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Okay but movies can only be so long Connah

no you're fine Quid

You should show the emotions a character feels
In literature, it's not really great to say "he was sad"
But saying "he felt empty inside, as if he would never feel the light of the sun again"

The first one is telling

Obviously that is very shit prose by me

ah, yes. that is true

Damn u okay qud lol

But you see the point?

nah i getcha

I mark English papers for a living ?

I'm never okay

?

I analyze people/characters in games for fun

sooo

We are both quacked

It hard to write good

Indid

It's especially hard to make ten year olds wrote gud ;-;

So much like how Connah and other fans want it
KH3 does a lot more show than tell

rather than tell as they want it

Btw is there a KH concert in a couple days?

No no, rather the opposite

Uhh probably

It reminds me of why people loved Riku as a whole in Kh1 over sora
cause he had written development

and obvious development too

unlike Sora who took 2 games and time to really get haha

Like, lingering will for instance

I think there is one before E3

In la too

yes like him too

But yeah, with Riku it was pretty good right, because we organically see him go from good to evil to good

Unlike LW, where he's just there in the graveyard, and then the plot tells us he's back with terra

The gummiphone is the biggest instigator of the "tell, don't show" problem

?

that whole thing was bs

LW just going back pls

Yes, a lot of people weren't satisfied because of the huge amount of stuff that happens off screen

We're just told such and such happened when in reality we want to see it with our own eyes

hopefully the written works elaborate on that one

I have faith in the manga ?