This story is officialy mine. It's my second story and it's talking about...wait a minute you gotta read the story first ;p. Well whoever was reading my story, Namine's diary, the final chapters are coming soon!

 

 

Chapter 1

One Sky, One Destiny

 

Noise was coming from the loft. Destiny was practising.

 

- TAKE THAT, TRAINING DUMMY! She said

 

She was training for her MOM exam. She was sixteen. When she was training she wore her armor. A blue armor with silver tracks on it. Destiny had blue eyes and hair. She was very beautifull and tall.

 

-Destiny dear, you are late for the royal dinner! Said Mary, her personal advicor.

 

Mary was short and stuffy. She wore a blue dress and she was an aunt for Destiny

 

- Oh no! Dad is gonna kill me! Destiny said while she took her keyblade and her other things and hid them in her silver magic bag.

 

See Destiny was the Royal princess of Galaxia-The world of Stars. She started running towards her room. She saw some guests from the dinner going to the dining room. Destiny hid behind a wall and waited until the guests left the room. She ran towards her room. She went to have a shower. She was sweaty from her training. When she finished she opened her walkin closet and she took a dress. It was long and blue. It was strapless and it had diamonds on it. She took her brush and she brushed her hair. She forgot to take off her bag!

 

- Are you ready Destinyella? Her mum asked while she was opening the door.

 

-Mum, my name is not Destinyella! it's Destiny! She said

 

- Okay whatever you say. Come quick downstairs, your father and the guests are waitng, her mum said.

 

When Destiny's mum left, Destiny started looking for her stardog. His name was Starry and he could use tha magic of the stars.

 

-Starry i will do it! I'm gonna tell my dad that i want to be a keyblade master!

 

Starry was like "Are you kidding, he's gonna kill you" But Destiny was determined.

Destiny started going down the red stairs. The royal recitation called,

 

-Princess Destenyella Kanabes Star!

 

Everyone started clapping and cheering. Destiny sat on the chair.

 

-Dinner is served , said the royal servant.

 

They first served the famous Fish of the sky. A rare fish that can only be caght from the sky fishers. Later they served sugarweed that could only be found in Mysteria. A dangerous world that is overwhelmed from darkness. This food was Destiny's favorite. After that they served golden eggs and then star of the north sky. When everyone finshed they went to the ballrom. They started drinking starhito and while chatting. Then it was time for Desteny to say her royal recitation. She started.

 

- I wanna be a..She looked at her dad. Um i wanna be an-an - she looked again at her dad. I wanna be a keyblade master! She said

 

-What the hell? You a keyblade master Destenyella you know that i don't like jokes!!! Said King Rupert XIV, Destiny's father

 

- My name is not Destenyella and i want to be a keyblade master! Destiny said

 

- Silence! said her father. You are going to be a queen.

 

Suddenly her keyblade fell out of her magic bag.

 

-A keyblade! A KEYBLADE!! WHAT THE HECK IS A KEYBLADE DOING HERE!!! DESTENYELLA..YOU WILL NEVER BE A KEYBLADE MASTER...NEVER! Her father said as he destroyed her keyblad with a spell.

 

Desteny ran twoards her room. She sat on her bed and started crying.

 

-Noone understands me...She whispered

 

Hope you liked Chapter one. Stay tuned for our next Chapter that is talking about our other protagonist that comes from Mysteria!!

Keep going!

 

Can't wait to see what happens next!

*epic weiner muisic plays in the back ground* Brovo

Then ending chapter is coming soon!

Chapter 12

Starfishers

 

Taio,Destiny,Starry and the Captain where wondering through the endless sky full of stars. The got lost after the explosion of the main ship. The captain desperate was looking on the GPS of the mini ship. He couldn't find other ships nearby. Destiny confused was playing with Starry and Taio was watching out of the window. The captain said:

 

-So pals..Yeah were lost but that aint gonna...Ok it may be are end. The famous "Star of hope" is gonna crush on us and it is going to destroy us in..5 minutes

 

-The star of hope! Its our only chance! We have to get it!!! Destiny said determinate

 

-But didn't you hear the Captain? The star is gonna kill us! Taio said

 

