CloakedSchemerX

High schooler: peer pressure Rini: peers shooting her to death wat

Do you want their meat seasoned?

I'll do the butchering.

Joshua struggled, to no avail. He had control over his body, to an extent, but couldn't move all too much, much less away from Sylar. His eyes were worried with immense fear, and nearly about to cry of it. He didn't speak--in mild shock, but imminently stabbed Sylar's hand with the dagger he held with him. Unfortunately, that was his only current means of defense.Morgan grit her teeth, Mes actually having nothing against having an 'unfavorable attitude,' or so she appeared. She gave a short scoff, "I suppose not." Morgan sheathed her rapier into it's slender black scabbard, "Regardless of which, am I wrong to assume your conjuring would be a reliable source of water?"

It seems as though are responses to each others' stories are relatively similar :PGood luck as well!

Totally not John Jaune

I've honestly never heard the term vanilla used for any game, disregarding the first expansion of World of Warcraft. But I digress, I see a lot of confusion.

Kya I'm nearly speechless. A lot of the dialogue seemed casual and realistic, which made the characters all the more relatable, but by the end you realize it was a lie. Such an ending gave me plenty of different interpretations and a bit of symbolism, in which is great to have in any form of writing. Truly commendable. Great job as always, MDS!

Thanks! Coming from the creator of The Experiment, that's actually really flattering. Dark twists or just dark themes are what I tend to do, by the way Regardless, thanks again, MDS. It is usually a bit of a decision between third and first person perspectives.

http://kh13.com/forum/topic/69036-it-was-out-of-desperation-writing-contest-submission/

A short story I wrote. Finished in some terms, but perfectly prone to any edits to which I'll address in this and/or the contest's thread: http://kh13.com/forum/topic/68716-1st-kh13-talent-contest-todays-category-writing/ This short story would be under the 'Own Story' subcategory, of course. Any comments, compliments, or criticism are all appreciated and feel free to praise or yell at me to your heart's content.

I'll assist Neko-chan in her murderous endeavors

Morgan's expression remained different even with Mes' remark. "Your insults fail to affect me in any way, young neophyte," Morgan began, right before Mes began attacking again, "And you seem to seek a challenge...." She muttered afterwards, watching as Mes slaughtered the lizardmen before doing so herself. She thrust the rapier into chain of one's mail armor, stabbing through and killing it while grabbing the armor. She unwrapped it so that it was just chain, and she threw it yards away, stabbing into one before Morgan began using its impaled body against others. It soon slipped off, leaving the chain much lighter as the sharp end massacred her foes in a quick spin stretchinf about twenty yards. The chain wrapped around the leg of one of the reptiles and dragged it to Morgan as she scraped her rapier across the floor, cutting the lizard in two. The area was cleared, her and Mes finishing in synchronization. "Your skills and abilities are surely commendable, Mes..." she started, still without a single break of sweat, "but your attitude can be unfavorable." Unlike most of the others, heading into battle straight, Noah used the environment as a place of refuge. He maneuvered through the tricks and turns, finding the relatively alone warriors amidst the trees and literally backstabbing them. Noah made no sound as he didn't with his voice either, not letting his enemies make a sound before death either. The wave of soldiers had been defeated, Joshua having watched with strong guilt. By this point, the celandine flower he once held dying lied completely dead as his first memory had been attained. He was instantly startled at the booming voice of another man, one he had yet to hear. Even so, the presence ot gave was malicious...remorseless. And soon, Joshua's bones tensed and hairs stood as he called his name, fear overwhelming every other thought in his mind as of now. Joshua imminently ducked under the concrete of the water spring as Walter yelled, then doing his best to elude Sylar. (Walter...?) He thought in his mind...did he know anything about Sylar? And how did Sylar know...Joshua...?

"There might be threats that you can't see!" [Got hit by a car] I'm sorry but that's incredibly ironic 3:

The default "ranking" is determined by the amount of posts, otherwise alphabetically or by the date joined. Not much to fret

Of 16,481 members I believe. Well a bit over 780 have start with Y but that's still quite a lot.

(Enochian is hard ) Morgan calmly strolled into battle, rapier in hand, and chanting: "Quasb-- arp babalon, dlugar ripir rit, baltan! Oalo iaida. Oalo Faaip de Oiad!" As she finished her foreign chanting,a reptillian soldier came at her and she imminently gave an upward slash, cleanly cutting the lizard in two diagonal pieces. More came and she came as well, with incredible precision and agility, slicing her foes with ease and without breaking sweat. A little over ten were killed in under half a minute.

(Totally intentional )

(Precisely, Yuffie! I do my stalking-- I mean researching, by the way). Morgan smirked and laughed playfully, "I can sense irritation, now, Mes." She grinned. "I suppose we now know two options for the boy's name. Considering we're a group ourselves, his name must be either Joshua or Harry. Neena would be doubtful for him, after all." Morgan stated bluntly, unsheathing her rapier before the boy woke up. The sword glistened even it being black-- both of the blade and hilt. The hilt was designed to be that of a flamel, and Morgan nonchalantly held it beside her while walking ahead towards the reptillian soldiers before her. "I am a paragon of virtue and sin-- the archetypal apotheosis of all good and evil-- I remain unaffected by this meager notion of violence." Noah knew very well how to fight, but wasn't equipped all too well. He held a dagger and was able to fight a bit more directly physically, but it may not be all too effective, especially considering the creatures were inhuman. Hearing his name booming throughout the sky, Joshua looked up hopefully, hearing the fact that he was to regain a memory. He hugged Walter back, warmly, but as if guilty of needing protection. Perhaps true, but the feeling loomed nevertheless. "...Walter, are you sure...?" He asked, a bit sorrowfully, before getting struck with a memory. At that moment, Walter had left and fought. Joshua's guilt was now assured, and felt sorry, but he focused on his memory all too much, rubbing his eyes and holding back tears.

You saw it twenty minutes after it was posted, Daniel, no meed for sorry

"Know that I can often sense your sin— as well as the sins others are overcome by and force upon you. Neglection, abandonment— sorrow, grief, strife, lies, envy, pride, wrath, fear, and so much else...! An emphasis on neglection amd abandonmen, I'd wager. Be wary of what you learn, Mes— you may realize things that your allies already know." Morgan gave quite dark a few statements to Mes as she taunted the other boy. Such the endeavors of children— acting as if they are superior to all. Sins are all bourne by the thread of pride, after all. Having not even met Kelly, she went away with Bronshu pretty confidently. Everyone here was so...trusting. Joshua felt a bit sorry that he hadn't talked to anyone here very much— but he also knew that his shyness wouldn't disappear. Neither would fear. He felt a bit sorry that such fear...prevented both trustworthiness and to another extent, his trust in others. Joshua was lost...often reliant on others for help but with no one to do so.

I honestly recognized only a few of these. A lot of Fullmetal Alchemist and a bit of Claymore, Hellsing, Dragon Ball, Bleach, etc.

And now TWEWY 2

The Experiment asdfghjkl

Pretty much! According to Sikota, I'm his by default as well.