Haven't written something in a while, so please correct me on any mistakes. I proof-read and didn't see anything, but I always welcome any crit, tips, or corrections! (:
Chapter 1
Payton shifted uncomfortably in her seat. Cargo planes were definitely better than flying passenger, but the seats weren't exactly made with comfort in mind. The private sitting across from her spoke up. "Ma'am, are we almost there?" He looked roughly nineteen, and more nervous than words could express.
"Yes," Payton glanced out the window. "We'll be landing soon. Hold your horses, Private."
She felt a jolt as the plane tottered onto the runway. She was decked in her colorful Class A uniform, and though a now battle-hardened twenty-five year old, she felt as nervous as the kid seemed. The airport was a military one, so of course her folks weren't waiting to greet her. They didn't have clearance and probably weren't getting it anytime soon.
Half an hour later, Payton was sitting silently in the back of a cab. The driver made a few attempts at conversation, but quickly realized she wasn't going to reply. She almost fell asleep; the motor made an almost comforting sound, and the seats were so plush...
Payton blinked, trying to force herself to stay awake. She started to recognize street names as they approached her house. She took a deep breath as the driver skidded to a stop, blocking her house's driveway. "That'll be thirty-four dollars, please," The man's voice was gravelly, and frankly, he looked angry. She gave him a fifty. It was all she had. He grinned widely. "Hey, thanks for the tip."
The walk up her parent's driveway felt ominous in an odd way. She hadn't been in here in seven months, and in that seven months she'd changed more than she felt possible. When they opened the door, it wouldn't be the same girl walking through. Payton rang the doorbell. Shouldn't she be able to walk in here whenever she felt like it? Why did she need to ring the doorbell? That was for strangers, and this was her home.
There was no hesitation in the way the door was flung open. Before Payton could say a word, her mother's arms were tightly around her. "Payton! Oh, my baby," She let go for a moment and turned to scream. "Paul! Paul, Payton's home!" She gently rubbed Payton's arms. "Oh, we missed you so much. We prayed for you every night, no matter what. I'm so happy you're safe," She gave her daughter another tight hug.
The same happened when her father appeared in the doorway. There were tears in her mom's eyes. "Honey's been here for the past three nights waiting for you to get home."
Her parent's excitement hadn't surprised her, and though she was thankful to see them, her eyes lit up at the sound of Honey's name. "She's here? Right now?" For Payton, seriousness and sheer terror were the only feelings she recognized anymore, and usually the only ones she ever felt. Yet at the thought of seeing Honey, she could here a hint of childish joy in her own voice.
"Yes, yes, she's inside," Her mother quickly ushered Payton inside, smiling proudly. Streamers were hanging everywhere, and a few balloons were tied down near the kitchen table.
"Oh, guys," Payton murmured, "You didn't have to do all of this for me."
Honey came from practically nowhere. Her blonde locks were lopsided--one side hadn't finished being curled. The shining look in her hazel eyes actually elicited a smile from Payton. The embraced for a quick minute.
"Payton, you've missed so much! Did you get the Gossip Girl seasons I sent you?" Payton gave a slight chuckle.
"Honey, you know you wasted your money buying those for me." Honey gave an annoyed sigh.
"Listen, I can't complain to you about the show if you don't understand it! You said you needed something to do in your free time. Why not watch a little Gossip Girl? One episode and you'll be in love again!" She teased, her smile not fading the slightest. "You watched it when we were in high school."
Payton rolled her eyes. "That was a long time ago." She waved her hand dismissively. "How are things going for you?"
"Oh, you know," Honey's hands fluttered as she spoke. "Just going to work and stuff. I got promoted--I've been doing so many great houses lately. You should see what this interior decorator can do to just about any dump."
Something vibrated in Payton's pocket. She held a finger, indicating for Honey to wait. "Hello?" She didn't recognize the number.
"570489."
"Excuse me?" Payton's eyebrows raised. "What are you talking about?"
"You have one month." The phone went dead. Payton stared at it for a moment in surprise before snapping it shut.
"Who was it?" Honey asked innocently.
