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I'm Deeply Sorry

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Well, Tangi came out last night and she wanted to write her first poem. She wants to know what you all think of it =)

 

I'm Deeply Sorry

What would it take to get you to notice me?

I'm deeply sorry if I made things turn out worse then they were suppose to be

I'm deeply sorry if I hurt you

And I'm deeply sorry if my broken heart is making you feel blue

I just wanted to make you happy

So I'm deeply sorry if I made you feel crappy

Did you know you could hurt me without even touching me

Because if you're just sad it makes me feel the same way can't you see?

I'm deeply sorry if I've done anything wrong

I just get so lonely as my dreaded life goes on

I'm just here to please you

And to do anything you want me to do

I'm deeply sorry if I hurt you

Because hurting you makes me hurt too

 

What do you think? =)

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    wow, its nice!!x33 me likes

     

    Thank you -^-^-

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    It's very nice. Good job Zexion_Lover.

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    Cool. its alright. very well written sister.

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    It's very nice. Good job Zexion_Lover.

     

    i love it awsome job! :D

     

    Cool. its alright. very well written sister.

     

    Thank you guys :D

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    I love it sis :) I'm glad you took the time to write this :D
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    Don't worry Tangi. You're alright. =)

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    Hey Zexion's_lover _4,

    I like your poem so much. May be I should post some poems too...that poem of yours was just...WOW! thanks for posting it up there. That was absolutely wonderful.

     

    I'm a poetic girl as well. =D

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    lol for some reason this reminded me of one of Mickey's lines in re: coded:

    "When you get hurt, it hurts us too."

    I like it ;D

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    Great work ;)
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    lol for some reason this reminded me of one of Mickey's lines in re: coded:

    "When you get hurt, it hurts us too."

    I like it ;D

     

    Lol wow....that just dawned on me....Mickey really did say that didn't he? wow i need to play re coded in story mode more often than I had.
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    Thanks everyone. I'm going to be posting more soon. I also wrote a poem about Zexion :D I usually try to write a poem every night but sometimes it's hard to write a poem when I'm working on a new story of mine.

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    i know how that goes....hang in there...when it comes to you it'll be an epic success. believe me i have so many of them.

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