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I'm glad I was the first one to read this!

 

It's awesome!

 

I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep going, my friend :)

This is great! Keep up the good work(:

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This is great! Keep up the good work(:

 

Heheh glad you liked it :P

Yay!!!! You finally wrote it!

 

It feels like almost yesterday, when you were talking about ideas for this story!

 

I really like it, can't wait for the next chapter!

  • Author

Chapter 2

The Chosen One

 

Today was different. Everything started when Zack had a fight with Pain one of the bullies of the school. Pain was insulting him and spitting at him in front of everyone... Zack ignored him and he continued walking. Then Pain started shouting “Hey orphan! ” Zack felt a pain in his chest. It was supposed to be a secret but he’s once “best friend” Nicholas told everyone when they had a big fight. He looked at Pain with a serious gaze. Pain continued. He insulted Zack parents. Zack threw his bag on the floor.

 

Zack: Oh Shut up!

 

Pain: You told me to shut up?!?

 

Zack: No one talks for my parents like this.

 

Pain: What are you going to do? Are you going to hurt me

 

Pain was coming towards him. Zack looked at his eyes and the Pain started screaming and fell on the floor. Pain started crying. Everyone burst laughing with Pain. He stood up and he left. For the first time a smile was formed on Zack’s face… Everyone lift Zack up and started cheering. Behind a tree Zack saw a figure with a black coat. The figure took an amulet and looked trough it at the sun. He saw Zack and then it vanished.

 

Zack’s thinking was corrupted when the bus arrived in front of the orphanage. The bus stopped. He stood up and started walking towards the door. He was the only student left in the bus. He got off the bus and run to the door of the orphanage. He opened the door and run to his room. It was the time of napping .Zack took out of he’s bag some books. He started studying but he couldn’t focus. He was thinking about the mysterious figure that appeared behind the tree. Suddenly he saw a shadow behind the curtain. It looked like the figure that saved him. He stood up and started walking towards the shadow.

 

Zack: Who are you?

 

???: I’m no one special

 

Zack: Why are you here? I saw you at school…

 

???: We can’t talk right now. I will meet you after school at the park where you meet Lenny.

 

Zack: What! How do you know Lenny?

 

???: I really have to go sorry…

 

Zack: Wait!

 

The figure sighed and vanished. Zack tried to catch it but it had already left. He heard shouting from the hall so he left his room. He was really confused. He couldn’t wait until tomorrow to see the mysterious person again.

 

???: I saw him

???: And?

???: He is the one… The chosen one

 

Zack woke up in the middle of the night. He couldn’t sleep. He couldn’t stop thinking about the mysterious figure that appeared a few hours ago. He sat on his bed, he took his sketch book and he drew again the sun. After a few minutes the sketch book was on fire. He shoved his hand in the flames and he took a fireball out of them. He looked at the fireball with a lot of attention. He was actually holding fire!!! The fireball vanished the same as the sun he drew. He was really confused and scared… Why could he do that? Then he took his pencil and he drew a sea. He placed the drawing on his desk. He was feeling dizzy and fell asleep.

Zack woke up again an hour later because he felt something cold. He opened his eyes and water was everywhere. He looked at the sketch book and it was there. Water was constantly pouring out of it. He took it and erased the drawing of the sea. The water vanished and everything was dry. He sighed and he leaned his head on his desk. “I will know everything tomorrow” he murmured and fell asleep.

  • Author

Yay!!!! You finally wrote it!

 

It feels like almost yesterday, when you were talking about ideas for this story!

 

I really like it, can't wait for the next chapter!

 

Awwww. Thanks Hawki! Btw i'm looking forward to the new chapter of The power of nature! I can't wait!!!

Another nice chapter! Loving this! Keep it up :)
  • Author

Chapter 3

The meeting

 

It was finally morning. Zack opened his eyes and looked at the alarm clock.

 

Zack: What?! Oh no I’m late!

 

He took his bag, he threw inside his sketch book and started running to catch the bus. When he arrived at school, he looked around for the mysterious person but it wasn’t there.

