Warning: This story is not totally mine, because I saw one very similar comic on the internet.

 

Chapters:

 

( 1 ) Black Feathers - Done

( 2 ) Sun Fall - Done

( 3 ) Runaway - Done

( 4 ) Friendly Stranger - Done

( 5 ) Where am I? - Done

( 6 ) Kid's Thinking - Done

( 7 ) Looking for an answer - Done

( 8 ) New Friend - Done

( 9 ) Unexpected Face - Off! - Done

( 10 ) Meeting Somone You Know? - Done

( 11 ) Snow - Done

( 12 ) Shopping - Done

( 13 ) Christmas Eve - Done

( 14 ) Presents! - To be posted at 25th December!

 

Introduction: “Well, they say that all worlds are connected by one big sky.” ( Riku in BbS )

 

I was thinking a lot about that sentence. So, does the world of that big sky exist? I made up one, from the help of one comic I found on the internet.

 

World of the big sky is similar to the Heaven where angels live, but only the white winged. The black winged live in the lanes between, because they’re angels of death. They follow people just before they die and bring their soul into emptiness, when white – winged ones have a far more different job. There are Star Keepers and Guardians.

 

Stars are very important, because they decide birth and live. Every person has a star of live. If the star has a circle, it means that he has brother or the sister. If its star is connected to another star, it means that it has a friend. Angels have stars as well and they are born directly from it. They have no parents, only Guardians, who take care of them.

 

The main job of Guardians is to take care of the young ones and teach them to use their powers, until they’re old enough to join the Up Side. Heaven haves Up and Down Side. On the Up Side are stars and living places of the Star Keepers. Down Side is the place for the young ones and their Guardians. The whole area is actually a training ground and young ones are not allowed to leave it until they learn to control their powers.

 

In our story we meet Aqua as the Guardian, who takes care of four young angels: Sora, Riku, Kairi and Ven. All except Riku are 4 years old (Riku is 5 years old). They are all a very good friends and Aqua is like a big sister for them. Their lives are peaceful, until two black – winged angels decide to use one of them for their goal: to get a control of the Up Side. Black winged angels cannot enter nor the Up or Down Side, because of the wall shield.

 

 

PS: Please tell me what you think and I'll post the first chapter.

Chapter Twelve: Shopping

 

After long story and delicious breakfast, Ienzo couldn’t say a thing. In one single morning he learned more than in entire year about angels. Ven was also amazed by himself. He was finally able to move his wings! But when he tried to fly with them, he made a total mess in the living room. Terra wasn’t exactly happy about it.

 

Terra: Alright. Tomorrow is Christmas Eve and we still don’t have a tree.

Ven: What tree?

Ienzo: A Christmas tree silly!

Ven: Ahhh… I remember that. We always made ornaments and put them on bright white Christmas tree.

Terra: And we’ll need to hurry if we want to get one.

Terra put on his coat as well as Ienzo and Ven did theirs. They all went to garage where Terra’s motorcycle was. Luckily motorcycle was big enough for all three of them. Both kids were at the front so Terra could keep them safe in his big arms.

Soon they arrived at Radiant’s Garden shopping mall. It wasn’t exactly big, but not too small. Terra headed towards the shop that sold Christmas trees. It was pretty crowded.

 

Terra: Eh… Ven, Ienzo?

Ven and Ienzo: Yeah?

Terra: Go buy the things you need for making ornaments.*gives them some munny* It’s ok if you don’t use the whole munny. If some of it remains you can go buy something for yourselves.

Ven: Why we can’t go buy that tree with you?

Terra: A lot of people are already in and I’m afraid that you two will get lost in that crowd. After I finish we will meet at this shop. *shows on candy shop* And be careful with you coat Ven. Try not to lose it.

Ven: It’s ok Terra, I’ll be fine.

Ienzo: Let’s go already!

 

Ven and Ienzo went to creative shop while Terra hardly managed to go in too crowded Christmas tree shop. Ven was very amazed by creative shop. Aqua always went shopping so that was his actually first time in a shop. Everything in it was decorated with red ribbons, fairy lights, green leafs and golden bells.

 

Ienzo: So what do we need for ornaments?

Ven: Hmmm… let’s see… Terra already has scissors and papers… so we need color pencils, color markers… maybe some strings…

 

Soon after, their hands were full of materials for ornaments. They brought them to cash register where blue haired boy stood.

 

???: Anything else?

Ven: No, that’s all what we’ll take.

???: That will be 400 munny.

 

Ienzo stared in books while Ven was paying. They didn’t use all the munny. The fact was that they didn’t spend much.

 

Ven: You going?

Ienzo: Just a sec, I wanna buy this book for my uncle. Aren’t you gonna buy something for Terra too?

Ven: Oh… right.

Ienzo: Take your time. I’m going to buy this.

 

Ienzo went to that blue haired boy again, buying a book. Boy sighed and looked at Ienzo and then on Ven who was curiously looking at shelves.

 

???: Are you and your friend alone? It’s pretty dangerous for little kids to be outside at that late hour.

Ienzo: Hey who do you calling little kids! Just look on yourself!

???: I’m working part time and I’m triple times older than you.

Ven: I’m gonna buy this… *sees boy and Ienzo in the middle of argue* Am I interrupting something?

??? and Ienzo: No.

 

Ven silently paid and looked on the boy.

 

Ven: You sure seem nice… Do you have a name?

???: It’s Isa.

Ienzo: What a girly name… *smiles*

Ven: I think it’s a nice name. Well, merry Christmas.

Isa: …

Ven: Ienzo let’s go. Terra will be worried.

Ienzo: Ok.

 

While kids were leaving, Isa looked at Ven with an interest.

 

Isa: None has ever… wished me Merry Christmas… that nicely before.

 

Terra was already waiting in front of candy shop holding Christmas tree and a bag.

 

Terra:*smiles* I also bough ingredients for cookies. We’ll bake them tomorrow.

Vena and Ienzo: Yay!

 

Unbelievably! His motorcycle was big enough for him, kids and entire Christmas tree. Way home was very bumpy, but fun too. When they came home, kids decided to do ornaments while Terra will set the Christmas tree and found fairy lights.

Ven disposed all materials on the table in living room while Ienzo drew some ideas on the paper. When they start doing them large silence was heard.

 

Ienzo: I think we should sing.

Ven: Sing? Why’s that?

Ienzo: Well, it’s Christmas and we’re suppose to sing Christmas songs. Come on let’s sing.

Ven: I really don’t know any of it…

 

Ven did know many Calm songs, but they were all angel - related and Ienzo would probably not understand them. But then an idea popped into his head.

 

Ven: Maybe TV knows any good songs!

 

He turned TV on right when cartoon was about to start. It seemed like Christmas – related cartoon.

 

( Imagine they're watching this on tv )

 

 

Ienzo: Come on let’s sing.

Ven: Ok… Jingle bells… jingle bells…

Ienzo: *sings loudly* Jingle all the way!

Ven: … what… fun… it’s… ride

Ienzo: In one horse open sleigh!

Ven: Wait, now it’s a different one.

Ienzo: Yeah, I know!*prepares and sings loudly* Deck the halls with boughs of holly!

Ven: Fa la la la la… la la la la...

Terra: *comes with a Christmas tree* Tis the season to be jolly.

Ven and Ienzo: Fa la la la la, la la la la

Terra: You two finished?

Ven: Almost, it’s…

Ienzo: Wait! Here’s the best one. *prepares for singing* We wish you a merry Christmas.

Ven: We wish you a merry Christmas.

Terra: We wish you merry Christmas.

All three: And happy New Year!

 

Characters kept singing until cartoon really started.

Terra: *smiles* See you two have a lot of fun.

Ienzo: Duh! I have never sung that loud before. My uncle would probably went crazy if he would saw me.*laughs* Saying something like that.* imitates Even* Aaaa! What happened with my intelligent genius??? He turned into a singing monkey!

