It's a nice story. The only thing I didn't like is that you revealed that his brother was downstairs too early. You could have revealed him in the next chapter. I thought it was a monster or something, lol, it was suspensful for a second. Anyways, it seems to be shaping up into an interesting story, I'd definitely read the next chapter. Just becareful with revealing too much. You always have to keep the reader on their toes