“Class will be canceled for today because of the strike” was heard from the speakers of the school.

Everyone started cheering and going towards the park. Zack went there too because he was supposed to meet the mysterious person. While he entered the park he looked around. There was no one with a black coat.

 

Suddenly the park became empty. There was not a single person

 

???: We meet again…

Zack: Huh?! Who’s that?

???: Call me Hope…

Zack: Hope?

 

Hope took off her coat and revealed herself. She was a beautiful girl with black short hair and blue beautiful eyes. She looked a year ar two older than Zack.

 

Zack: You are the girl that person that I saw the other time… Why is this happening to me

Hope: You mean the paintings?

Zack: Yeah

Hope: Well… We can’t talk right now… We have to go somewhere safe before…

???: Ahhh. Hope! You little Brat!

Hope: *gasp* Lex!

Lex was a guy with brown hair and yellow eyes. He wore a black coat too the same as Hope’s.

Hope: *whispers* Zack..run!

Zack: How do you know my name!

Hope: I said run!

Lex clapped his hands and monsters appeared in front of Zack.

Hope: Zack! Here! Wear this!

 

Hope threw an amulet with a sun on it towards Zack. Zack wore it and it started glowing. After some seconds the amulet was so bright and fire hit the monsters that vanished. Zack felt someone pulling him from the hand.

 

Hope: Let’s go!

Zack: Were?!

Hope: Ok… This won’t be easy. Hold my hand

 

Zack took Hopes hand and they both vanished.

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???: Bravo! *claps* The master will be proud of you

Lex: Shut up! I just have to find a way to take the amulet from the boy without Hope being around.

???: You disgust me....I'll do this my self

ahh all the "???" were a little confusing. Other than that its great so far!

like how you ended the 3rd part

  • Author

Chapter 4

Answers

 

Zack opened his eyes and found his self in a room. He was lying on a bed. The bed was made of gold, the sheets were made of silk. He looked outside the window and he saw clouds.

 

Zack: Huh… What a dream…

Hope: Hey sleepyhead

Zack: Whoa! So you are real! Anyway. What happened.

Hope: Well when we transported here you fell on the floor unconscious so I gave you some time to rest

Zack: Where are we?

Hope: We are at the “Kingdom of Peace” Here come people like us.

Zack: What do you mean with people like us?

Hope: People who have powers silly

Zack: Whoa! Powers? I have powers? This is wrong. This can’t be right.

Hope: So how do you explain the drawings getting alive?

Zack: Uh….

Hope: Or the fire that you could hold in your hands?

Zack: Okay you win… But why do I have powers?

 

Hope was ready to explain when a man opened the door and nodded.

 

Hope: You’ll find out now. Now follow me

 

Zack hopped of the bed and followed Hope.

 

Zack: How about the bad guys? Like Lex…

Hope: Don’t worry they can’t come here unless someone from us helps them…

 

Zack and Hope walked a long corridor. At the end there was a big door with an “M” letter carved on it. Hope stood in front of the door and said some words.

 

Hope: Nullam aperto ostio

 

The big door started opening leaving behind a huge noise. Inside there were kids some as old as Zack and some older than him. Hope went and stood next to a man that was sitting on a throne, leaving Zack standing in front of him. Uder the man’s chair there was written Master of Peace The man nodded and smiled to Hope. For some time silence took hold the room.

 

Zack: What’s up Peace Monster I mean Master?

Everyone: *Gasp* *Whispering*

Man: Silence! His a rookie.

 

Everyone burst laughing. Hope looked at Zack with a disappointed face. When everyone stopped laughing the man told to Zack to call him Master.

 

The Master: Now everyone… You can go! Except of you Zack.

Zack: I don’t have a place to go anyway… I didn’t had to say that right?

 

Everyone left except of Hope and Zack. Hope told to Zack to stand inside a circle of stones. When Zack did that a flame came out of him and touched one stone. Then the stone started glowing and a blinding light came out of all the stones. The Master waved his hands and the stones vanished. Then he invited Zack to sit with him.

