So since in a few weeks it's Christmas I will be writing a story about Christmas and..You will see! Oh and could you plz answer the questions, I would love to hear your opinion. BTW the title sucks so could you help me find a better one?

 

 

 

-Prologue:-

 

Roxas: Hey Sora?! Are you ready? We are gonna be late for the competition" Roxas yelled to his twin brother Sora.

 

There was an ice skating competition held down the street between the hot chocolate stand and the christmas shop that would open every year on christmas. The prize was 1000 dollars! Enough for Sora and Roxas to buy the newest and the fastest ice skating shoes.

 

Sora: I'm getting ready! Wait a moment! I have to find my coat

 

Aqua: Here it is! Aqua said and showed Sora his coat.

 

Aqua was Roxa's and Sora's sister. She was in charge since their mother and father died in a terrible accident.

 

Sora: Thanks Aqua! You are a lifesaver!

Roxas: Are we going already?

Sora: Yes..Yes let's get going

Aqua: Good luck!

Roxas & Sora: We don't need it!

 

Aqua chuckled and closed the door that Sora and Roxas left opened. She was going to watch the competition from their balcony, because they didn't have money to get a seat. It was 50 dollars. Aqua was working as a cleaner at a school every day so she didn't earn enough money. Sora and Roxas entered the room where the competitors were getting ready.

 

Vanitas: Hahaha! Here come the LOSERS! Vanitas said. He was a rude boy from a rich family. His dad was working for the president and his mother was a judge. So he was bragging all the time. Roxas was ready to punch him in the face, when a man came in and announced the first couple.

 

Man: Sora and Roxas are first!

Vanitas: Good luck...Losers!

Roxas: Sora... we can do this!

Sora: Yeah!

 

They both smiled at each other and they entered the ice rink.

 

 

So,...What do you think? Plz leave a comment below!

wow,cool......they're like free world....

Awsome story, man!!!!!!!!! Can't wait to see Vanitas as a loser against Sora and roxas!!!

ur perfect ^^

Good start

 

Can't wait to read the rest!

Chapter 2

 

Roxas and Sora stood in front of the judges, A voice came from the speakers. " You have 1 minute.. Begin!" Sora quickly skated towards Roxas. He jumped over Sora and he landed without falling. The crowd started clapping and cheering. Then he regained his balance and he did a 360 degree turn in the air. Sora did the same thing. "Ten seconds left!" The voice said. Roxas jumped on Sora and Sora threw hi in the air. Roxas successfully did a back flip and that was the end of their turn. Next up was Vanitas. He was really good but the only difference was that he was training with the best coach in the country and the twins were training in their backyard. When all the competitors finished it was time for the judges to announce the winners of the first round.

 

Judge: There are currently 30 couples. Only 10 will pass to the next round of our competition. And the winners are,,,

 

Sora closed his eyes and held his brothers hand. Roxas shouted " No way, no way! We passed! We passed! Yeeeeah!!

Sora opened his eyes and started screaming! He hugged Roxas and they did their secret handshake. Aqua came in and gave them hot chocolate

 

Aqua: Congratulations! You have the TALENT!!

Roxas: I can't believe it...We passed!

Sora: Oh look...Vanitas passed too

Aqua: Don't be afraid of him. You are much better! Now lets go Terra and the girls are coming over for dinner to celebrate.

Sora: Oh yeah! I missed Kairi!

 

Terra was the brother of Kairi and Namine. Their parents went missing and he was in charge. Kairi was Sora's girlfrined. Namine was Kairi's sister. Roxas liked Namine but he was shy.

 

Sora: Oooo! We are gonna see Namine..

Roxas: Cut it out!

 

Thay both started laughing and ran toward their house on the top of the hill. Later that evening Sora whore his good clothes and he was waiting for Roxas to get dressed.

 

Sora: So...Why don't you tell Namine?

Roxas: Are you kidding? She is going to hate me.

 

A few minutes later they heard people talking. The guests had arrived. Sora went down the stairs and he said hello.

 

Sora: Come on! Follow me Roxas is upstairs too.

 

Roxas said hello. Kairi and Sora went out to the balcony and started talking.

 

Namine: So...How have you been?

Roxas: Um..i'm okay you?

Namine: I'm fine..Oh i have seen you ice skating! Dude you rock!

Roxas: You called my du- I mean..Wow thanks! What are your interests?

Namine: I like drawing!

 

Later that night Roxas had a nightmare. He saw his self pale on a bed. He woke up and he was sweating. He had a fever too. Aqua gave him a medicine and put him back to bed. Aqua thought "Please dont be what i think..Not to my brother..."

Thanks to everyone for the comments!

I LOVED, LOVE AND I WILL LOVE YOUR STORIES FOREVER!!!

"You called me a du-?"

 

Man, I nearly died laughing on this part!

"You called me a du-?"

 

Man, I nearly died laughing on this part!

 

Lol!

Great job I like how you made it like they were in the real world. very cool!!!!!!!

Great job I like how you made it like they were in the real world. very cool!!!!!!!

I especially like how you made Terra Kairi and Namine`s brother I NEVER EVER would of thought of that.

Thanks everyone for the good comments! Since english is my second language you could tell me some mistakes i did so the story could be better. Thanks!

Chapter 3

 

 

The other day Sora woke up. Next to him Roxas was still sleeping. He usually woke up first. Next to him Sora could see medicine. He got off bed and ran to Aqua that was coocking pancakes.

 

Aqua: Good morning Sora..Where is Roxas?

Sora: He is still sleeping..Why?

 

Aqua dropped the cooking spoon on the floor and ran to the boys room. She started shaking Roxas to wake up. But he didn't wake up. She quickly took Roxas in her hands and ran to the car.

 

Sora: Aqua what is happening? Where are you going?

Aqua: Get in the car, now!

 

Sora opened the door of the car and sat in. He put Roxas head on his knees and he tried to wake him up. After the fifth try he started crying and screaming to Roxas to wake up. Roxas face was pale like a fish.

 

Aqua: Shut up! I'm in a middle of a crisis i dont know what to do!

Sora: Dont shut me up!

 

When the car arrived at the hospital Aqua called a doctor. When the doctor so Roxas face he started screming for help.

 

Aqua: What are you doing? Arent you a doctor?

Doctor: I-I i'm an intern! Aaaaaaa help!

Aqua: Oh my god! Really?An intern?

 

Aqua picked up Roxas and ran in the hospital. She started screaming. A few doctors came and started running with Roxas in their hands. Sora in all this chaos started getting dizzy and fainted. A few hours later he woke up in a hospital room on a couch. Roxas was lying on the bed with a lot of machines pluged in him. Aqua was outside and she was talking to Terra and Kairi. Namine wasnt there

 

Sora: Aqua! What happened to Roxas

Aqua: Thank god! Sora you are okay! Well Roxas has a disease, i dont know what its called the doctor knows. We may have to stay here for a while

 

Sora ran into the room. He sat next to Roxas and watched him for a bit. Aqua suggested Sora to go out with Kairi. They wore their warm clothes and went out. They started walking

 

Sora: Where is Namine?

Kairi: Oh about that she w-

 

Kairi stopped because she heard a noise. She started running wth Sora towards the noice. They saw a person entering the..WALL?

 

Kairi: What was that about?

Sora: Um...lets go see!

Kari: What no! I'm not going in there

Sora: Trust me!

Kairi: Oh okay!

 

Kairi said and they both stepped in front of the wall

Poor Roxy... wonder what happends next...

wow<3

Chapter 4

Sora and Kairi stood in front of the wall.

Sora: Ready?

Kairi: As I will ever be!

 

Sora held Kairi’s hand and he touched the wall. The wall started shining and sparks started coming out of it. Sora’s body started disappearing … Kairi’s too! Sora closed his eyes because the wall was getting brighter than before. After a few seconds Sora opened his eyes and he found his self into a town. It was Christmas there too! Children were fixing snowmans, everyone was drinking hot chocolate for free and everything had 100% discount. Everyone was rich but most of all everyone was happy. The houses were very big and they had two or three floors! They ran into a huge mall and they started shopping. Kairi bought fairydust shampoo and snowflake cookies. Sora bought a cd of his favorite singer. While they were leaving to explore the town Sora saw an ice skating shop. He saw the ice skating shoes that Roxas always wanted. He entered the shop and asked for them.

Seller: Oh honey… These are very expensive shoes…

Sora: Oh…

Seller: Don’t freak out… there are 10 dollars!

Sora: What the… Okay I will buy them!

 

Sora took the shoes and he ran with Kairi to a station. There was a ride called “ Magic transferring”. They bought two tickets for a half dollar and they entered the ride. They sat into something like a flying carriage. It was called “ Carriage cabriole”. They ride started flying all over the city. It passed the big snow (clock), the Winterham palace and the snowfel tower.

Kairi: Look! The name of the city is “ Winterwonderland”! This is like a dream!

Sora: Heheh..So about Namine

Kairi: Oh yeah.. She went camping with her boyfriend at the woods

Sora: BOYFRIEND?!?! I mean *clears throat* good for her

They hugged and they continued their ride

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Meanwhile at the real world

Terra: Any news?

Aqua: Still waiting the doctor.. Poor Roxy..

Terra: He will be okay! Trust me!

Aqua: *chuckles* Say.. Where is Namine?

Terra: She went camping with her school

Aqua: Oh..Good for her…

 

 

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The carriage stopped in front of a big lonely street. It was called “Snowbell Street” They started walking when Sora saw something strange. A bank of wishes. They entered the building. It was full of fairies that were holding jars with bright things inside. They saw a teller. It was an elf.

Elf: Hi creature of the nature! May I help you? Would you like to deposit a wish?

Kairi: *whisper* Sora we better go! The police is heading over here!

Sora: *whisper* So?

Kairi: *whisper* If they find out we are not from here they are going to throw us in the dungeon. And I know that because of the royal rules. Her there are on the flyer

Sora: Sorry! Um I will have to come another time perhaps! I will come back

Elf: Okay! Until then… Save your wishes!

That night Sora was home alone. Aqua had trusted him to stay alone for a night because she had to stay in the hospital for Roxas. He couldn’t sleep! If he could grant a wish… What would it be. He thought determinate “ Tomorrow I will go back there and I will learn more things about the” Bank of Wishes”…

Hum hum...He should wish for Roxay-boo to get better!

You should have waited for me to come back

 

Kidding! But great story Keep it up!

yea great job( again ) i chuckled when the intern doctor fliped out, *laughs* ...good job.

Chapter 5

 

Roxas woke up from the sound of the rain. He looked at the clock on the wall. It was 2 o'clock in the morning. Aqua was sleeping on the couch. Roxas tried to stand up but he was very weak. Next to him there was a desk. On it there was a red box with a gold ribbon and a letter on it. Roxas opened the letter and started reading:

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Hey Roxy!

 

I'm sorry that i'm not here with you..

The doctor says is better for me to stay away from you for a while.

Anyway yesterday i went to an awesome place...

I can't say you more...You will have to see by your self

In this box you will find your christmas present

 

love you bro

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Roxas chuckled and took the box in his hands. He opened it and he saw a pair of shoes. They were ice skating shoes! They were red and they were the newest model.

 

Aqua: What do you have there? She said with a sleepy voice

Roxas: They are shoes! Sora bought them for me! They are awesome.

 

Aqua noticed that Roxas was better than before! She hugged him and called the doctor. Unfortunately he couldnt leave the hospital. He was still sick.

 

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Back to Sora when he woke up he wore his coat anh he ran to Kairis house.He rang the bell and Terra opened the door.

 

Sora: He Terra.. Is Kairi here?

Terra: Kairi is grounded. She lied and she has to take responsibility.

Sora: What lie?

Terra: Namine is missing in the woods! I'm going now to find her

 

Sora wanted to say the truth about the boyfriend thing but it was too late. Terra catched the train and went for the forest. Kairi climbed down the stairs and she started crying.

 

Kairi: It's all my fault! I hate me!

Sora: It's not your fault! I know how to find her!

 

Sora started at Kairi for two seconds and the both started running towards the "magic" wall. They entered the wall and they found their selfs into the same time they were yesterday. They psat the wall and ran to the magic ride, They bought two tickets and they hopped in the magic carriage and they started flying all over the town.

