Hunter Hawk

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Jeez, what the heck happened to Keyla? She's really getting insane!!!! Poor Jason, if Keyla was my mum... well I don't know what kind of the hell my life would be... keep writing!

awsome story man!!! Any chance I'll appear?

O_O Jeez Keyla is getting evil by every second!!!! Hope Jason and Vear will be able to calm her down... I just hate her!!! But amazing story, can't bloody wait the next chapter!!!

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa awsome ending!!! I somekind knew Vani will turn into a nice person. I just love how you put music and ice skating contest. Yay! All of them won. And I nearly died laughing when Aqua said: better start looking for cute guys. Can't wait for another awsome story!

Awwww I sure did my friend! Every day I keep looking if you updated your stories. All of them seem so professionaly written ( even better than mine ). You're one of my biggest insperations for writting. And yeah, I wanna give a really big hug ( I don't know if I would actually let go if that really happened ). You have holidays? Cool, mine begin in two weeks and I could really use some break. Take care and please update soon. I bloody wanna know what happends next!

Epic!!!! Nile and Gake are almost like Sora and Roxas! You did gave me some action when I find out that Nile is Gake's Dayfader! And I was kinda surprised by Crace, she does have some care in her.

That was some epic moment dude... can't wait to see what happends next. Hope Sora and Roxas will survive

Lol! I alost died laughing whem Nile said that he needs a dangerous world.

Awsome!!! I so damm wanna know what happends next!!!

Awsome!!! Keep up that awsome story!