 

Zack: What’s happening?

 

Hope: Well you are a chosen one…

 

Zack: A chosen one?

Hope: Here it goes… *looks at Master and nods” Well a few years ago there was a kingdom called the “Kingdom of Elements”. This kingdom and the kingdom of elements were allies for many centuries. After some time the king of the Kingdom of Elements KOE for short died and there was only the queen left. The queen knew that something bad was going to happen so she freed her powers. Her powers split to four categories: The power of earth, the power of air, the power of water and the power of fire that belongs to you. After a year an organization called “The organization of dark” attacked KOE because it had the power of the element stone. This stone held great power and its master had special and powerful powers that can do anything by activating it with the power of the elements. But without the queen having the powers of the elements they couldn’t activate the stone. That’s when I and my family lost our home and powers just like other millions of people. When we arrived here I became a part of the kingdom and now I’m an Elementor Spy. My mission is to find you and tell you your task… It’s very important so you have to help us with teaming up with the persons that hold the other powers and save KOE. The organazations goal is find you and the other three chosen ones and take your powers so they can activate the stone.

Zack: You need me…. to save the world?

Hope: Please!

Zack: I… I’ll think about it….

Awesome story! Keep it up!!!!

  • Author

Chapter 5

Magic

 

Zack sat and just stared at the clouds thinking of what he should do. Memories of Lenny flashed in his mind… It was to live a normal life… or save the world

 

Hope: Your minds made up?

Zack: *sigh* Yeah

Hope: So?

 

Zack tried to talk but the only thing he was thinking was Lenny. The time they had together... The fun they had. It was his only family…

 

Zack: How am I going to learn to use my powers?

 

Hope hugged Zack and thanked him.

 

Hope: Well… First you will have to wait so you imitate your powers. The amulet will give its power to you. You now just have a few powers, like making a drawing coming alive or holding fire.

Zack: Who are the children that were in that big room?

Hope: They have powers but not like yours. These kids their parents were witches or warlocks or someone that has magic powers. You have special powers. You are a chosen one. There are three more like you.

Zack: And where are they?

Hope: Close your eyes *Zack closes eyes* Now open them.

 

Zack opened his eyes and he found his self in front of a tower.

 

Hope: There… *points at tower*

 

Hope and Zack entered the tower and saw there the Master. Behind the master there were four rooms made of glass. The one had the sign of the element of the water on the wall. Inside there was a girl that could give commands to the water and control it… Next to the water room there was a room with the sign of earth on the wall. Inside there was a boy that with waving his hands trees and flowers were coming out of the ground. Next to the earth room there was a room with the sign of air on the wall. Inside there was another boy that could create tornadoes and that had control over air. The fourth room was empty with the sign of fire on the wall.

 

Master: You will go in there and start training. Hope will be here to help you.

 

Suddenly the “chosen ones” came out of the rooms and politely introduced their selves. The girl was called Yvaine and she was two years older than Zack. The boy that had control over earth was Tristan and he was the same age as Zack. The last one was Flynn and he was the oldest. Yvaine had blonde hair and brown eyes. Tristan had black hair and green eyes. Flynn had brown long hair and brown eyes.

 

Tristan: Hi! You are the new chosen one, right?

Zack: Yeah…

Flyyn: Sup sport? And you have power over?

Zack: I have the power over fire

Yvaine: Nice to meet you Zack… Master is it true that we can’t combine our powers? Because he is fire and I’m water

Hope: Yes Yvaine its true. It’s dangerous to combine your powers

Zack: What do you mean by combine powers?

Master: People can combine powers to make them more powerful or more special… Now let’s don’t waste time! Start training.

 

Hope lead Zack to the glass room that was for him. Zack went inside and his amulet ftarted glowing. Fire started coming out of his hands and a tornado of fire came out of the amulet.

 

Hope: Now… Try taking control of the tornado…

 

Zack placed his hand around the tornado and he started moving his hands while the tornado was moving too. Then he opened his hands and the tornado burst while leaving other small tornados.