Destiny summoned her keyblade. She opened a door on the wall and she jumped out. It was like space! She was floating in the air. Starry got out of her pocket and started flashing. He was doing that because he wanted to get the attention of the star. They suddenly saw a bright thing coming towards them. It was the star. It was huge and spark were coming out of it. Starry transformed into a net. The perfect thing. Destiny threw a fireball to the star. The star started coming closer. When the star was 1 metre away from her she cast blizzard on it and it frozed. Destiny took starry and threw him on the star. The star got trapped!!! When she took the net the star bursted and she got exploded. Starry was trying to trap the star while Destiny was trying to regain her strength. The star launched at her a huge fireball. Taio jumped out of nowhere and used reflect. He healed Destiny and he flew towards the star. But they couldnt do anything. They were hopeless

 

-Get up you lazy bumps we are gonna be starfishers. The Captain said

 

Destiny hugged him and she took a weapon.

 

-Finish him! The captain and Taio shouted.

 

Destiny shooted the star and a net came out. It ripped it and it started sucking it. The star was now trapped!!! They were the winners!

 

thier star fishing? lol that would be cool!!, damn this is a good story, keep it up , and do all of the characters have a keyblade?

thier star fishing? lol that would be cool!!, damn this is a good story, keep it up , and do all of the characters have a keyblade?

 

Lol! Thanks! Well it depends on the characters dream. Destiny wanted to become akeyblade master so she trained. Read the other chapters and you will find out.

Final Chapter

Part 1

 

The four friends (plus Starry) were celebrating and cheering. They were successfully the best starfishers! And that is because they caught the best and the mightiest of all the famous Star of hope.

 

-Hey guys. I’m getting a signal from a world. Hold on tight. The Captain said and pressed a button.

 

The ship started swinging up and down. Destiny hid the weapon with the star In it, in her pocket and she held her chair tight. The ship landed on the ground. They were at the land where “The festival of light” was being held. They were in the “Blessed Town”. But the different thing was that the land was now dark and it was raining. You couldn’t see a single person. Taio and Destiny ran in the building that the festival was taking place. Everything in there was ruined. The chairs were broken, the curtains were ripped and there was not a single person. They saw Merlin on a chair and he had a lot of scratches, bruises and wounds. They ran towards him and they helped him. Destiny wrapped his wounds and Taio washed his bruises and scratches.

 

Listen to this while reading: PS The idea was inspired from my friend Lu Xun http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wzo_VCIjAjE

 

-What happened? Where is everyone? Taio asked

 

-When you left… Darkous i-i mean Lighter took the rose of light and darkness and he destroyed everything. He killed every person and trapped his soul in a chest and he is going to use these souls as his army! This world is now trapped in darkness, Merlin said with a sad face.

 

-Not if we defeat him! Destiny said and did a pose with her keyblade.

 

-That is not easy. He has the rose of light.. The dark army is protecting him such as the souls he gathered from all the worlds of our galaxy! Million souls. Merlin stopped when Destiny showed him the star.

 

-Hehe. You are stubborn aren’t ya? Well I will open a portal. Good luck

 

-Thanks! Taio and Destiny replied

 

Merlin took his keyblade and pointed on the wall. A portal had opened. Then he sighed and his last words flew out of his mouth “Tell him that he was my beloved son..If you have to kill him., If it’s the only way of restoring peace..Then do it.” Those were Merlin's last words. Then his heartbeat stopped and he was no longer breathing. Destiny wiped her tears while Taio placed Merlin on a bed that he fixed with magic. It was white and the sheets were made from roses. “Destiny…We are running out of time. Let’s go.”Taio said. They both stepped in the portal while they saw it closing forever. They knew…There was no turning back, they didn’t have another chance. The world was in their hands It was light… Or darkness.

Edited October 25, 201114 yr by sorakingdomhearts

*weeps* so sad.

Epic i should continue reading it ~!!~ really nice!

Good work adding music

 

Keep going!

Square enix you must hire this man now and turn it into a game

Square enix you must hire this man now and turn it into a game

 

LOL! Awwwwwwwww thanks! That comment means a lot to me!!!

Final Chapter

Part 2

 

The three friends were transported to a world. It was dark and scary. There was a town were everything was dead. There was not a single life in the roads. Inside of the walls dead trees and thorns. There was fire open in some places and in other places they could see humans that where hungry and they were shouting for food. Behind the city you could see a huge castle. Darkness was coming out of the windows and the doors. They could see souls guarding the gates and the doors. They were millions of them! They started walking towards the castle, because they knew Darkous was in there. “Hmp..Think you can enter the castle?” A voice came from a dark shadow. The person that was talking revealed its self. It was a man.

