Cellar Door 652 Posted August 1, 2009 First thing i've written in months. I'll probably re-write it later--it's un-beta'd, lol. Shame on me. I enjoy feedback. This is a warning; the following story has content deemed unsuitable for those it's unsuitable for. Warnings for the prelude include cutting and angst. If you don't care, then read on. . Prelude . Enter main character, he thought to himself. The blade shined in the light. His life really was like a depressing little play, was it not? He positioned it upon his arm. The door was wide open. Slash. Pain. Blood. Someone walked by. Slash. Pain. Blood. They didn't even notice. Slash. Pain. Blood. He was sitting directly in front of the entrance to the room. Blood. Blood. Everywhere. They didn't even notice. Slash. Pain. Blood. He knew he had to stop soon or risk losing too much blood. Pain. Blood. Pain. Satisfaction. One day he was going to walk out and never come back. . x . Have you ever thought about death? He did. A lot. He wondered what it was like to take your own life; to escape this hell. He wondered if he could just take the easy way out. But he also thought that maybe it would be cowardly, weak Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sora96 17,256 Posted August 1, 2009 thats really good did you write that your self Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
GoofyDonaldSora 0 Posted August 1, 2009 If I was a drama teacher that would be an A+ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rose Riku 39 Posted August 1, 2009 Seeeee? I told you it was good, Cell. ^w^ YOU. NEED. TO. WRITE. MOAR! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kairiwilson1 47 Posted August 1, 2009 O.O Oh noez Roxas! Dun kill Axel! Dx It's really good though, I like it. <3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rose Riku 39 Posted August 1, 2009 Also.... I must say... CELLA! I WASN'T THE ONLY ONE WHO THOUGHT YOU WANTED TO KILL AXEL ! *points at Kairi's post* You're NOT killing him, right? Or did you change your mind? o-o Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kairiwilson1 47 Posted August 1, 2009 Dun kill Axel! He's too sexy to be killed! O.O -shot- Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Cellar Door 652 Posted August 1, 2009 thats really good did you write that your self Yes i did, thank you C: @GoofyDonaldSora Thankies @kairi ... you did the same thing as rose! Enter Axel at the point which he's thinking about killing someone else means that Axel's going to change something THOUGH NOW I AM firetruckING TEMPTED LOL. @Rose <3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rose Riku 39 Posted August 1, 2009 Don't kill Axellllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll. Please. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Blazer 7 Posted August 1, 2009 Dont kill axel.Kill Larxene ot Xigbar. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Cellar Door 652 Posted August 1, 2009 Maybe i'll kill all of them. o: Don't put it past me lololol. I'll update this tonight, btw--or ill try to write a bit of the next chapter, even if i dont finish it. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaiso 2,764 Posted August 1, 2009 O. O! <3 that was awesome Cella. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites