Hunter Hawk

Does anyone know where Saix got that scar? Maybe it will be revailed in kh 3d! Maybe it was also an ispiration for xemnas to add x in member's names!!!

slap your pillow! if you still want to slap someone then slap DiZ, for beining the bigest jerk in kingdom hearts.

OMG!!! That's so epic!!! Namine - vampire with wings of an angel? cool !!! No, Roxy i going to die!!! You better do something Sora!!!

Yes!!! Keep writing!!! Story of Namine's diarliy is awsome!!! If you need any ideas feel free to chat with me!

Awsome story man (as always)! That was a very good ending and inspiration for all others who wish to write stories someday (even me ). I also love the first song! Your grammar is also making a progress. It's only one thing I noticed to be a little weird. Taio? I think you meant Darkous. Don't feel bad about it! Everyone makes mistakes ( even I do it sometimes ). Anyway, just keep praticing and you'll get better and better. ( that's what I say )

Kingdom Hearts showed me a bright side of everything! It brought back my love for drawing and inspired me with writing! I really love it. Even though it's just the game, I think it's something much greater: IT'S A LONG STORY, ABOUT LIGHT AND DARKNESS, STRUGGLING IN THE EPIC BATTLE, WITH A HELP OF LEGENDARY HEROES AQUA - WATERFALL OF FRIENDSHIP TERRA - STRONG WARRIOR OF EARTH VENTUS - PURE WIND OF MYSTERY CONNECTED BY THE SAME DREAM, WERE ON THE JOURNEY, SEPARATED BY EVIL MAN, XEHANORT AND HIS APPRENTICE, BORN FROM THE PURE DARKNESS - VANITAS THEIR BATTLE WAS THOUGH, BUT NOT SUCCESSFUL TERRA WAS POSSED BY XEHANORT, HIS HEART IS STILL STRUGGLING WITH XEHANORT'S AQUA IS CAPTURED IN DARKNESS, WONDERING IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO WILL SAVE HER VENTUS FELL IN A DEEP SLEEP, WAITING FOR SOMEONE WHO WILL HELP HIM WAKE UP AND THAT SOMEONE IS SORA - TRAVELER OF SKY BOY WHO TOUCHED SO MANY HEARTS IS CHOSEN TO WEILD A WEAPON OF LIGHT - KEYBLADE HIS CLOSEST FRIENDS NEED HIS HELP LIGHT OF THE SEA - KAIRI, LOST HER HEART RIKU - REVENGER OF LAND, FELL INTO THE DARKNESS SORA SACRIFICES HIMSELF TO SAVE THEM RELEASING HIS OWN HEART, CREATING TWO PERSONS WHO SHOULD NEVER SUPPOSE TO EXIST, ROXAS - SILENT NUMBER XIII AND NAMINE - LONELY OCEAN WAVE SORA WAS THEN LOST, FOLLOWING AN ENDLESS ROAD LEADING HIM INTO A CASTLE OF FORGOTTEN MEMORIES, CASTLE OBLIVION HIS MEMORIES WERE SOON FADING AWAY, BUT ONE GIRL PUT HIM IN TO A SLEEP, PROMISING THAT SHE WILL FIX HIS BROKEN MEMORY WEEKS PAST, WHEN SHE FOUND OUT THAT SOME OF THE MEMORIES WERE LOST, TO ANOTHER PERSON WHO SHOULD NEVER EXIST ROXAS - NUMBER XIII OF THE ORGANIZATION XIII ALONG WITH HIS BEST FRIEND AXEL - BOND OF THE FIRESTORM, MEET ANOTHER LOST MEMORY, XION - MEMORY WHO SHOULD NEVER EXIST THEIR FRIENDSHIP SOON BECOMES SUFFERING, LEADING XION TO RETURN WHERE SHE TRULY BELONGS,TO SORA ROXAS RUNS AWAY, TRYING TO FIND AN ANSWER TO EVERYTHING AXEL SADLY WATCHES, WHEN RIKU TAKES ROXAS AWAY ROXAS RETURNS BACK TO SORA, WHO WAKES UP FOR ANOTHER JOURNEY KAIRI IS STILL WAITING HOME, AXEL KIDNAPS HER, BRINGING HER TO ORGANIZATION XIII SORA MUST SAFE HIS FRIENDS ONCE AGAIN, AXEL HELPS TOO, BUT USES ALL POWER AND FADES AWAY SORA IS REUNITED WITH RIKU, DEFEATING ORGANIZATION XIII TRINTY OF SORA, RIKU AND KAIRI IS REUNITED, BUT THE LETTER IN THE BOTTLE CHANGES THIER FATES ONCE AGAIN IT'S ABOUT SAVING ANOTHER TRINTY FROM THE PAST... See? That's only the small part of my writing about kingdom hearts. The greater story is yet to come... in Kingdom Hearts 3!!!!

