Hunter Hawk

LOL! Kuma played Vanitas's role in BBS!

Awsome!!!! Except for the train they went on the boat! Awww so nice all three are together! Nile is back? Epic bro!

... I could kill you... cuz you didn't answer me on my message... but I won't cuz you're my friend... but seriously - what happened to you?

No problem, if you need a friend. Send me message whatever you want to talk to me.

It's very nice written my friend... please continue if story continues...

Oh, come on! I almost finished the chapter of PoN where you appear and you leave? You better tell me the good reason, cuz this just isn't your style! Split out your answer! Why are you leaving?!

Wow that sure is a good changed version of KH2 beginning! Kinda funny Maya took the role of Diz And oh yeah Drew is back!!! Bet he looks like blond haired Axel, could you do a drawing of him by any chance?

Awsome chapter bro! Beginning of the KH2 in KH Ancients version!!!

That chapter was epicly written! Nice job! Hope Venny will be okay... kinda sad they got him... Will you update soon? Cuz I can't wait to see next one!!!

After such a long time… I finally decided to write the next chapter! Sorry for keep you waiting. For the ones who haven’t read all previous chapters (there are twenty of them!) I made a short summary. This is Ven, Aqua and Terra fan fiction, where all three are related. Story begins when their home is destroyed by mysterious creatures called Pure Ones and they got separated, because of it. But when they finally find each other, a lot of creepy things starts happening ( Ven is cursed, Aqua is captured… ). Terra manage to bring Ven to the KCW ( Keyblade Crystal Wielders ) who cure him from the curse, by turning him into one of them. They also found out about Painer who’s in charge of the Pure Ones and seem to be looking for one unique object – Ven! He even captures Aqua who’s now a prisoner and Ven and Terra need to save her… Chapter Twenty-one: Shadow Eyes “And now just catch it!” Ness said to Ven. Ven already learned all sorts of new powers. His ability of the sky was incredible. Controlling a flying Keyblade, making small tornados or wind blasts, cutting the air… Now he was learning how to make a boomerang effect. It was kinda funny thing, because no matter how far he threw it, it always came back. “I got it!” “Well, that’s good and I must say I’m impressed. I haven’t seen many KCW who learned all those powers in one day.” “Did I learn all of them?” “Not yet. I saved the most powerful for the end.” “And that is…” Ness started glowing before Ven even finished. He turned into a hawk with shining light feathers, similar to his hair. “Wow, how did you do that?” Hawk flew around him and landed on the rock. “This is one of the main powerful abilities. A transformation into your sky or land form. The shape of the sky or land power, with speed, power or magic, shows your true form. In a body of hawk or wolf. You and I have both sky and speed, a perfect balance, so you won’t have trouble with it.” “You mean I can actually do that?” “Yes, but you need to be extra careful while doing it.” “How can I do that then?” “Transformation into your true form is activated by certain thought, memory or will. First just close your eyes and think what is in your head that matters the most. And remember, your power is in the crystal.” Ven sat on the ground and closed his eyes. His green crystal was still in the pocket, right next to the Wayfinder. He didn’t know where’s Xyle’s is, but he some sorta felt its presence. While he was thinking, a white shape appeared in front of him. “How do you feel?” Xyle asked. “Strange… there’s nothing here, just my will.” Ven replied. “That’s true, but do you know what matters the most?” “I don’t know… there so many things… by the way what did you have?” “Me? I had land and magic. As for the transformation… I had the memory about me and Ky.” “Right, I have to find that too.” “Good luck then… oh, and don’t forget the first promise.” “I won’t, but I feel like someone is watching me all the time.” “Then tell that to Lenne only. Believe me, he can keep a secret.” “Ok.” His will was focused on the one memory, the one with Terra and Aqua. Light appeared around him as he felt pulsing crystal in his pocket. For a second he thought that might be it, but he was soon disappointed. Light