So since in a few weeks it's Christmas I will be writing a story about Christmas and..You will see! Oh and could you plz answer the questions, I would love to hear your opinion. BTW the title sucks so could you help me find a better one?

 

 

 

-Prologue:-

 

Roxas: Hey Sora?! Are you ready? We are gonna be late for the competition" Roxas yelled to his twin brother Sora.

 

There was an ice skating competition held down the street between the hot chocolate stand and the christmas shop that would open every year on christmas. The prize was 1000 dollars! Enough for Sora and Roxas to buy the newest and the fastest ice skating shoes.

 

Sora: I'm getting ready! Wait a moment! I have to find my coat

 

Aqua: Here it is! Aqua said and showed Sora his coat.

 

Aqua was Roxa's and Sora's sister. She was in charge since their mother and father died in a terrible accident.

 

Sora: Thanks Aqua! You are a lifesaver!

Roxas: Are we going already?

Sora: Yes..Yes let's get going

Aqua: Good luck!

Roxas & Sora: We don't need it!

 

Aqua chuckled and closed the door that Sora and Roxas left opened. She was going to watch the competition from their balcony, because they didn't have money to get a seat. It was 50 dollars. Aqua was working as a cleaner at a school every day so she didn't earn enough money. Sora and Roxas entered the room where the competitors were getting ready.

 

Vanitas: Hahaha! Here come the LOSERS! Vanitas said. He was a rude boy from a rich family. His dad was working for the president and his mother was a judge. So he was bragging all the time. Roxas was ready to punch him in the face, when a man came in and announced the first couple.

 

Man: Sora and Roxas are first!

Vanitas: Good luck...Losers!

Roxas: Sora... we can do this!

Sora: Yeah!

 

They both smiled at each other and they entered the ice rink.

 

 

So,...What do you think? Plz leave a comment below!

Chapter 9

 

While Aqua was talking at the phone Sora and friends were buying hot chocolate. Aqua closed the phone and a tear fell from her eyes.

 

Aqua: He..he fired me....

Sora: What?!?! Why??

Roxas: What did you do?!?!

Aqua: Nothing... And everything was going so well....

 

Namine had an idea. She started running towards the center of the town. The others followed her too. She stopped outside the shop "moogle".

 

Namine: I knew it!

Sora: What?

 

Namine pointed to a boy with black hair and yellow eyes that was in the shop. It was Vanitas!

 

Namine: You! You fired Aqua!!

Vanitas: Well... My daddy bought this shop because these morons won't fire her so... My daddy fire her.. No outside you are making me sick.

 

Sora had enough. He grabbed a chair ands threw it on Vanitas. Then he picked some food that was on the table and threw it on Vanitas face. He was ready to hurt him when Roxas stopped him.

 

Roxas: It's no use!

Vanitas: You _____ moron! I hate you!! Get out of here now!

 

Aqua pulled Sora from the hand and they all went outside. For a minute they stared at eachother. Then they burst laughing and fell on the floor. They were laughing really hard.

 

Aqua: Let's go *smile*

Sora: How can you say such a ting.. You lost your job

Aqua: Well there are a lot of jobs.. I will find another one

Everyone: Yeah! *smile*

Aqua: I love you guys..

Nice! Glad you updated! Still such a nice story

I like how you cuss.

Nice! Glad you updated! Still such a nice story

 

Thanks bro

I like how you cuss.

 

Lol Thx

Thanks bro

 

No problem! Keep it up!

Lol Thx

 

Your welcome.

Vanitas SO deserved more than that.

I like how you cuss.

what the cuss? LOL.

what the cuss? LOL.

 

Bad words.

Chapter 10

 

It was a peacful and quiet morning

 

Roxas: Sora! Sora! Wake up! Come on! WAKE UP!!

Sora: What?!

Roxas: It's Christmas!!!

Sora: Really?

 

Sora stood up and looked at the calendar. It was Christmas! He took a pencil and wrote a message

 

Sora: Has Aqua woke up?

Roxas: Not yet...

Sora: So we have time! Come on!

Roxas: What? Were?

Sora: Follow me

 

They both wore their coats and ran outside. Sora ran to the center of town. He looked around and ran to an alley.

 

Roxas: Where are we going

Sora: Just follow me

Roxas: Why?!?

 

Sora stopped running in front of a tall building.

 

Roxas: Ooooh. Thats why...

 

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Aqua woke up and ran to the boys room. She opened their door but they weren't there, but she saw a message on their beds.

