trying to reach the tree, she was covering him. Heartless kept coming from every single black hole on the sand. With their ugly black bodies and evil yellow eyes everything became even scarier. Terra kept running towards that tree on a higher part of the island. With climbing he soon reached the tree and a bunch of Heartless around it. Boy surprisingly drew breath. That light or whatever it was, was something completely wrapped in a white cape like thing. It wasn’t moving, just lying there while heartless were scratching it. How could they possibly attack something that pure and innocent? That was too much for Terra. “Get away from it!!!” he yelled while slicing every single heartless with his keyblade. After seeing that white thing he wondered what it could be. So he slowly got closer. But he didn’t notice that something was coming right from his shadow. Something black, scary… born from the blackest part of the world. Boy turned back… staring into another much bigger heartless. It had ugly body with a hole right in the part where its heart would suppose to be. Its scary eyes were pointed right into a white thing, hold by Terra. Thing covered by white cape was surprisingly light, so boy didn’t have many problems carrying it. Giant heartless stretched its arm, trying to get light. But Terra wasn’t a pushover. He cut down its whole arm with only one slice of his keyblade. Heartless started growling duo to his lost arm. It used its tail which Terra didn’t expect. Tail knocked him on the ground and white thing rolled towards the edge of the island. Just a meter more and it would probably fell into a freezing sea from high of six meters. “Watch out!” Aqua shouted. Heartless attacked Terra, who luckily blocked its attack in time. “Thanks for the warning.” he thanked. “Let me help you!” But the white thing suddenly moved. It was just about to fell off the edge. “Aqua! It’s going to fall!” he shouted, still blocking heartless’s attack. “I’m on it!” she said as she ran towards it. Thing was slowly falling as Aqua managed to catch it before it landed in sea. The moment she caught it seemed very slow. She did need to run through the sea, but she didn’t mind that. The only thing that mattered was that light was saved and sound in her arms. It didn’t seem heavy or something, contrary it was very light and warm. Her thinking was soon broken by Terra’s fight with a heartless. “Terra! Let’s go back home. Our mission is to save the light, not fighting with heartless.” “I was wondering when you’ll say that!” Terra said and summoned his armor. “Can you cover my back? I’ll carry the light on my glider.” “Right away ma’am.” “Stop calling me like that! I feel a lot older, if you say that.” “Sorry, can’t help it.” Terra smiled. “Watch out, the heartless is…” “I’m on in, I’m on it!” he said as heartless was about to grab a part of his glider. “Let’s hurry home as fast as we can. They all seem very hungry.” “Jeez, why they can’t eat a normal food.” he thought, but kept for himself. They both flew through Lanes Between again, towards their home. Aqua seemed to get there as soon as possible, when Terra kinda wanted to get back, defeating that heartless. When they finally arrived in front of their home – building, Aqua quickly ran in it, carrying the thing covered in white cape. Eraques was nervously waiting on one of the thrones. He deeply thought that they’re not too late of saving that poor light. Suddenly Aqua rushed into the giant room. “Master!!! We found it!” Aqua shouted. “Excellent work you two! Now bring it right here.” he said as he went towards the room down the stairs. Aqua kept gently carried it as Terra followed her. Master opened a door to the room that neither Aqua nor Terra has seen in their entire six years of being here. It was completely white with several silver symbols on it. “Put it here.” He said referring on a table like thing in the middle of the room. She carefully put it on a weird table, with even weirder symbols than on the walls. It was still not moving neither reveal what it truly is. “Did you manage to found out what it is?” Master asked. “No, there were a lot of heartless and…” Aqua said. “We thought it would be dangerous for it.” Terra continued. “I see… then let’s reveal it now. Master carefully started unwrapping the higher part of the cape. It sure seemed wrapped hard, like someone didn’t want others to see what’s in it. But Aqua soon recognized smaller thing in a cape. “Master… I think there’s someone in it.” she said while helping. “Yeah I can see it too… this looks like face…” he said while removing bigger part of the cape. Under it really was a face… a boy’s face. Eraques carefully placed his hand on the boy’s forehead. Boy didn’t seem to mind it and yet he was deeply sleeping. Terra removed all other cape, to reveal boy’s weird jacket, his a little oversized pants and silver shoes. Boy didn’t seem older than ten years. He even looked younger while sleeping. Heartless left a lot of marks on him, his both arms were very stretched as well as his jacket was ragged. When Master removed his hand from boy’s forehand, he drew a deep breath. “I don’t know why, but I can’t find any memories inside him.” “What do you mean?” she asked. “His mind seems completely empty, like he spent his entire time in a bubble. Plus his heart is very weak.” “What should we do?” Terra asked. “We’ll leave him in this room for that night. Room has an ability to absorb light and heal the wounded inside it. It may take days to completely heal him, but it’s the best what we can do right now.” “What we will do after he wakes up?” Aqua asked. “We’ll talk about this when he truly wakes up. For now let’s just go in our beds and get some sleep. And… try not to touch that white cape anymore.” “Why’s that?” both pupils asked. “It seems to be under the spell… that can prevent anybody from moving if they’re wrapped in it. Looks like somebody didn’t want to let go this boy. Like he wanted to escape or something.” Both apprentices surprisingly drew a deep breath.

