Snow 1,800 Posted November 7, 2011 Chapter 7 Sora defeated the cat, jumped back, and took deep, panting breaths. Sora looked at Neku's hand, but the mark didn't disappear. More giant cats sprung out of nowhere, lunging at Sora. "What...?" The cat he just defeated rose, yowled, and the shockwaves blew Sora back. "UGH! Damn!" said Sora, struggling to keep his feet in place. The shockwaves stopped, and then all the cats lunged at Sora. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ultimate Oblivion 52 Posted November 11, 2011 Chapter 7 Sora defeated the cat, jumped back, and took deep, panting breaths. Sora looked at Neku's hand, but the mark didn't disappear. More giant cats sprung out of nowhere, lunging at Sora. "What...?" The cat he just defeated rose, yowled, and the shockwaves blew Sora back. "UGH! Damn!" said Sora, struggling to keep his feet in place. The shockwaves stopped, and then all the cats lunged at Sora. ehh, that is not what i want to typehint:research the world ends with you Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Snow 1,800 Posted November 13, 2011 ehh, that is not what i want to type hint:research the world ends with you Well, I'm just typing that. Like, after you beat a boss, more appear, making it harder for the main character. Then, after it's done, Neku will wake up after Midnight or something and receive his mission. So either way, the cat's are going anyway. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ultimate Oblivion 52 Posted December 4, 2011 i will type next week, sorry for delay. Roxas1432, FOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWW TTTTTTTTHHHHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEE IIIIIIIDDDDDDDDDDEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sora's Baby 729 Posted December 4, 2011 i will type next week, sorry for delay. Roxas1432, FOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWW TTTTTTTTHHHHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEE IIIIIIIDDDDDDDDDDEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well, I'm just typing that. Like, after you beat a boss, more appear, making it harder for the main character. Then, after it's done, Neku will wake up after Midnight or something and receive his mission. So either way, the cat's are going anyway. Stop killing me ! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ultimate Oblivion 52 Posted December 5, 2011 Stop killing me ! NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRR 2 4Everbee and Sora's Baby reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted December 16, 2011 Cool story ^^ i think i love this!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kinode 3,056 Posted December 16, 2011 Nice story, horrible grammar Roxas, Same story, much better to read Thank you . Ultimate, you're writing is just too... vulgar. Unclear, informal, bad in general. : | If you want people to enjoy reading what YOU write, you should really start to write decently. It's just uncomfortable to read horribly written texts, and this isn't (Supposed to be) a little text, it's supposed to be a story. 1 Snow reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sora's Baby 729 Posted December 16, 2011 Nice story, horrible grammar Roxas, Same story, much better to read Thank you . Ultimate, you're writing is just too... vulgar. Unclear, informal, bad in general. : | If you want people to enjoy reading what YOU write, you should really start to write decently. It's just uncomfortable to read horribly written texts, and this isn't (Supposed to be) a little text, it's supposed to be a story. NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRR Then I died. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Snow 1,800 Posted December 18, 2011 i will type next week, sorry for delay. Roxas1432, FOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWW TTTTTTTTHHHHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEE IIIIIIIDDDDDDDDDDEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HHHEEEEEYYYIT CALLLEEEED IIIIIN STROOOOONGERRRR FRIEEENNDSS IT MAKES THE STORY MORE INTERESTING Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lu Xun 2,069 Posted December 18, 2011 Lol, you two working 'together' is fun. 1 SoraKH reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Snow 1,800 Posted December 18, 2011 Well, I'll compromise. If you have a random persom walk up to Sora, I'll make it seem like the giant cats in my interpretation are scared of that person. SO WRITE Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ultimate Oblivion 52 Posted December 19, 2011 sorry guys, i am gonna put this on cancel but u can read a fanfic i made in fanfiction.net. type author dudimon1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
4Everbee 1,365 Posted December 19, 2011 sorry guys, i am gonna put this on cancel but u can read a fanfic i made in fanfiction.net. type author dudimon1 NOOOO!!! CAN AT I LEAST TRY TO FINISH IT?!?!?! PIZZZZZ??/ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ultimate Oblivion 52 Posted December 19, 2011 NOOOO!!! CAN AT I LEAST TRY TO FINISH IT?!?!?! PIZZZZZ??/ fine, go kill yourself if u wanted to 1 4Everbee reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
4Everbee 1,365 Posted December 19, 2011 fine, go kill yourself if u wanted to ...OKAY XDXDXDXDXD..But Kingdom took my knife so.....Yea......I'll go buy one XDXD Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Snow 1,800 Posted December 19, 2011 fuuuu- Can I continue this on my own? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sora's Baby 729 Posted December 19, 2011 ...OKAY XDXDXDXDXD..But Kingdom took my knife so.....Yea......I'll go buy one XDXD What! 1 4Everbee reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ultimate Oblivion 52 Posted December 30, 2011 i am gonna start it all over again so wait for a few days Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Snow 1,800 Posted December 30, 2011 All over again? So imagine this story is a book-- you're going to stop halfway to start over? Then that confuses people. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted December 30, 2011 Hey Ultimate 2. Why are you gonna cancel this? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sora's Baby 729 Posted December 30, 2011 Dang starting over. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Snow 1,800 Posted December 30, 2011 Well, more grammar correction = unrequited fun. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ultimate Oblivion 52 Posted December 31, 2011 just a few rough changes Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ultimate Oblivion 52 Posted January 1, 2012 chapter 1 (again): a new journey Scene:destiny island Sora reads letter, think about it and then decided to continue his journey scene:mysterious tower "u will take mark by the mark of mastery"said yen sid "even without taking the test, i am still INVINSIBLE"said sora while wearing a cape "emm, sora, what is with the cape"said riku "because all heroes need a cape and i havent got one"said sora ..... "first, u must take this test."said yen sid riku and sora sat on a table when a pile of paper pop out of no where "do this 356846735678863346854534678958787339798485830 pages of essay to move on the next phase"said yen sid "NNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO"Screamed sora 592595 hours later "Finish"said the half dead sora "about time, i t took me 5 hours to finish it"siad riku "Now, time to go to sleep"said yen sid "huh"said riku and sora yen sid hit them both with a broomstick and they fell asleep Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites