SoraKH 793 Posted December 31, 2011 no , i mean that i don`t like the situation that they`re in with Vanitas in the hidden city thing. Ohhhh. Yeah it will turn out bad 1 moogleman reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
moogleman 66 Posted December 31, 2011 Ohhhh. Yeah it will turn out badLOL 1 SoraKH reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted December 31, 2011 Coooooool!!!! Venny appeared!!!! Love this story so much!!! Thanks Hawki Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MiontheDemon 71 Posted December 31, 2011 When's the next chapter gonna be up? 1 SoraKH reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted January 1, 2012 When's the next chapter gonna be up? Soon ^^ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted January 1, 2012 Chapter 12 The competition was in 2 days. Sora and Roxas had to train more than ever. Sora was still worried about Vanitas and his discovery of the town. Roxas: I’m going to the ice rink. Coming? Sora: Yeah… Just go, I’ll come in a while. When Roxas left a few minutes after Sora took his skating shoes and exited the house. He started going towards the ice rink of the magical world when he met Ven and Riku. Sora: Hey guys! What’s up? Ven: Hey Sora! We were coming to you! Riku: Yeah… Ven and I are wondering if we can hang out Sora: Awww.. I’m sorry.. I have to train with Roxas for the upcoming competition Ven: So want to skate together? Sora: Shure! Let’s go to your town Riku & Ven: Ok While Sora, Ven and Riku were heading towards the magic town Sora decided to learn more about it. Sora: So… Is your town…Well I don’t know how to say it… Ven: Well our town is here for a while… In two days our town is going to vanish… We are going to vanish too… Sora: That stinks! Riku: Well… If we are out of the town when its going to vanish… We can say here! Sora: What about your parents? Ven: Oh… Well we don’t actually have parents… We Riku: We are orphans… Silence took hold. No one was talking… When they arrived at the magic town Sora saw Roxas skating. Sora: Roxas! Roxas! Roxas: Hey! Who are these? Sora: This is Ven and this is Riku Ven and Roxas were staring for a while… Roxas: We are the same! Ven: My hair is better Roxas: We have the same humor too! Ven: *smiles* After some time the four boys became best friends. They drank hot chocolate, they checked out the mall, they had the magic ride and other fun things. Ven and Riku helped Sora and Roxas to train. Roxas: Hey Riku! So… how about that Vanitas? Did he cause any trouble? Riku: No.. But he comes here every night… Sora: I hope he doesn’t finds out about the bank of wishes… Vanitas: Bank Of Wishes? Sounds… Awesome Sora: Shoot! Vanitas! Don’t do this Vanitas: You used it! Sora: I used it for a good reason! Roxas was going to DIE! Roxas looked at Sora. A tear fell from his cheek… Sora: Roxas…. Roxas: Just leave me alone He said and left the ice rink 1 moogleman reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hunter Hawk 392 Posted January 1, 2012 Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, Vanitas you better leave Christmas town or I'll personaly come in this story and knock you out of this town, so you'll land on your evil ass!!!! 2 SoraKH and moogleman reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sora's Baby 729 Posted January 1, 2012 *tear* Poor Roxas. 1 SoraKH reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted January 1, 2012 Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, Vanitas you better leave Christmas town or I'll personaly come in this story and knock you out of this town, so you'll land on your evil ass!!!! Ahahahahahhahahah!! Aww hawki!!! :P Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
moogleman 66 Posted January 4, 2012 lol great job!!!! wow i would never thought of how Roxas and Ven would react to seeing each other. 1 SoraKH reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
moogleman 66 Posted January 4, 2012 Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, Vanitas you better leave Christmas town or I'll personaly come in this story and knock you out of this town, so you'll land on your evil ass!!!! lol i will help you do so!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted January 5, 2012 lol great job!!!! wow i would never thought of how Roxas and Ven would react to seeing each other. 1 moogleman reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted January 16, 2012 Chapter 13 Roxas was sitting on a bench in snowbell road Sora: Roxas? Roxas: Leave me alone... Ven: He didn't want to hurt you.. Sora: Look if we don't team up together we wont get to show Vanitas- Roxas: *silence* Lets do this! Sora: *smiles* Listen the competition is going to start tomorrow... It was in two days but they canceled the date and its tomorrow! We gotta train hard! Sora and Roxas didn’t stop training all day. They trained really hard and managed to do some really tough moves like spinning moves or jumping moves. After some time Kairi and Namine arrived at the ice rink and saw The boys. They met Riku and Ven and they all started skating together. At the afternoon they all sat on the roof of a house that was getting build and together they drank hot chocolate and watched the sunset... They