Chapter Ten: Promise Something hit Roxy’s back while she was looking in the truck. Pain forced her to fall on her knees. She slowly turned around, staring in metal stick held by Sat. “Alright, put your Arrowblade down and your arms behind your neck or I’ll hit you even harder!” There wasn’t much choice. Hopeless staring in a truck costed her precious seconds for a runaway. She slowly put her grey and green Arrowblade on the ground. But she didn’t put her arms behind her back. “What are you waiting for? Come on!” Sat angrily said while punching his fist in her back. But that was exactly what she wanted. The moment Sat made a contact with her body, she used paralyzing electricity. It worked just like with those two guards that she had disabled before. Sat started trembling and soon fell on the ground. Roxy quickly grabbed her Arrowblade, making a way to the second truck. Even thought it was hopeless, she looked in. Like she expected, Dimi wasn’t there. “We gotta leave! One of the men has just called a backup!” Spark panicked in a hawk form. “Just give me a few more minutes! I know Dimi is somewhere here.” “Roxy listen! Those are the minutes we don’t have. We won’t be able to defeat them all, plus they know our weakness. Our mission is protecting the Rookie. He’ll need our help.” “But Dimi…” “… isn’t here! Look, I know it means a lot to you that you save him, but we’re running out of the time. Sat almost got you when you weren’t focused!” “Right… at least I know where they are transporting him.” Roxy sighed. She summoned a bolt arrow and shot the nearest man with it. Arrows of the Arrowblades usually didn’t kill, only caused an injury for some time. Roxy kept shooting and hitting the men in lab coats as Spark used paralyzing electricity on them. Meanwhile Alex managed to pass some very dangerous traps with a help of Os. He only needed to pass the last one. “Here you’ll need a fog spray.” Os answered through the phone. “The thing Roxy used to color my hair?” “No, the other one. With a white top on. Use it to spray the whole corridor. Spray will reveal secret lasers.” “Wow, it feels like an action movie! ‘Cept I will be the one who will get short on the end of the stick…” “Try to do this more slowly. You’ll be more focused.” Alex really needed to be careful. Lasers were just like those ropes in the forest when he got caught. Mobbed by many red light lasers, felt like a fly in tight spider web. He drew his breath and slowly crawled under red lights. Each move of his needed to be careful. Even breathing was dangerous duo to his ascending chest that was unexpectedly moving. Soon he got on the half of the way. There were lasers set even tighter. But he didn’t give up. He kept moving ahead until he reached the end of the lasers. There were metal bars covering entrance into another room. It didn’t seem special, just a normal room for meetings. But then he saw the coolest thing. In the corner was hole, but unlike usual one, it seemed like it was cut in the thin air. “Is that a portal?” Alex asked on the phone. “Yup that’s the one. Now wait here until Roxy comes.” “Why do I need to wait for her?” “Cuz the portal will disappear in the moment you’ll enter. This one was set especially for a Rookie. If we would make a portal for Ials you’d probably get real hurt.” “Ials? What’s that?” “Oh, those we’re we. Our name, Ials, is the name we’re using for us. You’re still a Rookie, but after you’ll get your powers you’ll become an Ial.” “Wow, sounds awesome. Do I get a spirit mate too?” “Of course you do, silly. But now you firstly need to get out of here.” “When?” “On my sign you’ll cut the bars and enter the portal. Got it?” “Got it!” Roxy kept running through the endless corridors, kept trying to remember where she needs to go. On every step she arrived at different place, mostly laboratories. Then some guys appeared again. She easily shot them with her bolt arrows and went forward. “Where is that damn room?” she said while looking on a map that was on the wall. “Here it is!” Spark shouted while showing on the red spot “The Meeting room”. “Great, let’s get going.” But she wasn’t aware someone was following her. Figure, armed with a metal sticks quietly followed her as unnoticeably as a shadow. In its pockets was special gear that soon will be used on her. “Roxy is getting close, use the pocket knife to cut the bars.” Os said to Alex. “Right, I’m cutting.” Job was pretty easy. Pocket knife cut the bars as they were butter. He slowly went down in the room, when he heard cheeping all over the place. Terrified, he looked backed in ventilation system. One of the things fell from the backpack, activating the alarm! “Alex! Can you read me? You just activated alarm!” Os shouted from the phone. “I bloody know that!” he shouted back. “Get to the…” Os tried to say, but couldn’t. Someone blocked the signal. “Os? Os! What should I do?” Alex panicked. But there was no more signal nor the Os to help him. He was on his own now. “Crab!” he said while picking the thing that fell from the backpack. Thing that activated alarm, was his sketchbook. When he finally picked it, the door opened. Alex happily went there, but it wasn’t a Roxy. There was a figure armed by many metal sticks. “Are you scared?” figure, revealing itself as a man asked. “Why do you care?” Alex said angrily. Man smiled and appeared behind him. Alex surprisingly drew his breath, when man pushed him against the wall, wedging him in a powerful grip. “Let go of me!” Alex protested. “Not a chance! You’ll help me with my plan if you like it or not.” man said laughably. “Alex!” someone shouted. Red haired boy looked towards the door. Roxy was there, pointing her bolt arrow right into the man. “Right on time sweetie!” man said while throwing some kind of ball on the ground. The moment ground was touched by a ball, ball released some kind gas or more like smoke. Smoke made everybody there cough. But Spark kept her head clean and in a form of wolf, ran towards the man. She bit him to the point of bleeding. Man screamingly released Alex, while Spark led him towards the Roxy. “You okay?” Roxy asked while coughing. “Yeah, but what should we do now?” “Let’s get towards the portal before the smoke clears and…” But the smoke cleared before she could even finish. Right in front of them man was standing, holding two metal sticks. “This will be fun.” he said while putting them together. “Alex! Get out of there!” Roxy said screamingly. Her message was too late. Man combined metal sticks together, which made the thigh she was scared the most. Combined sticks caused EMB – electro magnetic blast. It didn’t do much to the humans, but for the Ials… was like a bomb explosion! Both she and Alex went flying and crushed against the wall. He slowly tried to stand up, looking for her. Girl was partly conscious, covered by dust and her own blood. EMB made much bigger damage on her than him. Her whole body was covered by many small cuts and she was lying on her arm. Boy quickly ran to her, finding out that her arm was broken duo to the landing on it. “Alex get to the portal…” she said weakly. “Not without you! That man will kill you!” Alex protested. “Please… you gotta go!” “I said not without you!” Alex said angrily and ran towards her. He took her into his arms along with Spark who was lying next to her. She was too weak to protest, so she just let herself for Alex to carry her. When he was about to go in the portal, man appeared right in front of him. “You aren’t getting away!” he said angrily. “Wanna bet?” boy said while kicking him. “Oh, you’ll be sorry.” Moment after that felt like a slow clip. Alex, carrying both Roxy and Spark. Man setting other two sticks together. Another EMB was made, right in the moment boy reached the portal. He could felt strong force while setting the foot in the portal. His mind always thought he made it, but the other moment prevented him from doing it. This EMB was different. It was much stronger than the first one and caused him to do the thing that he most regret it. He released Roxy from his arms! They were both too weak to do anything. Girl sadly fell back in the real world, when the portal took Alex on the other world while he was still carrying Spark. Hole in air disappeared with a flesh of light. Man laughably watched the whole thing and roughly picked the blond haired girl. “The plan went well… oh, you’re still conscious?” he said when Roxy weakly opened her eyes. “Well, you won’t be anymore.” From his pocket he took a big injection filled with disgusting brown liquid and stabbed right into the part where her heart was. Roxy just stared from some time and then fainted. “Eztli? Did you get a Rookie?” Sat asked when he suddenly appeared. “No, but I got the other one.” man named Eztli answered. “Is this the girl, who helped him out?” “It would appear so. Her inner power is very interesting.” “Yeah, we haven’t got the one who can make electricity. This can even change our plans.” “Agree, but we need to transport it along with the B1 case.” Sat picked her and soon put her in the truck. But Roxy was right about Dimi. He was in that truck, in another space, hidden under many boxes. Girl was placed right next to him. The moment her hand felt his body, her eyes twitched. She opened her eyes a bit, only to say one thing. “Dimi… I’m sorry…” And she fainted again as the truck started moving. Meanwhile Alex was slowly waking up. He was lying on something damp, somewhere in the forest. Spark was still in his arms. When he was about to stand up, he saw two figures, running right towards him. But two EMBs caused him to collapse right when familiar voice asked. “Where’s Roxy?” PS: Ial, is an old Egyptian name for a field of dreams and the name of the new bad guy, Eztli is a Nahuatl unisex name for blood.