was just for a show, there was no magic. That really made Ven sad, but it didn’t make a big deal to Ness. He only smiled. “It’s alright if you don’t know how to transform on the first try. Believe me, I managed to do so for no more than a month.” “But what if I can’t.” “As long as you believe, you can.” Ven was about to say something when whistle was heard. Ness’s face became serious as some of the Crystal Wielders passed by. “We need to get back.” he said to blonde. “Why so sudden?” “Looks like something happened.” Boy was a bit confused, but he trusted Ness and followed him back. At least fifty Crystal Wielders were gathered around three a bit older wielders. All of them were talking as they were showing different pictures. Terra was there too, memorizing every picture he saw. As he noticed Ven he went closer to him. “What happened?” blonde asked confusedly. “That guy from before, Xeno done some spying with another one. They both managed to see all the underground’s corridor, but while returning back someone spotted them. Some Pure Ones appeared and found out that we’re spying on them.” “How do you know all this? And why is everyone making so big fuzz about it?” “Lenne explained most of the things to me. Now those creeps know we’re preparing rescue mission. That’s why they called everyone. To execute it as soon as possible.” “Does that mean we’re going to rescue Aqua right now?” “I don’t’ know. Those head guys need to discuss some things.” “Like what?” “After Xeno and his companion were spotted, they managed to save some very young Keyblade Wielders. That guy, Zige then didn’t manage to save himself. Kids are now with Zyra, both of them are injured.” “I’ll go help.” “Ven, wait.” Younger brother quickly ran towards the Zyra’s house. Ven went to another room where very young boy was taken care of by Loona and her brother. Terra soon came after him, looking at the blindfolded girl who was leaning forward at the bed. On it was little girl who was hardly breathing. She had many cuts on her arms and when Terra looked at her brown hair he realized who she was. “Lily!” brown haired shouted as girl looked weakly at him. “Te… rr..a…” she only managed to say. “Lily! What happened to you?” There was no reply from a girl who just lay. Zyra put her arm on Lily’s chest to connect herself with her heart. After some seconds, she removed it, turning her head back to Terra’s. Even thought she was blind, brown haired clearly saw she was serious. “That girl… you know her, right?” she said to him. “Yeah, she’s Kyran’s daughter, man who helped me and my sis once.” “I meet her too once… when she was just three years old… “ “You know Kyran?” “Yes, he’s a Keyblade Crystal chosen. But he isn’t her father. He just pretended to be one, for erasing her painful memories of the past.” “Why he did that?” “I can’t allow having such young Keyblade Wielders here. That’s why I told him to raise her and three other kids outside this world. But now… looks like Painer got him to.” Brown haired girl stated trembling as she heard Painer’s name. Terra gently stroked her hair to calm her down. “What is wrong with her? Will she be alright?” “I won’t lie to you… she won’t.” Terra shockingly drew a breath. When he asked that question, people usually answered by yes or just say it need more time or at least gave a slight chance of hope. Not such clearly no. “What are you saying? There’s gotta be a chance of healing her!” Zyra only silently removed Lily’s shirt. Under it was her pale chest, with a symbol that seemed like a keyblade and pieces around it. It was clearly black. “Don’t tell me that’s…” “Yeah, it’s a mark of a Sleeping Blade. The final color of it before killing person is black which means… Lily is virtually dead. Her heart has no longer control of her body and spirit. It was destroyed by Sleeping blade.” “But… but… she t –talked to be before…” “Bodies with ruined heart usually hang on their past memories. Soon.. she’ll fade away.” Terra stood still, looking at the innocent girl whose heart was destroyed. He remembered how she was waving her goodbye to him and Aqua. Now she was gone, just like that. For a second his look was changed with another. He saw sleeping Ven again, with a same symbol. Death could take him just like it took Lily now. Thinking about it brought more sadness. Now he had one more