-Who are you? Taio asked and summoned his keyblade

-I’m a person summoned from the dead. Darkous ig going to give me back my life if I defeat you..And I’m not losing my only chance

-We can’t attack. He does this because he wants to live! Destiny whispered to Taio

-Shut up! The man yelled and attacked with souls

Hear this while reading. The idea was inspired from Lu Xun: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dgdOJMlAfpQ&feature=related

Taio and Destiny ran away. They couldn’t attack the souls because the souls couldn’t die. They both started running until it was end of the road. They couldn’t continue running because there was a big hole in front of them. Starry jumped out and fixed with magic a plane. Destiny and Taio entered the plane. Taio sat on the drivers seat and he started moving it. The souls started climbing on the plane while Taio was trying to fly. The plane started flying with stardust. The souls remained on the plane and they climbed on the top of it. Destiny summoned her keyblade and climbed on the top too. “Help me Starry!” She shouted. Starry used a death spell on Destiny. Her appearance started changing. She started transforming in a soul! Destiny attacked and the souls fell of the plane and their appearance faded away until they vanished. Destiny transformed back into a person and entered the plane. Taio Landed in front of the castle. They were one step away from saving the world

Good work!

 

Keep it up

Epic...Nuff said

Ohh spooky music.

Final Chapter

Part 3

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jMLJmsHMtrw&feature=related

 

Destiny and taio ran towards the castle. They hid inside some bushes and they watched the guards. Taio nodded to Derstiny to enter the castle. Taio came out of hiding place and started threatening and shouting at the guards. The guards started running toward him, then Destiny found the chance to sneak in. She ran into the hall. She saw souls guarding everything. The souls started attacking her. Then was when she summoned her keyblade. She used stun on the souls and she climbed the stairs that were leading to the Chamber of Darkous. The door was locked wih a powerful spell. Without losing time she started looking for another way in. Meanwhile Taio defeated the last soul while a hudge army of uncountable souls started attacking from everywhere. He cast reflect but it was useless in front of the souls. He quickly ran in the castle and locked the door. He saw Destiny trying to open the door He took his keyblade and cast triple firaga on the door and it was smashed in million pieces. They both entered the room. They could see a lot of portals from everywhere. From here darkness could go everywhere. Destny saw something like a wand floating in the air and darkness was coming inside of it.

 

-Tell me if someone comes i will be right back.. Destiny said. She took starry and he cast on her a flying spell. She started flyingtowards the wand

 

-Be careful! Taio shouted

 

-Dont worry..Just tell me if you see someone.

 

Destiny was flying up and up but she couldnt reach the wand. It was something like an illusion. At the bottom she saw something like a case. It was perfect for a keyblade, She placed her keyblade in and it started glowing. The wand was no longer an illusion. Destiny heard a voice whispering "To get the things you need, you must lose something special". She ignored the voice and started flying to the wand.

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9cwgzZ-Mf5U

 

Taio heard a voice screaming.

 

-Help Taio! Destiny yelled. Darkous was holding her tight and he wouldnt let go.

 

Darkness was coming out of him and he was trasfering it into Destiny. Taio summoned his keyblade and threw it at Darkous. He let go of Destiny and started holding his wound. Destiny fell on the floor and started running with Taio. Darkous summoned an army of souls that started following them.

 

-I will distract them you have to take the wand. Taio said

-Ok! Good luck! Destiny said and flew at the wand.

 

She finnaly took it and she tried to summon her keyblade so she could destroy the wand. But the keyblade didnt show up. It was in the case.

 

-Hehehe. What did you think you spoilt prinsess..I'm good at traps! Darkous said.

 

Destiny without losing time she pulled Darkous keyblade out of his hands and she started summoning a light ball.

 

-Okay kid! Well if you give me the wand i will grand you your wish! You will be a full keyblade master and your dad wont be there to disagree with you. I will vanish all he people who were teasing you and talking behind your back..I will make you something

 

Destiny thought of it and she started shouting at him:

 

-First of all..I'm not a kid...Second my wish is diferrent and hird of all... I don't care of other people or what they are saying to me. I care of what i think because i am who i am! She said and broke the wand.