It's actually a degu, something between rat and squirrel.

My favorite sport is skiing ( since I was four )!!! I also train tennis and hip-hop dance. I also trained karate for about two years, but then stopped cuz we moved in smaller gym.

Epic!!! Keep writing, it improves more by each chapter you write!

Awww I just love the song! Did you write yourself or copy it from somwhere else. And Keyla you better not do anything stupid or I'll personaly come here and kick your evil ass!!!!

This chapter will be a little short, cuz my pet rat bite me in one finger ( it really hurt... some nail is also missing ) wich slowls me down with writing. Anyway hope you'll like it . Chapter Two: It’s been a week, since Xehanort cursed Ventus. Eraques and Yen Sid sent their solders to find Xehanort. Neither of them didn’t know why would he do such a thing, as cursing an innocent child. Was it from the revenge? All three of them used to be the best friends. When they all grew up, they went separated ways. Eraques stayed as Yen Sid settled in a different kingdom. Soon Eraques settled too, in a nearby kingdom. But neither of them found out where Xehanort went. Some said he was starting being interested in dark magic, building a dark castle just to practice all the spells. They had met once before that. Eraques could now clearly remember that day. Xehanort wanted him and Yen Sid to join forces and conquer all the kingdoms in the world. But both of them were strongly against it. They even started fighting with swords and magic. In the end, Xehanort was defeated. But while going back to his dark castle, he treating them that he will revenge. Eraques: *angrily* How could I be so stupid? Soon he’ll curse us all! We should kill him on the day he wanted us to rule the kingdoms. *shouts* Darkness should always die! Yen Sid: Now calm down. We’re peacekeepers not the killers. If we would kill Xehanort , we would be the same as he’s now. The evilest thing is to take someone’s life. Either way is good or bad, none deserves to die. Eraques: I know, but what should we do then? Kairi who was listening to their conversation in secret, flew back to their sisters. Namine was making some doodles in her sketchbook while Xion watched her. Xion: Did you hear anything? Kairi: I did, but it wasn’t exactly useful. It seems like Yen Sid, Eraques and Xehanort used to be friends. Xehanort then turned evil and left his mark in cursed Ventus. Namine: Oh dear. But do you think Xion’s spell of hope will work? Xion: I don’t know. My powers are ten times weaker than Xeahnort’s. I can’t think properly right now… Kairi:*uses her magic wand to summon three cups of tea and a plate of cookies* Have some tea dear, sometimes it really helps. Namine: I’ll say it. *eats a cookie* Xion: *drinks some tea* I think we should make a plan. Kairi: What if we hide him, until his sixteenth birthday? Namine:*splits the tea* Kairi, you’re genius! If that creature won’t find him, it won’t be able to kill him. Xion: But where should we hide him? I bet he knows almost the whole world! Namine: What about the forest near the kingdom? There’s a cottage whose owner passed away a few years ago. Kairi: Brilliant! Now, all we have to do is to disguise in normal girls. It won’t be good, if kid founds out we’re fairies. Red haired girl used her wand to change their usual fairy clothes into normal ones. Kairi now wore a simple pink one with a white apron, Namine had a white with a yellow apron and Xion had almost the same as Kairi. Xion: Hey! I hate pink! *uses her wand to change it into a grey one with a white apron* Kairi: *smiles* Sorry, forgot about that. As they changed their clothes, their wings disappeared as well. They all went directly in the throne room where Eraques was still talking with Yen Sid. Kairi explained the plan very carefully and slow, as other two fairies nodded at almost every sentence that she said. After long thinking Eraques finally agreed with a plan. He complained a bit at the beginning, but changed his mind after consulting with Yen Sid. His only wish was to spend some time with his son, before fairies will take him in the hideout. King quietly went to his bedroom. After his wife’s death, he couldn’t help herself by having his son at his side all the time. He couldn’t fell asleep if Ventus wasn’t there. If he wasn’t, Eraques might thought someone took his only family away. He was now looking at his little boy who was awake. Even thought Ventus was only one year old, he has already known how to stand. Eraques smiled as he took him in his arms. Eraques: I’m so sorry… but to keep you alive… you must be hidden. I won’t be able to be with you, but there will be three kind fairies that will take care of you. You will be in safe hands… don’t worry. When the King was handing him to fairies, Ventus still held his hand, like he knew he’s going away for him. Namine silently wrapped him into a magical fabric which made him warm and invisible by everyone that’s evil. Kairi: Guess that’s farewell. Eraques: Yes… until that faithful day will come. I trust you my dearest treasure in entire kingdom. Please keep him hidden from everyone. Namine: *holds Ventus* Indeed we we will. Xion: We will be careful by every small matter. Yen Sid: Don’t forget on this.*shows on Ven’s amulet* It may come handy. All fairies: We will bring him back, once he reaches sixteen years. And we promise he’ll be alive. With those words fairies left the castle. King watched broken hearted, how three veiled figures were leaving the castle with his only child. Namine was carrying Ventus who was now under the weaker sleeping spell. If he would start crying, someone might hear and attacked them. Beginning of the forest was pretty dangerous spot. Along with thieves and bandits were there also creatures of the darkness. They were usually pretty weak during the day, but their powers rose with the night. Xion and Kairi were ready if that kind of moment would happen. Armed with their wands they were looking out for every unusual sound or movement. In the end they finally reached an old cottage, hidden by almost the whole world. Kairi quickly used her powers to see if the house is really empty. Her wand made a sound which caused all the rats, birds and other animals to go out of the house. Xion: *covers her ears* Must you always use the screaming spell? Namine:*whispers* Unfortunately there’s no other spells that can do the same thing. Kairi: Let’s clean this house a bit. It seems like someone die in here. Xion: *whispers* And in fact it did. Kairi and Xion used their magic to clean the house while Namine went searching for a room where Ventus could grow up in. Lower floor had a small kitchen and dining room along with some bedrooms. Upper floor seemed more interesting. Long corridor lead into a small bathroom and a room, completely covered by old books. Last but not least was a small bedroom that seemed to be built just for child she was carrying. Bookshelves were all over the wall, painted by lovely stars. Bed was in the corner, ready for somebody to sleep in. But the best part of the room was a big window. It had so big sill, that all three fairies could sit there and star gaze. Her thinking was broken by Ventus who has just waked up. Still a bit affected by sleeping spell, he curiously looked around the room. Namine:*smiles* You see here dear? That will be the room just for you. Hope you like it. Ven only stared and then sneezed. Bedroom was still a bit dusty. Xion:*shouts* Namine? Are you up there? We need to clean the upper floor too. Namine: Comin’. Kairi:*sees Namine* What were you doing up there? You’re all dusty! Namine now looked on her cloth and then on Ventus who was smiling. When he sneezed, he caused quite stir. He was all covered in dust as well as Namine was. Kairi: I’ll give him a bath. You two try to clean the upper floor. *takes Ven into a bathroom* After quite of time passed, Kairi finally came from the bathroom. She seemed almost as she had a bath. Her clothes and hair were completely wet. Ventus seemed like a little angel duo to now cleaned shiny hair and his sparkling blue eyes. Namine: *comical* So did you bath Ventus or he bath you? Kairi: Very funny Nami. He was so splashing with the water that I needed to fill it more than five times! Xion: What a sweet kid. *takes him to his bedroom* She gently placed him on the bed and covered him by a warm blanket. Xion: I’ll watch over him first. You two try to get some rest. Namine and Kairi: Alright, good night then. Xion watched how young child slowly fell asleep.

