Velvet Scarlatina

I think Jeff the Killer's face is way more horrifying.

Chandelure is my personal favorite.

It sucks having so many games you haven't even finished yet...and yet not feeling like playing them.

I thought these were perfectly made lyrics for these two songs. I just found them now. (Not made by me, of course)

So, does anyone have their Safari type as Normal? >_<

Has anyone heard this yet?

Everyone called it. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

It's not the season finale. Just the finale of volume 1 OF season 1.

I don't think Blake being a Faunus is a surprise to anyone, but it's great that there are more Faunus like me! ^_^ I still have only a few seconds of screen time that don't add up to even a minute. T_T

Tonight marks the night my aunt is giving birth to her son, and ultimately my new cousin. I waited all day for something to happen, and finally I received a text that she was having the baby. This also meant I would be stuck at my college for a while before someone would pick me up. So I waited outside in the cold for someone to come, and finally I was able to be driven to the hospital. At this point, I was exhausted from standing outside from the cold, and I was wet from the rain. So I was given two options when I was picked up; wait at the hospital until my new cousin came so I could see him tonight, or get a key from my grandparents so I could go home and rest. I picked the latter. I don't have a damn clue why I even chose that, and by the time I changed my mind it was already too late. The person I was riding with had to be somewhere, and didn't have enough time to turn around, as we were already miles down the road. Maybe I was just tired and that clouded my thoughts or something stupid like that, but I just don't understand; I was excited for this baby to come, and now that he's finally coming, I ditched the entire family in favor of my own needs. I don't have a license, so I can't drive back myself, or else I would have. I must be the biggest asshole of the year...

It'll be more than two characters returning. I think that's a given to anyone.

Who?

I think Aqua's back was censored as well. Because, y'know, those kids with the back fetishes will become sexual predators if they saw that.

Happy birthday, person-I-hardly-know.

My friend code is 2921-9721-0080 I'm mainly asking for anyone whose friend zone type is either Steel or Psychic, but anyone can add me if they wish. Just quote my post to let me know to add you as well.

5,000 views? Holy crap, I didn't think that would even be possible with this story. You guys have no clue how grateful I am of that! ^_^

I just did a report about how video games are good for you a few days ago. This doesn't help my argument much...

Sacred Moon and Darkness of the Unknown most of all. I'm glad other people think so too.

As long as some form of Dearly Beloved is playing in the background during the final boss, I'm okay with anything.

I am also self-taught, so that isn't really an excuse to use. It's very easy to learn as long as you are committed on remembering. It's also not hard to describe your character throughout the story. Hell, some stories don't even drop a hint to what the main character looks like. They leave it to the imagination of the reader. If you want to describe their appearance, use description, not spoonfeeding the reader information. Perhaps you can say how Neera played with the bob in her black hair as she talked to the others, and at the same time clicked her gray laced moccasin boots. Try to practice with that a little and you'll see how much better that makes the story. Granted, don't describe her entire attire all at once unless they changed into a new outfit or something along those lines. I understand that everyone has their own style, but the way you structured your story is a huge no-no in the writing community. I also took absolutely no classes myself, so again, don't make excuses there. I'm not trying to be mean (people always seem to think criticizing equals being an asshole). I'm just trying to make a potential writer better. I was HORRIBLE at first, worse than anyone in the world. I practiced and studied, and even studying writing for thirty minutes at a time is just enough, but it all depends on how committed you are. To be honest, you are one of the best writers I've recently seen. You just need to touch up on your skills. ^_^

Too bad the PS4 comes out next month.

I merely skimmed this story, admittedly. The reason; the intro wasn't interesting whatsoever. Who wants to read an entire two paragraphs of a character we don't know anything about. Having to explain who your character is directly is very poor story-telling. Even if you put "You can skip this part" at the beginning would merely make the reader want to skip this story even more, as you have directly told them it is not important enough for their attention. That said, never say "I'm not that good" either, or else readers will take your word for it and go somewhere else (I know you didn't say that, but that's a forewarning. Also, the structure of this story isn't that great. I don't know why you made everything centered. That makes everything look ugly (in my view) when you are writing a narrative. Also, you are suppose to make a new paragraph every time someone says something. For example. "How are you?" asked the man. "I am fine," replied the woman. ^ That is wrong. "How are you?" asked the man. "I am fine," replied the woman. ^ That is right. I will also recommend reading up a bit on grammar, and narrative story writing. I'm not saying you are a horrible writer (everyone starts somewhere), but you do need practice.

I actually posted this a few days ago.

Either, I suppose. I should also mention that I only watch dubs. Not because I hate Japanese voice actors, but I don't like reading words while I'm trying to watch something.

I'm very open-minded, so it's hard for me to pick specific genres. I guess I like sci-fi stuff. Horror is another favorite of mine too.