reason to defeat Painer. While his thinking Zyra took white apron and covered Lily by it. Her lifeless eyes soon disappeared under it. Blindfolded girl then took little body outside. After some time, Terra went to another room where twins and Ven looked over the boy whose eyes were fluorescently purple. Boy didn’t seem very well duo to his bruisers and lifeless staring. “What’s wrong with him?” Terra asked after realizing that’s one of the twins that lived along with Lily. “I saw this kind of thing once… it’s a rare spell Shadow Eyes.” Loona answered. “Beside changing eyes, it also mess up with memories and heart itself.” “Will he be alright?” Ven asked. “Things like that usually take a lot of time. He’ll need to rest for a weeks for his memories to return.” Lenne said “Speaking of which, you seem like you know him. Do you know his name?” “I’m not sure if he’s Mateo or Takeo. They’re keyblade chosen twin brothers that met some time ago.” “Then we must hurry if we wanna save others before they end up like this.” “Did the head guys decided when to go?” Ven asked. “Yeah, we’ll go tonight.” Loona said. “Zyra has just told me other kid didn’t survive.” … In some world, were two ugly creatures dragging small female figure. They were told to bring her in a room where a long table was. Figure soon realized that and started struggling. But it was useless. Her hands were tied up as corridor was too big and too long to escape. Aqua soon found herself in a room with another creep, no other than Painer. His body was covered in a black coat with several tapes around each arm. He stroked his dirty brown hair as he took a better look at Aqua. She just stood still there duo to her tied hands and now also ankles. Painer now looked directly in her eyes. “Those blueness in your eyes… it’s not the only one on this world. There’s someone else who also has them, right?” Painer grinned as he was fussing around her. Blue haired stayed quiet. She knew he was talking about Ven. “Where is your little brother? Did he survive a little curse I put on him?” Now she knew. Guy who cursed Ven was right in front of her. With all her strength she leaped straight at him. “You bastard! Why did you do that to him?” Painer only smiled at her. “When you found something you can kept it right? Well I found him so it means I could do anything with him.” “You didn’t find him! You forcibly kidnapped him and now he’s dying because of you!” “Now, now… is that how you talk to a man?” “You aren’t a man, but a monster! You burned our village along with tons of others! Why the hell are you doing all of this!” Man now got closer to her face, whispering her words. “You see there are certain scrolls I’d like to have, but unfortunately are now lost. I wouldn’t destroy all those villages if I had them. Number 15 sure has a lot of connection with it. ” “Why are you telling be all this? And what is that having to do with Ven?” “Because… they’re hiding… in your little brother. From the start of your escape they were always there, hiding in a small place right next to his heart.” “No, Ven doesn’t hide anything.” “But he does and that’s why you’re here. We can make a deal.” “I won’t tell you where Ven is!” “Kinda hoped you’d say that, but maybe my offer will do nicely. For just one tiny answer I’ll stop my search. You see every village where I don’t find him turns to ash and its Keyblade wielders are taken here. Just say that tiny answer and I’ll release all prisoners and stop destroying villagers. It’s for just one answer.” Aqua burrowed in her thoughts. He can’t betray her own brother, no way she can. But what about all those villages and people in jail? She clasped with her fist for an answer. “You won’t tell, will you? Well, no big deal. But I still think you’ll be use to me…” suddenly blue liquid appeared around her body. She was soon wrapped by disgusting, unable to move. It soon raised her up, right on the part where chandelier supposed to be. “I’m giving you one more chance, will you tell me?” Aqua angrily shook with her head for an answer. “Well, too bad.” Painer clenched with his fingers and liquid covered her entire body including face. Now it was slowly turning into crystal. It hanged on the ceiling as it was just a decoration. Aqua’s body was frozen, just like her heart was. She was captured in crystal prison.