Awsome story, my friend! Even thought it has some mistakes, I really enjoyed reading it!!! Try to work a bit on your grammar and maybe a bit on the time you're using. ( for i couple of times i got a little confused, cuz i didn't know when things were happening. But either way, i like it. Keep writing!

Yay I'm in! Thank you so much for adding me in your awsome story.

First at all, thank you so much for all of your comments. They really mean a lot to me. Before I post the new chapter, I wanna tell some interesting stuff about Power of Nature. Power of Nature is actually a remake of an old story of mine that I had started writing before I even join the KH13 site Original story's title was Crystal Wings Characters were a lot more different than now ( firstly Roxy was meant to have red hair while Alex would have a blonde ones ) Roxy's original name used to be Loona and Leo used to be named Jeeva Spirit Mates meant to have only one form ( yeah you guessed right - the hawk one ) I firstly planned the third form ( beside wolf and hawk ) to be a turtle, but I change it into a snake, after seeing how annoying it gets in the actual story I'm pretty much working on the Power of Nature recently. I get new idea almost every day! I even used one of the walls as a idea - carrier: The second longest note is about what happends to Leo, after meeting with Roxy. The longest one is about rescuing Dimi. Please don't try to zoom it and spoil the story. But if you're that curius, you won't found out a thing. Everything is written in my native language, which is not English Well, that's that. Stay tunned for the next chapter: The Promise

I'm not sure when I'm gonna write the next chapter, so try be a little patient cuz I'm already writing... 12 DIFFERENT STORIES!!! Jeez I broke I record this year. I wrote more stories than read. But please stay tunned my dear readers. You'll never known when an idea will pop in my head.

Ok, for the ones who read that story I'm asking you, what do you think about it? Does it look like too much like actual Little Mermaid? Does my grammar suck? Is there enough action? If you have something to say, don't be afraid of telling it. Every comment can make story better. And what do you think about Namine- Jungle Girl and Ven - Sleeping Beauty? And I still don't know if I should write a sequel for a Little Merman ( Ven will have a role of Melody ). Please share your thoughts with me.