 

Sora: Are you ready?

Kairi: Yes!

 

Sora pulled a branch from a tree so the carriage couldnt move. Kairi took from her pocket the pouch with the fairydust and wished for a portal. A portal opened that led to the real world. Sora let go the branch and the carriage entered the portal. They found their self on a rooftop. The carriage started flying with full speed towards the forest. On their way they saw Vanitas flirting a girl. Kairi spit on him and Sora burst into laughing.

 

Kairi: Dont forget the cherry on the cake! She said and she threw on him hot chocolate. Vanitas started crying and swearing. When they arrived at the forest they saw Namine and her boyfriend shouting at eatchother. The boy jumped on Namine and wings appeared on his back. Namine had wings too! She started throwing rocks on him and he blocked them. Kairi and Sora were staring with the mouth open.

 

Kairi: This is my.. Sister?

Sora: This is your... Sister?

 

Sora landed on the floor and jumped on the boy. Namine jumped on the boy she bit him and kicked him down the hill. Sparks came out of her and she transformed back into a human.

 

The reaction of Sora:

 

 

Sora: You are... A monster?

Namine: Um.. I'm a Vampire with the wings of an Angel!

Kairi: How? What? Mama mia!

Namine: I was chasing this guy because he has a medicine that could do Roxas healthy and strong. But i lost it for good...

Sora: What does Roxas have anyway

Namine: Sora.... He is going to die...I'm sorry

 

Sora stared at Namie and then he started running to the hospital... This could not be.. Why Roxas? Why his brother?

OMG!!! That's so epic!!!

 

Namine - vampire with wings of an angel? cool !!!

 

No, Roxy i going to die!!! You better do something Sora!!!

OMG!!! That's so epic!!!

 

Namine - vampire with wings of an angel? cool !!!

 

No, Roxy i going to die!!! You better do something Sora!!!

 

just cast cure or something. woah Namine as a vampire?!?! did not see that coming. i am soo hooked. great job once again

Thanks guys for the nice comments and sorry for the delay.

 

Chapter 5

 

It started raining. Sora ran to his room and he started crying

 

Aqua: Sora! We are home!

 

Suddenly Sora's eyes became big. He wiped his tears and he quickly opened the door. He jumped down the stairs and he landed on the floor. He saw Roxas on a wheelchair. Sora felt his hear breaking into pieces.

 

Sora: Bro...? Why are you on that.. thing?

Aqua: He can't walk for a while. The doctor said that he has to relax and sleep for some time

Sora: Are you okay *hugs*

Roxas: *deep breath* Yeah *cough*

 

Aqua took Roxas to his room and she closed the door.

 

Sora: He just came home! Can i go with him

Aqua: Sora... Have a seat..

Sora: What happened?

Aqua: Roxas health is really bad. He is very weak... He may not make it *cries* The doctor did everything he could...

Sora: So it's true..

 

Sora could not beliebe it. He felt his heart stopping and he couldn't breath. He took Aquas hand and he started crying. Suddenly they heard a noise from the roof. They looked outside. It was raining hail and all the houses the houses were excluded from the hail and noone could come out. The

electricity was out. Aqua took the wood that she had in a cupboard and she opened fire. She told Roxas to lie near the fire. Roxas sat on the sofa and he slept.

 

Aqua: What are we going to do?

Sora: I have an idea.. There is this place... You do wishes and..

Aqua: Sora! I'm really tired so i dont neec you to tell me fairy tales

Sora: But it's true! I went with Kairi! We can wish for Roxas to become better! I promise! I'm not lying

Aqua: Sora grow up! He is dying! You hear me

 

While Sora and Aqua were fighting a boy with blonde hair on the couch heared all their conversation...A tear fell from his eyes

just cast cure or something. woah Namine as a vampire?!?! did not see that coming. i am soo hooked. great job once again

 

OMG!!! That's so epic!!!

 

Namine - vampire with wings of an angel? cool !!!

 

No, Roxy i going to die!!! You better do something Sora!!!

 

Thanks guys! I love it when someone likes my stories

It's so sad.... :'(

 

Hope, Roxy will be ok.

 

But, anyway is a good story!