Feeling like somebody who was never suppose to exist...

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Chapter Two: Twins were carrying their heavy traveling bag towards point where road splits into two separated roads. If you’d turn right you’d come to Aqua’s house and if you turn on left you’d come to Eraques’s boat. “I’ll go to the Eraques and you go to Aqua’s house. Next night will meet up here, exactly at eleven o’clock.” Roxas said. “But what about traveling bag? Most of your clothes are in.” Ven asked. “I have already taken most important stuff. If I’ll need anything I’ll take it when we switch and so will you.” “Right, then we will see again tomorrow’s night?” “Yeah, now go there before Aqua gets too worried.” “Okay, bye bro.” With those words, Ven followed the road until he reached familiar white old fashioned house. It was exactly as he remembered it. He could clearly saw their parents under sunshade with Aqua and two kids running around. Those sure were nice days. As he slowly opened the door, Aqua immediately appeared, embracing him in hug. “Oh, where have you been Roxas? I’d waited for you on station, but you never came. And where is your brother Ven?” “Uh… Aqua… can’t… breathe..” “Oh, I’m so sorry, Roxas.” “Nice to see you too Aqua, but I’m Ven not Roxas.” “Then where is Roxas? I thought both of you will come.” “So did we… but Roxas became ill and couldn’t come.” “Oh, dear. How could he become ill in such a warm season?” “Beats me… can I go to the room to unpack.” “I’ll give you a hand.” And Aqua already took Ven’s bag and carried it towards the guest room. “Ugh… what did you pack? It weighs a tone!” Aqua said while opening it. “Wait, Aqua!” “Why the hell do you need four pajamas for only two weeks? And five pair of shoes? Don’t mention thirty pairs of socks.” “I… well… Roxas got ill just before summer vacation and… we packed for both….then I sorta forgot to put his things back…” “We need to send it back then! What will he do without them?” “But Aqua, he’s ill and he needs to be in bed all the time. He only needs to wear a pajama.” “Well if you say so.” Aqua went to open the window “Come down to help me make a lunch once you unpack. I’m making your favorite Pizza with forest stuffing.” “Eh… this is Roxas’s favorite, I hate mushrooms.” “Then you’ll just remove it, no big deal.” Blue haired went to the kitchen as Ven started putting his things out of the traveling bag. He decided to put his things on upper part of the wardrobe and his brother’s on the lower part. After all he was ten minutes older than him. Meanwhile Roxas was walking beside the sea. He could clearly remember how he and his bro held mom’s hands as their dad took pictures. Teardrop slipped down to his cheek when he realized that moment won’t happen again. But a familiar boat washed away his sad feeling. It was Eraques’s Sealight, one of the coolest boats around. Blonde happily ran to it, to find a raven haired fisherman in a hammock, snoring like a seagull. Unfortunately he wasn’t there, but that wasn’t that surprising. The sailboat called Cross wasn’t there. That meant Eraques went fishing. Roxas didn’t want to lose opportunity, so he immediately put his swimming trunks on and jumped in the clear sea. Water was fantastic. All those tiny salt drops felt like gentle wind. He swam towards pier and back to see lots of fishes and sea creatures. Some seagulls were also there, catching their lunch. Seeing them made Roxas hungry and he decided to head back. He came back just in time to see black haired man, dressed in sailor clothes under white coat. “Mr. Eraques!” boy happily waved his hand. “Well if it isn’t Ventus. It’s been a long time. Where’s your brother?” “Oh, I’m Roxas not Ven.” “So, what are you doing here Rox? Came for a day to see how sailor is spending time?” “Actually… I thought if I can come for a vacation. You see, Ven couldn’t come… because he became sick and I thought if I can spend vacation with you since you invited us last time we were here.” “Yeah... I remember, but I really thought both of you will come. Don’t worry, that only means I’ll have more time for you.” “Great! Can we start? You know the sailor life?” “Easy land – kiddo. First we’ll go to the light house, where I need to clean a bit. Then we can take a ride on Cross.” Roxas happily jumped on sailboat when his stomach was heard again. Eraques smiled at it. “Guess we’ll need to eat before that. Come in Sealight, I have some fresh sea basses to fry.” In some other place Ven bit in a fresh slice of pizza. Aqua sure was an expert at making it. He nearly finished when blue haired came back with a dessert. Homemade sea – salt ice cream! It tasted much better than at the mouldy kiosk where he usually go with his brother. So creamy and salty – sweet. When he was eating his third scoop, Aqua began conversation. “What would you like to do tomorrow?” “Can we go to the beach? Please!” “Well of course we’ll go. I just wanna know if you like to have some company.” “Sure! I don’t mind going with you.” “I actually meant someone else…” “Who?” “Well…” Blue haired started thinking, when voice from outside was heard. “Where can I put my bags?” voice that soon got in corridor asked. Ven took a look on a person that came in the room. It was blond haired girl who seemed around his years old. She was carrying at least five bags while trying to get inside the house. “Ven, this is my niece Namine. She’s going to stay here for a vacation just like you.” “Nice to meet you, Ventus. Or I can call you just Ven?”