 

Meet you at the moogle

 

Aqua was suprised. What would the boys be to the Moogle. She wore her clothes and drove to the moogle. She parked the car in front of the shop and went inside. All the light were closed so she opened them. Suddenly she saw a poster on the wall saying "Welcome Back". There she saw all the staff of the shop her boss Terra,Namine,Kairi,Sora and Roxas.

 

Aqua: What happened?

Sora: You are hired back!

Aqua: But... How?!?

Roxas: Let me explain.. I love when i explain things because it shows that i know every single detail and i like showing that i know every single detail because i like being smart!!

 

*silence*

 

Roxas: Anywhay! Well Vanitas sold the shop back to its owner so.. You are hired!

Aqua: That mean.. No bye bye tree?

Terra: That's right

Aqua: Awww! Come on guys! Group hug.

 

They all went and hugged and shout "Merry Christmas"... Then everyone went to Sora's and Roxas's house and had hot chocolate with cookies. They opened their presents and wished merry christmas.

 

Terra: And let's wish good luck to Sora and Roxas for the Ice skating Championchip.

Sora: That reminds me.. We have to try the aditions for the scholarship for Nicholas Skate! I heard that from now on anly with a scholarship you can enter his class

Kairi: I heard that Vanitas tried for the scholarship but Nicholas didn't like him. So he bought him! So.. bye bye auditions.

Roxas: Really? What a jerk

Sora: Well lets hope we win the championchip.

Namine: Yeah!

 

They all hugged and had a wonderful christmas day.

Where's Ventus and Riku at?

Nice! Once again, another good chapter!!

Where's Ventus and Riku at?

 

I didnt think of adding them

Nice! Once again, another good chapter!!

 

Thanks

Thanks

yeah did you name the shop "moogle" after me???

yeah did you name the shop "moogle" after me???

 

Lol maybe...

Chapter 11

 

Aqua: Sora! Roxas! I have to go. See you later.

Aqua shouted and left the house.

Roxas: So what can we do? Roxas ask and got off his bed

Sora: Well… The contest is in a few days! We have to go and practice everything

Roxas: Ok.

 

Sora and Roxas wore their clothes and left the house.

 

Roxas: Hey Sora! Remember that magical town?

Sora: Yeah! Wanna go again?

Roxas: Sure!

 

When they arrived at the hidden town they started skating on the first ice rink they found.

 

Sora: Shoot! I forgot to bring my skating shoes.

Roxas: I told you so!

Sora: Start training be right back…

 

Sora started heading toward his house when he saw Vanitas with Eraqus Skate on the ice training. Eraqus skate was Nicholas brother. Sora got a bit confused because Vanitas was supposed to train with Nicholas. A few seconds ago Nicholas approached in the ice rink. Then Sora knew that Vanitas had two coaches! When Sora went home he took his shoes and head back to the magical town. When he arrived there he accidently slipped and fell on two other boys.

???: Wow! Are you okay?

Sora: Ya fine! Sorry. Hi! I’m Sora.

???: I’m Riku and this is Ven

Ven: Nice to meet you!

Riku: You are not from here. Right?

Sora: Don’t tell anyone

Ven: It’s okay! We won’t tell anyone. But be careful. If someone finds out you get to Jail.

Riku: So what brings you here?

Sora: I’m training with my brother for a competition. There he-

Vanitas: Ah! Sora! Wow nice town! Beautiful! Nice discovery thanks.

Riku: Who is that Jerk?

Sora: You just have to know he is a total jerk. Nothing else.

Ven: Riku we have to go!

Riku: Yeah! We’ll see you around?

Sora: Sure!

 

Sora didn’t have a good feeling about Vanitas discovering the hidden town… He had a bad feeling. He knew that something bad was going to happen.

DUN DUN DUNNN first comment.

yes we finally have Riku and Ven!!! hmmm i don`t like where this is going...

I love this story more and more.

yes we finally have Riku and Ven!!! hmmm i don`t like where this is going...

 

You mean you dont like the story?

I love this story more and more.

 

Hahahaha thanks!

Coooooool!!!! Venny appeared!!!! Love this story so much!!!

You mean you dont like the story? Hahahaha thanks!

no , i mean that i don`t like the situation that they`re in with Vanitas in the hidden city thing.

no , i mean that i don`t like the situation that they`re in with Vanitas in the hidden city thing.

 

Ohhhh. Yeah it will turn out bad