Keyblade_warrior895

Belusair and the others were still fighting off the heartless, but for every one they killed, ten more took their place. "This may sound a little cliche, but........WHERE ARE THE OTHERS WHEN YA NEED THEM?!" shouted Allen. "Who knows, bro, just keep fighting until someone gets here." said Theo. Jake cut down a few more heartless. "Do you think they have a bad sense of direction?" asked Jake. "Warriors don't have a bad sense of direction, but you Jake, i think they make an exception." said Elizabeth as she took down fifteen more heartless. "Keep squabbling, and we'll never get out of this alive." said Belusair. Jason nodded in agreement as he shot down a few air soldiers and cut down some knight heartless with his sword.

"Ramen, i've heard a lot of people around the city talking about that, well, i guess it's worth a try." said Zalvar. 'I mean, i gave steak, hamburger and every other kind of protein a chance, i like all that kind of food, and i've lived on that kind of food on my planet, i guess it's time to try some different kinds of food.' thought Zalvar. "Where's ramen from, anyway?" asked Zalvar.

"Well, i am kinda hungry, um, what's that stuff?" asked Zalvar, gesturing to the ramen. Zalvar may have been on earth for a few months, but he was still trying to get used to earth customs. Plus, the only earth food he had seen, or eaten for that matter, was all the meat based protein. From the look on Zalvar's face, you could tell he was completely, and honestly confused, which rarely happened, but you could tell when it did.

Zalvar soon went back inside, thinking to himself. 'Man, whoever Brakus is, i'm gonna have to take him down fast and easy, or risk the lives of innocents.' thought Zalvar. Once Zalvar was inside, he began rotating his left shoulder, since it was cramped from the fight. "If i ever see that guy again, it'll be to soon." said Zalvar as he took a seat. "Hey Vladii, is it just me, or did he fight well, for a blind guy?" asked Zalvar.

Brakus felt the heat of the flames. "So, that girl is one of them, i better retreat for today, but they haven't seen the last of me." said Brakus as he dispersed into bats and flew off. Zalvar was relieved when the screeching stopped, and soon realized that Brakus fled. "Well, at least he's gone." said Zalvar as he noticed his arm. "Blast, i hate the fact that my true form starts to kick in randomly during a fight, why didn't my father teach me to control it sooner?" Zalvar whispered to himself, hoping he wasn't heard. Zalvar then concentrated and his arm changed back to a human form. Zalvar's eyes also returned from the pure black shark eyes, to normal human eyes.

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Zalvar and Brakus were continuing their fight until Brakus decided to use psychological warfare as well. "Tell me something boy, when your parents noticed you had powers, were they proud.......do you think they'd be proud now seeing how pathetic you look, and how weak you fight?" asked Brakus with an evil smirk. "Shut up!" shouted Zalvar. Zalvar then unleashed a fury of punches and kicks at Brakus, who was hit by a few of them. Zalvar's right arm soon started changing to a grayish muscular form with claws and a sharp fin on the outside of it. Zalvar then threw a punch, sending Brakus into a wall. "So, you do have a good amount of fight in you." said Brakus. "But this fight, is over." said Brakus. Brakus then took a deep breath and let out a deafening screech, causing Zalvar to cover his ears in pain.

Got it, so what would ya like me to fix up in the character sheet?

Name: Drake Age: 16 Gender: Male Appearance: (Mortal and Fairy Tale form (Just ignore the name under the human picture) Bio (opt): When Drake was told stories about fairy tales, he'd always hoped to be like one of the heroes, though he has no idea what lies in store for him, or that his past will be awakened. Fairy Tale Character: Platinum Sorcerer Extra Info: Wields a platinum wizard staff and controls the element of energy, was a protector of the magic realm before he ended up in the real world.

Brakus gave an evil smirk. "You didn't strike me as the kind of hero to fight two on one." said Brkaus. Zalvar had a frustrated glare towards Brakus. "Who says i'll be fighting you, i don't fight for fun." said Zalvar. "Unfortunately, i do." said Brakus as he ran at Zalvar. "Stay back, Vladii, if this guy wants a fight, i'll give him one." said Zalvar as he ran towards Brakus. Zalvar and Brakus were soon throwing punches and kicks at each other.

Brakus woke, though it was still during the night. "Hmm, maybe it's time i found that boy and fought him." said Brakus as he dispersed into bats and flew off. It didn't take Brakus long to find Zalvar, as his sonar picked up both Zalvar's human outline and true form outline at the same time. Brakus landed on the street across from the house, waiting to be noticed. Zalvar raised his hands as if he was in a stick up. However, Zalvar's face soon went from defensive, to a slightly angered look, symbolizing awareness. "There's trouble nearby." said Zalvar. Zalvar stood up and went to a nearby window, noticing a figure standing across the road. As Zalvar noticed the figure, his eyes started changing to that of a shark, pure black like an endless pupil. "Be back in a minute." said Zalvar as he opened the window and jumped out. Zalvar was soon near the figure, staring him down. "Who are you?!" Zalvar practically shouted. "The name, is Brakus, learn it well." Brakus called back. Everyone that was on the street at that point fled, as they knew Brakus was a feared villain, and that he left no opponent alive.

