This is a story i'm writing on fanfiction that i havent updated in forever, and when i went back to check another person had reviewed it... so i figure, if i start posting the story here, maybe i'll be inspired to keep writing it. I'll put up the first chapter tomorrow, first tell me what you think of the prologue.

 

To Backmask

Sanctuary

[align=center]Walking down the hallway, the teen kept glancing at the room numbers to make sure he was going the right way. He didn't come this way often, but he knew he really should return the girl's journal. After all, if it was in his hands too long, he might be tempted to pry, and that would be an invasion of privacy and yadayada.

 

Reaching the designated room, he knocked on the doors. He had heard noises inside, but suddenly they were silent. Frowning with curiosity, he opened the doors.

 

There were odd people that he'd never seen before in the room, one pointing a gun at his curious friend. He let out a gasp and was about to call for help, but the frail girl widened her eyes and shook her head.

Epic I love it. This is a true Kingdomhearts Story. ~Claps~ from a fellow writer this is really good

cool!!!! i luv tat riku has a split personality

 

so...theyre in the whacky shack!? lolz AXEL IN THE WHACKY SHACK RUN AWAAAAAAAAA!!!!!

Thanks a ton, guys ^^ Really made me feel good about this story.. C:

I'll put up the next chapter, then... and tell me if you guys want me to keep going and write chapter 2, because this is where i cut off with writer's block and never got back into it.

 

To Backmask

I Hate Emotion

 

.____Axel

 

_ihateemotion___.

_ihateemotion

 

The doctors here have some serious problems.

 

I mean, honestly! They say we're in here because we're crazy, but some of these people... well, for a few of them it's just a matter of

Chapter was epic. I love your creative take on Kingdomhearts. write chapter 2 because this is a good fan fic and its been a long time since i read fan fiction. ~claps~

I would love to take that seat between demyx and zexy!

LUV!!!!!! zomg yayz axel *clapclap* lolz i luved the foreign accent syndrom and the goldfish from 7 years ago xDD

I must say, you have good talent for writing! :]

 

I like the disorders you gave the characters, in comparison to the games, they are very believable. Poor Axel has to be a pyro.

 

The story is very detailed and realistic, I kind of believed this came from true events, hehe. It kept my attention the whole way through, with me having severe ADHD, that is a remarkable feat.

 

Very good job and keep the chapters rolling, please!

Well if GUNMETAL likes it, i'll update it ;D

<3

thanks

wow

this story is

AWSOME

umm when are you going to put out the next chapter

Thanks, lolz.

D'no. When i decide to write.

PIZZ START WRITING SOON

PIZZZ

i pay you 50 $ for you to right story

pizzzzzzz

i come viste you

wellll

on secend tought i wont come viste you

but il buy you pizza

pizzzz

write

Holy ogsahgsfiaosfhsa. <3

That was amazing. o.o

.........

this.

is.

awesome.

omg it's freakin better than normal

library books or something <33

that was teh best first chapter of kingdom hearts

fan fic that've ever read !!! X3

owo thanks guys xDDD

 

Wow, this is old LOL

Maybe ill try writing more over the week o-o

thaNK SOO MUCH FOR CONSEDRING

PIZZZ RITE RITE RITE

PIZZZZZZZZZZ PIZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ

um yay

i agree with friend!!!!

i like this! you should add more!!

PLEASE ADD MORE!

i dun write anymore owo sorreh.