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Chapter 7

Sora defeated the cat, jumped back, and took deep, panting breaths. Sora looked at Neku's hand, but the mark didn't disappear. More giant cats sprung out of nowhere, lunging at Sora. "What...?" The cat he just defeated rose, yowled, and the shockwaves blew Sora back. "UGH! Damn!" said Sora, struggling to keep his feet in place. The shockwaves stopped, and then all the cats lunged at Sora.

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Chapter 7

Sora defeated the cat, jumped back, and took deep, panting breaths. Sora looked at Neku's hand, but the mark didn't disappear. More giant cats sprung out of nowhere, lunging at Sora. "What...?" The cat he just defeated rose, yowled, and the shockwaves blew Sora back. "UGH! Damn!" said Sora, struggling to keep his feet in place. The shockwaves stopped, and then all the cats lunged at Sora.

 

ehh, that is not what i want to type

hint:research the world ends with you

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ehh, that is not what i want to type

hint:research the world ends with you

 

Well, I'm just typing that. Like, after you beat a boss, more appear, making it harder for the main character. Then, after it's done, Neku will wake up after Midnight or something and receive his mission. So either way, the cat's are going anyway.

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i will type next week, sorry for delay.

Roxas1432, FOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWW TTTTTTTTHHHHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEE IIIIIIIDDDDDDDDDDEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Well, I'm just typing that. Like, after you beat a boss, more appear, making it harder for the main character. Then, after it's done, Neku will wake up after Midnight or something and receive his mission. So either way, the cat's are going anyway.

 

Stop killing me !

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Nice story, horrible grammar

Roxas,

Same story, much better to read Thank you :D .

Ultimate, you're writing is just too... vulgar. Unclear, informal, bad in general.

: |

If you want people to enjoy reading what YOU write, you should really start to write decently. It's just uncomfortable to read horribly written texts, and this isn't (Supposed to be) a little text, it's supposed to be a story.

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Nice story, horrible grammar

Roxas,

Same story, much better to read Thank you :D .

Ultimate, you're writing is just too... vulgar. Unclear, informal, bad in general.

: |

If you want people to enjoy reading what YOU write, you should really start to write decently. It's just uncomfortable to read horribly written texts, and this isn't (Supposed to be) a little text, it's supposed to be a story.

 

NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRR

 

Then I died.

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i will type next week, sorry for delay.

Roxas1432, FOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWW TTTTTTTTHHHHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEE IIIIIIIDDDDDDDDDDEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

HHHEEEEEYYY

IT CALLLEEEED IIIIIN STROOOOONGERRRR FRIEEENNDSS

IT MAKES THE STORY MORE INTERESTING

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Well, I'll compromise.

If you have a random persom walk up to Sora, I'll make it seem like the giant cats in my interpretation are scared of that person.

SO WRITE

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chapter 1 (again): a new journey

Scene:destiny island

Sora reads letter, think about it and then decided to continue his journey

scene:mysterious tower

"u will take mark by the mark of mastery"said yen sid

"even without taking the test, i am still INVINSIBLE"said sora while wearing a cape

"emm, sora, what is with the cape"said riku

"because all heroes need a cape and i havent got one"said sora

.....

"first, u must take this test."said yen sid

riku and sora sat on a table when a pile of paper pop out of no where

"do this 356846735678863346854534678958787339798485830 pages of essay to move on the next phase"said yen sid

"NNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO"Screamed sora

592595 hours later

"Finish"said the half dead sora

"about time, i t took me 5 hours to finish it"siad riku

"Now, time to go to sleep"said yen sid

"huh"said riku and sora

yen sid hit them both with a broomstick and they fell asleep

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