"That's actually a good thing to go by, it saved my hide more than i can remember, though, there was that one time i ended up in a tiger cage at that zoo last month i've heard of 'Cat got your tongue' but that was ridiculous." said Zalvar. "So, you've never really had a friend to watch your back, that must've been rough, but, i'll watch your back, you can count on that." said Zalvar.

'oh great, she can sense animal, well, at least she hasn't asked about my shark side, if she saw that aura.' thought Zalvar. "It must be tough, not letting anyone get close, but, each time i meet someone, i'll always watch their back, regardless of the risk to myself, my father was a very honorable man, he taught me to protect the innocent, i've lived by the code of honor ever since, i've never used my powers in a lethal way, unless they tried to kill me first." said Zalvar. "So, do you live by something you believe in?" asked Zalvar.

if Starscream gets revived, i bet he'd feel very humiliated, he survives the whole fiasco on Cybertron, to be taken down by a human

"Bummer, that had to have been a horrible way to discover your powers, for me, I've had my powers since I was five years old, I discovered my powers when my father almost drowned, though, the experience traumatized me for a while, it's been rough really, not many people talk to me, or even come near me because of my powers." said Zalvar. "Forgive me for asking, but, besides my hydrokenisis aura, what other auras can you see around me?" asked Zalvar.

Zalvar sat down. "This is a nice place, so, when did you first discover your powers, just curious." said Zalvar. Brakus finally arrived at his hideout. "Strange, my sonar picked up more from that boy from earlier, there was a secondary outline, as if human wasn't his actual appearance....still, my fight with him should prove entertaining." said Brakus. Brakus then lied down and fell asleep, all while considering what he should do when he first truly encountered Zalvar.

"Thanks." said Zalvar. Zalvar stated to try and remember the good times he had on his planet, not that he'd mention he was from another planet. "There was one time, one of my older brothers ran into a lamp post.....nine times.....in the same day.....with the same lamp post." laughed Zalvar. "Anyway, I thank you for allowing me to stay." said Zalvar.

The only thing that could actually fight him, was cybertron, and look what happened to him

I'm guessing that the "ancient, powerful transformer" is Unicron

"I've alway looked at the stars, it was the one thing that me, my parents and my siblings had in common, before....." said Zalvar, until he stopped mid sentence, trying to suppress the memory, as he had done many times before. You could tell by the look on Zalvar's face that the memory was painful, and he didn't want to relive it.

Zalvar looked back in front of him, paying attention to what was in front of him. "Ya know, it's been a while since I talked with anyone, I've never had a lot of luck with making friends, being the new guy, not many people want to get to know me, especially with my powers, I have brute strength, and control over water, so, it's difficult finding friends, though, it's good finding another superhuman." said Zalvar, remembering that Vladii could control fire. "Sorry if I'm talking to much, it's, mostly what I do around new people, nerves and all." said Zalvar. Zalvar then looked to the stars that were beginning to appear. " Have you ever, looked up to the night sky?" asked Zalvar.

"Vladii, that's a nice name." said Zalvar. Zalvar started to think of an explanation for his name, not wanting to mention he was alien. "Well, I was called Zalvar because my parents ran out of name ideas, and decided to give me a strong name, it's kind of weird though." said Zalvar. Zalvar briefly looked to the sky. " I wish they were all around now." said Zalvar, though he didn't realize he actually said it, he assumed he thought it.

Zalvar followed Vlad. "So, um, what would your name be, I'm sort of new in town, only been here a few months so, it's been a challenge, I don't even have a place to stay, been sleeping on rooftops, fell off one and landed on the roof of a bus once, woke up on the other side of town." said Zalvar. "So, if you don't mind my asking, what is your name?" asked Zalvar.

Zalvar was confused at the look this girl that walked up to him was giving him. "Uh, what, do I have something on me?" asked Zalvar as he gave himself the once over. 'I haven't been on this planet for long, but I doubt I'm ever gonna understand humans.' thought Zalvar. "The name's Zalvar, do you have a name?" asked Zalvar.

Zalvar eventually came to, and slowly got to his feet. "Man, I've gotta watch out when I'm in true form." said Zalvar as he started walking again.Zalvar soon reached a store with cops around it. "Guess I'd better check it out." said Zalvar as he headed there. When he got inside, Zalvar saw someone at the cash register, as well as the guy unconscious on the ground. "What the heckler happened to that guy?" asked/shouted Zalvar.