Very great story, my friend!!! But I have kinda weird question. When you were describing how the world looks now ( deadly sunlight, wild animals, diseases... ) I kinda hardly imagine how people have jobs or how things like schools, banks or computers still exsist. Sorry if I'm messing with your story, but I just can't imagine how the whole story runs if Earth's like that. But keep going either way I like it!

Awsome!!!!! I love that bloody good work!!! Keep writing, cuz I can't wait for the next chapter.

Such a sad chapter... but I like the way it' s written. Nice job, my friend!

Chapter One: Lost Light The day was coming to an end when two pupils were still training. Wielding a Keyblade was their destiny since they came here. Weapon that protects balance of Light and Darkness, choose that girl and boy to wield it. Terra: *showing off* I’m gonna be Keyblade master! *casts the spell* Aqua:*deflecting the spell* Dream on! You can’t even hold your Keyblade right. Terra: *sadly* Yeah, you’re right. I can’t even cast a right spell. Aqua: Oh, Terra. I didn’t mean to make you sad… I just… Terra: You don’t need to say it. After all it’s getting late. Let’s just finish for today. Aqua: Ok… They both went to their favorite spot, Summit. Place was just perfect for watching starts in nighttime. Sometimes even Meteor Shower appeared. Night was clear on that day and many stars were seen. Aqua and Terra laid down, watching the stars. Aqua: So many stars… Terra: So many worlds… Aqua: What do you mean by that? Terra: Master said that every star is another world. Aqua: I thought he said that every star is connected to one person. Terra: Well… Eraques: You’re both right. Aqua and Terra:*surprised* Master? What are you doing here? Eraques: I wanted to send you two in bed. It’s already late… but since the night is so clear… we can wait a bit more. All of them watched the stars now, staring into one big sky. Terra: So stars are worlds and connected to one person? Eraques: That is correct. Every star holds responsibility of the Heart. Everyone haves one. Aqua: All stars seem so similar… wait! What’s with that one? One of the stars suddenly started blinking. Eraques: Weird… stars don’t usually blink just all the sudden. Something must be wrong. Aqua: What do you mean, Master? Eraques: I’m not sure, but I’ll found out. With those words he ran back to castle. Aqua: We should go in bed too. Terra: Yeah, man I’m tired. After some time pasted, Eraques was talking to the mystical orb. Eraques: Yen Sid… if you can hear me… there’s a blinking star in the sky. Why does that mean? Is a world or a person in danger? Answer came soon after that. Yen Sid: I’ve been watching that star for a while. But it isn’t a world or a person. It’s complete mystery. Eraques: Do you know anything else about this star? Yen Sid: All that I know is that its light is slowly fading away. It’s also very attracted for darkness, so I think Darkness will attacked it as soon as it finds it. Eraques: Do you know where it is? Yen Sid: It’s very hard to say… but it looks like it’s for a world with an ocean. Eraques: An ocean? Master’s thoughts were traveling back in his young years. Back when he was still apprentice, along with a boy who Eraques thought he’s his friend. Boy did resemble the figure of the friend, but as the years passed he became more and more estranged. In the end, right after Mark of Mastery Exam they both choose completely different paths. Eraques decided to stay home and teach other apprentices to become Keyblade Masters one day, while his friend decided for a journey through endless Lanes Between. He hasn’t seen him since then. But one thing was clear. His friend said that he came from the world with a small island, encased by magnificent ocean. That thought quickly made him call his apprentices. Eraques: *makes a bell sound, calling Aqua and Terra to come in the main room* The moment he touched mystical orb, bell started ringing all over the place. Noise was so laud that it totally kicked Terra out of his bed. Terra: What the… *looks on clock* It’s 1 AM!!! Is Master crazy or something? He quickly got up and put his clothes on. During that, blue haired head peeked into his room. Aqua: Did you hear the bell? Terra: The hell I did! Master’s insane, calling us right now! We just went in bed an hour ago! Aqua: Calm down. Perhaps he only needs to tell us something. Like that day, remember? When he woke us up at 2 AM, cuz he needed to tell us something. Terra: Yeah, but that was “good night” and nothing else! Aqua: Look, let’s just go down and listen to what he has to say. Terra: *sighs and leaves the room* Eraques was nervously walking up and down, thinking about the mission he’ll give to Terra and Aqua. He knew it may be dangerous, but he also couldn’t let this star down. Everyone deserves to live and Keyblade wielders are meant to protect it. When Terra and Aqua finally appear, both yawing, Master sighed and began his speech. Eraques: We Keyblade wielders are meant to protect the balance between Light and Darkness. But as we speak, darkness is searching for weak light that is slowly fading away. It could be anything for darkness’s pleasure of destroying it. So, here’s your very first mission to do. Find that light and bring it to me. Terra: But Master, it’s the middle of the night. Eraques: If we wait till the morning, Heartless will destroy that poor light for sure. And that light is a blinking star we saw before. We don’t have much time. Aqua: Master’s right, Terra. We better hurry! *pulls Terra’s hand* Terra: What if we’re not ready? Those armors and gliders… Aqua: Oh, come on! We spent enough time of training. It’s time for some action! Eraques: *smiles* You should listen to her. I like her style. Terra: Not you to… *looks on Aqua’s angry face* Fine, fine… let’s go. Pupils waved their goodbyes and went outside. Soon after, their armors covered both of their bodies. Only thing left was the portal. Aqua: Terra, if you be so nice… Terra: *smiles* My pleasure! He raised his keyblade up, concentrating all of his energy from the heart into sky. Portal made of light was there. As the pupils prepare their gliders, Master sadly looked into a blinking star one more time. Eraques: You need to find a world of a small island encased by sea. Now go, don’t waste your time any longer. Aqua: We won’t return until we find that light. Terra: Yeah… wait what? But Aqua already disappeared in the light portal. Terra sighed as he entered in it as well. Terra: That will be a loooooong night. He quickly found her, on her silvery blue glider. She was flying towards the little a bit shiny spot in lanes between. World with an ocean soon became bigger and bigger, until it became that big that they could enter. It didn’t seem special, duo to the dark night and invisible beach. They hardly saw anything. Aqua: Let me do the trick. She raised her keyblade, casting a light spell. Shiny keyblade helped them a lot. They could recognize sand, sea with calm sound and even some seashells on the ground. Aqua went forward while Terra followed. He had the weirdest feeling in his head. Like there’s someone watching them. Aqua kept moving forward until she saw a palm like tree. There was something on it, whispering almost calling for help. Aqua: Did you hear that? Terra: What? Aqua: Never mind. Whispering voice wasn’t real, it was just the voice of the wind, blowing through the white thing on the tree. Aqua was about to see what it is, when blackness appeared all around them. From it, disgusting black creatures were coming. Terra and Aqua started fighting with them, but some of them managed to reach the tree. They both watched in horror, how black creatures attacked white thing on the tree.

Birth by Sleep is the only game from the entire Kingdom Hearts Saga that I have. I played it some many times, that I basically memorized the whole storyline. Which lead me to thinking: what if I would change it? Not for a whole meaning but for the actual made up story? And also a lot of scenes weren’t shown in the game, like four years with Ven, when he wasn’t able to understand anything. This is a fanfiction, so don’t yell on me if I changed the bigger part of the BbS Storyline. And that also goes on talent competition... hope I'll win Chapters: ( 1 ) Lost Light - Done ( 2 ) Creatures of Darkness - Done ( 3 ) Sleeping Mystery - In working

I'll chose writing... you know why

Guess I'll take writing category... you know why

Pure Awsomeness!!!! I just love that memory... all those words... make so beautifil memory from it!!! Keep writing. Can't wait for the next one !

Sorry if I'm breaking your nerves, but where do I need to post the story? And when do I need to finish it? Oh, one more thing, can I make more separated chapters or just one long story? Anyway, I'll do my best and I wish all the writers bloody good luck!

Awwww that was so cute!!! But I kinda have a feeling that Venny will found out the truth sooner or later... Oh, forgot to tell you that I really liked how you put Wingblade command style into previous chapter. I'm still imagining him in sky, flying with swords like wings. !!!