were talking about memories they all had together. Sora: So… Riku, Ven? You said that your town will vanish… Why? Riku: Oh! Yeah! We have to do that. It’s part of the rules. If someone wants to … Live has to sign up a form and will leave tomorrow at ten o’clock the night… Sora: So you’ll come to our contest? And you can live with us! Ven: Hehehe! That’s a good idea! Roxas: Hey Ven! Let’s go do some pranks! We can use our look and trick them! Ven: Sounds awesome!! Riku: So… Sora.. Is Kairi…? Sora: Riku *pushes friendly* Heheh. Anyway have to train! See ya tomorrow guys! Sora and Roxas went at the ice rink and trained while telling jokes to each other. Roxas preformed a spinning move while Sora a jumping move. Sora: Roxas… Roxas: Yeah? Sora: We.. We can do this… Roxas: I know that.. Everything was going to end tomorrow. They were going to face Vanitas and Their hard work will pay out. Will they win? Is Vanitas going to become good? Are they all going to live Happily Ever after? Find out at the next and final chapter of There is always hope!!! 1 moogleman reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
moogleman 66 Posted January 16, 2012 OMIGOSHTHISISSOEXCITINGCAN`TWAITFORTHENEXTCHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh yeah, first post! 1 SoraKH reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hunter Hawk 392 Posted January 16, 2012 Awsome!!! This story rocks!!! Can't wait to see Vani tricked by Venny and Roxy. 1 SoraKH reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted January 20, 2012 There Is Always Hope Final Chapter Part 1/3 Sora woke up from a noise that was coming from the kitchen. It was lunchtime. He stood up and walked in the kitchen. He saw Roxas and Aqua making breakfast for lunch. He smiled and went to help them too. Memories flashed in his head as he remembered when he was little and he was coocking with his parents pan cakes. “Good times” he thought. Then he looked at the calendar. He saw with big red letter on the 2nd. “Skating Contest”. Then he pulled Roxas and pointed at the calendar. Sora: It’s the day!! Roxas: Yeah *smiles* we have to hurry the contest starts at night but we have to go there from morning. They both ate the Pan cakes Aqua made. Roxas: I love them Aqua! Aqua: *smiles* God luck! Roxas took a bag. He placed inside the things that they needed and he ran with Sora out of the house to the ice rink. There was a man holding a piece of paper and shouting names. Man: Sora&Roxas! Sora: Here! Roxas left his bag next to a bench and he sat there where all the other contesters were. Soon they saw Riku and Ven entering the ice rink. Ven: Hey Guys! Riku: We just packed. We left “The magical town” as you call it. Roxas: Aww.. That a shame… I would give anything to see it one more time! Ven: Well…We have some time. The town vanishes at 8 o’clock we have 5 hours! Sora: Great! Let’s go! They bought hot chocolate and went to the magical town. They sat on a bench and started drinking. They said jokes, stories and memories. Sora noticed a figure walking down the road. It was Vanitas!!! Sora pulled Roxas and pointed at him. He was going down snowbell road. Ven: This is bad! Riku: He is heading towards the bank of wishes! Sora: We have to follow him! Vanitas reached the end of the road and entered the bank of wishes. He saw an elve and started talking. Vanitas: I want to deposit a wish. I will win the skating competition that will happen this night at eight. Elve: Wish accepted Sora: That’s Cheating! Roxas: No cool man! Vanitas: Oh and one more wish. I wish a cage locks those two in here! Sparks came out of the floor and a cage locked Sora and Roxas in a cage. There wasn’t even keyhole. There wasn’t a way getting out of that thing. Sora: Vanitas!!! Get us out of here Vanitas: Last and final wish… I will be the best and everyone will know me as Vanitas. They boy who tried to save Sora and Roxa but it was two late! Oh and forbid the other two to enter this town and help Sora and Roxas! Ven and Riku disappeared and went back to the other town. They couldn’t enter it because a force wouldn’t let them. Vanitas left. It was 6 o’clock. The sky was dark and cloudy and it was windy. Sora and Roxas were alone in the bank without anyone. Even a fairy or an elve. The town would be destroyed in two hours… Is Vanitas going to win? Find out at the last Part! 1 moogleman reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
moogleman 66 Posted January 21, 2012 WHAT THE HECK!??!!?!?!?!?!? Vanitas you JERK!!!!!!!! WAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted January 21, 2012 There is Always Hope Final Chapter Part 2/3 http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=8gYULbtfBrs Sora sat on the floor. He felt tired…. All of this work for nothing… he and his brother were going to die in a few minutes… Memories flashed in his head. He remembered when he and Roxas saw for the first time snow. It was white and beautiful. Or that terrible accident. Their parents died becase they tried to save them. Roxas was looking outside. The weather was getting worse. I was Dark and it was raining. Houses, benches and shops started vanishing. Roxas looked at Sora. They were both ready to cry Roxas: I’m scared… Sora: Me too… Roxas: You ever wondered why Vanitas is like this? Sora*wipes tear* *sniff* Why? Roxas: He has no love… Unlike like us… We have friends and Aqua Sora: He has his father... Roxas: Its not the same… Silence took hold they could hear water dripping from the rain. The bank was empty. No fairies no elves.. Sora: I love you bro… Roxas: *smiles* Me too! They both hugged. For some time they were just hugging and crying. They were scared. They were going to die in a while. When they stopped hugging they lied on the floor and looked on the roof. There was a window and outside the stars. It was beautiful. The stars where brightly shining. Some were fading away. When all the stars vanish the world will vanish. Sora: I wonder what Aqua will think about this… Roxas: She I going to panic and start yelling at strangers *chuckles* Sora: Heheheheh…. Roxas: So… Its over Sora looked around. He remembered the first time he arrived here. He looked around and remembered the elves, the fairies… Then he remembered one special fairy… “Hi! I'm Fona! Take this! It's pixie dust! It will come to you handy” Sora suddenly felt a pain in his chest. A happy pain… He put his hand in his pocket.. It was there! They pixie dust was there!! http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=ahUyvcAdSmU&feature=related Sora: Its here!! The pixie dust is here!!! Roxas: Huh? Sora took the pouch and took some pixie dust. He threw it on the cage and it started flying. Then the cage started heading outside the bank. They still had hope.. A chance Sora: How much time left? Roxas: Its 7:55! We have 5 minutes… Sora: We can do this. The cage was the first vechile Sora ever drove. It could hear your commands and turn left, right or go front. The rain threw some trees on the ground. Sora: Go up! The cage flew up and continued. This reminded Sora like the games that you had to avoid the obstacles. It was easy but you had to give a lot of attention. “Go left and then right”. Suddenly a thunder stroke the cage. It opened and landed on the floor. Sora: Oh no! Anyway lets go!! Roxas: 3 MINUTES! WE WONT MAKE IT! Sora: Trust me! There is always hope in everything! You got saved from a serious disease, Aqua got a good job, We met Riku and Ven and they became our best friends…. We can’t put it down now! Roxas: Okay! The rain was getting stronger… The sky was getting even darker… The houses were vanishing, trees were felling on the ground. Snowbell road started vanished and a big hole took place. Roxas and Sora were still running. They couldn’t feel their feet. It was freezing, Suddenly Sora slipped and fell on the floor. The road behind them started vaniushing and a big hole opened. Sora was being sucked by it. Inside the hole deep down there was lava. Roxas looked around. He noticed that the ground was floating above Lava! (Imagine the place where Riku and Zexion were fighting in Re:com but bigger and above Lava) Sora: Roxas!!! Roxas: Hold on! Roxas fell on the ground and pulled Sora. He managed to help him stand up and they both started running. The jumped over some ruins. Suddenly the ground leaned right. Sora and Roxas fell on the ground and started sliding, but Roxas managed to hol on a rock same as Sora. When the ground leaned like befor they continued running. Roxas: Sora!! Look! I can see the magic wall Sora: Great! Roxas: Oh no! 60 seconds left! The wall had on it a portal. Inside the portal Sora and Roxas saw Riku and Ven shouting at them. Sora and Roxas now where running as fast as they could. Roxas: 40 seconds! Sora: We can do this! When they arrived at the wall Roxas stepped inside the portal first. Riku and Ven were there. When it was Sora’s turn he felt something sucking him. Sora: Help Guys!! Riku: Nooooooo Sora!!!!! Without a second thought Roxas jumped inside the portal just as it disappeared. 2 Nikolasvanitas and moogleman reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sora's Baby 729 Posted January 24, 2012 Sora, you bad person. 1 SoraKH reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
moogleman 66 Posted January 25, 2012 WHAT!?!?!? THIS IS CRAZY ( nice touch with the music ). WHAT HAPPEND?!?!? DID SORA DIE!? WHAT HAPPEND!?!?!?!?! AHHHHAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great job! SO favoriting this !!! 1 SoraKH reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted January 29, 2012 Sora, you bad person. Ahahaha Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted January 29, 2012 WHAT!?!?!? THIS IS CRAZY ( nice touch with the music ). WHAT HAPPEND?!?!? DID SORA DIE!? WHAT HAPPEND!?!?!?!?! AHHHHAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great job! SO favoriting this !!! Awww thanks you sooooo much!!! ^^ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hunter Hawk 392 Posted January 29, 2012 That was some epic moment dude... can't wait to see what happends next. Hope Sora and Roxas will survive Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sora's Baby 729 Posted January 29, 2012 Ahahaha You are mean, to Sora. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted January 29, 2012 You are mean, to Sora. Thanks! http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/happy.png Final chapter is up! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