Payton shrugged, and gave a small sigh. "Just telemarketers,"
Haven't written something in a while, so please correct me on any mistakes. I proof-read and didn't see anything, but I always welcome any crit, tips, or corrections! (:
Chapter 1
Payton shifted uncomfortably in her seat. Cargo planes were definitely better than flying passenger, but the seats weren't exactly made with comfort in mind. The private sitting across from her spoke up. "Ma'am, are we almost there?" He looked roughly nineteen, and more nervous than words could express.
"Yes," Payton glanced out the window. "We'll be landing soon. Hold your horses, Private."
She felt a jolt as the plane tottered onto the runway. She was decked in her colorful Class A uniform, and though a now battle-hardened twenty-five year old, she felt as nervous as the kid seemed. The airport was a military one, so of course her folks weren't waiting to greet her. They didn't have clearance and probably weren't getting it anytime soon.
Half an hour later, Payton was sitting silently in the back of a cab. The driver made a few attempts at conversation, but quickly realized she wasn't going to reply. She almost fell asleep; the motor made an almost comforting sound, and the seats were so plush...
Payton blinked, trying to force herself to stay awake. She started to recognize street names as they approached her house. She took a deep breath as the driver skidded to a stop, blocking her house's driveway. "That'll be thirty-four dollars, please," The man's voice was gravelly, and frankly, he looked angry. She gave him a fifty. It was all she had. He grinned widely. "Hey, thanks for the tip."
The walk up her parent's driveway felt ominous in an odd way. She hadn't been in here in seven months, and in that seven months she'd changed more than she felt possible. When they opened the door, it wouldn't be the same girl walking through. Payton rang the doorbell. Shouldn't she be able to walk in here whenever she felt like it? Why did she need to ring the doorbell? That was for strangers, and this was her home.
There was no hesitation in the way the door was flung open. Before Payton could say a word, her mother's arms were tightly around her. "Payton! Oh, my baby," She let go for a moment and turned to scream. "Paul! Paul, Payton's home!" She gently rubbed Payton's arms. "Oh, we missed you so much. We prayed for you every night, no matter what. I'm so happy you're safe," She gave her daughter another tight hug.
The same happened when her father appeared in the doorway. There were tears in her mom's eyes. "Honey's been here for the past three nights waiting for you to get home."
Her parent's excitement hadn't surprised her, and though she was thankful to see them, her eyes lit up at the sound of Honey's name. "She's here? Right now?" For Payton, seriousness and sheer terror were the only feelings she recognized anymore, and usually the only ones she ever felt. Yet at the thought of seeing Honey, she could here a hint of childish joy in her own voice.
"Yes, yes, she's inside," Her mother quickly ushered Payton inside, smiling proudly. Streamers were hanging everywhere, and a few balloons were tied down near the kitchen table.
"Oh, guys," Payton murmured, "You didn't have to do all of this for me."
Honey came from practically nowhere. Her blonde locks were lopsided--one side hadn't finished being curled. The shining look in her hazel eyes actually elicited a smile from Payton. The embraced for a quick minute.
"Payton, you've missed so much! Did you get the Gossip Girl seasons I sent you?" Payton gave a slight chuckle.
"Honey, you know you wasted your money buying those for me." Honey gave an annoyed sigh.
"Listen, I can't complain to you about the show if you don't understand it! You said you needed something to do in your free time. Why not watch a little Gossip Girl? One episode and you'll be in love again!" She teased, her smile not fading the slightest. "You watched it when we were in high school."
Payton rolled her eyes. "That was a long time ago." She waved her hand dismissively. "How are things going for you?"
"Oh, you know," Honey's hands fluttered as she spoke. "Just going to work and stuff. I got promoted--I've been doing so many great houses lately. You should see what this interior decorator can do to just about any dump."
Something vibrated in Payton's pocket. She held a finger, indicating for Honey to wait. "Hello?" She didn't recognize the number.
"570489."
"Excuse me?" Payton's eyebrows raised. "What are you talking about?"
"You have one month." The phone went dead. Payton stared at it for a moment in surprise before snapping it shut.
"Who was it?" Honey asked innocently.
Payton shrugged, and gave a small sigh. "Just telemarketers,"