And for the big surprise I’m presenting you a new Disney Mix… AGAIN!!!! This time I have a mix between Kingdom Hearts ( mostly Birth by Sleep ) and the Sleeping Beauty. Like in Little Merman and Jungle Girl, I’ll change genders here too. So here we’ll have Venny as a Sleeping Beauty. I think that works pretty well, having Venny as the beauty who sleeps all the time. He’s so cute and adorable, plus there’s also an actual scene in BbS where he sleeps in Enchanted Dominion ( in Terra’s story ). So please enjoy and tell me what you think about it. If you have anything to say, don’t be afraid to tell me. Every comment can help making the story better. Chapter One: Once upon time… jeez I’ll skip that cuz we have already heard it over million times! Anyway our story begins in a far away kingdom ( how original ) where a king named Eraques lived with his lovely wife. They had a nice big castle, luxury from the bottom to top and loyal servants from the entire kingdom. Although they had everything that their hearts desired, there was still one thing that made them sad. They had no children, no successor who would rule the kingdom after king and queen pass away. So they sent a courier to the three good fairies that lived in a magical place visit able only by kind hearted. The moment fairies heard the news, they quickly spreader their wings and visit king Eraques and his wife. Eraques stood up and looked at the three different fairies. Red haired fairy named Kairi possessed power of the sun light. She was followed by a blond haired fairy Namine who had a power of the moon light. The last one possessed the power of the star light. Her name was Xion and she was also the youngest of them all. She usually shyly hid her face behind her short black hair. Eraques:*sadly* As you can see, we don’t have any children who could take care of our kingdom when we will be gone. We can’t stand to see our kingdom ruined by evil forces. So that’s what we ask you. Kairi:*smiles* Don’t worry, we’ll help you. Namine: Our powers are meant to bring happiness and not sadness. Xion: If we all three of us connect our powers, we promise you’ll get a child. All three fairies took their magic wands and began murmuring magical words. Magic dust gently covered queen in a pink, white and shiny black color. After some time it disappeared as well as the fairies did. At first king thought magic dust didn’t do a thing, but months later, queen gave a birth to a child, boy who had lovely blond hair just like the queen had. But the happiness didn’t last long. Soon after the child’s birth, queen became very ill. Fairies in vain tried their best to cure unknown disease. It seemed like someone is sucking the life from her as she was lying on the bed with tears in her eyes. Eraques sat beside her bed, painfully watching how the color in her eyes was disappearing. Queen:*weakly* Dear… can you hear me? Eraques: *in tears* Of course I do my love. What is it? Queen: I don’t know… how much time do I have left… So I’m asking you to do me a favor. Eraques: I’ll do whatever you’ll ask me to. Just say it. Queen: Please take care of our son. Don’t let anything bad happen to him or he’ll end up just like me. Protect him with all your heart. Eraques:*determined* I will! I’ll protect him at any cost. Queen: I think he still needs a name… Eraques:*smiles* You can freely chose it. Queen weakly looked at the cradle where her child was sleeping. Then she looked at the opened window and curtain that was slowly moving because of the gentle wind. Queen: His name will be the name of the wind… Ventus. Her son’s name was the last thing she said before passing away. Eraques was sadly looking how his wife’s eyes closed and how her last breath left her body. All that was now lying on the bed was a lifeless body whose life was taken away. Baby in the cradle started crying, like he noticed something isn’t right. King took him in his arms, embracing him closer to his heart. Eraques: *whispering* Don’t worry… Ventus. I’ll make sure that won’t happen to you. *loudly* No more innocent lives will be taken in that kingdom. No longer that I live! Somewhere else, someone was looking in a magical fire while awfully smiling. ???: You really think so, my old friend? Just you wait. I’ll show you what the true suffer means. The same one you caused on me! Bird on his shoulder, whispered something that made a smile on the man’s face. ???: Excellent plan, my dear pet. But for now let’s just wait. Year passed since the queen’s death and king fully cheered up himself. He really needed to be that kind of person. Especially now, that his son was one year old. Kings and Queens came from all over the land, bringing gifts to Eraques’s son. One of them was also the Yen Sid and his little daughter Aqua. Yen Sid was a ruler of the Magical Kingdom, kingdom where people were very skilled in magic. Even his five year old daughter knew many spells. Eraques was very happy to see his old friend. They were friends since they were kids, but they went separated ways when they both grew up. Yen Sid:*hugs Eraques* It’s nice to see you, my old friend. Eraques: Pleasure to see you too. It means a lot, to make a long way from your kingdom to mine. And I see your daughter is doing very well. Little blue haired girl