With each passing day as I wait for you

The flowers around me,endlessly bloom

 

The memories chained deep inside my heart

Because of Namine's actions,they were torn apart

 

Bit by bit,they were scattered,then collected

But as time went by,I knew she felt neglected

 

So I stayed with her,until it was done

But then Diz betrayed her,kep't saying "She's shuned"

 

As that year went by,memorization supressed

I always kep't hidden,a girl depressed

 

Then I fought Nobodies,Humanoids,Heartless too

I wanted the feeling back,being right beside you

 

Now the journey is over,peace is restored

The enemies supressed forevermore

 

As our hearts intertwined,with memories new

Let me tell you this....

 

I'm still waiting for you

 

 

 

Well....what do u guys think? I wrote this poem Saturday when I went to my mom's mom's house.This kinda tells a story.....It's about me searching for Riku up until KH2.I was waiting for him on the Destiny Islands in a different version of my stories.....

Anyways,tell me what you think!

thats really good!!!!!!!! i luv it ^^

that was absolutely great X3!

keep writing!!

So pwetty! I luvs it

Thank you all!!! That's excactly the kind of encouragement I need to keep writing!

nice job

Thanks Blaze...

That was awesome (I kept on spelling awesome wrong U_U It was annoying.)!

 

*Facepalm* I suck at poetry. It's good to know that someone can actually pwn at it http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/happy.gif

Thanks! Hey....I'll call u....DD13! Is that cool? Oh and thanks 4 the compliment!I'm just barely taking up poetry in my brain.

i liked it good job! keep writing!

Thanks Larexene12!

 

 

 

I entered this poem in a festival: Poetry and Prose.

They gave me an excellent on my certificate.Surprisingly enough,there was a lot of little kids there,and they were all entries. My friend Trinity was the olny other 8th grader that represented our school.Her poem was about Jenova,from Avdent Children.TIt turns out,she likes Final Fantasy too!