 

Ven and Terra burst out laughing. But soon after Terra remembered that Even let Ienzo stay only till evening.

 

Terra: Ienzo? Do you want to sleep over here?

Ienzo: You kiddin’? Of course I want to! As long as Ven is here. *Ven smiles*

Terra: You go decorate tree while I make a phone call with Even.

Ven: Ok!

 

Terra went to the kitchen while kids went decorate the tree.

 

Even: Terra Glad time you called! Do you have any idea what time it is?!

Terra: 5pm, why?

Even: Don’t you do that why with me? Ienzo is still not home!

Terra : Even… Ienzo’s fine. He’s having the greatest time of his life!

Even: Oh yeah… what is he doing?

Terra: He’s decorating Christmas tree with Ven. He’s his best friend!

Even: Oh, best friend.

Terra: This reminded me why I called. Can Ienzo stay here for tonight? You know, fun, being with friend, Christmas…

Even: Fine, fine… I get it. Just be careful with him.

 

Even broke off before could Terra even wished him merry Christmas.

Terra: Jezz… what a grump.

 

When he returned in living room, kids almost finished. Only Christmas star was missing, but kids were too small to reach the top.

 

Terra:*smiles* Let me help you.

 

He took both of them in the lap and lifted them all the way to top. Ven and Ienzo held together the star and put it on top. It really looked shiny with all those sparkles on.

 

Ienzo: *cute eyes* Can I stay?

Terra: Sure, your uncle said yes.

Ienzo:*starts jumping* Whoopee!!!

Ven: Can we watch one movie that’s about to start?

Terra: Sure! Just go in bed at nine.

Ienzo: We will!

 

Terra left kids watching tv while he went to his study. He decided to work a bit, but he soon fell asleep on his desk.

It was very late when he finally woke up. He looked on the watch – 11pm! But it didn’t seem kids went to sleep. Tv was still on. Quietly he went to living room and… saw the cutest thing on earth.

Both Ven and Ienzo were sleeping, leaned at each other. They couldn’t stay up for the whole movie, so they soon fell asleep. Terra turned off the tv and covered them by a blanket with a smiled. Kids were only mumbling something in the sleep.

 

Terra: Guess I looked like that in the morning.*smiles* Sweet dreams you two.

 

While saying the last sentence, he ruffled Ven’s hair. Angel mumbled something back.

 

Ven: Aqua…

 

 

 

PS: Yeah I was on christmas shopping today and got a new idea for this story . Hope you like it! I also baked some cookies, too bad I can't give you a try... but I still wish everybody, my dear readers http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/smiley-cool.png , merry christmas and happy new year!

when i saw this in the creativity box, i clicked straight away and i was like yay! new chapter

Awesome Hawki!!! Merry Christmas to you too!

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Edited September 13, 20169 yr by PikminVentus

merry christmas!!!

it was nice chapter yet again!!!

MERRY CHRISTMAS

 

good story

oh and give me da COOKIES!!!!!!!!!!

hey when will u write the christma eve one ITS ALREADY CHRISTMAS EVE !!!!!!!

Sorry, cuz I couldn't updated it right on the Christmas evening. I was pretty busy, so I couldn't do it. But I hope it will still bring you some Christmas spirit!

 

Chapter Thirteen: Christmas Eve

 

Next morning, Ienzo, Ven and Terra began making cookies. Ven was in charge cuz it was the only one who knew how to do that.

 

Ienzo: What do I have to add?

Ven: Two eggs and a cup of milk.

Terra: Is this right?

Ven: No, you’re mixing it a little too fast.

 

Cookies were very hard to made, but after hours of making them they finally made dough. Ienzo and Ven started made shapes with cookie cutters, while Terra went phoning with Even again.

 

Terra: Even… do you really wanna work today?

Even: Why shouldn’t I?

Terra: For goodness sakes! Its Christmas Eve tonight and you would rather work then spend time with those you care about!

Even: Oh, right… I already talked with Aeleus and Dilan. We’ll have a small party at castle, so I wanted to ask you, if Ienzo can be at your place, since you had such a great time yesterday.