was looking at the cradle with a sleeping Ventus in it. She was looking at him like on the sleeping kitten. Aqua: *cutely* He’s so adorable. Yen Sid:*smiles* Aqua, could you represent our gift to the king Eraques? Aqua: Oh, I almost forgot. *bows* Excuse my manners, your Highness. Eraques: What a well mannered girl. Aqua: *takes something from her little bag* Here it is – a magical amulet made just for Ventus. It’s made of the ancient seashells and diamonds found only in Magical Kingdom. It protects the person who’s wearing it. Even I and daddy have one. *shows on the similar amulet around her neck* Eraques: Thank you so much for you gift. Aqua: Can I see Venny one more time? Eraques: If he doesn’t mind, then you can. Little girl smiled and ran to the cradle again. King looked on the amulet again, thinking about his deceased wife and his one year old son. Yen Sid: I see Aqua pretty much likes your son. Eraques: *smiles* No doubt. I can almost see their wedding. Yen Sid: You know that isn’t so bad idea. If those two marry, our kingdoms can be truly united. Eraques: I’ll think about that. After all, they’re still just kids. Suddenly a light shone in the hall. Three fairies once again visited the kingdom. Kairi, dressed in a shiny pink dress, Namine in a bright white one and Xion in a black one, decorated with shiny starts. All Fairies: Your majesty, we hope we done the right thing, giving you a child you wished for. Eraques: Of course you did. I couldn’t be happier to finally have my own son. Kairi:*sadly* We’re very sorry for your wife. Namine: Her disease wasn’t curable. Xion: We hope your son will be alright at least. Eraques: *signs* It’s alright… you granted my wish… and I needed to pay for it somehow. Kairi: Don’t say! It wasn’t your fault that queen passed away. Eraques: Please, let’s forget about it. Today we’re celebrating Ventus’s first birthday. Let’s not fall in bad memories but make a happy one. All Fairies: Agree. Celebration continued as the music played and people chatted. King almost forgot about all the worries when he saw something at the chandelier. It was pitch black with shiny red eyes. For a moment, fairies felt a dark presence. Aqua’s, Yen Sid’s and Ventus’s amulets started trembling and spinning, whispering to be careful. Black thing flew right in the center of the hall, creating purple flames. From them, man dressed in black and white clothes walked. He seemed in ages, duo to his bund figure and baldy head. Black thing, that appeared to be a crow, landed on his shoulder. Its eyes were pointed right into cradle where Ventus was. Aqua was so scared that she hid behind her father. Man kept walking towards the Eraques with a smile on his face. Eraques: *calmly* What brings you here… Xehanort? Xehanort: Oh, I heard you have a little celebration. I couldn’t wait seeing your little boy. How’s he doing? Yen Sid: *angrily* What do you want? Xehanort: Now that’s not nice. Is that what you say to an old friend after all those years? True that I wasn’t invited, so I invited myself. *laughs* Eraques: *angrily* We were friends, but you’ve changed. Xehanort: True, but that doesn’t prevent me of giving my gift. Yen Sid: *shouts* Stay away from the Ventus! Some guards tried to catch Xehanort, but he only smiled and teleported himself right in the front of cradle. He also made a magic shield which couldn’t be break even by the fairies. Xehanort summoned purple flame in his hand and started casting a spell which story was all about. Xehanort:*evilly* Listen well, every one of you. This will be the day to remember, never to be forgotten. Ventus will live happily, growing into fine young man. *starts spinning his hand* But on the night of his sixteenth birthday, the creature of pure darkness will be born. It won’t attack the kingdom or the people… only him! And right before the sun will set, Ventus will be dead! When he finished his sentence, purple flame flew right into a little boy, waking him up in the process. As baby started crying, guards tried to catch Xehanort one more time. But crow created another huge flame, which disappeared along with Xehanort and itself. Even after it disappeared, everyone could still hear his evil laugh. Eraques quickly ran to his crying son, taking him into his arms. Eraques:*sadly, almost in tears* No! This can’t be happening. Yen Sid: Show me the boy. Quickly! Yen Sid placed his hand on the boy’s forehead. He kept concentrating on finding the curse. When he finally found it, he quickly removed it. Yen Sid: I’m sorry… curse is too powerful to be stopped. Eraques: What can we do then? We can’t just sit here and watch him die just like my wife. There’s gotta be a way! Xion: Perhaps it is… Fairy of the star light went closer as her two sisters followed her. She raised her wand, gently touching the baby. Xion: I don’t have a power to stop the curse, but I can still cast the spell of the hope. Just like shooting starts, my star light will give you hope. You won’t die, only fall in a deep sleep. Person, who will wake you up, won’t be me or either of us. That person will be your true love and it will wake you with a kiss of love. Sparkles and magical dust completely covered the child, calming him down. Ventus stopped crying and light of hope ap peared in Eraques.

