Sora96 17,256 Posted January 2, 2010 Twilight's Dawn Chaper 1 Oblivion The looming sky was dark and filled with many clouds scattered about; it lit up the shades of blue and black with lightening which was pounded by thunder almost every minuet. It way always there, yet no soul turned an eye to it, they seemed to prefer it Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SavageNymph 7 Posted January 3, 2010 5 stars LOL Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deadshot 666 Posted January 3, 2010 cool story good job sora Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xRayne93 10 Posted January 3, 2010 very, very good Sora-kun~ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Cricket 1,180 Posted January 3, 2010 I hope you are finished with chapter 2 soon! I am interested to read more and the writing is great. The description is really nice too. I cannot wait to see how Roxas carries on in your fic. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sorage55 10 Posted January 10, 2010 This is an interesting story indeed, please continue for anticipation is rising within me as such a fighter in the ring, waiting for his next blow...his final blow... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sora96 17,256 Posted January 21, 2010 Okay, guys this is where I have to post all the chapters from now on. Please keep reading sorry chapter 2 still hasn't been edited yet. I haven't had contact with my editor for awhile. Edit: chapters 3 and 4 will be up today. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
HelpMeRan-Sama 141 Posted January 21, 2010 This is good!!! I like it!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sora96 17,256 Posted January 24, 2010 Thanks guys it means a lot. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
