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Lu Xun's stories : Time is the Key

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Time is the Key

 

Prologue

 

Year 1000

 

The once beautiful, calm world we’ve all seen no longer exists. It’s turned into a sad, lonely, scary place. Most of the human race has been killed, and the few that still remain -- well, let’s say they are in pain, suffering because they know they’re doomed to live their last days alone, in a place that might be even worse than the Hell.

But this was not entirely done by Humanity itself; on the contrary; most if was done by spiritual forces, which come from a place called Erugok. That place is more commonly known as the realm of the dead. It’s always existed, but it’s been in harmony with the realm of the living ones. However, somehow, they were connected, and the invasion of the bad spirits started. Everything changed, and slowly, humanity started losing their planet.

 

In these hard times, even hope was almost forgotten by people. It would be just a matter of months, or days until these two worlds fused, and turned into only one realm. Before that could happen, the bad spirits were trying to kill all the living people, in order to have absolute control of the world, once both of them turned into a unique world.

 

 

Humanity, however, would not surrender easily. It’s not in the nature of men to give up, at least not without trying everything they can. Be it clean, or even dirty tactics, but something they surely will try. The bad spirits were able to kill the living people by making them forget every good emotion, and let them only with hatred, until the point where the people could not even think by themselves.

 

There was only one solution, to at least try to save the world -- make some device capable of returning to the past, and avoid the connection between the two realms. But that was not an easy task. It took many, many years for Humanity to be able to do something capable of that. Even though it was hard, it was not impossible. And once again, humanity showed that they do not give up when light seems out of reach.

 

Only two people were able to return to the past, and each of them would arrive in different points of it. Taylor Hinot, a really strong man, capable of surviving in the most scariest conditions of life, was the first chosen one to carry on the mission that could bring hope to Humanity once again. Stella Renford, one of the smartest women this world has ever seen, capable of finding a solution to any problem that could appear, and she also had the ability to develop powerful weapons.

 

It was not sure in which year of the past they would arrive, but nonetheless, they were courageous enough to give their lives to bring a new chance to Humanity, a new chance to the world.

 

So, in the middle of that chaotic world, both of them entered in that device, and disappeared seconds after doing so. Their paths were now decided, and their destiny would be directly connected to the entire human race from now on. The hope of a brighter, happier future was now hanging in their hands.

 

Succeeding in this mission meant saving everything from destruction. Such a responsibility could not be taken lightly, they needed to know what they were going to do. Think before acting, because technically, if they did anything wrong, they could also make the future worse, and maybe, annihilate the human race before the fusion of the two realms.

 

Their mission was not hard to describe; find out what caused the connection of both realms, stop it, and prevent it from ever happening again. However, it was only easily described, because it would surely be one of the hardest task a person ever hard to take.

 

As each of them opened their eyes in a new reality -- in an era where this world was a nice, inoffensive place -- their journeys started. And no one could say if they would succeed, or fail -- only time would tell.

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Why are you awesome at writing and I suck at it?

Nice intro bro. :D

great so far so good :)

Good start. I'm just going to help you pick out the grammatical errors.

 

It’s always existed, but it’s been in harmony with the realm of the living ones.

Switched to present tense. "It had always existed, but had been...."

 

bad spirits

Perhaps a more sinister choice of word than "bad". Its up to you.

 

It’s not in the nature of men to give up, at least not without trying everything they can. Be it clean, or even dirty tactics, but something they surely will try.

Switched to present tense again.

 

...and let them only with hatred...

Don't get what you are saying there.

 

the most scariest conditions of life

"the scariest conditions"

 

Stella Renford, one of the smartest women this world has ever seen, capable of finding a solution to any problem that could appear, and she also had the ability to develop powerful weapons.

"Stella Renford was one of the smartest..."

 

It was not sure in which year of the past they would arrive...

What is 'it' supposed to be?

 

Such a responsibility could not be taken lightly, they needed to know what they were going to do. Think before acting, because...

"...be taken lightly. They needed... going to do; think before acting..."

...and maybe, annihilate the human...

You could either do "and maybe annihilate..." or "and, maybe, annihilate..."

 

... because it would surely be one of the hardest task a person ever hard to take.

First, "hardest tasks". Second, the ending of the sentence doesn't make sense. Were you trying to say "one of the hardest tasks a person has ever taken"?

 

These are to help you out. For someone who is writing in their second language at your age, I am very impressed.

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Good start. I'm just going to help you pick out the grammatical errors.

 

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Switched to present tense. "It had always existed, but had been...."

 

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Perhaps a more sinister choice of word than "bad". Its up to you.

 

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Switched to present tense again.

 

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Don't get what you are saying there.

 

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"the scariest conditions"

 

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"Stella Renford was one of the smartest..."

 

[/size][/b][/font]

What is 'it' supposed to be?

 

[/size][/b][/font]

"...be taken lightly. They needed... going to do; think before acting..."

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You could either do "and maybe annihilate..." or "and, maybe, annihilate..."

 

[/size][/b][/font]

First, "hardest tasks". Second, the ending of the sentence doesn't make sense. Were you trying to say "one of the hardest tasks a person has ever taken"?

 

These are to help you out. For someone who is writing in their second language at your age, I am very impressed.

 

Thanks. I'm gonna fix those little mistakes tomorrow when I wake up. Some were really minor mistakes that I could have avoided if I had read it all over again :/ Thanks again :)

Good start. I'm just going to help you pick out the grammatical errors.

 

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Switched to present tense. "It had always existed, but had been...."

 

[/size][/b][/font]

Perhaps a more sinister choice of word than "bad". Its up to you.

 

[/size][/b][/font]

Switched to present tense again.

 

[/size][/b][/font]

Don't get what you are saying there.

 

[/size][/b][/font]

"the scariest conditions"

 

[/size][/b][/font]

"Stella Renford was one of the smartest..."

 

[/size][/b][/font]

What is 'it' supposed to be?

 

[/size][/b][/font]

"...be taken lightly. They needed... going to do; think before acting..."

[/size][/b][/font]

You could either do "and maybe annihilate..." or "and, maybe, annihilate..."

 

[/size][/b][/font]

First, "hardest tasks". Second, the ending of the sentence doesn't make sense. Were you trying to say "one of the hardest tasks a person has ever taken"?

 

These are to help you out. For someone who is writing in their second language at your age, I am very impressed.

 

You're smart. o_o'

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