Ok, I had this idea fro a story, kinda want to run it by you guys before I waste my time typing it up...

 

 

There's a school for teenage guys called Vladimers, a posh, old world campus covered in vines off the Cali coastline. 

Seems normal on the outside, but inside, the students live in fear of beatings and even macabre leech bleeding from the headmaster, Prof. Toulon.

One boy, 17 year old Ryan O'Connell, decides to get out, and hops the back fence during lunch hour: what's left of him is found the next day dumped on the front porch.

Slowly, day by day, the number of students dwindle, as " Extra credit " assignments has the boys off into the woods at the side of the campus.

A small group bands together, but they discover the campus is more insidious than anyone ever though.

 

 

It's kinda based on the manga Hollow Fields and themes from the movie The Woods.

 

Any feedback, guys? 

And I thought public schooling was tough

 

Creative idea, plus it's dark- I say run with it

Go through with it!

I'm getting a "Slender" vibe here... do it. Immediately. I approve this.

Edited March 25, 201411 yr by Caxkj

I'm getting a "Slender" vibe here... do it. Immediately. I approve this.

Pitch approves: i'm honoured. 

And I thought public schooling was toughCreative idea, plus it's dark- I say run with it

Thanks. and dark is what I do best.

Go through with it!

Ok!

Fool. Go for it.

Fool. Go for it.

I will. 

Seems okay. Go ahead and try it out.

Ironically enough, I'm starting to read 'Hollow Fields' myself.

Seems okay. Go ahead and try it out.

Ironically enough, I'm starting to read 'Hollow Fields' myself.

I've only read vol 1, and it got me thinking about school's and students going missing 

Go with it and don't turn back