Epicly awsome! Please continue!!!

I'll definetily will! It's the best contest ever. For those who don't know what is it, it's a song contest for countries from Europe. Every country has a song and all those songs compeete to win the first place. Songs are good so far... First semi final is 22. 5. at nine o'clock, second is on 24. 5. and final is on Saturday 26. 5. Make sure you don't miss it if you're a music fan!

Warning: This story is based on an actual movie Double Vacation which is not originally in English language. Day was slowly coming to an end when teacher was writing equation on school’s board. All pupils were tired and couldn’t wait for summer vacation. Brunette with spiky hair was almost loudly yawing as silver haired next to him tried his best to listen to the teacher. Next to them were red and black haired girls, whose eyes were stuck in a traveling magazine. “Roxas? Can you come to solve this equation?” teacher said as she looked towards the desk in the back. On it two blond haired boys were sitting. They were twins. “Right away ma’am.” one of them said. “Good.” teacher nodded. But in the same moment she turned away, twins switched places. Instead of Roxas, the other twin Ventus went to solve an equation. He did it with no problem while his brother had some serious trouble with it. “Well Roxas… you sure improved your math knowledge. Too bad we have already finished your grading at math, cuz this…” but school bell finished her talking. All pupils immediately picked their bags and went towards school yard. Including two blondes, who soon stood in front of their friends. “Man, you sure trick the teacher this time.” brown haired Sora smiled. “Oh, it’s no big deal. We just need to wear the same clothes.” Roxas grinned “Yeah, but you know bro. You should study math a bit more.” Ven frowned. “If I was your teacher, I would recognize each of you in second. I just look in your eyes and see who’s a nerd and who’s a sportsman.” Riku sighed. “Hey!” twins said at once. “Oh, come on boys. Is the school only thing on your mind?” Kairi grinned. “Yeah, why won’t you say anything about your summer vacation?” Xion joined. “I already have told you. Me and Riku will go on a summer camp.” Sora grinned. “What will you do, girls?” Riku turned to them. “We’re going to Greece! Can’t you you imagine? Me and my best friend on the beach, surrounded by amazing sea.” Kair day dreamed. “Oh please, who would lie all day? Isn’t there amazing sea to swim in? Or fishes to catch?” Roxas interrupted. “What do you know? And since we’re here, where will you go?” Xion asked. “I…” Roxas began as Ven continued. “We aren’t sure yet. Maybe we’ll convince dad into taking us to the ocean.” “Well, good luck with that. See ya tomorrow, bye.” girls went home as Riku and Sora joined them. After their friends left, twins started thinking about their summer vacation. Since they were both little, their parents took them to the ocean. It was really nice there and they both had so many memories of it. But sadly, two years ago their mum died. After that their dad started working over time, to get enough money. Since that tragic event, they had never gone to the ocean again. “Bro, I want to visit ocean… just one more time.” Ven said sadly. “I know what you mean, but I don’t think dad could take us there. He has to work all the time.” “Why don’t we go with train then? We would only need to drive three hours and puf… we have perfect vacation.” “Where could we sleep then? And get the food?” “At Aqua’s place! Don’t you remember her? She lives there and we often went to visit her. I’m sure we could stay at her place.” “Alright we talk about that with dad when we get home.” Soon after they came home, they explain plan to their father. He happily agreed with it, as long as they pay the ticket for the train. Twins excitedly began making plans and started counting down the days. School was now passing even faster. Boys were happy that they finally had a chance to go through their memories again. Everything so perfect that they totally forget about the only condition father gave them. To pay the train ticket. Just a day before their trip, twins gathered all their money from wallets and even the piggy. Horrified, they discovered that they had money only for one ticket. “What should we do bro? Only one of us could go.” Ven sadly looked at money. “We will both go.” “How?” “We’re twins remember? On the train we’ll only switch places with seats and restroom.” Roxas suggested. “But I’m sure Aqua will wait for us on the station. If engineer see us both, he’ll call police.” “Then we need another plan… I think I’ll call it Double Vacation.” “And how will that plan go?” “Do you remember Eraques? Fisherman who knows our dad and lives on the other part of the shore? Last time we were there, he said that we can stay at his fish boat, helping him.” “This could turn okay… what will tell the dad then?” “I’ll say that I’m gonna go to our friend Axel. He won’t reveal our plan and dad will believe us. About vacation at the Ocean… one will go to Aqua and one will go to Eraques. And for vacation to be perfect, we will switch places every night.” “Awesome plan bro! Let’s pack everything.” Next day they were standing at the train station. Axel only scarcely agreed with their plan, but he wanted to help them, so he pretended that Roxas went to visit him. But as soon as Roxas came to Axel’s place, he grabbed his backpack and with Ven went on the bus. Their train ticket was soon bought. Ven strongly held the ticket as he sat on the seat next to the window. Meanwhile Roxas hid in the luggage cart. It was a bit uncomfortable, but he brought his video games with him for not getting bored. As the train left, Ven dreamily watched the landscape and birds in the sky. That sure will be an unforgettable vacation. Train was getting close to the next stop as another older men sat next to Ven. “Going to the ocean lad?” he asked with horse voice. “Yeah, to my dad’s friend.” Ven answered nicely. “Will you become sailor when you grow up?” “Not quite, I’m more thinking about scientist or at least a teacher. I like studying.” “That sure is a nice plan, laddie.” When train stopped to place some more passengers, blonde headed for the luggage room. There he found his twin sleeping. “It’s time to switch.” Ven woke Roxas up. “Was about time…” Roxas was soon backing on the seat, next to the same older man. “Where did you go?” “Uh… I had to use a restroom.” “So, what kind of teacher will you become?” “Probably a sport one, you don’t need a lot of studying for that.” “Didn’t you say that you like studying?” “Oh… yeah, you might misunderstood me before.” Then older man was quiet. Roxas took one of Ven’s books from the backpack, pretending to read. It was a way too confusing to read, so he soon closed it, staring through the window. Grass fields slowly turned into dry seaside herbs as tress were replaced with rocks and bushes. Whit each minute they were closer to the ocean. “Passengers for Shiny Seashore, please get off in ten minutes.” engineer called. Roxas immediately went to the luggage cart where Ven was already standing with their traveling bag. “You ready?” Ven whispered. “Absolutely!” Roxas nodded. The moment train stopped and door opened, twins headed towards unforgettable vacation.