 

Hope: You can also summon a fireblade…

Zack: Fireblade?

Hope: Yeah! It’s a weapon and with it you can hit the enemies

 

Zack closed his eyes and thought of a blade. When he opened his eyes he saw a sword on fire in his hasnds.

 

Zack: Hope! Hope! I did it!!

Hope: Well done!

 

Something that no one had noticed it was a man out of the window with a black coat….

Aaaaaaa that's so awsome! Can't wait for the next chapter!

  • 2 weeks later...
  • Author

Chapter 6

 

It was finally night. Zack was exhausted from the training.

 

Hope: Zack… I will come back tomorrow… Good job

Zack: Thanks hope…

 

Hope pressed a button and the glass room transformed into a bedroom. Tristan was inside the glass room that was next to Zack’s.

 

Tristan: Awesome right?

Zack: Yeah! Can I come out?

Tristan: No… For our safety they locked our rooms with a password. So… We are stuck in here…

Zack: We still can hang out right?

Tristan: Yeah!

 

Tristan waved his hand and a hole opened to the ground same as Zack’s room. Tristan jumped into the hole and appeared Zack’s room.

 

 

Zack: What just happened?

Tristan: I opened a hole with my magic!

Zack: Does this have to do something with your earth powers?

Tristan: No… This is my other power. What’s yours?

Zack: Um… I don’t know...

Yvaine: Hey guys! Having fun?

Zack: How did you come here?

Yvaine: Tristan opened holes so we can travel to any room we want!

Zack: That rocks! Hey Yvaine… What are your other powers… You know except of water

Yvaine: Oh you mean my physic powers? It’s the instinct. I can feel when bad things will happen. Right now I would like you to hide the fire amulet

Zack: Why?

Yvaine: That’s what my instinct says…

 

 

Zack took his amulet and hid it in his shoe…

 

Flynn: Hey guys

Yvaine, Zack & Tristan: Hey Flynn!

 

Zack, Tristan, Yvaine and Flynn had a great time until they fell asleep.

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Lex: Diav! Diav!

Diav: Shut up you moron! Now it’s my chance

Lex: You mean our chance!

???: When I’m getting my credit! I told you where we were hiding!

Diav: Oh yeah! The stupid student… Lex… He is all yours

 

Lex pulled the student from its clothes and they both vanished. Diav was a tall man with grey spiky hair and yellow eyes. He summoned his weapon -that was a big old stick with gold black signs on it-and he broke the glass of the window without a noise… He entered the room and looked at the small room were Zack was… Suddenly an alarm started ringing and everyone woke up… Even the Master and Hope ran to that room.

 

Master: He is from the organization of Dark!

Diav: You fools! What are you going to do! Are you going to Vanish me like our leader? Well that’s something that will not happen!

 

He said and hit Hope with his weapon. Hope fell on the floor unconscious.

 

Zack: Hope! You idiot!! *runs to Hope, tries to wake her up)

Diav: Thanks! Oh and just for the record… You’re the idiot

Zack: Shut up! *Tries to wake up Hope*

Diav: All I want is you! *laughs*

 

Diav waved his hand and Zack started levitating. A mysterious force took over his mind. He couldn’t do anything but follow Diav’s voice.

 

Zack: Who is the idiot now!?!?

 

Zack deep inside knew that he had o fight the spell that Diav cast. Yvaine summoned her waterflute and played a song that caused the spell that took over Jack to vanish.

 

Zack then summoned his fireblade and hit Diav as he fell unconscious on the floor too! Then some people came in the room and attacked. They were from the organization of Dark too! One took Yvaine and locked her in a cage. Tristan tried to cast a spell too but he was attacked. Then more and more Dark people came. They were currently 15! Then the master using a spell after taking 3 men down he started shouting for help. Soon students of the magic academy arrived and attacked the Dark ones.

 

Flynn: Zack! Save Yvaine and Tristan!

Zack: Okay!