Terra: Ok, then we’ll see at Christmas morning.

 

For some reason Terra was happy. Ienzo could stay one more night here with Ven. Kids were also very happy when they found out about that. Happy atmosphere cheered them up so much that Terra forgot to take cookies from the oven. Cookies became black. But either way Ven tried one.

 

Ven: *eating cookie* Well… kinda good… even better.

Terra: Jeez, why I didn’t remember to take them out?

Ienzo: It’s ok, we still have some dough left.

 

And so they baked cookies the whole morning. In the middle of the day, kids decided to go out on snow while Terra was making lunch.

Hours passed when Ienzo finally showed up completely wet from another snowballing game.

 

Terra: Where’s Ven?

Ienzo: Oh, he just wanted to be alone in the snow for some time. *Ven comes* There you are!

Ven: Is it lunch already?

Terra: Yeah, just go change your clothes before you start or you’ll catch a cold.

 

Lunch seemed special today. Instead of usual noodles, there was fried chicken and potatoes along with salad.

After a delicious lunch, kids went play. Terra tidied kitchen and went into his study. He brought out a paper to write his thoughts down.

 

Terra’s Report 5:

 

It’s finally Christmas… I mean Calm day, like Ven called it. Everything seems so beautiful today. From Ven himself, Ienzo, snow… everything. Jeez, my emotions are breaking the limit!

Anyway, a day ago I was completely freak out by Ienzo who found out the truth about Ven. Well, I wasn’t that freak out, but I was still worried about him.

But I also think Ienzo deserves to know Ven’s story. He was stuck in that room for too long and he deserves a right friend. They look so cute when they’re together, just like kids suppose to be.

Thing that also rang my bells were Ven’s wings. He finally managed to move them even though he said that he can’t. When will snow melt I’ll take him out practicing his flying. Even though I don’t know how to fly, I’ll do my best to help him fly back home.

Today will be Christmas Eve… and I’ll be Santa Claus! Just kiddin! But I did prepare some little gifts for those two. Hope they like it.

Well that’s it for today. I’ll try to enjoy this evening as best as I can.

 

Terra rolled another paper and put it in box under the bed. It was already night.

Terra: *sighs* Man, time flies.

 

Ienzo and Ven were in living room watching Tv and drawing. It seemed like one cartoon was about to be finished.

 

Ienzo: Right on time! Just for the song!

Terra: Song?

Ven: They’re going to sing a Christmas song!

 

Terra looked at tv with an interest.

 

 

After that song everyone felt so happy, so they hugged each other wishing merry Christmas.

 

At the same moment somewhere else, one other family did the same thing. Roxas and Xion used “karaoke mode” and sang only beside music. They both sound very cute and after they finished, Axel and Aqua clapped with their hands. Kids smiled and watched another movie until they slowly fell in sleep.

 

Axel: Take them in their rooms. They can’t sleep on couch.

Aqua:*smiles* Ok.

 

Carrying Xion and Roxas in her arms, felt like home. Aqua sadly looked through the window thinking about Sora, Kairi and Riku who are waiting for her at home. And Ven that’s unknown where.

When she finally put kids in their beds and gently ruffled their hair, she took her Wayfinder device and whispered message for her wards and Eraquas.

 

I’m alright and don’t worry about me. I wish you merry Calm day and I didn’t forget about gifts. Sora, Riku, Kairi… I know you all miss me, but I really need to find Ven. My star is still with you, to keep you safe as well as will Eraquas. Just try to hold on until I return. And I promise that will be with Ven.

 

Your Guardian Aqua.

 

Somewhere in heaven, Eraques’s Wayfinder device rang.

 

Eraques: Wonder who could that be?

Nice job, Hawk! Your stories are just getting better and better.

its da 25 so POST DA STORY!!!

Nice ^^

I like this story so much...

now that christmas is over its time for new year

AWESOME!!! Really nice Hawki! Lovely song too That show was one of my favorites Anyway looking forward to the next chapters

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Edited September 13, 20169 yr by PikminVentus

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