Baking chocolate cake for a few of my classmates who have birthday in May!!! Man, even unfinished dough is tasty!!! the

Scary bro.... :blink: ..... epicly scary....

Grrr if Aelous didn't kill himslef I would personally kill him! How could he kill Venny and Roxy when they were just six years old!!!! Terra you better move ahead with your story!!!

Found that video on youtube... think that might happen? It almost did in KH DDD ( he would sleep forever ) ... how many chances will Sora have? Do you think Riku is saving Sora more and more? KH1 - no, even wanted to destroy him KH Com - just worried KH 358/2 days - absoulutely! KH2 - more than absoulutely!!! KH coded - just once KH DDD - he risked his own life in order to save his for more times than in previous games KH3 - ? ( bet he'll need to save him along Roxas, Ven, Xion and Namine ) What do you think?

Yay, I found another good picture of me. True it was taken when I was ten years old, but I still like it. And yes the ten year old kid there is me. The dog's name is Alina and unfortunately isn't mine. She belongs to my dad's cousin. I still come to play with her, cuz I love animals, especially big dogs. And if you didn't realize, I'm a girl not a boy.

Wow this is so awsome bro!!! Kinda scary, but epic. But I still don't get it what happened to Sora. Was he killed?

have fun, I don't imagine kingdom hearts in my language either. cept' if the older voice actors would come, they are so much better then the newest ones

what is your language?