Can I be in too? As a magical hawk who can write? ( I'm a female writer )

Stella and Adam were examining kid’s clothes. Boy was dressed in little too big pants, strongly tight with a belt and shirt with short sleeves. Both pieces of clothes seemed even older than a kid who was wearing them. Adam took a small white piece from the gym shoes while Stella poked around pants pockets. “Do you have any idea what that little thing is?” Adam asked as he showed on white piece. “Tooth paste?” Stella guessed. “Pretty close. It’s a chewing gum.” “One more DNA sample. Send it on analysis.” “Right away ma’am!”Adam said with a smile and went towards lab. Stella kept poking around pockets, when she felt something deeply in it. It was another piece of the paper with a drawing – map of another NYC’s part. This one was very detailed too, with some marks as well. But it didn’t marked places like police station, like last, but flats and hidden streets. “Another map of the treasure…” Stella thought. “Anything new?” Lindsay asked while coming. “I found another treasure map.” “Me too.” Lindsay smiled. “Really?” “Just kidding. But I did found where those clothes were bought.” “Ok, I’m listening.” “The first time I saw him, I knew those clothes aren’t custom made for him. So I searched for the second hand shops. There are plenty of them in town, but only one sells clothes by mark that boy was wearing.” “So, what are we waiting for? Let’s go get that treasure.” Danny was committed to watch over the boy in case if he would wake up. He examined him for more than four times, until he made sure there aren’t any clues left. Now he was just staring in his equally breathing body. It was rare to have a living victim in crime lab. Most of them were brought here dead. Soon after, Sid came and Danny helped him carry the boy into an X-ray room. “Good news and bad news, which one do you prefer?” Sid asked. “The one that’s gonna help.” “Then the bad news? Like Hawkes said, his both hands had been dislocated. I also found a lot fractures almost everywhere. Ribs, collarbones, femurs, humeruses… but all of them are pretty old. This one of the rib seems about two years old… and this one of the humerus is only two days old.” “Then the kid sure had a dangerous life. Are there any good news, at least?” “He only needs to rest for those injuries to recover. For now I need to take his blood and DNA. Will you help me?” “Of course.” Danny said while bringing gear for taking blood and DNA. Sid gently opened boy’s mouth and took some of his saliva with a cotton bud. Danny tightened the tape on kid’s upper arm while Sid stuck injection in the vein. Blood filled the injection in a sec. While removing it, Danny noticed something else there as well. Many barely seen scars covered boy’s wrists and forearms. “How could I didn’t notice them?” Sid said after Danny showed them to him. “Simple, you were too busy taking X-ray pictures, blood and DNA. What can you say about them?” “Most were caused by injects and sharp objects… but they’re all very old. The youngest could be caused about 9 months ago.” “You mean to tell me that kid’s a drug addict?” Danny said shocked. “Well he could be, but it’s also possible that someone else did that to him. Also those old scars are in direction, impossible for him to cut it.” “Man, I really want to meet his parents. How can they leave kid like that?” Danny said while hitting the wall. “Now, now Danny. You need to calm down or you’ll make everything worse. We’re detectives and we’re not resting until we solve cases.” “Yeah… you right. Sorry, I didn’t know what I was doing.” “I think it’s the best thing to take kid back in that room and wait until he wakes up. I’m sure he’ll be less terrified if he wakes up beside the person who will listen to his story.” “Guess that will be me.” Danny said while bringing boy back to the room where he was at the beginning. Hawkes kept examining the handcuffs he took down from the kid’s wrists. Handcuffs were tightened on the one of the tightest levels. He also found some blood on it. “Poor kid..” Hawkes thought. But while taking the blood from it, he noticed thing stuck in chains. With tweezers he took it. It was a human hair, a blond one. But it couldn’t be boy’s, it was a way too long. Along with DNA and blood, he sent it in lab on analysis. “Mrs. Elizabeth Tillman?” Stella asked. “Yeah that would be me. How can I help you?” lady with small figure answered. “I’m with New York’s police. Could you tell me who bought those clothes?” Stella said while showing the photos. “Hmmm… let’s see” Woman stared in those photos for almost five minutes. Lindsay meanwhile checked over the shop. Luckily they were no shoppers in it. But most of the cloths seemed in a good shape. “Where do you get all those cloths?” Lindsay broke woman’s thinking. “If I recruited correctly, most of them are from the nearest flats. Some are quickly made by me. You know just design and quickly sawing together the cheap fabric.” “So, do those photos bring any bells?” Stella interrupted. “For the pants I’m not sure, but I do remember making that shirt. That was about four years ago.” “But who bought it? Was it a boy around 12 and 16 years with blond hair?” “No, I think it was a taller man with a baseball hat. Unlike others, he just picked the first thing he found. He really seemed in a hurry.” “Do you know the name?” “None of the shoppers ever have told it. Nor I fully remember that day four years ago.” “Right, thanks for helping us. Please, call us if you see that man.” “May I ask what’s going on?” “We found an unconscious boy who was clapped in handcuffs. He was wearing those clothes we just showed.” “Well than I’m glad that I could help.” Adam watched open mouthed when he checked lab results.