Your stories are getting better and better!!! It's like watching an epic movie while reading your stories. I also like the themes you're using - about protecting our beautiful nature. Don't ever stop writing!!!

I like that kind of idea, but I'm statisfied with my shirt that haves the same wings on its back. But I know it would look good on you!

Ok I know what you all think about Vanitas and Ventus. Pure darkness against pure light. But, what would be like to see this in real life? I decided to write a story about it… Chapters: ( 1 ) Rain of Sorrow - Done ( 2 ) Warmth - To be posted soon Chapter One: Rain of Sorrow Black haired boy with scary yellow eyes was leaving the classroom. Everyone was afraid of him duo to his look and aggressiveness. He usually bullied kids for money or other things. If you didn’t give him the things he wanted, you could suffer the injury from him. That was the reason why everyone went home as soon as the school was finished. The name of that boy was Vanitas. When the school was over, Vanitas went to the schoolyard. There he usually found a victim for bulling. But the schoolyard was already empty when he got there. No groups of chattering girls or boy’s gangs. “Damn it!” he said as he kicked the stone on the ground. He was about to go home when he heard sounds behind him. On the school’s door was unusually small boy with blonde hair, carrying a school bag and another bag. Boy didn’t seem tough and yet he was moving very slowly with his head down. Vanitas quietly went to him and pushed him against the wall. “Alright, kid! Give me all your money or you’ll be sorry.” he said with rough voice. Usually others started struggling, screaming, begging him to stop. But that boy was different. He was still holding his head down and quietly whimpered. His arm slowly went to his pocket… “Don’t even think about calling help!” Boy took some banknotes from it and gently gave them to Vanitas. “I’m sorry if it’s not enough… “ boy said with quiet voice. Vanitas was very confused. Why did that boy give him money just like that? And he even said sorry! “Please, don’t hurt me… I just came from hospital…” Boy now reared his head. Vanitas could clearly see bandages on his head. For some time he just stared into him. He didn’t know what to do. It was not his style to hurt the injured ones. Without a second though he put the banknotes back into his hand and run away. Something about that boy was different. So innocent with that face and eyes… Picture of him couldn’t leave Vanitas’s mind. He was running and running until he reached an old house, much away from the others. In the moment he stepped in, he dodged the bottle that hit the door instead. “Where have you been, you lazy brat?” Voice came from a man who was standing in the hall. He had the same eyes as him, but much scarier face. That was no other than his old man. “Sorry… but I… didn’t bring anything for today” he said while trembling. Vanitas was extremely afraid of him. Talking to him felt like a talking to a bomb, which’s going to explode any time. That was also the reason why did he need to bully others. Since when was little, he needed to bring money to his father, Xehanort. If he didn’t, old man punish him in the “old fashion way”. Even if he brought something, he got bruisers from him. But to brought nothing… “So, you were lazy today!” In the same moment Xehanort hit him. His punch left clearly mark on his face. Vanitas dodged the next punch, holding his bleeding nose. After that he felt the kicks into his stomach. He thought that the kicks and punches won’t end. The pain was so terrible. In the end, Xehanort threw him out. “And don’t even think about coming back!” old man said when he shouted the door. Vanitas slowly stood up. His entire body was punished more than anything. With a head, full of the sadness he walked back to school. Where could he else go than the place when he’s somehow safe? He sat on the stairs, staring on the schoolyard. Why he couldn’t take the money from that boy? If he did, that wouldn’t happen in the first place. He angrily punched the ground. “It’s his fault!” he said when it started raining. Soon he was shivering from the cold. How can he survive entire night on a cold like this? “Are you alright?” voice asked. Vanitas looked up. There he was, the same boy with blonde hair! He was dressed in coat, holding an umbrella and a shopping bag. Boy moved umbrella closer to him, protecting him from the rain. “Why… are you doing this? After anything that I done to you?” But the boy didn’t reply. He only took his coat off, wrapping Vanitas in it. “You’re gonna catch a cold if you stay here any longer. Let’s go to my place.” “But, why…?” Boy touched Vanitas’s mouth what made him shut up. “It’s not the right place for a chat. We’re gonna talk at my place.” “What’s your name?” Vanitas asked. “I’m Ventus. Just Ven is fine. What’s yours?” “I’m Vanitas…” Boy smiled. “Mind if I call you Vani?” Strange… in the same moment Vanitas felt something deep inside him. What was that? So pure and warm… could it be… friendship? “That’s fine by me.” With those thoughts he quietly followed the boy who was holding umbrella at his side.

