Hey, Pachirisu here. I am here, with my own creative media: fan story involving KH13 members!

 

Things you won't see:

 

Shipping. (Sorry princessheart25.)

 

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Allright, my fan story will be written one chapter a week. (So I can edit, think details, EXT.)

 

This also contains humor

 

LETS BEGIN!

 

 

 

 

WEEDANORT: Location, Radiant Garden.

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"Are we there yet?" Yuna asked me, as we were walking towards the castle. "Almost there, be patient!" I said, exhausted. We just reached the garden, and saw a stairway leading to a another section of the garden. Would it kill these people to put in an escalator?, I thought, not wanting to walk up stairs. "This is a nice place, but would it kill them to not have so many stairs?" I asked. There was an unrealistically strong wind blowing from

The north, blowing my "OBEY" cap off. "Sheesh, if I knew that it was gonna be this windy, I wouldn't have decided to ask him!" I yelled, trying to speak up over the wind. Then, the wind picked up, blowing over trees. "WHY IS THERE SO MUCH WIIIIIIIIIND?!?!" A voice said. Three seconds later, Flaming Lea, whose umbrella was blown open, and she was trying not to be the next Mary popping. (I love you Lea, as a friend.) the wind died down. "I havnt seen a wind like that since...never!" She said, closing the umbrella. "Oh, weed while you're here, have you seen some Pokemon?" "Go walk in some grass, see if you can find out." Yuna said, trying to crack a joke. "Why don't you see for yourself?" I said, pushing yuna towards the tall grass. "Okay, but maybe I should bring a keyblade, just in case?" Even you had a keyblade, the only thing you are going to find in there is grass and dirt I thought. Yuna began pushing some grass around, the grass shuffling around. "Ay, I'm trying to sleep here!" A voice said. "Who said that?" Tuna asked. KH13's Pangoro woke up, and said "I did." yuna wasn't expecting such a massive encounter in the grass, and tumbled backwards. "It's 11:54AM, Pan." Lea said, checking her watch. "Just five more minutes!" Pan said, rubbing his eyes. I sighed, thinking to myself This is gonna be a long day. "so, where are you three going?" Pan asked. "Yuna is going to find Ansem the wise, for a location." "Oh, I saw Steven walk by earlier, don't know what he wants." Pan said. "Should we go see what he's up too?" Lea asked. "No, we should focus on getting to Ansem." And try not to throw out my back on the stairs, I thought. "Comeon, let me show you where he is!" Pan said.

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What do you think?

Bravo, BRAVO!

It's pretty good so far. Good work. So, what exactly is each chapter going to be like? Is it for each chapter, the 1st person point of View changes between the different characters? Or will the main focus be Weedanort?

 

 

Rock on!

Am I gonna be in it?

Am I gonna be in it?

Yeah, just pm me

Are you doing everyone or something?

Are you doing everyone or something?

I'm doing people that want to be in it.

I'm never in these things!  *Throws hands up*  Kidding - I'm not mad, but you can put me in if you like.

It's pretty good so far. Good work. So, what exactly is each chapter going to be like? Is it for each chapter, the 1st person point of View changes between the different characters? Or will the main focus be Weedanort?Rock on!

1st person viewpointOur "narrator" will switch characters every chapter.And I'm not going to be in it, unless people want me to be in it.

I'm doing people that want to be in it.

I'd like to be in it. It looks like you're doing a good job with it.

I'd like to be in it. It looks like you're doing a good job with it.

The narrator is selected by this:Step 1: write down names of kh13 membersStep 2: puts name in hatStep 3: shake hatStep 4: Pull name out of hat randomly

I'll just give you a few tips. First, don't put in anything as an author. That note in the parentheses, for instance. If you, as an author, were giving Lea that message, include it at the beginning or end. Putting it in the middle of the story breaks the flow. And the second thing I could point out is that the lines where Weed was complaining about the steps, you kinda went over it twice. "Would it kill these people to put in an escalator?, I thought, not wanting to walk up stairs.". If you remove this part, then it should be fine. Oh, and one last thing. While I appreciate you putting me in, I would have liked it if you asked first. I would have said yes, but I would have also told you to refer to me as Sen. That's how I like to be called now, and my username is going to change soon to reflect that. Aside from those three things, it's coming out great! Keep it up, my electrical friend!

I'll just give you a few tips. First, don't put in anything as an author. That note in the parentheses, for instance. If you, as an author, were giving Lea that message, include it at the beginning or end. Putting it in the middle of the story breaks the flow. And the second thing I could point out is that the lines where Weed was complaining about the steps, you kinda went over it twice. "Would it kill these people to put in an escalator?, I thought, not wanting to walk up stairs.". If you remove this part, then it should be fine. Oh, and one last thing. While I appreciate you putting me in, I would have liked it if you asked first. I would have said yes, but I would have also told you to refer to me as Sen. That's how I like to be called now, and my username is going to change soon to reflect that. Aside from those three things, it's coming out great! Keep it up, my electrical friend!

I'll make sure to ask for your consent.This was a"I'm bored so let me write this."

Who's Yuna? As in Yuna from FFX? O.o

 

Peace!

Here is chapter 2 of a long project!

 

Want to be included in chapter 3, then send me a message or a comment!

 

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LOCATION: Halloween Town

TIME: 2 years after the events of KH1

NARRATOR: "Jack Vladimir Frost."

 

 

 

"May I ask why wakelessdream sent us an a fetch quest?" visitjoan said. "I really don't know." I said. We were sent to Halloween Town to pick up one of the several elemental orbs. "Why do we need them?" Visit said. "We need them so Xehanort doesn't get his grubby hands on them." I said. I hate time travel, why couldn't we get Radiant Garden instead? I thought to myself. I wasn't too fond of tinkering in the past, because it could change the events of the future. "I think we should look in this cave," Visit said. There was a red glow coming from the cave. "Let's go and see!" I said, and we both ran into the cave. "There!" I said, pointing. On a big pedestal, was a red orb with a emblem of fire embedded on the orb's surface. "We found one, at least." I said, going to grab the orb. "Thanks for finding what I need." A voice said. Me and visit turned around, and saw a man with a unfamiliar getup. He had a black jacket, and blue pants. "Who are you?" Visit said, summoning her keyblade. (Yes, every KH13 user In this gets a keyblade. No concept art, sadly.) The man removed his hood, revealing a person. He had black hair, and green eyes. "You look suspicious." I said, backing away. "So do you, but you don't see me complaining." he said. "What is your name, mine is Mark." He said. (DISCLAIMER: Mark is a old RP character from a long time ago, I look nothing like that, nor is my name

Mark, okay?) "That doesn't explain why you are here!" Visit said, stepping foward. "You're looking for this?" Mark said, pulling out a small green object. There is no way this guy has Ven's wayfinder I thought. "Here, catch." He says, tossing the green object to me. I looked down, and saw that is was, in fact, A wayfinder. It was green in the center, and the star points had different colors: Red, blue, Pink, Orange, and Yellow. "What do these color's mean?" I ask, putting the wayfinder in my pocket. "They are for you to ponder." Mark said, and with that, he walked away. "I don't like that guy." Visit said. "But we have the orb, so let's get out of here!" I grabbed the orb, and with visit, we walked out into the night.

 

(INB4SHIPPING)

Can I be in this please (just describe me an awesome keyblade that's all I want) Thanks

CH3 IS UPON US

 

(The best thing since sliced bread!)

 

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LOCATION: Radiant Garden

TIME: Present day

NARRATOR: "Visitjoan"

 

Man, I hate mornings! I thought. I wanted to wake up later then 9 AM, but we had visitors, from a unknown land. Then, I saw the others, walking up the stairs. "Well, look who the cat dragged in, it's visit!" flaming Lea said, joylously. "Hey Lea, I see you brought the others. Wakelessdream will be amazed. Come on!" I said, beconning them over. We entered the Castle, and began walking down the maze of corridors. "What happened to KB2?" weed asked. "They were sent to Traverse Town already, you just missed them." I said. And I'm really missing the mission, because I have to tend to an old man. (No offense, weed)"2 and Jack left already." I said, walking down the hallway. After what seemed like an eternity, we managed to reach the computer room. "There is a problem with the Electricity here lately, you know anyone who could help?" I asked. "Probably interface, there was a strong wind earlier." Yuya said. I plugged in my laptop, and there was an incoming call. "Jack, talk to me." I said. Jack Vladimir Frost appeared in the top screen. "We managed to find the orb of winds, but we ran into a problem." "What kind of problem are we talking about here?" Lea asked. "Isa was the problem." Jack said. "But luckily we took care of him." What is Isa doing in Traverse Town? I thought. "We also ran into a dude at Halloween town, Lea." "Who?" Lea said, accidently knocking over a bunch of heavy equipment. That will wake a lot of people up, but who cares? "Some dude with black hair, gave me this." Jack said, showing us the wayfinder. "How did this person get that?" Weed asked. "Don't know, but he seems suspicious." Jack said. "Anything else?" I asked. "No, it was smooth sailing for the most part." Jack said. Suddingly, the screen turned black, and all the lights went out. "Great." I said. "We'll go fix the power, you...stay here and mend the computer system." Weedanort said. I sighed, wondering how I keep getting myself into these messes. I looked out, into the area that once was the Heartless Manufacturing area. After certain events, we decided to turn off all the power, and begin shutting it down. I looked down, seeing that an opening was there. "That doesn't seem right." I said, and began walking down the stairs to the area. After walking down the stairs, I entered a long hallway, each wall having doors. I began counting the doors, 20 in all. I reached the end of the hallway, finding one more door. I decide I must tell Lea about this, and began making the long walk, back up the stairs.

(No one has posted in a week. That has to be some kind of Record)

 

ALLRIGHT! Chapter 4 is here! (And DChurich is online.)

 

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LOCATION: Daybreak Town

TIME: During the Events of KH unchained X

NARRATOR: "Steven Drake (or Steventus)"

 

"I told you we should've gone left!" Visit said, pointing at a map. Me, Jack, and Visit were on a mission from Wakelessdream to find the Orb of winds. Unfortunately, we couldn't figure out where anything went. "Maybe we should go over to the pier." I said. "Wait, do you see that man?" Visit asked. "What man?" I asked. "Over there." Jack said. There was a person, dressed in Black with blue jeans. "Looks suspicious." Jack said, backing up from the edge of the rooftop. The person looked straight up at our location, then he shrugged, put his hands into his pocket, and walked on. "You know him?" I whispered to Jack. "No, he seems sketchy." He whispered back. We watch the strange man walk to a person with a black coat, and began talking to him. "Is he allied with the Organization?" I asked. He gave the black coated man somthing, and he dropped a pearl into the Other man's hands. The guy with the Blue Jeans walked off, whistling. "We just need to get the orb of winds and get out of here." Jack said. Suddingly, two keyblade masters ran by our location, nearly knocking us aside. They ran around a corner of a building, and vanished into the town square. "More Keyblade wielders." I noted. "Let's go down this way." Jack said, and we began walking down the street. After an hour of walking, we finally managed to find the orb in a box in a alleyway. "What are you doing here?" A voice asked. We spun around, finding a female in a mask. What are the odds of this being one of the fortellers? Maybe 10 out of 10! I thought. "I heard you were the time travelers I was told about." She said. "Master Ava, it is a honor to meet you!" I said. "Have you seen two keyblade wieldes?" Ava asked. "Uhh, yes. They just went to the square." Jack said. "I understand, be on your way." Ava said, walking past us. "Let's just grab this thing, and get out of here." Visit said, grabbing the orb. "That's two." I said. We were just on our way, when we ran into the Blue Jeans guy. "Who are you?" I asked, summoning my keyblade. "I have no reason to fight you." The blue jeans man said. "I am only here to give you advice." I don't trust this guy I thought. "What advice to do you have?" Jack asked. "Sometimes to brightest heart can hide it's Darkness." He said, walking off. "We got the orb now let's get out of here." visit said. Visit opened up a watch, and we began our journey back to Radiant Garden.

after a long hiatus, Ch5 is finished! Enjoy!

 

 

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LOCATION: Radiant Guarden

TIME: Present Day

NARRATOR: VisitJoan

 

It has been a month since my discovery of the so called "chamber of remorse." and I'm not sure I should tell wakelessdream about my discovery. I was thinking about what to tell her, when a old man with a red hat came into the room. "Merry Christmas!" Weedanort said, collapsing onto the floor. "You okay?" I ask him. "Oh, yeah I'm okay. I was just up late last night." He said, getting up off the floor. I wonder how long he was out. "you havn't been here in almost a month!" He said. He's right. I havnt been to the lab since the mission with Jack and steven. "I was just busy." I said. "Busy? We lost the elemental orb of earth to Xehanort!" He said, fusturated. "It wasn't my fault, I was busy doing things!" I said. "What we're you doing that was so important?" He demanded. "I found him." I whispered. "Wait, you found him?" Weed asked. "No, but we are close." I said. "You found the chamber of remorse, havn't you?" He asked. "Yes," I said. Weed takes off his christmas hat, but accidentally drops it past the heartless manufacturing station, and into the abyss below. "I'm not going down there to retrieve that." I said. "So, where do you think we can find the chamber of awakening?" Weed asked. "Only Aqua knows, and she's trapped in the realm of darkness." I said. "Maybe sora knows." Weed hinted. Sora has been missing for 10 years, and no one has seen him. I don't know why weed thinks we can find someone who vanished off the face of the universe. "If you want to go looking for him, fine by me." I said. "I'll go check the Keyblade Graveyard." Weed said. "Allright." I said. After weed leaves, I open up a book I found on the desk, and opened it. There, I found a large message scribbled on it. It was large text that said Etrhi ghturni lilw eb demnde nweh yuo nrteru ot den ti. "What do you mean?" I whispered. I wrote down the text, and walked out of the lab

Wow  

CARRY OOOON!!!

 

Also needs more Squiddy

 

Otherwise you've done a fab job mate. I really enjoyed it, I'm smiling throughout it all! I can just imagine a hq type building in radiant garden where all the kh13 members form part of the resistance against the darkness! I'm actually imagining alot of it myself

 

Well done mate