 

The room became a battlefield. The Dark ones were attacking the Light ones same as the Light ones the Dark ones. Zack managed to go near the cages unnoticed and he tried to open them.

 

Tristan: Zack! Be carefull!

 

The cage started flying. It was connected by ropes with a flying vechile.

 

Zack: No! No! Yvaine , Tristan use your powers!!

Yvaine: I can’t! This cage affects my powers!

Zack: Then I’ll do this my self

 

Zack climbed up the rope. The flying vechile had already left and was flying inside the Dark sky. Suddenly Zack felt weak. He looked down and saw hes shoe slipping. Inside was its medal shining. Suddenly the shoe fell down. Zack felt really weak. He opened his hands and started falling and falling. He looked at the sky as he was going closer to the ground. The vechiele had already left.. it got lost inside the clouds. “Zack! Zack!” He felt someone screaming. Suddenly everything became black

Awsome chapter my friend!!! Can't wait to see what happends to Zack ;)

 

PS: Try to work on your grammar a bit. You made some mistakes, but there's not a lot of them.

  • Author

Awsome chapter my friend!!! Can't wait to see what happends to Zack ;)

 

PS: Try to work on your grammar a bit. You made some mistakes, but there's not a lot of them.

 

Its just because i'm writing fast and some time i make mistakes! :P

Wow! this is awesome....... I LOVE IT....... keep up the great work xD

I'm just worried about what will happen next to zach the most

  • 1 month later...
  • Author

Chapter 7

Bring them back…

 

Guard: Move it!

Yvaine: You can’t make me move!

Tristan: I won’t move too!

Guard: How about now? *summons a dark ball*

 

Yvaine and Tristan without any other choice continued following the guard. They entered a big room where a man with a hood was sitting on a throne. The man stood up revealing his self. He was tall and he had red eyes.

 

Tristan: Who are you?

???: Let me introduce… I’m Delio

Yvaine: What do you want from us?

Delio: Oh honey…. You really I think you know what I want…

Tristan: You are never getting our powers!

Delio: Watch me! *claps hands* Take them to the dungeon. I’ll deal with them later… Right now I need to inform the master…

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Zack opened his eyes. He was on some leaves in a forest. The sky was dark and from there, he could see on a mountain, a big dark castle. He stood up and looked around. He saw his shoe and his medal next to it. He picked it up and wore it. He immediately got his energy back and his entire wounds were healed. He continued walking in the forest searching for an exit.

Suddenly a monster appeared. It had red eyes and fire on its back. It started chasing Zack and he started running. Zack jumped over a rock and a branch. He summoned his fireblade and he tried to attack the monster. But this only caused the monster more anger and more fire appeared on its back.

 

???: Be careful! A man with a hood shouted.

Zack: Wha- ?

 

The man jumped in front of Zack an attacked the monster. He used blizzard and some other spells that stunned the monster.

 

???: Go hide!

Zack: Okay.

 

Zack ran behind a tree and watched the whole fight. The man jumped on the monster. He said some words and the blade of the sword that he was holding became icy. Quickly the man stabbed the monster right into his heart. The monster exploded and vanished.

 

???: You okay?

Zack: Yeah… I guess.. Thank you for saving me

???: No problem. My name is Selk. I’m a spell explorer

Zack: I’m Zack… Um a Wizard.

Selk: Well… What are you doing here? It’s really dangerous.

Zack: Well… My friends were kidnapped…. I need to save them

Selk: You know where are did they go?

Zack: No… But… Let me just think…

 

Zack closed his eyes. An image flashed into his head. It was a castle in a dark place. He opened his eyes and pointed at the castle on the mountain.

 

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Master: Flynn…? Are you okay?

Flynn: Yeah… Did we defeat everyone?

Master: Yes…

Flynn: Well… Now I need to find them. I’m sure they are in danger

Master: Off you go Flynn… Bring them safe back…

Flynn: I will…

 

Flynn jumped in a portal and he vanished.

Awesome new chapter. Can't wait for next chapter, I hope it wont take as long as this one.

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