I feel so wierd... my forehead is burning and my hands are freezing...

What about Luna ( got idea from Sailor Moon ), Twilight or Moolight? Just a few ideas if you like epic names.

OMG!!! Your stories are so freaking cool! Wish that I could write stories in a way you do... describing all those emotions feels almost like a movie!

That's amazing!!! You write down all the things that "we" girls love about boys!!! It's so cute :wub: .

Jeez this week I have three tests (Geography, Science and Chemistry) and two asking (Psychology and History). Hope I'll survive :S...

This is getting better and better!

Chapter Eight: New Friend Ven slowly opened the door that Terra told him to wait in. Room didn’t seem very big, but it had a lot of other things inside. Like bookshelves, piles of papers and folders, boxes, table with chair and a giant bed. On it was kid around Ven’s age who was reading a book. Something about this kid was a bit off duo to his silver hair and staring eyes. Ven: Hi… I’m Ventus… Ven for short… Terra told me to wait here… until he finishes something. Ienzo: *stares, doesn’t say a thing* Ven: What’s your name? Ienzo: *still stares* Ven: Hey! *loudly* Can you hear me?! Ienzo:*even more stares* Ven: *tries to improvise* What’s your name? While he was trying to improvise, he tripped on the box and loudly fell on the ground. In that moment kid burst out laughing. Ven: *trying to get up* Hey! What’s so funny? Ienzo: Your improvisation! They both started laughing even more. Ienzo: I’m Ienzo by the way. Sorry if I didn’t tell you that before you fell on the ground. Ven: Nah, it’s ok. I was afraid that you were deaf. Ienzo: I usually get very shy if I meet someone new. Uncle Even always bring those tall scary guys here. Ven: Why didn’t you tell me in a first place? Do I look like a tall scary guy? Ienzo: *smiles* Of course not! I just didn’t know what to say, since I haven’t met any guys around my age. Ven: You did now! Ienzo: So, what are you doing here? Did you come here to study? Ven: Well… I really wanted to see that lab… and Terra said he’ll show it to me. Ienzo: You know Terra? Ven: Yeah, he’s a good friend of my uncle. I’m staying at his place. Of course that was a lie. Terra told him that he needs to pretend that he’s a nephew of Terra’s friend. Ienzo: Why’s that? Ven: My uncle is always busy and about a week ago I got this fever. He asked Terra if he could look after me. Ienzo: *sees plasters on his face and arms* Wow, what were you doing to get all those cuts? Ven: Oh, I… fell down the… stairs. *sadly* I wasn’t careful enough. Ienzo: Don’t feel bad about it. Sometimes, even I get all sorts of those things. Ven: Yeah, you’re right… hey do you know what Christmas is? Ienzo: *surprised* You don’t know? It’s the best day in a whole year! Ven: We don’t have it… where I live… Can you at least tell what it is? Ienzo: Well, it’s like a celebration, when we all show how much we care for each other. Usually we put the presents for the ones we love, under the Christmas tree and open them on a Christmas day. Ven: Wow! Will that be soon? Ienzo: Yeah! Just 5 more weeks and it will come! How come you don’t have it? Ven: Guess everybody is busy where I live… Actually angels did celebrate Christmas every year, except they call it Calm Day. On that day everyone give presents to the ones they cared about the most. None was allowed to argue or show the loveless on that day. And they didn’t have a snow in Heaven. Ven’s thinking was broken by Even who came into the room. Even: So, you want to see the lab? Follow me! Ven: *stands still, shaking* Even: Hey, what’s wrong? Ven: *still shaking* Terra: *comes* It’s ok Ven, come with me. Ven: *says goodbye to Ienzo* It was nice to meet you, Ienzo. Ienzo: Yeah! It was nice to meet you too, Ven. Will you come back tomorrow? I have so much to tell you. Ven: I’ll ask Terra. Bye! Ienzo: Bye Ven. Ven followed Terra and Even to the one room in the other part of the building. Lab was very big duo to the all equipment that was inside. Tables with weird machines, objects and potions were endless. Ven was truly amazed by it. Ven: Wow, it’s so big! *walks around it, looking at weird things* Even: *boastfully* It’s amazing, isn’t it? Ven: *gets startled by him, nodding frightened* While Ven walked, he didn’t notice that his coat got stuck onto the one of the tables. Coat was slowly slipping from him, almost showing his two wings… Terra noticed that in time and threw one of the potions on the ground. Potion caused a smoke so Even couldn’t see Ven’s wings. Terra quickly ran to him and fixed his coat. Ven: *coughs duo to the smoke* What’s… that? Even: One of the potions probably fell on the ground. Terra: I think we better go home. Ven isn’t used to that smoke. Even: Ok, see you tomorrow. Terra: Bye. When they got out Ven was still coughing. Terra: That was a close one. Sorry about the smoke. Ven: It’s… *coughs* ok. Terra: I can’t let Even see you as an angel. It probably won’t turn out good. They both came to the house. Terra unlocked the door, when Ven suddenly collapsed. Terra: Ven! What’s wrong? *puts hand on his forehead, but quickly removes it* Oh, no! The temperature is back! He quickly took him into his hands and carried him into the house. Terra: I knew it I shouldn’t take you with me… you were almost healed, but now you have fever again… That wouldn’t happen if you had stayed home. PS: Sorry, but I'm afraid I won't post anything for a while. I'll have a very busy month, so don't expect next chapter for this or other story soon.

OMG!!!!! That story is soo epic!!!! Keep writing!

what did you do accidentally?

Poor Roxy... wonder what happends next...

"You called me a du-?" Man, I nearly died laughing on this part!

Wish me luck, I have a Biotechnology test tommorow!

Awsome story, man!!!!!!!!! Can't wait to see Vanitas as a loser against Sora and roxas!!!

Yeah, I'm a writer too and I was just wondering - what do other writers write about and some simmilar questions, so I decided to make a poll for all other writers. I started writing last year, when I read amazing stories from KH13 member DeathSkull3000. Since then I had some many ideas and I started writing. At first were just KH fanfictions, but now I started writing my own story!

Cheer up! http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/happy.png There are plenty of other stories on my profile and soon (don't know when excatly) I'll have time to write the new chapters! All I wanted to say, is that I'm pretty busy right now. And please don't feel bad about it. It's just a story after all.

I'm afraid that you'll need to wait a little longer...