Hello, i am creating my own version of kh3d.

here goes

 

Chapter 1

Mickey, donald goofy set a course to Destiny Islands.

"so sora, u made your mind up?"asked mickey

"i am sure." said sora

"lets go to where Yen Sid is. U 2 Riku." said Mickey

They flew to the mysterious tower and yen sid told them the situation.

" Sora, Riku, u have done well to repel darkness twice" said yen sid

"it's nothing" said sora while folding his hand backwards

"but, the real xehanort have came back." said yen sid

"HUH" everyone said except mickey and yen sid

"Why?" riku said

"Xehanort heart and body have been restored so his whole will be complete" said yen sid

"we gotta stop him now."said sora

"it will take some time for him to be back. but first, i shall hold the mark of mastery"said yen sid

"what is this mark of mastery?"said sora

"it's a tradition for keyblade bearers like u to become true masters"said yen sid

"even without taking the test, i will still pass"said sora

riku turn his head down and said"i once chose to walk the path of darkness making me think i am not suitable to wield the keyblade. this test is good enough"

"if u 2 get out of the dream, i shall call u masters"said yen sid

"huh?"everyone said

riku and sora passed out

 

long intro right. got inspiration from trailer. hope u like it

Chapter 7

Sora defeated the cat, jumped back, and took deep, panting breaths. Sora looked at Neku's hand, but the mark didn't disappear. More giant cats sprung out of nowhere, lunging at Sora. "What...?" The cat he just defeated rose, yowled, and the shockwaves blew Sora back. "UGH! Damn!" said Sora, struggling to keep his feet in place. The shockwaves stopped, and then all the cats lunged at Sora.

 

ehh, that is not what i want to type

hint:research the world ends with you

ehh, that is not what i want to type

hint:research the world ends with you

 

Well, I'm just typing that. Like, after you beat a boss, more appear, making it harder for the main character. Then, after it's done, Neku will wake up after Midnight or something and receive his mission. So either way, the cat's are going anyway.

i will type next week, sorry for delay.

Roxas1432, FOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWW TTTTTTTTHHHHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEE IIIIIIIDDDDDDDDDDEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i will type next week, sorry for delay.

Roxas1432, FOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWW TTTTTTTTHHHHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEE IIIIIIIDDDDDDDDDDEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Well, I'm just typing that. Like, after you beat a boss, more appear, making it harder for the main character. Then, after it's done, Neku will wake up after Midnight or something and receive his mission. So either way, the cat's are going anyway.

 

Stop killing me !

Stop killing me !

 

NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRR

Cool story ^^

i think i love this!!

Nice story, horrible grammar

Roxas,

Same story, much better to read Thank you .

Ultimate, you're writing is just too... vulgar. Unclear, informal, bad in general.

: |

If you want people to enjoy reading what YOU write, you should really start to write decently. It's just uncomfortable to read horribly written texts, and this isn't (Supposed to be) a little text, it's supposed to be a story.

Nice story, horrible grammar

Roxas,

Same story, much better to read Thank you .

Ultimate, you're writing is just too... vulgar. Unclear, informal, bad in general.

: |

If you want people to enjoy reading what YOU write, you should really start to write decently. It's just uncomfortable to read horribly written texts, and this isn't (Supposed to be) a little text, it's supposed to be a story.

 

NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRR

 

Then I died.

i will type next week, sorry for delay.

Roxas1432, FOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWW TTTTTTTTHHHHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEE IIIIIIIDDDDDDDDDDEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

HHHEEEEEYYY

IT CALLLEEEED IIIIIN STROOOOONGERRRR FRIEEENNDSS

IT MAKES THE STORY MORE INTERESTING

_{Lol, you two working 'together' is fun.}

Well, I'll compromise.

If you have a random persom walk up to Sora, I'll make it seem like the giant cats in my interpretation are scared of that person.

SO WRITE

sorry guys, i am gonna put this on cancel but u can read a fanfic i made in fanfiction.net. type author dudimon1

sorry guys, i am gonna put this on cancel but u can read a fanfic i made in fanfiction.net. type author dudimon1

 

NOOOO!!! CAN AT I LEAST TRY TO FINISH IT?!?!?! PIZZZZZ??/

NOOOO!!! CAN AT I LEAST TRY TO FINISH IT?!?!?! PIZZZZZ??/

 

fine, go kill yourself if u wanted to

fine, go kill yourself if u wanted to

 

...OKAY XDXDXDXDXD..But Kingdom took my knife so.....Yea......I'll go buy one XDXD

fuuuu-

Can I continue this on my own?

...OKAY XDXDXDXDXD..But Kingdom took my knife so.....Yea......I'll go buy one XDXD

 

What!

i am gonna start it all over again so wait for a few days

All over again?

So imagine this story is a book--

you're going to stop halfway to start over?

Then that confuses people.

Hey Ultimate 2. Why are you gonna cancel this?

Dang starting over.

Well, more grammar correction = unrequited fun.

just a few rough changes

chapter 1 (again): a new journey

Scene:destiny island

Sora reads letter, think about it and then decided to continue his journey

scene:mysterious tower

"u will take mark by the mark of mastery"said yen sid

"even without taking the test, i am still INVINSIBLE"said sora while wearing a cape

"emm, sora, what is with the cape"said riku

"because all heroes need a cape and i havent got one"said sora

.....

"first, u must take this test."said yen sid

riku and sora sat on a table when a pile of paper pop out of no where

"do this 356846735678863346854534678958787339798485830 pages of essay to move on the next phase"said yen sid

"NNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO"Screamed sora

592595 hours later

"Finish"said the half dead sora

"about time, i t took me 5 hours to finish it"siad riku

"Now, time to go to sleep"said yen sid

"huh"said riku and sora

yen sid hit them both with a broomstick and they fell asleep