 

-You wanted it..You got it...You will lose something dear...Darkous said

 

He made a ball of darkness and threw it on Taio! Taio fell on the ground starting screaming and yelling of pain. Destiny ran towards hima and watched him breathing his last breaths.....

 

Sorry guys theending next chapter!

Good work

Oh no, he's hurt...noooooooooooooooooooooooooo!

Final Chapter

Final Part

 

http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=F-4wUfZD6oc

 

Destiny ran to Taio and she started shouting at him to wake up. She waited for a few minutes but she didn’t have any respond from Taio. In her mind flowed all the times she had with Taio.. A tear fell down her cheek and she felt her heart breaking.

 

Darkous: Are you going to cry?

 

Destiny summoned her keyblade and sparks started coming out of her.

 

Destiny: I hate you! Why are you doing these things! You are never going to be happy! You can’t sand happiness! You killed Taio…. Now it is your time to pay for all the things you did!

 

In her mind she was afraid and scared. She knew she didn’t have a chance of living. When she remembered. She took the box that the star OLAD from her pocket and she set it free. The star sat on destiny and it exploded! Destiny started glowing and floating in the air!

 

The following scene is showing the fight between Destiny and Darkous. Pretend that Cloud is Destiny and Sephiroth. is Darkous.

 

http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZgB0ln4SRWw&feature=related

Darkous fell on the floor and darkness was coming out of him. He took his keyblade and he stabbed his keyblade in his heart. He unlocked his heart and darkness got all over him. He transformed into a monster.

http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=9-pegG8DMc4

When the fight was over Darkous became human again and he fell on the floor. He tried to stand up but he was hurt.

Destiny: He said he loved you… Merlin…

Darkous: Lie! Lies! I-

Darkous started fading away. He exploded and Darkness came out of him. His body vanished completely. Destiny heard a voice saying “ I loved him”.

When everything ended Destiny ran toward Taio and she started crying. Suddenly she heard someone laughing… It was Taio

http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=VdSxRMNKAL0&feature=related

Destiny: Oh my god! I JUST OMINSLASHED DARKOUS TWICE AND YOU JUST PRETENTED THAT YOU WERE DEAD!?!

Taio: I love you…

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Taio and Destiny went back to their countries. Destiny saw her parents and she ran and hugged them.

Destiny’s father: We missed you… Destiny!

Taio reunited with his friends and they had a big party.A few months later Taio and Destiny got married and Mysteria and Galaxia merged And they changed their names to Myslaxia. Starry got married with the star of Mysteria. Taio and Destiny had a son and they named it Lighter.

 

Fifteen years later when Destiny woke up in the royal room. She and Taio were king and queen of Myslaxia.. She saw a letter on the floor. It was calling for someone to save the world because dark forces were coming towards Myslaxia. Taio the great took his keyblade and gave it to his son…. A new journey was going to begin!

Awsome story man (as always)! That was a very good ending and inspiration for all others who wish to write stories someday (even me ). I also love the first song!

 

Your grammar is also making a progress.

It's only one thing I noticed to be a little weird.

 

Taio fell on the floor and darkness was coming out of him. He took his keyblade and he stabbed his keyblade in his heart. He unlocked his heart and darkness got all over him. He transformed into a monster.

 

 

Taio? I think you meant Darkous.

 

Don't feel bad about it! Everyone makes mistakes ( even I do it sometimes ).

 

Anyway, just keep praticing and you'll get better and better. ( that's what I say )

You should make a second story of this.

Thanks everyone for the comments! I hope you enjoyed it!

You should make a second story of this.

 

I... Will see what i can do ! Right now i will try finishing Ienzo-Zexion from birth to death

Awsome story man (as always)! That was a very good ending and inspiration for all others who wish to write stories someday (even me ). I also love the first song!

 

Your grammar is also making a progress.

It's only one thing I noticed to be a little weird.

 

 

 

 

Taio? I think you meant Darkous.

 

Don't feel bad about it! Everyone makes mistakes ( even I do it sometimes ).

 

Anyway, just keep praticing and you'll get better and better. ( that's what I say )

 

Thanks Hawkie for noticing!! Tell me when you write a chapter of VFA